Help me read the patent statement. Is this ok?

The first way of writing, claim 1, only says that a product consists of two parts, AB, which probably does not have novelty and creativity, unless A and B are brand-new structures, but if they are brand-new structures, claim 1 is not completely open and cannot be authorized. The second way of writing, if both A and B are innovative, I'm afraid the scope of protection is too small to protect your innovative technology well. In addition, the statement you wrote does not meet the requirements of the application documents in form.