[Pinyin]
Want to promote the first inhibition:
To carry forward and let go, control first and then suppress.
< 2 > Diary of primary school students is 200 words. Beautiful sentences and words should be linked together and written in a way that you want to promote first.
make dumplings
Today, jiaozi is in our home. I jump and jump happily.
I started to pack jiaozi. I was a little unconvinced when I saw my parents' bags. I went over to my mother and said, "Mom, can I wrap it up?" Mom said, "Can you do it?"
I said, "Why not?" In this way, my parents and I wrapped up jiaozi.
I picked up the dumpling skin, put the stuffing in, and pinched it with my hand. Ah, the skin is broken. My mother said, "Can't you?"
I am embarrassed to say, "I am a war hero-a wounded soldier."
After listening to this sentence, everyone began to laugh, and I followed suit.
Alas, it's not easy to package jiaozi. It seems that trivial housework is also learned and should not be underestimated.
Take my sister for the first time.
My sister is only three years old and very naughty. She always plays the big girl temper, and sometimes even her parents can't help it.
Today, I went to grandma's house. As soon as I got home, I saw my sister playing on the sofa in the living room, and I didn't care much. But wait till I get closer, okay? Why is my sister playing with my little book? I was furious and prepared to take it back. But on second thought, my sister is too young to understand. I should treat her as my sister. So, I stopped paying attention to her.
At this time, grandma came over and said that she would go to the market to buy food, and asked me to take my sister to play at home. I patted my chest and said, "Don't worry, grandma!" " "After grandma left, I asked my sister what she wanted to play. My sister said she wanted to play with dolls. My sister and I went to hug some dolls. I dress the doll first. Seeing that my sister was still dawdling, I went to help her. But my sister wouldn't let me, so I grabbed the doll for fear of wasting precious time. However, my sister began to cry, so I had no choice but to return the doll to her. But, who knows, she hit me after the doll.
Today, when I took my sister home, I thought about it for a moment, and I realized that I had treated my parents the same way. So I decided not to treat my parents like my sister in the future.
I am a computer geek.
I am a computer geek. I play games online almost every Saturday. Of course, I often look up information on the Internet, so I can study and play games.
Because I fell in love with the internet, I made a lot of jokes. For example, one day surfing the Internet at home, it was time to eat before you knew it. My mother asked me to eat, and I just said "Oh". After a while, my mother asked me to eat again, and I still said "Oh". Finally, everyone finished eating, and I felt hungry, so I casually asked, "Mom, ok." Mom said, "Everyone has finished eating!" This just know what my mother just said * * *.
It's good to surf the Internet. For example, one day my teacher asked us to look for information about the changes in my hometown. I searched all the books, but I just couldn't find any information. I'm in a hurry and don't know what to do. At this time, I used my quick wits and came up with a good idea-looking up information on the Internet. I turned on the computer, looked it up on the Internet and found it in a short time. It's really "I can't find a place to get it, I can get it without effort."
Now, I have another QQ pet online, needless to say. I must feed it. Goodbye!
pick fruit
Yesterday afternoon, my grandmother took advantage of our inattention and drove her motorcycle back to her hometown in Huilongdu to clean up the house. I haven't come back for dinner at noon today. It's already very cold, and it's raining in Mao Mao outside. We were worried about grandma being frozen, so we decided to pick her up by car.
As soon as I entered the village, I saw green guavas. Second aunt asked; "Do you have guava now?" "Yes!" Mom said. I asked, "Second Aunt, do you want to eat?" My second aunt said, "Yes, and we have to pick them ourselves, ok?" We all said, "Good!" When I arrived at my grandmother's house, I asked if there was anything I could do. Grandma said, "No, I've finished." "Then let's buy guava." We said with one voice. Grandma said, "Then I'll tell my aunt who grows guava." As soon as Grandma and Auntie finished speaking, we rushed over and said to Auntie, "We want to pick it in the field ourselves." Aunt said, "OK, I'll take the bucket to pack it." Then, we went to the guava garden with my aunt. Aunt opened the door and said, "There is a lot of moss in it. Be careful."
As soon as you enter the guava garden, you can see guava trees covered with many big and round fruits, as if to say to us, "Would you like to have a taste?" It's delicious! Sweet and sour. "Looking at this guava, my mouth is watering and I can't wait to take a bite first. Let's choose separately, go here and there for a while. After a while, I picked a lot. Just then, because the ground slipped, I accidentally fell down, which really hurt. Later, we went to menstruation's house to weigh the fruit and asked my mother to pay for it. Then, we went home.
When I got home, my mother cleaned some guavas, cut them into small pieces and gave them to us. We ate them with relish. Although I was covered in mud and my hands were as cold as ice, I was very happy. Next time I have the chance, I will pick the fruit myself.
Teaching Design of Idiom Composition "Want to Promote First, Restrain First"
Teaching objectives:
1, experience the effect of narrative ups and downs;
2. Understand and initially learn some ways to make waves and make changes;
3. Learning to promote and restrain first is used to write the expression effect of people.
Teaching hours: 2 hours.
Teaching process:
Classroom introduction
Qing Qianlong held a birthday party for his mother in Wang Hanlin and asked Ji Xiaolan to make an impromptu birthday speech. Lao Ji didn't refuse, but blurted out in front of a room full of guests: "This woman is not human." Wang Hanlin was very embarrassed when the old lady heard her face change. Lao Ji unhurriedly read the second sentence: "Nine fairies descended to earth." Suddenly the audience became active and praised, and the old lady turned anger into joy. Lao Ji then read the third sentence: "Give birth to a son to be a thief." All the guests became speechless and joy turned into embarrassment. Lao Ji shouted the fourth sentence: "I stole Xiantao and gave it to my mother." Everyone cheered at once. (Multimedia presents a poem: This woman is not human. Nine days later, a fairy came down to earth and gave birth to a son who was a thief. She stole a flat peach for her mother. )
Ji Xiaolan's birthday speech is so effective, mainly because he is good at using the method of promoting first and then restraining. Suppress, that is, suppress and belittle; Yang, is high-spirited, high above. That is, the author wants to praise someone or something, but he doesn't write from the place of praise, but from the opposite place of derogatory meaning, which makes the two deviate from each other and creates a strong contrast, and finally achieves the purpose of praise in the strong contrast.
The ancients said: "reading is like a mountain, and I don't like the flat land." If you write a narrative in a straightforward way, it's like watching the scenery from beginning to end, and it doesn't make sense. The narrative twists and turns, ups and downs, will be gripping and fascinating. Narrative must be "full of waves"-that is, writing about the waves of things can turn decay into magic, turn the situation that makes people fall asleep into a fascinating realm, make the events in your pen interesting and leave a deep impression on readers.
Technical description
Suppressing first and then promoting, also known as suppressing first and then promoting, refers to starting from the opposite side, writing in reverse, trying to render the negative image of the portrayed object, and then the pen and ink suddenly turn to the positive description, which receives unexpected artistic effects in the tortuous narrative.
Its functions are:
(1) makes the writing twists and turns, ups and downs, causing suspense. On the contrary, readers get an epiphany in the process of reading, leaving a deep impression.
(2) Truthfulness and credibility, in line with people's cognitive process. Feelings change with the deepening of understanding of things, which accords with the order of people's understanding. The feelings expressed in the article are true and credible because they use the method of suppressing first and then promoting, and there is no trace of affectation.
③ Make the theme of the article more prominent. In order to praise people and things better, works are sometimes derogated, which constitutes a writing process from derogatory to appreciative. Writing in this way not only praises blindly, but also shows a strong effect of youth.
Text connection
Firstly, the article introduces people's address to Chang, the origin of the address and her yellow, fat and short appearance. Then, she listed all kinds of "annoying" things: first, rap, "I often like to observe carefully, whisper something to people, erect my index finger, shake it up and down in the air, or point my opponent or point my nose." Second, many things, "Don't let me go, pull up a grass and turn over a stone", say that I am naughty and have to tell my mother. Third, sleeping is overbearing. "In summer, when she was sleeping, she put her feet and hands over and put a word' big' under the bed, leaving me no room to turn over. I slept on a mat in a corner for a long time and was so hot. " Fourth, the cumbersome rules, early in the morning of the first month, the first sentence should say "Grandma, congratulations!" Because this is related to "one year's luck"; After that, eat some oranges, because it is related to the downstream all the year round; Also, people should not say dead when they are dead, but must say "old"; You can't enter the house where the dead and children were born; The rice drops to the ground and must be picked up; Under the bamboo pole for drying trousers, you must never go in, and so on.
The second half of post-Yang's article shows the unprecedented respect of "I" for my eldest mother. Where does the young "I" respect Chang come from? Originated from the admiration of Achang's "divine power". The so-called "divine power" means that under the pressure of "long hair", you can take off your pants and stand on the wall, which can resist the gunfire of officers and men. What really makes me grateful and respectful to Chang is that she bought me a painting "Shan Hai Jing", which is a picture book of myths and legends that I am very eager for, but it has been difficult to get. How difficult it is for Chang, who can't even name Shan Hai Jing, to buy it for me! This can't help but surprise me! "This has produced a new respect. She can succeed in what others refuse to do, or what she can't do. She really has great power. " (Lu Xun's A Chang and Shan Hai Jing)
Pointing adopts the writing technique of first restraining and then promoting, first writing her shortcomings, then writing her "great strength" and "respect" for her. Mr. Lu Xun's praise for his eldest mother is sincere. The first part of the article is false, and the suppression is positive. Restrain before promoting, and "promoting" is the author's real intention. The author tries his best to express his high respect for Achang by restraining first and then promoting.
Job link
It turns out that she is beautiful.
"Buy it quickly! Stop dawdling! "
"Shout what! What's the big deal? Are you the only one selling strawberries in this street? " Mother replied, "Go! Son, let's buy it somewhere else! " Starting with flashbacks, we use contradictory methods. The opening is a war of words! Who are the warring parties? What the hell is going on? What will happen next? Set suspense to attract readers to look down. )
On Saturday, the sun is shining and the sky is blue, which makes people feel very happy. I went shopping with my mother. Suddenly I heard a sweet cry from the front: come and buy it! Big, sweet strawberry! Fresh strawberries!
Look inside, a middle-aged woman is shouting hard, and there are people there to choose.
Strawberries, that's my favorite, so I dragged my mother forward.
At this moment, an old lady is bargaining with the middle-aged woman. Grandma insisted on taking advantage of him, but she said, "It is not easy for us to do such a business. We can't afford it! "
"Grandma finally came out to sell things back, cheaper!" Someone in the crowd said so. That's what people around me advised.
"That's less than a catty!" Middle-aged women finally let go.
Obviously, the price has not dropped at all, but look at this situation, I met a stingy owner today! They just mumble.
Strawberries are really fresh, red and big. Every strawberry has leaves, and it seems that it still has water droplets, flashing in the sun, just like a sparkling ruby, which makes people drool. So we started to choose strawberries, and in the middle of the selection, the opening scene happened. This makes me wonder: other manufacturers want as many customers as possible. Why does she treat customers like this? Isn't the client God?
Mom put down the strawberry, and as soon as I took two or three steps, she stopped me. She glanced around with her eyes, and then said to her mother, "madam, see if you have lost the money in your pocket." Someone just took a few times out of your pocket, which is why I did it. Please don't take it to heart. Sorry! " (Misunderstanding method is adopted in the middle. Vendors actually grab the "God", which is quite bad in nature and has extremely serious consequences-leave! I didn't understand the kindness and pains of "her" until I cleared up the misunderstanding! )
Mom, look in your pocket. I haven't lost my money. Knowing the truth, we felt very ashamed and quickly apologized for what we said just now. How sincere and kind her attitude towards others is!
She added, "Madam, you must put away your money when you take the children out in the future. There are many thieves now! We can't watch you being stolen, and we are afraid that the thief will get angry and hurt people, so we have to do this. Don't be surprised! "
So my mother chose some fresh strawberries and weighed them.
"45 yuan 50 cents, give you a whole, 45 yuan." She said.
Mom handed over 50 yuan and said, "Keep the change, sister. If it weren't for you, we might not even have the money to go home today! "
Just as she was about to leave, the middle-aged woman grabbed us and handed a 5 yuan bill to her mother. She said, "Say 15, 15. Don't be too polite! Pay attention next time! "
My mother and I are walking home. The sun seems brighter, the sky is bluer and there are some clouds floating. I was eating sweet strawberries when I saw a busy figure selling strawberries. It turns out that she is really beautiful!
short review
The plot of the article has some ups and downs.
On the whole, this paper adopts the writing method of wanting to promote and restraining first. The little author has obvious emotional changes to "she", which not only vividly shows a series of psychological changes of the little author, but also makes the writing somewhat turbulent, causing contrast and leaving a deep impression on readers.
But before and after, the contrast is not strong and the characters are not full. It is advisable to strengthen the description of characters, enrich the content of the article and enhance the expressive force. For example, when a customer makes a counter-offer, she haggles over every ounce. After hard negotiations, she only made some concessions. This paved the way for her bad attitude towards my mother and me, which appeared natural in the plot, deepened the misunderstanding and enhanced the expressive force of the characters.
In addition, the plot of the thief stealing can be implied in the article, so it is better to make some preparations.
Writing link
Suppression-the most common method is to suppress first and then promote. In order to better praise people and things, works can be derogated to a certain extent, which constitutes a writing process from derogatory to praise. Make the writing twists and turns, ups and downs, resulting in suspense, on the contrary, readers get an epiphany in the reading process, leaving a deep impression.
Give it a try
Please use the skills you learned today to modify the following short film.
There is a maintenance worker in our school. He is very capable. Whether the toilet is blocked or the desks and chairs of teachers and classmates are broken, he is duty-bound to come and help. He is tall and thin, with a dusty face and rags. He can neither speak nor write, and even most teachers in the school don't know his name, so everyone calls him "old mute". We call him "dumb uncle" to show our respect. Because he always talks to us "making baby" and makes a detour every time he sees him. ...
Arrange a composition
Write a memorable composition with the method learned today, or you can use the example just revised as the writing content, not less than 600 words.
What word does "boss" use to suppress?
I want to be promoted first, then suppressed.
Chinese characters should be promoted first and then suppressed.
Chinese pinyin yüyáng Xiān yì
Interpretation should be carried forward, put first and then put, control first and then suppress. This is a common writing skill.
In writing, this technique is used to express dissatisfaction with the things or people described first. Then, generally speaking, there will always be a sudden change of opinion on one or two small things. But in the process of transformation, emotions are natural and can arouse readers' * * *. The advantage of this technique is that it can well express the author's rich feelings, make the plot changeable, form ups and downs, cause sharp contrast, and easily make readers suddenly enlightened and leave a deep impression in the reading process.
862 Biography of Xiao Xiucai, a WeChat idiom of Wu
Idiom little scholar 862 pass the answer:
Tomorrow's yellow flowers, sunset, castle peak, castle peak,
Colorful, colorful, green,
A sea of people, a sea of rivers.
Which idiom does Lu say first?
speak in measured tones
new word
Basic explanation and detailed explanation
[yìyáng dün CuO]
Describe the ups and downs, harmony and internal rhythm of sound.
tidy
Song Zhang Rongjie's Poems in Cold Hall Volume 1: Poems by Er Zijian (Cao Zhi); Euphemism; The charm of falling; Rhythm; There is no difference between good and bad. "
example sentence
His generous speech won the appreciation of the participants.
Look at the pinyin and write the words: Yu (four tones) Yang (two tones) Xian (one tone) Yi (four tones) What are these words? How did you write it?
(a writing skill) criticism is followed by praise.
This is an idiom and a writing technique.
"Ba" is a common word, which is used to write a composition that people want to praise first and then suppress. As soon as your eyes roll, pay attention to raising first and then restraining.
If you want to promote it first, restrain the writer's composition search time;
(A), genre
Just write a narrative and review the narrative.
(2), two principles
1, truth can be emotional. What really touches readers is the little things around you that you have experienced personally and have real feelings; composition
2, punch lines can be sensational. Only humorous and lively language can make readers shine at the moment and make people nod and sigh constantly.
(3) Three characters require composition.
1, stable:
To write a good story, we should try our best to make things clear according to the six elements of narrative, pay attention to the theme at the beginning and end, and focus on the center at the end, so as to give full play to our writing level steadily. Especially students with good writing skills, don't force yourself to write "amazing works". It would be great if you could show your 80% writing level in the exam composition.
2. Fine:
Don't be as simple as TV story introduction, add environmental description, character appearance, movement, language and psychological description in the middle. Students with good ability will have some near-far contrast, dynamic and static contrast, side contrast, environmental rendering and facial features description, which will make the article delicate and touching.
3. Fine:
For ordinary students, "essence" is embodied in: (1) choosing what they are best at; (2) Write your best words; (3) Use your most convenient structure (total score structure or time sequence) and try to play your own level.
For students with good writing skills, "precision" should be reflected in: (1) choose more innovative content that they are sure to write well; (2) Beautiful handwriting; (3) Carefully arrange the beginning and end, appropriately use flashback, contrast, association, symbol, description, and lyric, and strive to promote the first, render the atmosphere, use the scenery to express emotion, express emotion with things, and express emotion with things; (4) Adopt appropriate rhetorical devices, especially metaphor, repetition, parallelism and rhetorical questions, and appropriately use idioms and famous sayings to increase literary talent.
(4), four processes (keep basic points)
1, check the meaning of the question: be careful, the meaning of the question is not good, if it doesn't matter, then ... you should spend 2-3 minutes reading the composition question first, and then answer the basic knowledge question at the beginning.
2. Set up a good center: at least guide yourself to say what you like and don't like. Are you moved or opposed? Happiness or pain? Philosophy or affection? Is it praise or criticism? ..................................................................................................................................................................................
3. Choose materials: things that meet the requirements of the topic, are familiar to you, and can be written well.
4. Write an outline: (1) Write the central content and theme in one sentence; (2) What should be written at the beginning, middle and end? (3) Type the beginning and end of the draft and the opening sentence of each paragraph.
The next step is to write a composition on the test paper. We should try our best to achieve it in one go. As long as the outline and draft at the beginning, the end and beginning of the paragraph are well laid, it is not difficult to do it at one go and the thinking is smooth.
You can finish writing this composition in 20 minutes.
(5) Five skills (winning emotional points)
1, flexible mind: make sentences, screen and change the topic.
2, have a lovely face: write neatly, you must write as well as possible, and you must not use correction fluid, you must not modify it at will, especially at the beginning, end and the beginning of the paragraph.
3. Have a pair of shining eyes: a good article is half the battle. See Writing Skills of Full Score in Senior High School Entrance Examination-Eye-catching.
4. Have beautiful clothes: (1) A best theme (suitable for yourself); (2) Good story (good cloth); (3) Good structure (good design); (4) The language is fluent and beautiful (with good patterns and colors).
5. There are several exquisite ornaments: (1) Flashback, description and quotation at the beginning (good hairstyle) (2) End: rhetorical discussion, implicit aftertaste, lyrical praise, philosophical reflection, famous sayings and epigrams, associative dreams, and determination to call (famous shoes); (3) Famous sayings and masterpieces are just embellishments (diamonds); (4) Render the atmosphere with the description of the scene (like a scarf in a dream).
(6) Six taboos (don't lose points)
Avoid scribbling and alteration: write correctly, even never change the title, only change the obvious typo, change it if you can, and don't change it if you can.
Second, don't be too short and too long: there must be enough words, but not enough words. No matter how good it is, it is difficult to pass; The number of words can't be too much, and it can't exceed the composition paper in the test paper. In desperation, it can only be within 2 lines.
Discussion at the beginning of three bogeys: cut to the chase, and it is better to start directly. If you can describe the environment, describe it first.
Four taboos: the number of paragraphs is too small: 4-6 paragraphs are better, and absolutely not less than 3 paragraphs.
Five bogeys have nothing to do: what happens if you don't talk and don't guide?
Six taboos are too vulgar: don't always play to save children, cats and dogs from drowning …
Use "nine" to make a sentence of 100.
(a writing skill) criticism is followed by praise.
Chinese pronunciation: yù yáng xiān yì.
Idiom explanation: carry forward and do it, but control repression first.
The origin of the idiom: Yu Dafu's Story of Misty Rain in Suzhou: "Or did you think of it in order to awaken the audience's listening, using the rhetorical brushwork of wanting to promote first and restraining second, so as to have a symmetrical effect?"
Idiom sentence-making: This paper adopts the artistic technique of "wanting to promote first, restraining first" and deliberately makes waves, making the article tortuous and moving.
Idiom usage: compact; As predicate, attribute and adverbial; Used for writing
Writing skills: "Yang", you don't have to write "Yang"; You can't write "Mao" on the right side of "suppression"
Analysis of praise and criticism: a neutral idiom
Synonym: playing hard to get
Antonym: first suppress and then promote.