Apricot curtains attract guests to drink, and you can see a villa.
Lingbi Goose Water, Sang Yu Yanziliang.
A bed of spring leeks is green, and ten miles of rice flowers are fragrant.
In prosperous times, you don't have to plow and weave.
This is a five-melody, flat and flat, based on the "seven yang" part of the rhyme. It is flat and precise, and its instrument is rigorous.
The metric system is a handy thing for these young ladies, and it is not difficult. The works written by these sisters are not illegal.
This work is technically good, with a few points.
The first thing is to get to the point. The title (plaque) is "Xinglin in sight", and the first couplet "Apricot curtain attracts guests to drink, and there is a villa in sight" is not only concise and lively, but also begins with "Xinglin in sight" and begins with "Xinglin in sight". It is extremely necessary to take the topic apart and use it in poetry.
Zhuan Xu's "the water of the goose, the beam of the swallow in Sang Yu" is also different. The poet uses the way of enumerating nouns here, which is very difficult to control, and it is impossible for the master to do it.
Necklace couplets "Spring leeks, green flowers, ten miles of rice and flowers" are not only neat, but also extremely rich in content. Ten words not only replace readers in vision and taste, but also reflect the changes of time series with words such as "Shili" and "Chunjiu", which makes the scenery change from reality to emptiness, broadens the horizon in time and space, and makes this simple couplet bear the image scenery beyond time and space.
Yuan Fei liked this couplet best, and immediately asked them to rename "Huange Villa" as "Daoxiang Village".
What is good about this work? Fortunately, it is three times as big as before.