Modifying a defective sentence refers to modifying a sentence with grammatical defects so that it does not change the original meaning and makes the sentence more fluent. What are the causes of diseased sentences? The following is a summary of the causes of diseased sentences that I have compiled. Welcome to read
Summary of the causes of diseased sentences 1
1. Improper word order
1. Here , most of the once open lake has been filled in and turned into homesteads. The remaining small part is also shrinking at a rate of 10% every year, which is sad. (National Volume I)
Analysis: Example 1: Every year should be placed in front of 10%.
II. Improper collocation
1 In recent years, my country’s patent applications have increased year by year, and the continued rapid growth of patent applications shows that the level of domestic research and development and the public’s patent awareness are improving. Keep improving. (National Volume I)
Analysis: In Example 1, "Public Patent Awareness" and "Continuously Improving" cannot be combined, and can be changed to "Research and development level continues to improve, and the public patent awareness continues to increase".
3. Incomplete ingredients
1. The Jinan Massacre Memorial Bell arrived in Jinan from Guangzhou in the early morning of April 28. At this point, the exhibition work of the Jinan Massacre Memorial Park has been completed. In May We will open our doors on the 3rd. (Shandong Volume)
2. Due to misunderstandings about the overall geological conditions of the beach area, the exploration team repeatedly missed the oil reservoirs they encountered. (Anhui volume)
Analysis: Examples 1 and 2 have incomplete subjects. Example 1 can add "Memorial Garden" before "May 3". Example ⑵ ?Due to ? and ?, one of the two words ? can be deleted.
IV. Unknown meaning (ambiguity)
1. The municipal government’s decision to strictly prohibit the breeding of dogs and the hunting of wild dogs and rabid dogs in urban areas has received enthusiastic support and support from the general public. (Jiangxi Volume)
2. Wang Lin stayed in the laboratory for half a month and seemed to be isolated from the world, so he returned home and forced himself to read newspapers for ten days. (Guangdong volume)
Analysis: The object of Example 1? Strictly prohibited? is a joint structure. Should we kill wild dogs and rabid dogs? The meaning is unclear. Example 2: Read the newspaper for ten days? There is ambiguity. Is it the newspaper for ten days or the newspaper for ten days? The meaning is unclear.
5. Mixed Sentences
1. In the quality month activities, they carried out comprehensive management focusing on improving product quality, especially strengthening the process flow and acceptance procedures. monitoring. (Ningxia, Hainan volume)
Analysis: Example 1 should be changed to "center on improving product quality" or "center on improving product quality".
6. Illogical
1. There will always be different encounters and encounters between people. It is the constant intersection of different people’s life trajectories that weaves together The complicated life in this world. (National Vol. 1, Volume 3)
Analysis: Example 1: "Encounter" means to meet by chance, and "encounter" is semantically repeated. The two cannot be juxtaposed, so "encounter" and "encounter" can be removed.
Summary of the causes of faulty sentences 2
1. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical fault is
A. This experience of the master is very important, but it is spread There are different opinions, and all the parties involved and insiders have passed away. After consideration, we plan to adopt the statement of the master’s son as the standard.
B. When we speak and write articles, we need to follow certain grammatical rules when stringing scattered words into sentences that can be used to convey information and complete communicative tasks.
C. This legal vocational training base was jointly established by the Provincial Department of Justice and Nanhai University. It is the first training institution in the country to effectively combine government administrative functions and efficient educational resources.
D. Recently, the number of children with fever has increased, and our hospital has entered a state of overload in the outpatient clinic. In order to make medical treatment more orderly, we have decided to register at different times. We apologize for any inconvenience this causes you.
B. Analysis
a. The sentence structure is mixed. It is planned to use ? and ? as the standard. Mixed, it can be changed to ? We will use the statement of the master's son after consideration.
c. Improper matching, the base and the organization do not match.
d. The object is incomplete and should be changed to "Decide to adopt the method of time-based registration".
The idea of ??answering language problem questions is usually: sort out the main stem and branches of the sentence to see if the components are incomplete or redundant; look at the main components of the sentence, that is, between the subject, predicate, and object, and the branches and leaves of the sentence are Check whether the definite, adverbial, complement and central words match each other; read silently in your mind to see if different sentence patterns are mixed and whether the word order is appropriate; think comprehensively to see whether it is consistent with logical thinking and whether the meaning is clear.
2. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is
A. With the advent of Tianhe-1, our country has become the second country after the United States to develop computing speed. A country with petaflops of supercomputers is at the forefront of this important field of science.
B. The reporter came to the China Wolong Giant Panda Museum on the south side of the People's Government of Wolong Town and saw that this so-called "China's only giant panda museum" is located at the foot of a beautiful mountain, surrounded by flowing water. Gong, green trees.
C. Mr. Liu enthusiastically supports education, charity and other public welfare undertakings in his hometown. When he returned to his hometown this time, he offered to take photos with some of the orphans taking the college entrance examination in the orphanage.
D. Thousands of Asian Games volunteers are busy. They are working together to realize the ideal of hosting a civilized Asian Games that attracts the attention of Asia and the world.
A. Analysis
bThe components are incomplete, and the museum or building is located in front of it;
cThe meaning is unclear. ?Some of them can be welfare homes or orphans.
d Improper matching. Completion and ideal, completing a task or realizing an ideal.
3. Among the following items, the one that is not wrong is
A. Today’s environmental protection technology not only ensures that the production process does not waste resources, does not pollute the environment, and ensures the use of products Clean and efficient, and effectively recover and recycle waste after product use.
B. Once the souvenirs of a specific festival are determined, merchants and enterprises can design, produce, and operate related items, and media such as television, newspapers, and magazines will have the target of focused publicity.
C. Although some of the professional courses we are learning now are very unfamiliar to us and are difficult to learn, I believe that with the help of the teacher and as long as we work hard, we will be able to learn them well.
D. Medical staff in a certain hospital transfused blood carrying the HIV virus into patients without their knowledge, causing these patients to contract new diseases without getting rid of their old diseases, causing serious consequences.
D. Analysis
a. Incomplete ingredients, added at the end to achieve it;
b. Illogical, merchants, enterprises? Change it to "enterprise, merchant";
c. The subject and object are reversed, which is not suitable for us to join later.
Error-prone reminder that items b and d are easy and difficult to judge. Pay attention to the collocation and order of juxtaposed words.
4. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is
A. Cao Cao’s character has a dual nature. His talent, strategy and cunning and ferociousness are very important to any actor who plays him. It's both challenging and a rare performance opportunity.
B. Our country plans to launch an experiment with the target aircraft Tiangong-1 into space in 2011. This news has attracted great attention from countries around the world and has been reported by major media around the world.
C. Although the Greek economy, as an EU member, has a limited economic aggregate and its debt crisis is not enough to directly impact the US economy, it will still indirectly affect the recovery process of the US economy.
D. The reasons why the three-year post-disaster reconstruction goal and task were basically completed in two years: First, the results of the support from 18 counterpart provinces and cities, and second, the achievements made by the cadres and the masses in the disaster area through self-reliance.
C. Analysis
Item a? His talent, strategy and cunning and ferocity are not matched properly with "It is also a rare performance opportunity". It can be changed to "It is also a rare opportunity to play this role" Performance opportunities?;
b. The ingredients are redundant, the experiment of deleting?;
d. The sentence structure is mixed, the reason for deleting?.
5. Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is
A. The team of Jiantan Village Committee believes that under the modern situation, sufficient and sustainable growth of wealth requires the The enrichment of knowledge is the premise. To make villagers truly rich, the key is that knowledge plays a decisive role.
B. Recently, there have been cases of using text messages to defraud bank card holders in some places, and the fraud methods are diverse, and new types of fraud have appeared on the pretext of winning prizes, collecting payments, tax refunds, etc.
C. The U.S. police released aerial photos of the 9/11 terrorist attacks. These shocking photos gave the public the opportunity to witness the collapse of the World Trade Center from the air. .
D. The meeting focused on giving full play to the role of student informants, strengthening teaching quality monitoring, promoting the construction of teaching and learning styles, improved the student information source organization structure, and arranged the main work of this year's teaching and learning evaluation.
C. [Analysis]
The sentence pattern of item a is mixed, and the last clause is changed to "the key lies in knowledge" or "knowledge plays a decisive role".
b. The structure is chaotic, either because there are new types of fraud in terms of winning prizes or collecting money, or committing fraud on the pretext of winning money or collecting money; d. The elements are incomplete, and after the establishment of academic style, Add to the list of other issues.