First, ill sentences
(1) Types of ill sentences:
1. Incomplete components: that is, the sentence lacks some necessary components and the meaning of the sentence is not clearly expressed.
Exodus, for example, was influenced by bad ideas and he committed a crime.
2. Improper collocation: that is, one or two components or two words in a sentence are improperly collocated.
: Exodus It's so noisy in the classroom that no one can hear what the teacher is saying.
3. The word order is reversed: that is, the words in the sentence are not arranged according to the law and the need to express meaning.
The newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2,000 years ago in the current location of Exodus are on display in the History Museum.
4. meaning repetition: that is, there are redundant elements in the sentence, which makes the sentence lengthy and cumbersome.
Exodus: I think this is a wrong idea.
5. The concept is unclear: that is, the meaning in the sentence is vague and confusing.
Paper-making is China's four great inventions.
6. Inconsistency: that is, the meaning of the sentence is inconsistent.
I'm sure Lin Li may be ill.
7. Improper classification: that is, in a sentence, things that are not in the same category are classified into one category.
There are vegetables such as greens, radishes, grapes and tomatoes in the basket.
(2) Three steps to correct ill sentences:
(1) read the sentence, sort out the meaning of the sentence, check the arrangement and try to find the reason; (3) change the sentence and keep the original intention (change less and change skillfully).
(3) Practice:
1. After reading this book, I got a profound education.
On the day of sports meeting, colorful red flags fluttered in the campus.
We should correct the mistakes in our homework as soon as possible and find them in time.
The whole class and the Young Pioneers took part in the activity.
He always pays attention to national affairs.
He was wearing a gray cloth coat and a police mobile unit.
8. I saw the bright smiles and sweet songs of the children.
9. Li Hua was the first to speak at the class meeting with the theme of "being a qualified pupil".
10, to inherit and give play to the revolutionary cause of the older generation.
1 1. I like reading newspapers, such as China Youth Daily, Primary School Chinese Newspaper and Children's Literature.
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12, the school offers many professional courses such as Chinese, mathematics and music.
13, Chinese is particularly interested in me.
14, golden rice fields swaying gently in the breeze.
15. In this big vegetable field, there are all kinds of vegetables: cucumber, watermelon, eggplant, lentils, peaches and tomatoes.
17, everyone must take this matter seriously and try to prevent mistakes.
18, the eyes of all teachers and students are fixed on the wonderful performance on the stage.
19, Xiaohong has always been a good student, except this semester.
20. We should cultivate hygiene and courtesy from an early age.
2 1. There is no one in the classroom, only Xiaoyi is doing her homework.
It rained heavily all night last night.
24. I bought a schoolbag and pencil box, and my mother said it was better.
On Wednesday afternoon, all our classmates and young pioneers went to the movies.
27. Lili sang a beautiful song at the get-together.
The population of our country is the largest in the world.
After class, the students rushed out of the classroom in an orderly way.
30. With the deepening of reform and opening up, people's lives are getting richer and richer.
With the help of the teacher, he finally overcame the difficulty.
Grandpa Chen often recalls the past.
I like playing basketball and football.
The vegetable market is really rich: there are cucumbers, tomatoes, vegetables and spinach ...
Everyone pays attention to hygiene, and our health and diseases will be guaranteed.
36. It's raining, and colorful red umbrellas have become a landscape.
37. The Great Wall in Wan Li, the Palace Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for.
We should constantly improve our shortcomings and strive for greater progress.
40. On the calm lake, a boat came to the other side against the strong wind.
I bought pencils, erasers, notebooks and stationery at the stationery store.
42. Cleaning has begun. Young Pioneers and male students compete to do heavy work and let female students do light work.
43. Compass is the four great inventions of ancient China.
44. Now my composition level has improved.
45. The author of the poem "Looking at Dongting" is Liu Yuxi.
Second, expand sentences
Sentence expansion is to expand a simple sentence into a concrete, vivid and vivid sentence by adding words. As we know, a general sentence will include the main components, namely: who (or what) and what (or how or what). If you add additional components to the main components and modify, restrict or supplement the original sentence, you are expanding the sentence.
A simple sentence generally includes two parts. The former part talks about who and what, and the latter part talks about what, what to do and how to do it.
(1) Note:
(1) Understand the examples and review the requirements;
The postman delivers letters.
A young postman braved the heavy snow to deliver letters to thousands of families.
The examples given in the title expand "what kind of postman" and "who" deliver letters under "what kind of" circumstances. )
(2) Can't change the basic meaning and sentence pattern of the sentence;
(3) After the sentence is unfolded, the sentence should be fluent.
(1) Practice:
1. Let's walk there.
There is a rainbow in the distance.
3. The athletes have made achievements.
The train runs at full speed.
5. Little bees are flying around.
6. The waves jump.
7. Black Bear Show.
8. Flowers are in full bloom.
9. Xiaohua does exercises.
10. The stars are flashing.
1 1. Little tadpoles swim.
12. Swallow has a rest.
13. Grandma draws water.
It's very hot.
15. Qiantang River is shrouded in fog.
16. Little pine tree jumps.
17. Deer appreciate shadows.
18. Flowers are in full bloom on the grass.
19. The sun is high in the sky.
I miss my friends.
Third, abbreviations.
Shrinkage method:
(1) Find out which main person or thing this sentence is about first.
(2) Find the last word of the sentence (after removing the content behind the auxiliary word "de"). If it is a verb, the sentence will be condensed into two parts: the character+the last word; If it is not a verb, find a verb and the sentence will be condensed into three parts: character+verb+last word.
(3) Generally, the word before the word "De" and "Di" is not reserved, and there is a word after the word "De".
* Note: ① There may be more than one person.
② "Yes" is a verb to be reserved.
If the sentence is a question, it will also be a question after abbreviation.
For example, an old Red Army told the story of Guo in the past 25,000-mile long March.
(1) The character is "Red Army"
(2) The last word "story" is not a verb. Find a verb after the word: "say".
(3) The sentence is finally condensed into characters+verbs+the last word: The Red Army tells stories.
So the final abbreviation is: Red Army tells stories.
(2) Practice:
1, Sang Na, the fisherman's wife, is sitting by the fire mending a broken sail.
That spacious new house is the teacher's office of the first primary school.
Butterflies are flying among the flowers.
Our * * * production party and the Eighth Route Army and the New Fourth Army led by the * * * production party are revolutionary ranks.
The announcer's voice resounded through the meeting.
Fourth, change declarative sentences into rhetorical questions.
(1) method:
1. Change the affirmative sentence (yes, yes, will) in the affirmative sentence into the negative sentence (no, no, no).
2. change the negative words (no, you can't, you won't wait. ) into a positive sentence in a negative sentence (yes, yes, yes, yes).
3. Add rhetorical modal particles (how, how, don't, don't) before positive words or negative words.
4. Add interrogative auxiliary words (what, what) at the end of the sentence, and change the period at the end of the sentence to a question mark.
Uncle Lei Feng is an example for us to learn.
When changing rhetorical questions, replace the positive word "yes" with the negative word "no", add "don't" at the beginning of the sentence and add it at the end of the sentence.
"Horse", change the period at the end of the sentence to a question mark.
In this way, the rhetorical question is: Isn't Uncle Lei Feng an example for us to learn?
We can't waste time.
When changing the rhetorical question, change the negative word "neng" into the positive word "neng", then add "how" before "neng", add "how" at the end of the sentence and change the period into a question mark.
The rhetorical question is: how can you waste time?
(2) Practice:
1) We are right to discourage classmates from quarreling.
2) If you fail, you must do it, and you can't retreat.
Xiao Bin is my good friend.
4) It's true that a flower can't grow without labor.
5) Seeing that you are suffering, I must help.
6) Poisoning is nothing.
Hearing his touching story, I was moved to tears.
8) The slope near Qinglong Bridge is too steep for the train to climb such a steep slope.
9) We can't copy other people's homework.
10) I especially like to watch tourists take away the fruits of their labor.
1 1) We are primary school students, so we should study hard.
12) We can't stop taking part in sports activities because of the heavy study tasks.
13) The sea of clouds in Huangshan is unforgettable.
We are not intimidated by difficulties.
15) The towering peaks symbolize the indomitable spirit of the hero.
16) Looking around, we have to turn a blind eye to such bad people.
17) Nothing is more important than exercising and striving for a strong body.
18) How great it is for a country and a city to hold an Olympic Games.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) turns rhetorical questions into declarative sentences.
(1) method
1. Change affirmative sentences into negative sentences in rhetorical questions, or change negative sentences into positive sentences. Do you want to go or not? No, no, no,no.)
2. Get rid of rhetorical modal particles (how, how, don't wait. ) from rhetorical questions.
3. Remove the interrogative auxiliary words (what, what, etc. ) put it at the end of the sentence and replace the question mark with a period.
(2) Practice
1. Even if these ideas can be realized, how many people can live?
The relationship between man and mountain is getting closer and closer. How can you not feel kind and comfortable?
4. Aren't there white waves on the beach?
5. How can I retreat when I encounter difficulties?
6. Can you break your word?
7. Isn't this what my mother expects of me?
8. If you are not from your own family, shouldn't you care about each other?
10, don't you need cultural knowledge to be a farmer?
13,100,000 arrows, how to make them in three days?
14, you found it yourself. How can I help you?
15, isn't that a happy song played by the waves?
16, how can I forget the teacher's teaching?
17, Madame Curie only needs to sign the patent book, and all the difficulties will be solved.
First, ill sentences
1. After reading this book, (I) received a profound education.
On the day of sports meeting, colorful flags fluttered in the campus.
We should find and correct the mistakes in our homework as soon as possible.
The whole class took part in the activity.
He always pays attention to national affairs.
He was wearing a gray cloth coat and a police mobile unit.
8. I saw the children's bright smiles and heard sweet songs.
9. Li Hua was the first to speak at the class meeting with the theme of "being a qualified pupil".
10 We should inherit and (carry forward) the revolutionary cause of the older generation.
1 1. I like reading newspapers, such as China Youth Daily, Primary School Chinese Newspaper and Children's Literature.
12, the school offers Chinese, mathematics and (many professional courses).
13, (I am particularly interested in Chinese).
14, golden rice (valley) swaying gently in the breeze.
15, this large vegetable field is planted with yellow claws, western claws, eggplant, lentils, peaches, tomatoes and so on.
17, everyone must take this matter seriously and try not to make mistakes.
18, all the teachers and students stared at the wonderful performance on the stage.
19, Xiaohong has always been a good student.
20. We should form the habit of being hygienic and polite at an early age.
There is no one in the classroom.
It rained all night yesterday.
24. I bought a schoolbag and a pencil case, and my mother said (the schoolbag is better than the pencil case).
We should (understand and apply) what we have learned.
On Wednesday afternoon, all our classmates went to the movies.
27. Lili sang a beautiful song at the get-together.
China is the most populous country in the world.
After class, the students rushed out of the classroom.
30. With the deepening of reform and opening up, people's lives are getting richer and richer.
With the help of the teacher, he finally overcame the difficulty.
Grandpa Chen often recalls the past.
I like playing basketball and football.
The vegetable market is really rich: there are cucumbers, tomatoes and spinach ...
Everyone pays attention to hygiene, and our health will be guaranteed.
36. It's raining, and colorful umbrellas have become a landscape.
37. The Great Wall in Wan Li, the Palace Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are places that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for.
We should constantly correct our shortcomings and strive for greater progress.
40. On the (wide) lake, there is a boat sailing to the other side against the strong wind.
4 1, I bought pencils, erasers, notebooks (etc. Stationery) Stationery.
42. The cleaning began, and male students scrambled to do heavy work and let female students do light work.
43. Compass is one of the four great inventions in ancient China.
44. Now my composition level has improved.
45. The author of the poem "Looking at Dongting" is Liu Yuxi.
Second, expand sentences
1. I walked slowly towards him.
Look at the beautiful rainbow in the distance.
3. Liu Xiang, an athlete, achieved good results.
The train runs in the valley.
5. Little bees are flying around among the flowers.
6. Beautiful waves are jumping on the sea.
7. The clumsy black bear is performing.
8. Colorful flowers are blooming in the flowers.
9. Xiaohua is doing exercises seriously on the playground.
10. The stars in the night sky twinkled to say good night to me.
1 1. Lovely tadpoles are swimming in the lake.
12. The lovely swallow stops on the thin line to have a rest.
13. Grandma draws water with a bucket by the well.
14. The weather in summer is as hot as a steamer.
15. The wide Qiantang River is covered with a thin layer of fog.
16. The lively little squirrel is jumping around on the pine tree.
17. The deer tilted its head and admired its own shadow in the water.
18. The green grave lawn is full of colorful wildflowers.
19. In summer, the scorching sun hangs high in the blue sky.
I often miss many familiar friends in my hometown.
Third, abbreviations.
1, sauna fills the sail. /Sang Na mended the damaged sail.
This house is an office. /The new house is the teacher's office.
There are butterflies flying among the flowers. /Butterflies are flying.
The * * * Production Party is the team of the Eighth Route Army and the New Fourth Army. /The Eighth Route Army and the New Fourth Army are teams.
5. The sound resounded through the meeting place.
Fourth, change declarative sentences into rhetorical questions.
1, is it wrong for us to discourage classmates from quarreling?
2. If you fail, do it anyway. Can you back down after knowing the difficulties?
3. Isn't Xiao Bin my good friend?
4. Isn't it true that you can't keep a flower alive without working?
Seeing that you are suffering, don't I need help?
6. What is poison?
7. After listening to his touching story, why didn't it make me cry?
8. The slope near Qinglong Bridge is extremely steep. Can the train climb such a steep slope?
9. Can we copy other people's homework?
10 Don't you especially like to watch tourists take away the fruits of their labor?
1 1. We are primary school students, shouldn't we study hard?
12, the study task is heavy, how can you not participate in sports activities?
13, how can the sea of clouds in Huangshan not make people linger?
14, are we intimidated by difficulties?
15, isn't the towering mountain a symbol of a hero's indomitable spirit?
16, can we turn a blind eye to such bad guys?
17, is there anything more important than exercising and striving for a strong body?
18. Isn't it a great thing that a country and a city can host an Olympic Games?
Verb (abbreviation for verb) turns rhetorical questions into declarative sentences.
Even if these ideas can be realized, not many people can live.
The relationship between man and mountain is getting closer and closer, which makes us feel kind and comfortable.
There are still white waves on the beach.
When we encounter difficulties, we can't back down.
6. What you said doesn't count.
7. This is what my mother expects of me.
8. If you don't belong to your own family, you should also care about each other.
10, being a farmer also needs cultural knowledge.
13, 100,000 arrows cannot be built in three days.
14, find it yourself, I can't help you.
15, the waves are playing a happy song.
16, we can't forget the teacher's teaching.
17, Madame Curie can solve all difficulties as long as she signs the patent book.