My brother-in-law went out to work for several years before Gai Lou. In a few days, he will celebrate his new house. I want to send him a pair of couplets and ask the master to help me think of a good pair.
If I were your brother, I would thank you, but I feel bad. Working outside the home is really miserable, but there is no need to write it so bitter ~ ~ This contest is not a private sweet talk between two people, but a couplet, something that is read out and hung up. Let's see, your brother worked hard outside for many years to get this result? I understand that it's not easy for you to express his feelings, but just like good music and articles, it's better to be happy and not to hurt. Your writing is a bit "hurtful" and it is awkward to read, but you can see that there are ancient literature, especially the second half.
I changed it. You can refer to it. In fact, you understand the problem and change it yourself. This is better.
After several years of hard work, the new home was finally built;
Once upon a time, Hongfu Anjia Gang was the top household, and now Huatang has begun to shine.