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Dear teacher:
Hello!
Thank you very much for taking the time to read my email. My name is XXX, and I am a XXX-level undergraduate candidate of XXX University. This year's master's unified examination applies for a master's degree in xx University, with a total score of xxx, political xxx, English xxx, mathematics xxx and specialized courses xxx. I got excellent grades during my undergraduate course, with an average score of xxx in the past four years (you can also write about my experience in participating in science and technology competitions). I study hard and practice actively. Under the careful training of teachers and the good academic atmosphere of the university, I have accumulated some experience in basic knowledge, design experiments and operation ability, which has laid a solid foundation for graduate study. I really hope to have the opportunity to learn from you and study for a master's degree in your research group, so I take the liberty to write to you, hoping to know about your enrollment and whether you can accept transfer. If I have the opportunity to learn from you, I will redouble my efforts to make a difference and live up to my teacher's cultivation!
Thank you for reading my email in your busy schedule. I take the liberty of writing to you. I implore Han Hai and look forward to hearing from you.
Good luck with your work!
Student: xxx
Tel: xxxx
Date: xxxx