1. Under the strategy of technology marketization and market diversification, XX Company established a manufacturing team based on a number of core technologies, which enabled the company to develop continuously and rapidly.
2.XX Company has dozens of patents at home and abroad and has become an innovator of many advanced technologies in this field.
-
Description:
Product diversification product diversification; Product diversification (foreign trade vocabulary)
Forerunner may be more suitable to describe the technology itself, so innovator is better here.
Does Process mean "the process of processing"? So I use the adjective manufacturing.
-
Pay attention to the improper points of the ares Limu and kumax (see brackets). Please forgive and correct me if there is anything wrong.
Jason Rimu's sentence patterns are well used:
1. Under the strategy of (market-oriented technology) and market diversification, the company has established a group (production and processing, adjectives are better) based on core technologies, which has been led. Is it applicable now? ) The company has developed rapidly.
With the dosage of domestic and international patents, the company has become a pioneer of many advanced technologies in this field (this may be more suitable to describe the technology itself, so it is better to use innovators here).
-
Kumax's explanation of words is more accurate:
1)×× Company adheres to the leading idea of technology marketization and product diversification, and has formed a production and processing business group with a number of core technologies as the leader, continuously promoting the rapid development of enterprises.
The principle of carry (plus S, third person singular) of Xx Company on technical marketing and product variation has been formed (is it best to be consistent with the past tense and add and before it? ) The production and processing business group, which is dominated by several core technologies, continues (should be continutesly) to promote the development of the organization (this word is generally used as a public institution and should be distinguished from the company) (is this verb appropriate? ) quickly.
(2) XXX company has dozens of patents at home and abroad and has become the founder of many advanced technologies in this field.
Xx company has dozens of national and international patents, and (plus and) is an innovator of many leading technologies in the industry.