Can the patent claim be written like this?

First of all, the most important claim is 1. The protection scope of claim 1 should be as large as possible, and the upper concept should be used as much as possible, such as replacing the motor with a power mechanism; However, it should be noted that the content of claim 1 cannot be the same as the existing patent, but it should be as different as possible! Secondly, the content in the claim 1 should be complete and clear, and the applied things should be described completely, especially the position relationship and connection relationship of each structural part! Of course, if you just want a patent certificate and want to improve the authorization rate, you need to write down the scope appropriately. For example, only write motor, not power mechanism! Finally, write the claim 1 and the subordinate rights. Dependent rights can further define the content of claim 1. For example, in the subordinate rights, the power mechanism can be written as a motor, which is intended to clarify the upper concept, in case the examiner thinks that the upper concept is not clear enough and that the disclosure is not sufficient!