I. (16)
1, (2 points) a
2.(2 points) The noumenon of "salt water" is: the world of life; The noumenon of "salt" is Tao.
3.(2 points) d
4.(3 points) A. The world is being created all the time and generates endless interest. ( 1)
Expression effect: quoting famous sayings, the discussion is full of power; (1) compares the world to a river with vivid reasoning. ( 1)
5.(3 points) Through the door of literature and art, you can reach the highest level of understanding the world of life and sympathizing with people's joys and sorrows. (There are three scoring points in the line drawing, and one point is missing 1 point. )
6.(4 points) For example, 1 minute; Explain 2 points; Language expression 1 min.
Two. (20 points)
7.(2 points) (1) Deduce the topic and point out that you can see the willows on the other side of the river. (2) Bring out the love for hometown.
8.(3 points) Like "Graceful in the Breeze, Tired and Touching": Using anthropomorphic techniques (1 minute), the gentle gesture of Liu is vividly written (1 minute), which shows the author's deep affection for Liu (1 minute).
I like "I'm gone, and the willows are in love": with the word "love", I wrote the gentle gesture of "willow" and painted a beautiful picture of spring. (1 minute) I wrote my sadness in a happy scene, which reflected the inner sadness of the border guards (1 minute). ( 1)
9.(2 points) Accurately and vividly (65,438+0 points) draw a hazy, ethereal and infinite vitality (or "as if nothing happened, looming") green floating on the willow tip (65,438+0 points).
10, (4 points) In order to discover the beauty of willow, the willow watcher should keep an appropriate distance from the willow (2 points, 1 point is less "appropriate" deduction); The best place to see willows is across a river. Beautiful willows should be set off by shining waves (2 points).
1 1, (6 points) b, c
12, (3 points) With the help of this special experience, the comparison between the past and the present (1 minute) complements the fate of the author and his hometown, Liuliu (1 minute), and pushes the feelings of loving his hometown town deeper.
Three. (6 points)
13, (1) Zhu Xian became a beauty.
When I entered the fog, it disappeared.
(3) intrusion into the eaves.
(4) Readers who teach and learn their sentences.
(5) Gentlemen are born different.
(6) Traffic in the building
(7) its profitable funds
(8) The water in front of the door can still flow westward.
Four, (8 points)
14, (1) "Yulin Ridge"
15, (3 points) d
16, (4 points) (1) The third sentence of the poem is the combination of reality and reality, which clearly describes the storm of nature and implies the storm of life. (2 points)
The fourth sentence turns intangible into tangible. On the ship, we can use "parting hate" to express the sadness of parting concretely and vividly. (2 points)
Appreciation of Liu Zhiji's Ci;
This is a masterpiece full of meaningful poetry, beautiful artistic conception and profound feelings. The romance of farewell poems has long been occupied by the Tang people, but this one can indeed be compared with the Tang people. Cai Kuanfu's Poems said that Zheng Wenbao's poems "will be on an equal footing with Wang Mo, and Liu Yuxi and Du Mu are insufficient." Although this evaluation is somewhat exaggerated, it still has some truth.
The first sentence is very poetic. "Pavilion" is mostly used to describe slim and beautiful girls, but the author uses it to describe boats, which shows that the concepts are different. The object is omitted after the word "bu", which reminds people of Liu Yuxi's "only hanging Yang Wan away", with a dark meaning and extraordinary technique; "Spring Pool" naturally reminds people of Li Bai's "Peach Blossom Pond Deep in thousands of feet", and the beautiful scene of spring pool suddenly emerges in readers' minds. It's really sophisticated with a pen and exquisite layout. Such a farewell picture of a spring lake is perfectly displayed. The second sentence describes the farewell scene, which naturally reminds people of Wang Wei's "Advise you to drink one more glass of wine", instead of Bai Juyi's "Although you have drunk it all, you are still unhappy and leave", because the host and guest are only "half drunk" and "unintentionally" when leaving, fearing that "the wine will turn into homesick tears". The third sentence suddenly reminds people of Liu Yong's "I miss a thousand miles, the twilight is heavy" and Cui Hao's "There is a layer of sad fog on the river waves", as well as Wang Wei's "The Man who died in the West for no reason", which fills the universe with special feelings.
The most valuable thing is the last sentence. Hate, sadness and resentment are intangible, invisible and intangible, and cannot be described without some creative thinking. The predecessors have materialized sorrow and resentment, saying that it can be measured-"Who knows that an inch of heart is full of sorrow", that it can be thrown away-"So sorrow has been thrown away to future generations", that it can be broken-"without stopping, reasoning is chaotic", that it can be broken-"wine is like a knife to cut sorrow", and Zheng Wenbao used "load". This seemingly simple word "in" provides a great space for future generations' creation.
Appreciation of ancient separation;
People who write literary and artistic works generally know a way to set off the environment: it is also a flower moon court; When they are happy, they seem to be dancing for others; And when they are sad, it seems that they are crying for others. Wei Zhuang's "Ancient Parting" jumped out of this common metaphor, and used beautiful and moving scenery to set off the parting, but achieved the effect of harmony and unity.
It's foggy, sunny and beautiful. The author did not deliberately write the spring when he left his best friend as bleak, but truthfully wrote its richness and deliberately touched the charm of the willow, thus secretly revealing the embarrassing mood of leaving at this time. The second sentence turned to "half drunk after leaving love", which suddenly constituted a strong anti-autumn, which made the spring scenery seem to be eclipsed. The stronger the spring scenery, the stronger the feeling of parting. The word "half drunk" is also well written, which not only brings out the scene of banquet parting, but also shows the scene of Liu Yin buying wine to see him off, skillfully writing the inner feelings of the characters at this time. Because if you haven't finished drinking, the reason for leaving can barely restrain your feelings, and if you drink too much, your feelings will be completely out of control; Only when the wine is half drunk can the helplessness of other feelings give people a profound taste. "Half drunk" plays a role in deepening the feelings of the characters.
Three, four, two words, by going up one flight of stairs. The beautiful spring scenery here has made people so reluctant to leave their feelings, so if you go to Jiangnan, the spring scenery in Jiangnan will be stronger and will break the hearts of travelers. Therefore, when leaving, the farewell party pointed a whip at the south and said meaningfully that "heartbroken spring scenery is in the south of the Yangtze River".
Chang Jian's poem "Sending Yuwen Six" said: "Flowers reflect clear water, and one branch is lighter than the breeze forest. In other words, today, Jiangbei is still like this, worrying about killing Jiangnan's parting feelings. " Li Shi's "Nanling Farewell Banquet" also said: "The moonlight was idle before the snow filled the court, and the host did not return the guests. I am worried about tomorrow's acacia, and there are thousands of mountains in front of the horse. " The ending is written more deeply. The previous generation of literary critics called it "thickness", which means depth. "Dense" can more fully complete the theme of the poem.
This poem is bright in tone, beautiful in syllables, shallow and unobtrusive, brisk and rhythmic, giving people a fresh aesthetic feeling. The faint fine smoke and green willows set off the farewell wine on the roadside, like a poetic scenery. In the poem, when people walk, they raise their whips and give directions, which makes the painting look lifelike. Reading and reading, people can easily think of the sketches drawn by painters in Song and Yuan Dynasties, and their styles and feelings are quite similar.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) (18 points)
17, (4 points) (1) hold (2) gradually, gradually (3) secretly (4) quickly.
18, (2 points) c
19, (2 points) d
20.(5 points) (1) (He) relied on his own power to kill the world's talented people in order to demonstrate severely. (Keywords: Xun, Yi, etc. ) (2 points)
(2) Secretly entrusted the article to Zhao Kui (in the line), but Zhao Kui did not open the seal and (just) threw it under the console table. (Keywords: genus, unsealed, several, etc. , subject supplement of ellipsis) (3 points)
2 1, (2 points) integrity (integrity and courage)
22.(3 points) Key points: profile description, language description, detail description and action description. (Answer only three points. Combining text for proper analysis)
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Zhao Kui, a rock man, is the top student in Shaoxing Xinweinian High School. Three years later, he was recruited as a school bookboy as usual. At that time, Qin Gui was old, relying on power to kill all the world's talents, demonstrating strictly, and his ministers kept silent. When Zhao Kuangyin arrived, Qin Gui was very happy to see his splendid appearance. He wants to win him over and ask about him. When he learned that his family was still in Sichuan, he said, "Why don't your family come to Lin 'an together?" Zhao Kui failed to answer with her poor family. Qin Gui turned to the deacon and whispered. After a while, the deacon came out with 100 star gold. Qin Gui said, "Use this money to help you pay for the boat." Zhao Kui was completely unexpected and strongly refused. Lang Guan, who lives together as a roommate, advised him not to go against Qin Gui's wishes. Zhao Kuangyin said sternly, "A scholar doesn't bring anyone. What kind of person have I become (accepting property)? Do you think icebergs are reliable enough? " The person who advised him shrank back in fear. Deacon can't help it. When he came back, he didn't dare to tell Qin Gui what he said. Qin Gui is already unhappy. After a while, Zhao Kui's words gradually reached Qin Gui's ears. Qin Gui said angrily, "I killed Zhao Kui, just like killing a fox and a rabbit. Who is he to be so crazy? Someone called Cao Yong of Lin 'an Prefecture and called a group of people. "。 First of all, he presented a letter to the emperor, which said: "Recently, scholars in the three museums (History Museum, Zhao Wen Museum and Jixian Academy) have been disorderly and often colluded with eunuchs. I will find them. Probably their disaster is not small. " At this time, Qin Gui fell ill. In October, there was a scarlet towel (Qin Gui died). The emperor changed dynasties and secretly heard about those things. In November, he hurriedly wrote a letter and made Zhao Kui a senior official. Then, if he answers correctly, he will be promoted to be a doctor. The emperor told him, "I personally promoted you. Qin Gui said he recommended talents every day, but he didn't mention you. With this, I know that you are not attached to the powerful. You are really my favorite pupil. " He added, "Two young kings are studying poetry hard. I hope you can learn from them. " The emperor's intention is to eliminate the previous slander against Qin Gui. Zhao Kui was not hired before, in fact, because he was making a curtain call for Dongchuan. Fu Xingzhong, the examiner who took part in the scientific research, had a son who thought that Zhao Kui was the examiner of the provincial examination, and secretly entrusted the article to Zhao Kui, who did not open the seal and threw it under the console table. Soon, Fu's son didn't make the list. He always found other excuses to accept Zhao Kui's crime. He also worked hard, but in the end he couldn't defile him.
Six, (12 points)
23.( 1) Talents all have personalities (talents are diverse).
24.(2 points) The grass is bound and the carrion is solid.
25.(2 points) A.
26.(3 points) (1) This paragraph uses a lot of metaphors and vividly shows all kinds of talents. (2) The use of twenty parallel prose shows the diversity of talents and forms a powerful momentum. (3) After a large number of whole sentences, supplemented by loose sentences, there are uneven levels of beauty. (65438+ 0 for correct answer)
27.(4 points) This is a letter. With the help of imagination, metaphor, parallelism and other methods, plus rich emotions and profound exposition, the author expressed his view on talents. "Sick Plum Restaurant" is more like a fable. Through the treatment of Mei, the author's narrative is complete and the image is intuitive, which shows the author's dissatisfaction with destroying the talent system.
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What is said in the letter is correct. Human talent is like a human face, isn't it? Right? This is why there are so many excellent talents. What era was that? The emperor is laid back, the world is peaceful, the mountains and rivers are clear, and the family history is long, so people's hearts can be stable. Scholar-officials cultivate their children's temperament in their spare time. These young people are not only cultivated at home, but also cultivated by the state and society, and cultivated by the world environment, forming their deep and stable family ties, so each of them is close to their own family ties and has achieved various talents.
Proud into mountains and rivers, diligent into rivers and flowing water, elegant into fields, quiet into deep mountain paths, impatient into rapids, deep into caves and canyons, magnanimous into the earth plain, simple into ordinary people, complicated into fish and beasts, weird into monsters, kind-hearted adults ginseng poria cocos, glorious into plum blossoms and orchids, surly into thorns and thorns, simple into rice and mulberry. Solemnly become a ritual vessel of Zhong Ding, quintessentially become a pearl and treasure jade, harmoniously become a rosy cloud, simply become a dune hill, and clumsily become a rugged mountain road, all nurtured by heaven and earth, with the sun and the moon shining and the mountains and rivers blowing.
Maybe the sun and the moon shone for too long and stopped for a moment? Maybe it's the smell of mountains and rivers, which has been blown for too long and drifted away temporarily? So some people tied the weeds into the shape of adults, filled them with carrion, taught them to stand up with their heads down, and filled the court and society with them. However, strong winds will rise, and one day they will be blown in a mess, flying with the wind and turning into sediment. Liezi said: gentlemen turn into apes and cranes, while villains turn into worm mud. It's also a change! However, it seems more talented to become an ape crane. Alas! Alas!
composition
grade scale
The composition is graded according to "20 1 1 College Entrance Examination Composition Scoring Standard".
A class of volumes (63-70 points) has a benchmark score of 67 points (70-68; 67-65; 64-63)
The materials are accurate in understanding, appropriate in angle, profound in conception, prominent in center, substantial in content, sincere in feelings, rigorous in structure, innovative and literary.
The benchmark score for Class II volumes (52-62 points) is 57 points (62-59; 58-55; 54-52)
The understanding materials are basically accurate, the angle is appropriate, the concept is profound, the center is clear, the content is substantial, the feelings are true, the structure is complete, and the language is fluent.
The benchmark score of three types of volumes (40-5 1) is 45 (51-48; 47-44; 43-39)
I can understand the materials, the angle is appropriate, the thinking is general, the center is clear, the content is substantial, the feelings are true, the structure is basically complete, the language is basically fluent, and there are occasional language disorders.
Four types of volumes (2 1-39 points) have a benchmark score of 29 points (38-30; 29-25; 24-2 1)
Deviation from the material, improper angle or conception, unclear center, thin content, incomplete structure, poor language fluency and many language diseases.
Five types of volumes (below 20 points) that meet one of the following requirements are divided into five categories:
(1) separated materials. (2) The arts and sciences are unreasonable. (3) The full text is less than 400 words.
Note: (1) If you don't write the topic, 2 points will be deducted. (2) For the typo 1, deduct 1 point, and deduct 3 points at most. (3) If the text is untidy and there are many punctuation errors, deduct 1-2 points as appropriate; If the face is neat and beautiful, add 1-2 points as appropriate.