2009 Beijing High School Entrance Exam Full Score Essay Topic: ____________ is not over
Life is not over
The third uncle is actually not a relative, he and his mother are from the same village, same surname and same generation That's it, I am the third eldest child in my family, so my mother asked me to call him third uncle.
The first time he came to Beijing to work, my home became his place of stay. The first time I met him was during vacation, and I was particularly impressed. He looked like he was in his fifties. Although he was tall, he was a bit out of place with his earthy crew cut and bright, squinting eyes. They match the look and are decently dressed, but the odor of sweat, earth, or train odor emitted by the black and yellow skin really puts me off and makes me gasp. Because of my dignity and because I heard from my mother that he had taken care of my grandpa when he was at home, I went to the living room to say hello politely and then hurried back to my bedroom. I didn't call him uncle when I said hello, I just smiled.
I can still hear him and his father talking loudly in the bedroom. In fact, it’s nothing. It’s just that farmland farming has become mechanized. I can’t help but want to come to the city to find something to do, so I can do all the work by myself. Yes, a person who can bear hardships declares his family name. Because his voice is loud, the sound echoes in the house, so I can only describe it as a eloquent speech.
When we had lunch together, he kept talking about how good the countryside is now, and sincerely invited my parents and me to go to the countryside when we have time. I thought to myself: Why do I still run away when the countryside is so good? Come to the city! During the meal, I heard him calling his father and mother "brother-in-law" and "sister" respectively. I felt puzzled and asked my mother in a low voice, only to find out that he was not yet forty years old. It's really beyond my expectation.
But I also learned from his words that he has a daughter about the same age as me, who is also studying in his hometown, and her grades are very good, and his joy can be seen in his words. I was not in the mood to listen to other girls saying nice things to me in front of me, so I didn’t say a few words and ate in a hurry before going back to my bedroom.
When he went out in the afternoon, he found a job at a construction site. His father advised him to consider a few more jobs and live in my house first, as he was not in a hurry to go to work. He refused, saying that the job was okay and he could do it. And I can work up to 1,000 yuan a month! In the evening, he packed his belongings and went to the construction site. His mother persuaded him to stay at home. He smiled honestly and said that he was dirty and it would be better to live on the construction site. My mother thought he was a stranger, but after hearing this, I felt that he was quite straightforward. ,really.
So I settled down, and I really didn’t see him for a month.
I saw him again, bringing many gifts. He was wearing freshly washed clothes, his hair and beard had just been trimmed, and his body seemed to have been soaked in soap, and it still exuded that kind of light soap. taste. One of the gifts included an MP3 that surprised me. While explaining, he showed another one that was exactly the same. He said that daughters from the country would definitely like it. It is now popular among city kids, so he bought two and gave one to me. Send one home. I didn’t know what to say. Although I already had one, it was a gift from someone else. Of course I happily accepted it, and he was also very happy. My parents had to say thank you to him again and again for me. However, I didn't think about how hard it was for him to work twelve hours a day and only earn a thousand yuan a month. This was an afterthought, but it was already too late.
Because as soon as school started, I forgot about him. Although I listened to the mp3, I only remembered the melody in it, and did not appreciate the hard work and sincerity of the third uncle in his melody!
Just yesterday, we all went to his construction site, but we said goodbye to him. However, we didn’t have a chance to see him again for the last time, because his face, my third uncle, was blurred and unrecognizable. My third uncle, who was working overtime, fell from the high tower crane on the construction site. The fall made my heart feel extremely painful. It also made my cousin who didn’t know it feel extremely painful too, because he sent me a gift. MP3 has always been close to my heart.
If I call my uncle again, he may never be able to hear me, but I believe that he will live in my heart completely, and his "life is not over"!
2009 Beijing High School Entrance Exam Full Score Essay Topic: ____________ is not over
Missing is not over
The more precious I feel it, the more I miss it, just like me Life in an alley.
In the past, my family lived in a small alley. There were many families in the alley, and each family was very close to each other. At that time, I was even a little disgusted with the crowded and noisy life, but now it is I miss you most painfully.
In the morning, whenever I was still on a date with Zhou Gong’s daughter, I would be woken up by the early risers in the back row. “Ah! Brother, you’re going out so early!” “Well, yes, You got up very early, what are you doing?" "I have nothing to do, let's go out!" I heard this dozens of times throughout the morning.
At noon, I wanted to take a nap to make up for the losses in the morning, but just as I lay down, people in the back row started a tea party again, talking happily, ranging from Zhang Sanli Si to the President of the country. , there is nothing that they cannot talk about.
At night, even if you have fallen asleep, you are suddenly woken up by someone's loud voice. It may just be because someone forgot to collect their clothes. Kind-hearted people always seem to not find it annoying. of.
Half a year ago, we moved to a completely unfamiliar environment where we didn’t know anyone. Without those annoying noises, we naturally didn’t have to say hello. After two weeks of this, I felt like Very beautiful.
However, I suddenly felt empty in my heart, and suddenly recalled some things from the past. To be honest, once some sounds are missing, they become doubly precious.
For example, if someone’s electric meter is about to run out of money, someone will knock on the window more than once to remind you that you are about to run out of money, urging you to buy electricity quickly. How precious it is to me who didn’t have time to save the document.
Whenever that family cooks something delicious, the yard will be filled with fragrance. Of course, it is inevitable to hold a chopstick in the east and a chopstick in the west. What is even more valuable is that the family will also know how to do it. He generously teaches you the cooking method without getting tired of it until he is convinced that you can also possess this unique cooking technique. This kind of talk is so precious to my greedy family.
That day, while walking on the road, I suddenly ran into a former neighbor and exchanged greetings with each other, which made me miss that place and the life there even more.
In fact, nostalgia is also a kind of yearning. Really, no matter where we go, we should create this harmonious life of love!
2009 Beijing High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay Topic: ____________ is not over
The exam is not over
This is a six-star kindergarten with the position of principal. It has been coveted by many people for a long time. In this open recruitment, nearly a hundred people signed up. After four rounds of examinations and eliminations, only two of them remained - Xiaoying and Xiaobai.
The final exam was an impromptu speech titled "If I Were the Principal." This plays into Xiaoying's plan. Xiao Yingren is pretty, and she often hosted art shows when she was in college. Speaking on stage is not like a tiger eating bean sprouts - a piece of cake? The little white man looks quiet and doesn't like to show off, but since he has fought for this position, he probably won't give up easily. Everyone is waiting to see this exciting PK battle.
The show has begun.
According to the order of the draw, Xiaoying will appear first. It’s really extraordinary! The vivid speech conquered all the audience, and everyone responded with waves of applause. It was Xiaobai's turn to appear. Although his voice was not as clear as Xiaoying's, the content was clear and his attitude was not tepid, and he also received warm applause. The five judges on the stage began to whisper among themselves, looking a little embarrassed.
The scores were finally announced. Xiaoying won by one point, and thunderous applause broke out again.
The two contestants walked out of the examination room one after another, huh? Whose child is crying in the hallway? Xiaoying didn't bother to stop and hurried around. She wanted to tell her boyfriend the news of victory as soon as possible. Damn it, why didn’t you come to cheer yourself up today? If you have a bad heart, you might not be able to bear the stimulation of the scene. Xiaobai squatted down and took out a tissue to wipe the child's nose while asking patiently.
When Xiaoying was about to reach the door of the hall, she was blocked by the staff at the door.
Xiaoying is wondering, are there any other procedures that need to be completed? What greeted her was the kind smile of the oldest judge teacher: "Girl, the exam is not over yet." The teacher pointed to the child who had stopped crying in Xiaobai's arms, "The last question is right there. Unfortunately, you I failed to pass this question." The teacher paused and then said: "A person who lacks love cannot be a kindergarten principal. This love is not a rhetoric from the outside, but a natural expression from the heart. You: Today’s winner is Xiaobai.”
“What? The exam is not over yet!” Xiaoying opened her mouth in surprise. Then, he took out a small tissue and began to wipe his tears.
Comments:
This is an exquisite little novel. The author is like an excellent director, with original ideas and flowing language. He creates a tense atmosphere from the beginning, builds suspense step by step, and leads to an unexpected ending. It simply puts the readers at the mercy of the palm of their hand, and it makes people gasp in admiration when reading it! The two main characters in the article - Xiaobai and Xiaoying (are they deliberately homophonic? Seemingly defeated but not defeated, seemingly winning but not won?), one is the host and the other is the guest, and they serve as foils for each other, with hidden praise and criticism. The description of details is also quite unique, such as the "tissue" written twice: the latter is for oneself, the former is for others, which clarifies the theme of the article.
2009 Beijing High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay Topic: ____________ is not over
Life is not over
The Evergreen Tree of Thought
At 5:25 a.m. on October 19, 1936, a great soul stopped thinking at his residence in Dalu Xincun, Shanghai, and closed his eyes forever. However, more than seventy years have passed, and his voice and smile still often appear in front of people's eyes. People are bathed in the glory of his thoughts all the time, and they feel his presence all the time.
He fought non-stop throughout his life, using his pen as a gun, and tirelessly challenged the old forces; he was willing to be a bully and always cared for young people selflessly. People often feel horrified when reading his works, because they often find their own shadow in the characters in the works. It tests people's conscience like a leather whip, "as if to squeeze out the secret hidden under the leather robe", making people feel ashamed and urging them to make a new start.
The poet praised him as "some people are dead, but he is still alive"; in the hearts of the vast number of people, he represents the soul of the nation!
He is Lu Xun.
Science never fails
He is a billionaire and an outstanding inventor. He devoted his whole life to the cause of human science, and obtained 255 patents alone. He also left a will behind his death, dedicating all his property to the cause of science to reward future generations.
Therefore, every year on December 10, the day when this great man passes away, a simple and grand award ceremony is held in Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, to reward the world's outstanding achievements in human physics and physics in the past year. Those who have made great achievements in chemistry, medicine, literature and peace will receive very generous bonuses.
He is Nobel.
The unknown donor
He was an ordinary little boy, and people have long forgotten his name.
Unfortunately, at the age of twelve, he was terminally ill and would die soon. However, when he was dying, he proposed to donate his cornea to patients who needed it, "so that I can still see you all the time, mom," he convinced his mother.
My mother agreed to his request with tears.
The little boy passed away peacefully, but a lucky person was able to see the light again.
There is no distinction between high and low in life. They interpret immortal legends in their own different ways.
Comments:
The author has selected three representative figures and their touching deeds - there are writers, there are scientists; there are Chinese, there are foreign; there are famous Yes, there are ordinary ones - I summarized my own point of view from it: "There is no distinction between high and low life*, they interpret immortal legends in their own different ways", which also corresponds to the title.
What is commendable is not only the author's appropriate selection of materials, but also his mastery of the materials, such as the exact time and numerical quotation, which shows that the author has made solid efforts in daily accumulation.
2009 Beijing High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay Topic: ____________ is not over
Cultivation is not over
The four masters and disciples of Tang Monk and his disciples have gone through ninety-nine and eighty-one difficulties. Finally, he retrieved the true scriptures and achieved enlightenment. After returning to Chang'an, the emperor helped them clean up their dust and rewarded them for their merits. Unexpectedly, there was a dispute at the celebration banquet because they both wanted to compete for the top spot.
Sun Wukong was so anxious that his face was redder than his butt. He took out the golden cudgel from his ear hole, swung it three feet long, poked it into the ground, and said with a pale face, "I just want to ask, all the way down." Monsters and monsters, whoever gets the most credit!" He said with an attitude of giving up on me.
Zhu Bajie hurriedly chewed a few mouthfuls and swallowed the delicious food in his mouth, and murmured in a low voice: "I am an old pig who took risks to explore the road. Without credit, there is no hard work. Besides, none of you have ever eaten my food. Fast food? You have to be conscientious in doing things!"
Monk Sha never liked to talk much. He walked to the middle and silently took off his shirt, showing the thick calluses on his shoulders - facts speak louder than words. .
The three people unanimously looked at Tang Seng: "Master, you have to say something fair!"
Tang Seng closed his eyes and seemed not to have heard the noise just now. He kept twisting the rosary beads in his hands, and after a long time he said slowly: "Disciples, please stop fighting. The success in learning the scriptures is all because of my good leadership as a teacher!"
When Sun Wukong heard this, He was so angry that he jumped three feet from his seat and knocked the chandelier above his head.
When Zhu Bajie heard this, he spat out the delicious food he had just eaten on the ground: "Bah! There is a fly..."
When Monk Sha heard this, his face was livid, and he He slowly put on his coat and sat there without saying a word.
The hall became silent for a moment. The four people looked at me and I looked at you, and they all became black-eyed chickens. Only the white dragon horse tied in front of the door kept snoring and pawing the ground with its hooves. The banquet seemed to have turned into a memorial service.
The emperor drank a glass of wine alone, then refilled it alone, then laughed loudly, and transformed into his original form, but he turned out to be the incarnation of Tathagata Buddha.
"Just now was just a test for you, it was the 82nd difficulty. When you faced difficulties, you were able to move forward with the same hatred. Why did you fight for this small honor like this? Look at it. Cultivation is not over, and it will never end. You still need to work hard!" Say it and fly away.
The four masters and disciples immediately stayed there, all of them ashamed.
Comments:
This is a story adapted from a classic literary masterpiece. The author has learned and used it vividly, and the conception is ingenious and bizarre without being distorted. It is quite creative. The article illustrates the principle that "cultivation never ends" through the performance of the four masters and disciples of Monk Tang who came back from Buddhist scriptures to compete for merit. The most outstanding part of the article is the direct description of each of the four masters and disciples. No matter the language, actions, or demeanor, they are all in line with the characters and characteristics of the characters in the original work, and they are also vivid. The white dragon horse is written with a free pen, and the Tathagata Buddha is written with a curved pen. The writing style is flexible and changeable. The whole article is both hilarious and thought-provoking.