1. News feature writing of 400 words
I believe that since it is news, it must be authentic. At the same time, news is a way of disseminating information, so it must be concise. News has a certain structure, roughly as follows: title (title) - introduction (usually the simplest summary of what is to be said) - main body (i.e. the detailed content of the news) - summary (i.e. the end) Writing news and school Compositions in Chinese language classes are very different. As long as the writing is smooth, the narrative is clear, and the writing style is beautiful, it is a good composition. It does not necessarily need to be true, and it is not intended for publication. News is a report of recent facts that must be faced by a broad audience. Taking into account their interests, we also have the task of publicizing the party's policies; the genres of news are relatively clear, and writing has its own requirements. Let's talk about the three main news genres. 1. Build the frame first and then write the article. The idea of ????all writing is The basis of writing. Before writing, you must think about what you are going to write and determine the central idea. Usually the central idea is reflected in the title. However, in manuscripts, it is often seen that the title does not match the content or the title is big or small. Next, you must consider what I am. How to write, set up a frame for the article, what to say first, what to say next, which material to use at the end, etc. However, in the submitted manuscripts, many articles obviously lack thinking about the structure, go to the topic, inappropriate details, and clichés. The phenomenon is very serious. These two points should be self-evident for news writing, but there are too many problems in this aspect, including some full-time correspondents, who often ignore these most basic writing requirements. The writing is smooth, But I don’t know what to say. Therefore, when talking about specific writing, everyone is first asked to think about it: what I want to write and how I am going to write it (including using various materials). 2. News writing News is the most common news genre. Its purpose is to report recent facts to readers in concise and objective words. The principle of objectivity of news does not allow reporters to comment or make judgments. Even if they want to report something and promote something, they must use " "Facts speak", which expresses tendencies by selecting reported facts, and cannot be made by reporters in the news. General factual news adopts the "inverted pyramid structure", that is, the entire news is based on all aspects of one fact. Arrange the narrative levels and paragraphs according to the degree of importance, thus forming the following "top-heavy" or "anticlimactic" reporting structure: 1. Introduction. The most important or exciting part of the facts, or the key points of the facts, are arranged in the introduction. Report to the readers in the introduction. In the introduction, the most important and exciting words should be used as the first sentence. 2. Materials that further explain or explain the facts mentioned in the introduction. These materials are still arranged according to the priority of the issue and can be divided into Several paragraphs. 3. Necessary background materials, also arranged according to importance. 4. Secondary supplementary materials. If such a message is deleted from the back, until only the introduction is left, or even only one sentence is left, it can still be It exists independently and clearly tells the reader what happened. Obviously, the introduction plays an important role in the message and must be written well. There are four main types of introductions: factual introduction: summary introduction; descriptive introduction; delay Sexual introduction. Which one to use should be decided according to the specific situation. The key points are to grasp two points: to understand the key points of the reported facts; to find in time the verb or phrase that can best impress the readers and guide them to continue reading. The introduction generally involves the following four Aspect content: 1. Briefly inform readers of specific and clear facts; 2. Time when the fact occurred; 3. News source; 4. Place of occurrence. Other common message structures include accumulated interest structure, chronological structure, and summary. Structure, etc. 3. Communication writing reports facts in an eclectic and detailed manner, forming another major news genre - communication. The unique characteristic of communication is that it uses narrative, description, lyricism and discussion. Comprehensive reporting of recent facts. Regardless of whether the report is an event or a person, it should always focus on "people" and present facts through people's activities and thoughts, so it is generally emotional. This is the charm of communication. Communication collaboration is more flexible than news, allowing reporters to express their preferences (of course, some communications can also be objectively reported), but it is not easy to write well because it requires more solid writing skills. Communication requires a very clear theme and refined communication. The topic is usually the key to the success of the communication. This requires in-depth analysis of the characteristics of the facts, understanding the background and the spirit of the times. This aspect can give a glimpse of the author's analytical ability and level of thinking. The structure types of the communication are flexible and diverse, and the common ones are as follows Three types:
1. "One-stop" style, that is, the vertical structure in time. 2. "Broken watermelon" style, that is, the horizontal structure in space. 3. "Peeling bamboo shoots", that is, developing from simplicity and expression to depth, and finally reaching * **, to break down the theme, provide appropriate details, and echo back and forth are issues that need to be often considered in communication writing. 2. Write a news feature of no less than 600 words
In my colorful childhood, there were many things worth remembering, and the most unforgettable one was that time in fifth grade. School sports meeting.
"Come on! Come on..." What is the sound? It turned out to be the track and field meeting being held in our school. The atmosphere was so lively, and cheers rang out from time to time on the playing field.
The first item is skipping rope for grade level. As soon as the competition password sounded, all the students in the class quickly swung their skipping ropes and jumped crazily.
Everyone has a belief in his heart that he must win glory for the class. The rope in his hand swung faster and faster, and the steps under his feet followed suit. The speed was so fast that the students who were counting had no time to count.
One minute passed in the blink of an eye, and all the students were panting from exhaustion. Our class won the first place with the best results.
I was lucky enough to be selected to participate in the big rope jumping competition in this year's school sports meeting. The location of our competition is at the gate of the campus.
We all came to the gate of the campus and prepared for the game. "Get ready to compete! Hurry up, get in line."
A classmate shouted. I also quickly "got into" the big rope and got ready to jump on the big rope.
"Three two one, start!" As I remembered the voice, I jumped up to the rhythm. "30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36!" Finally, we got stuck under "36".
Although there is a second time, I am not the one to jump the second time. Because it has been arranged that I will dance first, and then another person will dance.
"I have no part in it anymore, let's go now." I thought to myself.
After thinking about it, I came to the playground. The first is the men's 100 meters race.
Every contestant is very nervous, and the contestants in our class are no exception. The gunshot rang out, and Zhang Zhifeng from our class ran towards the finish line like the wind, far ahead.
"Come on, you are the best!" I thought to myself. Sure enough, he not only won first place, but also broke the record.
Then it was 200 meters, then 400 meters, and finally 800 meters. We men all got good grades, but the women didn't do so well.
The athletes worked hard on the field, and the students off the field enthusiastically supported them. At the same time, behind this tension and fierceness is the silent dedication of our teachers and referees.
Because of them, the order on the field can be maintained; because of them, this school sports meeting can be held smoothly. Hard work and dedication played a triumphant song on our playground! I believe that our class will achieve good results in the next sports meeting. 3. How to write news features
To accurately write news features, you must grasp the attributes and essence of the word "new", strive to tap the potential of the word "wen", and constantly work on the word "special", and work hard. Focusing on the word "write" is the most basic way of writing news features that journalists and amateur news reporters should strive to master, and it is also a principle.
News features usually include the following types: (1) Event close-ups: capturing and reproducing key scenes of major events. (2) Scene close-ups: Reproduction of exciting scenes in news events.
(3) Character close-ups: Reproduce a certain behavior of the characters, vivid and vivid, with a strong sense of movement. (4) Close-ups of scenery: descriptions of rare scenery with special significance or value.
(5) Work close-up: a vivid reproduction of a certain work scene. (6) Miscellaneous close-ups: vivid reproductions of various news scenes with close-up value.
To write a good news feature, you must first have a strong sense of the scene. The biggest "specialty" of news features is to use vivid detailed descriptions and vivid character dialogues to reproduce the news scene, allowing the audience to be immersed in the scene, and then achieve empathy for the news facts focused on the report, and the thoughts and opinions contained in the report. It has a strong emotional communication effect.
The reporter allows the audience to "walk into" the news scene, which not only enhances the sense of liveness of the news feature, but also enhances the relevance of the report. A close-up is to give a prominent and focused description of certain parts of the report, rather than to cover everything in a general way.
From a temporal perspective, localization means intercepting fragments of life. It is not to show the ins and outs of the development of events, but to select the most inclusive fragments, capture stillness from the movement, and describe the movement with stillness, so that people can understand the ins and outs through a typical lens and a picture. Passed understanding.
This kind of fragment is usually a fragment that can reflect the characteristics of things or the final part of the development of events. Spatially, localization means selecting those details that are most distinctive and expressive. 4. A 200-word sample essay on news features
Zi Binchang
Just after 3 p.m., Teacher Liu Yunjie, who was receiving donations in the foyer, told me: "Master Wang Jing is here again!" Everyone present felt happy. I put down my work and hurried to the front hall: "Why are you here so far on such a cold day?" I asked. He came over and waved 200 yuan in his right hand: "No, I donated this money."
Wang Jing - the man who lives in the turnover room of Huangshanmudian in Beijing and picks up rags Retired workers who donated 10,000 yuan to Project Hope and other social welfare undertakings. The old man Wang Jing who appeared in front of me today is very different from the last time he came here in terms of face and clothes: his face was dark and rosy, and he was fatter; he was wearing a black cotton coat and khaki color. New work trousers and a pair of black toe-toe rubber-soled cotton shoes look neat and tidy. I asked the old man to sit down. Before I could ask him how he was, he said with a smile on his face: "No, they knew I was in trouble and sent me 200 yuan. What a good man! How can I ask for other people's money?" I took over the conversation: "You scrimped on food and clothing, picked up rags and donated all the 10,000 yuan. I gave you the 200 yuan, so you should keep it for use." The old man immediately retorted: "No! I can't take it no matter what. . They are kind-hearted. I have enough retirement money, so I might as well donate it to the Hope Project to provide education in impoverished mountainous areas." Then he turned to Teacher Liu and said, "You must write the person's name. I will give it to you. Send it to him, thank you very much. "I thought it would be unkind to send it back, but it would be better to give it to Hope Project." I listened and leaned over. Taking an envelope from the old man's hand, it read: Henan Luoyang Yituo Company Oil Pump Factory Safety and Environmental Protection Department High Defense. I understood that the 200 yuan was remitted to Mr. Wang Jing by Comrade Gao Fang, who was a stranger to him, after reading the "Inscription on the Humble House in Huangshan Wood Store" published by China Youth Daily on December 19, 1994.
This is a touching scene that happened a few days ago in the donation hall of the Project Hope Beijing Donation Center at No. 3 Xiangyi Hutong, Beixinqiao, Beijing. 5. Write a feature news about yourself
It is one of the types of newsletters and an important part of the newspaper news format. As a news genre that can integrate stories, theories, emotions and scenes, and is also known for being short, concise and lively, news features play an increasingly important role in enhancing the readability of newspapers. How to make news features show a new style and play a greater role in the new historical period based on the changing needs of readers and the rich development of news laws? Accurately grasp the attributes and essence of the word "new", strive to tap the potential of the word "wen", constantly work on the word "special", and work hard on the word "write". He is a journalist and amateur news reporter. The direction and goals to strive for.
Write "new"
Newness is the basic attribute of news, and it is also the characteristic and essence of news features. The so-called "new" should reflect at least three meanings in news features: first, the content written is a recent story, that is, an event with strong news timeliness, not old news and old accounts; second, the content written is recent. Although the news stories and news events discovered did not happen recently, they were discovered recently and had not been discovered or noticed in the past; thirdly, the uniqueness in writing methods, techniques, structure, and language can give people A refreshing feeling. There is nothing new in either content or form, so it cannot be considered a "news feature".
Write "things"
Things are stories, events, things. Without stories, news features are like water without a source or a tree without roots.
The "thing" here has several attributes: First, it is a real thing. Reporting facts is a basic requirement of news laws. Some people think that news features can imitate literary and artistic creation and fictionalize storylines and content. This is wrong. Things in news features must be absolutely true and completely true. No matter the time, place, people, words, deeds, or environment, there must be no fiction or moisture. The second is something new. It can’t be something old and rotten, it must be something new, fresh, and distinctive, that is, something refreshing. The third is specific things. Since it is a close-up, it must be like a TV close-up, with tangible, shadow, and sound, so that people can see, touch, and hear it. It must not be simply summarized or brushed off, but must be as detailed as possible.
Write "people"
See the text but not the story, see the story but not the people. This is a common problem in many news articles, and it is also a taboo in news features. Things are man-made, and when there are events, there will be people. When we write news features, we should use events to highlight people, people to bring out events, and people and events blend into one. Who is the protagonist's surname? What is the physical background, family background, and historical background? What are your personal hobbies and characteristics? His status and role in the news event, etc., should be explained as much as possible as long as conditions permit. 6. Full score essay with annotations
Full score essay with annotations:
"Beautiful Butterfly", "Life is Not Over"
Full score with annotations The original text and annotations of the composition:
1. "Beautiful Butterfly"
1. Comments: The central word is beauty, the beauty of life. If you grasp the central word, you will grasp the theme of the article; the title and the end should echo each other and highlight the theme of the article in a profound way.
2. Original text
Beautiful butterfly
Life is short, but the beauty of life is eternal.
——Inscription
The showers gradually subsided, and I walked out of the stuffy house to get some air. There was a flash in front of my eyes, ah! A colorful butterfly! Blue dress, white ribbon, butterflies flying like fairies. Not far away, there are such gorgeous flowers, showing a different kind of beauty in the washing of rain. Butterflies fluttered among the flowers, disturbing my sight. Suddenly it flew over again and landed on the trunk of a big tree next to me. Is it showing off its beauty to me? I stopped to watch.
"Poof!" Butterfly was hit by a drop of rain and fell into the puddle under the tree. I was stunned. I didn't know whether to hold it up. My weak wings flapped feebly in the water. I suddenly found that my breathing became faster. Gradually, gradually, a miracle happened. Little by little, it climbed onto a small flower in the puddle, raised its wet wings, and trembled slightly in the wind.
I felt joy in my heart. Tenacious life finally defeated bad luck. Suddenly a breeze blew by, and countless raindrops fell on the trees. The butterfly was unfortunately hit again and fell miserably. My heart ached. There were shallow ripples on the water, and this little life was still struggling. It was still alive! I seemed to feel a powerful throbbing of life! He quickly picked it up carefully. The trembling wings opened and closed slightly, and my heart rose and fell with it. Weak butterfly, can you survive it?
Another gust of wind blew, the sky cleared, and a rainbow hung in the sky. That brave butterfly, after trying several times, it finally jumped up from my hand and flew slowly towards the filament...
I stood quietly and watched it. The respectable butterfly breaks through the shackles of the silk cocoon for the sake of beauty, and overcomes the hardships of wind and rain for the sake of beauty. Doesn't it explain to me the eternal beauty of life?
2. "Life is Not Over"
1. Comments: The author selected three representative figures and their touching deeds - a writer and a scientist. ; Some are Chinese and some are foreign; some are famous and some are ordinary - and I summarize my point of view from them: "There is no distinction between high and low in life. They interpret immortal legends in their own different ways." At the same time, Answered the question. What is commendable is not only the author's appropriate selection of materials, but also his mastery of the materials, such as the exact time and numerical quotation, which shows that the author has made solid efforts in daily accumulation.
2. Original text
Life is not over
A great soul stopped thinking and closed his eyes forever in his apartment in Dalu Xincun, Shanghai.
However, more than seventy years have passed, and his voice and smile still often appear in front of people's eyes. People are bathed in the glory of his thoughts all the time, and they feel his presence all the time.
He fought non-stop throughout his life, using his pen as a gun, and tirelessly challenged the old forces; he was willing to be a bully and always cared for young people selflessly. People often feel horrified when reading his works, because they often find their own shadow in the characters in the works. It tests people's conscience like a whip, "as if trying to squeeze out the secret hidden under the leather robe", making people feel ashamed and urging them to make a new start.
The poet praised him as "some people are dead, but he is still alive"; in the hearts of the vast number of people, he represents the soul of the nation! He is Lu Xun...
He is a billionaire and an outstanding inventor. He devoted his whole life to the cause of human science, and obtained 255 patents alone. He also left a will behind his death, dedicating all his property to the cause of science to reward future generations.
Therefore, every year on December 10, the day when this great man passes away, a simple and grand award ceremony is held in Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, to reward the world's outstanding achievements in human physics and physics in the past year. Those who have made great achievements in chemistry, medicine, literature and peace will receive very generous bonuses. He is Nobel.
He is an ordinary little boy, and people have long forgotten his name. At the age of twelve, he was unfortunately terminally ill and would die soon. However, when he was dying, he proposed to donate his cornea to patients who needed it, "so that I can still see you all the time, mom." He convinced his mother. My mother agreed to his request with tears in her eyes. The little boy passed away peacefully, but a lucky person was able to see the light again.
There is no distinction between high and low in life. They interpret immortal legends in their own different ways. 7. How to write news features
To accurately write news features, you must grasp the attributes and essence of the word "new", strive to tap the potential of the word "wen", and constantly work on the word "special", and work hard. Focusing on the word "write" is the most basic way of writing news features that journalists and amateur news reporters should strive to master, and it is also a principle. News features usually include the following types:
(1) Event close-ups: capturing and reproducing key scenes of major events.
(2) Scene close-ups: Reproduction of exciting scenes in news events.
(3) Character close-up: Reproduce a certain behavior of the character, vivid and vivid, with a strong sense of movement.
(4) Close-ups of scenery: descriptions of rare scenery with special significance or value.
(5) Work close-up: a vivid reproduction of a certain work scene.
(6) Miscellaneous close-ups: vivid reproductions of various news scenes with close-up value.
To write a good news feature, you must first have a strong sense of the scene. The biggest "specialty" of news features is to use vivid detailed descriptions and vivid character dialogues to reproduce the news scene, allowing the audience to be immersed in the scene, and then achieve empathy for the news facts focused on the report, and the thoughts and opinions contained in the report. It has a strong emotional communication effect. The reporter allows the audience to "walk into" the news scene, which not only enhances the sense of liveness of the news feature, but also enhances the relevance of the report. A close-up is to give a prominent and focused description of certain parts of the report, rather than to cover everything in a general way. From a temporal perspective, localization means intercepting fragments of life. It is not to show the ins and outs of the development of events, but to select the most inclusive fragments, capture stillness from the movement, and describe the movement with stillness, so that people can understand the ins and outs through a typical lens and a picture. Passed understanding. This kind of fragment is usually a fragment that can reflect the characteristics of something or the first part of the development of an event. Spatially, localization means selecting those details that are most distinctive and expressive. 8. 5 essay annotations
1 essay annotation: "The Story of a Growing Tree" I read this essay from "Wenzhou Metropolis Daily". The author is Huang Zhuojun, a classmate of Class 6 (5), Chengnan Primary School.
The writing is very good, so I made an annotation: The wall of my bathroom is covered with pencil marks, and next to each mark is written a time: *year*month*day.
That is my height tree, which records my height changes from the first grade of elementary school to the present.
It embodies my grandfather’s love for me. The first two stanzas go straight to the point, clarifying the relationship between "the tall tree" and "grandpa".
The person writing this article is naturally my grandfather, but the author starts from the perspective of "growing tall trees", which is very good. Many students know how to write about people, but they don't know that they can often "borrow objects" and "write about people".
I remember when I was in the first grade of elementary school, my parents were very busy at work and often had to take me home very late. My grandfather said that I was so hungry that I didn’t grow taller for a year, so he sold the family home. I bought a house next to the school specifically to make it easier for me to go to and from school and save my parents from the trouble of picking me up! I have lived happily ever since! I am naturally very happy to have a grandpa who loves me so much. The background was explained, and then "grow taller" and "grandfather" were highlighted.
Always write "happy days" to pave the way for what follows. Whenever I step into the house after school, my stomach will growl in confusion, as if coquettishly asking my grandpa: Your granddaughter is back, is there anything delicious? Grandpa seemed to have heard the cry of his stomach, and used his rough hands to conjure up a bowl of steaming snacks.
The two words "like" compare the writing methods and use "stomach" to write about people, which is very interesting. The veins on the back of my grandfather's hands were exposed, and there was a piece of tape wrapped around the little finger, probably because the skin was cracked, but in my eyes, these are the most beautiful hands! Detailed descriptions are far better than using arguments and lyrical expressions to express praise for grandpa.
Every one or two months, grandpa will press my head with his big rough hands, following the above "big rough hands", okay. Use my book as a ruler, draw a mark on the wall with a pencil, and then mark the year, month, and day on the side.
Whenever he finds that I have grown a little taller, my grandpa will proudly say: "Well, I have grown a little taller. It's not enough. I need to eat more!" Then he points out the words "grow taller tree" and "Grandpa". I remember one time when I came home from school, my grandpa was sitting on the sofa, wearing reading glasses, holding the pencil case I got as a reward from school, tilting his head and looking at it.
Seeing me coming in, my grandpa glanced at me from the edge of his glasses, and then took off his reading glasses. I saw tears in his eyes and trembling lips. It took him a long time to say: "Tiantian." Winning an award! That’s great!” As he said this, he hurriedly stood up and brought me some snacks... The description was very vivid and exquisite! It shows grandpa’s deep love. I hope that after entering high school, this classmate will not follow the trend, abandon today's wonderful descriptions, and start to imitate the "fake, big, and empty" tone and pretentious discussion and lyricism.
I thought that the students were the sons of sincerity. After entering the school, they were taught bad things by composition teaching full of political preaching. Etiquette eats people, quacks kill people, preaching harms people! Han Han once said that many people’s experience of lying begins with composition! The year before last, my family bought a new house. Since then, I have gone to my grandpa’s house less frequently, but I still like to find excuses to visit my grandpa’s house.
As soon as I arrive at my grandpa’s house, my grandpa will take out a lot of my favorite food from the bedside, and then look at me with a smile as I devour it. I ask him why he doesn’t eat it, and he will look for it. He gave many reasons, including that he had diabetes or high blood pressure, so he couldn't eat this, and sometimes he said he had just eaten it... If I had a fever, my grandpa would often call me several times a day, telling me this and that, and asking me to measure it at a moment's notice. Is your temperature up? After a while, he asked me if I had taken my medicine? Mom smiled and said, grandpa is old. I smiled and said, "I don't even dare to get sick, otherwise my grandpa will be too worried!" A large number of narratives and descriptions make us readers feel the great care of our good grandpa and the sincere gratitude of our good granddaughter.
On December 28, 2007, my father marked this passage on the wall in red. This is a day that will never be forgotten. That day, I heard my mother crying to me: "Grandpa passed away."
I was stunned for a moment. I didn't want to believe this was true. How could my dear grandpa be willing to leave him? Where is your beloved granddaughter? But tears quietly blurred my eyes and dripped on the back of my hands, reminding me that this is true! Kicked back at the beginning of the article. Echoing from beginning to end is the basic form of writing structure. It is very simple and makes sense.
The last sentence is very vivid.
Whenever I step into the house after school, my stomach will growl in confusion, as if calling my grandpa: "My dear grandpa, your granddaughter is back, where are you..." Things are different and people are different, which is sad.
Only by being sincere can you write true articles. If this paragraph is deleted, it seems to have little impact on the full text, but the sentence "Where are you..." makes people cry.
I can’t help but think of the last sentence of Gui Youguang’s "Xiang Ji Xuan Zhi": "There is a loquat tree in the courtyard. My wife planted it with my own hands when she died. Now it is as tall as a canopy." Can't help but shout.
Designing the final paragraph is by no means an easy task and must not be ignored. Li Yu believes that the end of the article, where the effort lies, should be so soul-stirring as to look back at it. How about adding "Your granddaughter has grown taller now..." at the end? 2 Comments on the composition "It's so hot and cold" Weng Haoyang, Class 13, Senior Grade 3 I stood in the crowd and experienced the sultry and abnormal temperature. With the development of society, desires are getting hotter, but people's beliefs are still hot? , fell into the sea, and cooled unusually quickly.
"Desire" heats up and "belief" cools down. Solve problems.
Can be regarded as "qi". Zhou Guoping once said: "One of the characteristics of people's life now is the lack of soul."
Desire has lost its original heart, and it is used to dancing casually in the feasting and feasting, with the turbulent crowd in front of its eyes and the music in its ears. sharp? music; I am used to making a cup of steaming instant noodles, and when it is cold, a night has passed, hiding in the Internet cafe with swords and swords, and living a virtual life. The red-hot heart we inherited from our ancestors is cooling down, and we are undergoing fusion like the core of the sun, heading for decline. I think it’s time for us? It's time to worship a great man, to add some warmth to our cold faith. The heat of the great man's blood can probably make me.