How to write an email to a tutor?

It reads as follows:

Dear Teacher X: Hello! My name is XXX, I come from XX University, and my major is XX. At present, my weighted average score (or grade point) is 96, and my major ranking is 1. During the undergraduate course, he won the first prize of national college students' electronic design and the first prize of mathematical modeling competition; Published X papers in core journals as the X author; The scores of CET-4 and CET-6 are XXX and XXX. (Students who took the postgraduate entrance examination, plus their own postgraduate entrance examination results and specific scores in various subjects. Bao Yan's students can add: it is expected that they will be exempted from the test). For details, please see the attached resume and scanned copy of my report card.