Hubei examinee
Remember the story of the mermaid princess and the prince? Facing the prince's sacred invitation, the mermaid accepted the invitation with a tearful smile. Even if her soft feet slipped on the tip of the knife, the little mermaid never lost her feet. Every time I read this story, I can't help crying. The little mermaid gave the prince the deepest understanding of love and survival with her sincere feelings.
See the trees on the cliff? It has been standing there quietly. The bird flew by, leaving a contemptuous laugh: "What is waiting for this tree will only be death after the nutrients are exhausted." The eagle passed by, thought deeply, and moved its nest to the branches on the cliff. "I know," said the eagle, "only you are strong, and only you can understand the barren mountain." "Look into my eyes," the tree said to me slowly. "The eagle and I are very close. Only by deeply understanding each other can we have a deep understanding. " So I understand the so-called "one life two, two lives three, three lives are all things". Only by exploring things deeply, establishing close ties with things and using sincere feelings can we have the clearest understanding of things.
Remember San Mao who wandered in a foreign country and traveled all over the Sahara? Why did she choose such a difficult environment? Why should we appreciate the pleasure of sadness and despair? Is it the grandeur of the yellow sand rolling all over the sky, the distance where "the desert is lonely and the long river is setting the yen", or the melodious camel bell? There is no Sahara in youth, but from her words, I realized that it was her desire for the desert that made her enter the Sahara, thus gaining an unusual understanding. "Look into my eyes," San Mao said to me lightly. "Only with deep feelings and yearning for it can we truly understand the desert." Then, I understand that the essence of cognition lies in seeking, and the motivation of seeking knowledge lies in feeling. Only emotional closeness can lead to in-depth thinking and deepen cognition.
The picture flashed quietly in front of my eyes. Hemingway sat by the sea, stroking Van Gogh's Sunflower ... "Look into my eyes." You speak softly, so I understand that your intimacy with things gives you the most perfect but lonely cognition of things.
Sad music quietly sounded, and the little mermaid quietly came to the prince's bed, kissed it deeply and threw the dagger into the sea. Before that, the prince had the deepest feelings for the little mermaid, so he went to understand it. Even if the little mermaid becomes a bubble or a cloud, she still has the intimacy of a prince and a comprehensive and true cognition. I think the little mermaid will laugh. Because, because I looked into her eyes.
[Comment] "Look into my eyes" appears repeatedly in the text, which poetically gives such a meaning: communication can bring people closer, make their hearts stick together and deepen their understanding. This is the theme of this article.
There are four pictures in the main part: the first is the intimate relationship between the eagle and the tree, and the second, third and fourth are my spiritual conversations with Sanmao, Hemingway and Van Gogh, which are combined in a "montage" way, seemingly unrelated, but all around the same theme. Different from other articles: First, this paper skillfully uses the art of cutting. The first and second pictures are written in detail, while the third and fourth pictures only capture the most essential life image of the characters and outline it in one or two sentences, but the image is very vivid and prominent. Second, rhetorical questions are used at the beginning of the first and second pictures, forming an echo trend, and the third picture uses "the picture quietly flashed in front of my eyes" to create a "montage" sense of mobility. Of course, these sentences can also be regarded as a transition, which is different from the general ones. It has the distinctive characteristics of "montage" connection. Third, both the beginning and the end are mermaid stories. This conception creates an artistic realm of the image in the environment and the image in the image, which embodies the sense of hierarchy and depth of the "montage" picture.
yearn for freedom
Love it and set it free. After all, we all long for freedom. -inscription
one
Yesterday, I bought a canary.
Yesterday, I had a new owner.
two
After school, I can't wait to go home at once, and I won't fool around like before. Just because I want to see it earlier-my lovely canary.
Why hasn't the master come back yet? I can't wait. I, a bird, finally know what loneliness is today. The door is locked, the master is back! I adjusted my feathers, straightened up and cleared my throat. As soon as the host stepped into the house, I immediately sang a beautiful ode to joy. The host smiled, and so did I.
three
My parents forbid me to go out to play during the May Day holiday these days. However, I had a good time in the company of canaries. It turns out that there is joy in this day without freedom.
These days, my heart is stuffy. I do live a comfortable and happy life in a cage carefully arranged by my master, but I can't fly in this narrow space. The host teased me with branches, and I tried my best to cooperate. Looking at her happy appearance, it suddenly occurred to me that I exist only to make her happy, that's all.
four
The final exam is coming soon, and the burden of one subject after another is overwhelming me. Life at two o'clock and one o'clock is so pale that I'm tired of it. I want to fly, I want to go, I want to escape. However, I will never run away! Smile at yourself and look at the canary: you will never understand my sadness, will you? It doesn't matter, you are always happy.
It can be seen that the host is under great pressure, so he still smiles every day, but there is no bright sunshine in the past. Does she have no freedom either? My body is getting weaker and weaker. Because, I have no freedom. I feel that my life has been stifled in endless depression, which engulfs me like quicksand. I really can't hide my happiness any more-my patience has reached its limit. I know she doesn't understand me, but she can't understand my anxiety? I looked at her in disbelief. The way she looked at me, like a gentle net, bound me firmly.
five
After the exam, I went home and the canary died in the cage. Why? Does the canary represent freedom? Give me freedom or give me death? If this is its escape, then it has succeeded. I love it and give it everything except freedom. It wants nothing but freedom. I am a fool, aren't I? I yearn for and long for freedom, but I deprive others of their freedom!
Comment: This article is a narrative. Rich in connotation, profound in theme and ingenious in conception. If you use a single-line structure, it is a good article to write only "my" desire for freedom. However, the author is ingenious and adopts a double-line structure. "My" desire for freedom and the caged bird's desire for freedom reflect each other, and the theme is more distinct and prominent.
Tianya, stare, fly
Jiangsu examinees
I am a flying bird, but I have been hurt. If God gives me another chance, I still choose to fly.
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true colour of a hero
Life in the extreme state is beautiful, instantly condensed into eternity, as if enduring patience and persistence are for that moment.
When Yu Ji scratched the knife, I saw the bright red blood flowing through the snow-white neck and blooming a feeling of life on the spear tip. So the strong man hid his face and mourned. Listening to the Chu songs in his hometown all around, facing the turbulent Wujiang River and looking back at the noisy Han army, Overlord finally chose to commit suicide. The king's ambition is empty, and his beauty is lost. Let all kinds of things in the world become the shadows of previous lives, shaking in my heart and drifting away with the tail of Zhuizhui.
At that moment, the giant was in do or die. Perhaps no one can be sure whether he regrets his choice. But I guess: no, resolute eyes are unusually sharp.
As a result, the surging river is silent, leaving it to future generations.
Legend of Sao ke
The road of life is made up of countless intersections for you to choose from. Even those people with lofty ideals who are well-known in ancient and modern times have their moments of choice.
In the face of personnel changes, Li Bai chose "Oh, let a man with spirit go where he wants to go, and never point his golden cup at the moon!" " ; In the face of "Never Return to the River", Su Dongpo chose "Life is like a dream, and a statue is still on the moon"; In the face of the old scenery of the old country, Li Houzhu issued the helplessness of "falling out of the water and leaving the spring, all in the world"; In the face of the truth of justice, Tan Sitong issued the lofty meaning of "I smile to the sky from the horizontal knife and stay in the two Kunlun mountains"; In the face of parting, Xu Zhimo chose "I left gently, just as I came gently, waved my sleeves and bid farewell to the clouds in the Western Heaven".
My choice
Many people and things walk around my life, like epiphyllum. If it is a meteor, it can't stay fragrant all night, and it can't stay for a short time. I am Leng Yue on the river, shining on people wandering on the shore, my heart is wisteria, and my piano is rotten, but I don't regret or hate it, even if I have to wait for ten thousand years! In order to find the shadow in my dream, I am persistent, and I live like a broken stone in Cangshan! In order to seek the original intention of Wan Li, the world of mortals will not change, and I will only have a bleak voice, like a lotus in clear water. I stand before the choice with purity and innocence.
Young people pass by in a hurry. If many years pass by in a hurry, it is the mood left by a sword in the vicissitudes of life. Looking back at the future, in the middle of the moon, looking back again is the end of the world!
Time can't forget the pain, and angels can't soothe the sadness.
At the end of the world, I stare, I choose, I fly!
[Comment] The author uses three subheadings to belong to a part respectively, and together with * * * constitutes a brilliant masterpiece.
Compared with "One, Two, Three" and "Act X", subtitles have a unique function, that is, they can mention the main or key contents of this part, so that readers can see at a glance. Subtitles in this paper have their own uniqueness: either revealing the essence of characters, or summarizing their identities and choices, or borrowing the subject words in the titles and making them smaller. The syllables are neat and varied in content and ways. Such subtitles, swaying writing style and dazzling literary talent constitute a harmonious whole.
The author launches the full text around "the choice of mind", and each part starts from the result of choice, but the expression methods are different: The True Color of Hero is a point description, The Legend of the Poet is a summary, and My Choice is a purely poetic way, which falsely describes the mood of one's choice. Looking at the whole article, we can find that the author is expressing his feelings through the past, that is, using the first two parts to pave the way for expressing his chosen mood. In a very limited time, he calmly and skillfully made such ingenious ideas, showing a very rich literary talent. Among other reasons, it cannot be said that the author also benefits from the unique and powerful "montage" structural method.
Select Triassic
Jiangsu examinees
one
The scorching sun mocked in the air.
Kuafu dragged his tired body and ran. Golden dust was stirred up. "I'm so thirsty that I can swallow the water of Weihe River in one gulp. It's time to rest. " Kuafu looked up. The sun overhead has set in the western hills. "But, the sun, the Lord of all things, is my love! How can I let him abandon me! " Kuafu slowed down, and finally, with a loud noise, Kuafu fell. Watching the golden dust settle slowly, Kuafu struggled to throw away his crutches and pursue his own track of chasing the sun before the dust of life settled. In the western world, a peach blossom is in full bloom in Denglin.
Choose dreams, life is great because of dreams!
two
The river is disappearing in the Middle East.
Qu Yuan, fluttering in white, is singing by the Zehe River. The world was overcast and I woke up alone. At this time, Qu Yuan looked haggard and haggard. When he is worried about the plight of thousands of people in Qian Qian, Chu, how can he not languish? When he is worried about the future of Chu, how can he not wither? However, Qu Yuan was miserable. His misery stemmed from the fact that "Sparrows and Black Magpies" were loyal to themselves and were driven away, while stealing important positions in the DPRK. Hearing the fisherman's advice, "It's a cloudy day. Why not let it flow? Everyone is drunk. Why not just take a sip?" Qu Yuan was a little skeptical at that time, but how could an eagle with lofty aspirations choose to associate with birds? So I threw a stone into the river. What is left over the Miluo River is the phrase "Xiu Yuan is a long way to go, and I will go up and down to find it".
Choose Zhijie, life is immortal because of Zhijie!
three
Dead leaves wailed in the air.
In addition to darkness and humidity, the dungeon in autumn is a little cold, just like Yue Fei's mood at this time. "Dad, I know that the old thief in Qin Gui set up a bureau. At this time, you are in a daze and the court is filled with smoke. What's the use of this court? It is better to reverse it! " This vaguely hurt Yue Fei, and the "loyalty to the country" on his back was also vaguely hurt. "Son, * minister in power, as a father I don't know, but since ancient times, the father as a child, you as a minister. As a son of man, be filial; As a person, I should be loyal. This responsibility is the foundation of a man's indomitable spirit. My son should remember! "
The tall and straight figure on the storm pavilion has become an eternal monument.
Choose responsibility, life is heavy because of responsibility!
Grasp the feeling and recognize things.
Guangdong examinee
First act
Time: Spring and Autumn Period and Warring States Period
Venue: Song State
Characters: Guan Zhong, Bao
Content: In the face of poverty, Bao gave generously. In the face of the villain's framing, Bao stepped forward and helped his career. In the face of others' mischief, Bao always laughs it off. Looking back on all this, Guan Zhong knew that he was sorry for too many bags, but when he asked Guan Zhong to let Bao be the prime minister, Guan Zhong realized the importance of the position of prime minister in the Song Dynasty and shook his head: "Uncle Ya is kind-hearted, but too vicious and grumpy." Someone passed this on to Bao, who smiled and said, "Those who gave birth to me are parents, and those who know me are Guan Zhong. Yes, if I become prime minister, I will kill you first! "
Voice-over: Grasp the feelings correctly, illuminate the front for what you know and drive away the darkness.
Act ii
Time: the first year of the Republic of China
Venue: Du Yue, Guangzhou
People: Sun Yat-sen and Sun Mei.
Content: After the founding of the Republic of China, there was no candidate for the post of Governor of Guangdong in Guangzhou. At this time, someone recommended his younger brother Sun Mei to Sun Yat-sen, the interim president. Indeed, Sun Mei has repeatedly made meritorious military service in the revolution, and he is stable and deeply loved by the masses. However, Sun Yat-sen's power generation announcement: The post of Governor of Guangdong and Guangxi is extremely important, which is beyond Sun Mei's ability. It was a good thing to be brothers, but the founding fathers had a far-sighted vision, resolutely considered the overall situation and made this decision, setting an example for future generations.
Voice-over: Grasp feelings correctly, show you the way to know things, and don't fall into the whirlpool of feelings.
Act iii
Time: A snowy afternoon.
Venue: Shaogang, Qinghai-Tibet Plateau
Personnel: general, battalion commander, sentry
Content: The old but still burly general came to a plateau post at an altitude of more than 4,000 meters to express his condolences to the soldiers. When asked that a sentry was over the age limit, the general repeatedly blamed the company commander: "If this were your relative, would you still let him stay that long?"? The battalion commander lowered his head and was silent. The sentry Zhang opened his mouth and said nothing under the gaze of the battalion commander. A commander broke the silence in a low voice: "General, the sentry is the brother of the battalion commander ... The battalion commander said:" This post must be guarded. " ... "The general slowly and solemnly raised his right hand and solemnly saluted the battalion commander and the sentry. People around also pay tribute to the battalion commander and sentry.
Voice-over: To understand things correctly, we need to balance our feelings and make rational and clear decisions.
Concluding remarks
Emotion is a wonderful and complicated thing. Correctly grasp your feelings, illuminate the way of knowing things for you, remove obstacles and help you to the other side of success; Letting your feelings overflow will only add obstacles to you, and even drag you into the dark abyss and regret of failure.