In my long memory, there are many things that moved me. They are like countless stars twinkling in the Milky Way. Although it is bright or dark, it is very beautiful. Among them, there is the brightest star hanging high above my head. Now, let me take it off and show you slowly. I remember when I was in the second grade, I forgot to bring my gloves and went to school on a cold winter morning. When I got to school, my hands were red with cold, but it was too late to go back and get gloves, so I had to walk into the classroom. As soon as I entered the classroom, it suddenly became dark, and "the rain is coming, and the wind is full of buildings", which makes people feel an unspeakable sense of oppression. After a while, snowflakes floated into the air. It's snowing harder and harder, and finally, it's like a goose feather in midair ... it's getting colder and colder. Watching the heavy snow, watching the students put on gloves one by one, I had to smoke and rub my hands, hoping to clear up soon. However, "things didn't work out", and gradually, everything between heaven and earth became wrapped in silver, while the damn snow kept falling! My eyes can't help floating a layer of misty fog. I kept asking myself: How could you be so careless? How can you forget to bring gloves on such a cold day? It's getting cold! It would be strange if the snow kept falling and my hands didn't freeze ... Just when I was blaming myself and regretting, a pair of gloves came into my eyes. "Put it on quickly, you'll get frostbite." I looked up in surprise. It's my deskmate Xing Keqing. She took off her gloves. "So ... what about you?" I hesitate to ask at this moment, I want to put my hand over immediately, and I keep blaming myself: why are you so selfish? Won't Xing Keqing be cold? Are you the only one who is afraid of the cold? Xing Keqing seemed to see through the contradiction in my heart, grabbed my hand, put the glove in my palm and said, "Nothing, my hand is warm, not cold!" " "At that moment, the temperature of Xing Keqing's palm suddenly made me feel unusually warm, so warm that I mistakenly thought it was spring. My nose is sour, so I put on gloves and tried to rush into tears in my eyes. Xing Keqing smiled knowingly ... It touched me deeply. At that moment, Xing Keqing's sweet smile will be engraved in my heart forever. Although it is not a so-called "earth-shattering" event that Xing Keqing gave me gloves, few people will give up on themselves like Xing Keqing. I believe that Xing Keqing's actions come from her inner kindness, otherwise, she can "just sweep the snow in front of her house and leave others alone." Give someone a rose, and there is more fragrance in your hand. A candle will not reduce its brightness by lighting another candle, on the contrary, it will be more brilliant at the moment of lighting! In the long and heavy spiritual treasure house of our Chinese nation, helping others is a shining wealth. Xing Keqing's spirit of sacrificing himself for others touched me. I read the true meaning of helping others from her smile.
2. The author's appearance, movements and demeanor describe this composition in 200 words.
Action description concretization
Jumping height
Li He is the only person who jumped off the viaduct. At this time, the crossbar has risen to 1.47 meters, which is one centimeter higher than last year's group B high jump record. The whistle of the game sounded, and I saw Li He galloping forward. Less than half a meter away from the crossbar, he jumped over the crossbar and broke the record of the school sports meeting.
There are only 100 words in this passage. It is not specific to really write the scene where Li and his classmates break the high jump record. Only most sentences have only 23 crosses.
How to write "high jump" in detail?
Method 1: decomposition method
[Explanation] The so-called "decomposition method" is to divide the whole thing into several small parts from different angles such as place, time, events and people, and then write them out one by one. As far as "high jump" is concerned, the record-breaking scene of high jump can be divided into four aspects from the action, namely, run-up, take-off, leap and landing, and then described one by one in order.
[Demonstration] When the whistle sounded, Li He jumped a few times in the same place, habitually pressed his left leg, then pressed his right leg, straightened up and took a deep breath. This just took a brisk and powerful step, rushed up and jumped off the viaduct. (Run-up) When approaching the high jump, a sharp turn and one foot on the ground are almost completed at the same time. Before the audience could blink, her head and shoulders had crossed the crossbar, and then she held out her chest, abdomen and waist. This was a "back-crossing". (End) ... "Success!" Breaking the school record, the applause thundered around, and the crossbar on the elevated platform seemed to jump. (Landing)
Method 2: Recall and association method.
[Explanation] The so-called "recall association method" is to recall the scenes related to things at that time by means of supplementary narration or interpolation. For example, what is the difference between this school sports meeting breaking the high jump record and the previous school sports meeting breaking the high jump record? What is the difference between the high jump performance of the same athlete and the past? It can also be linked in many ways: How did Li He look before he started? Have confidence? How did she spread her feet at first? How fast? How did she cross the crossbar before reaching it? What did she look like when she climbed over the crossbar and landed?
[Demonstration] The crossbar has risen to 1.47 meters, and the whistle is going to sound again. At this time, a ray of sunshine shines on Li and her classmates' faces, and she looks more energetic. (Write down the expression before jumping) She thought of physical education class practicing with her classmates on weekdays, and the teacher encouraged her more than once. She is generally the best dancer. It seems that she is full of confidence in breaking the record of the school sports meeting this time. (Write about Li He's confidence in winning) As the whistle sounded, Li He jumped a few times in the same place, habitually pressing his left leg against his right leg, straightening up and taking a deep breath. She dashed forward, strode from the starting point to the crossbar, carefully measured the distance, and then returned to the starting line. I saw her suddenly clench her fist and run forward, six meters, five meters, four meters, ... one meter. Less than half a meter from the beam, she is as light as a swallow and lifts her feet. What a "back crossing" that broke the school record. The movements are so light and graceful. "It worked!" In the cheers of her classmates, she ran to the PE teacher to thank her for her careful guidance in the past: she ran to the class again, thanking her classmates for their enthusiasm and encouragement ... (Li He wrote the expression after success)
Method 3: Add details
[Explanation] The so-called "adding details" is to add some details around the center and write down some subtle performance details when Li He broke the school sports meeting record, such as her eyes, her tiny movements, the performance of her classmates after her success, and so on. If these details can be properly added to the article, the article will be more delicate and touching.
[Demonstration] Li He stood at the starting line, as cool as a cucumber. She habitually presses her left and right legs. After these preparatory activities, she smiled at us and gave her good classmates a look. (Details 1) I seem to be telling the whole class that I must live up to everyone's expectations of her. When the whistle sounded, she measured the distance from the starting line to before striding onto the viaduct. Be careful at every step, lest there be any mistakes. Then, she ran back to the starting line and spat on her palm. (Detail 2) She rubbed her hands, clenched her fists and began to rush to the beam. The audience held their breath and watched the wonderful performance at this moment. The squeaks of Li and her classmates gradually disappeared, and she was getting closer and closer to the crossbar. Take off! She gnashed her teeth (detail 3) I saw her turn around and kick her leg, both of which were done almost at the same time. Before the audience could blink, her head and shoulders had crossed the crossbar, and then she held out her chest, tilted her waist, closed her abdomen and closed her feet. How "back-to-back" ... "It worked! After breaking the school record, the applause around shook the railing on the elevated platform ... The students ran into the field and hugged her, and another student punched her several times (detail 4) and then lifted her high.
3. Fairy tale composition about gloves and snowflakes in grade four
I am very happy today, because my mother bought me a pair of gloves, but these gloves are rare.
In fact, my mother came to buy boots with my family today, but the boots of every family are not good-looking, except children's, so I can only give up buying boots today.
I went shopping again. Suddenly, a pair of gloves attracted me and stopped me, because these gloves were so wonderful. So, I should ask my mother to buy it for me, but even if I told my mother that she didn't agree, I was very sad. "Why didn't my mother buy me gloves?" Mother said, "Go ahead, it's time to go home. Let's go!" " "I found it difficult for me to move forward, even hesitating for a while at every step. Suddenly, I had a brainwave and said to my mother, "Well, mom, you buy me that pair of gloves and I'll go home and write my composition." Mother hesitated for a moment: "All right, all right! "I secretly laughed behind my mother's back because I kept telling my mother that my composition was not good. In fact, my composition is my strong point, and I have always been the first in the history of composition in our class. I ran forward happily. This pair of gloves is worth five yuan. After paying the money, my mother said, "Don't forget to write the composition." I said proudly, "Don't worry! "