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Relevant personnel: As the deputy dean of the School of Foreign Languages of Shanghai Maritime University, I am very pleased to recommend Miss xxxx to you as a qualified candidate for your postgraduate course in law. Miss xxxx is an excellent student with excellent organizational and leadership skills. In her last year of college, I was the tutor in her class. As the organizing officer of the class, Miss xxxx has provided me with great help in handling graduation affairs. In addition, in order to leave a good memory of college life, she successfully organized several parties before graduation, which left a deep impression on everyone. Even today, she still plays the role of keeping close contact with the class members. Miss xxxx has great enthusiasm for voluntary work. During her sophomore and junior years, she went to public hospitals every weekend and served as a conductor in Shanghai Science and Technology Museum for many times. Besides, I would like to mention that Miss xxxx is a truly versatile student with great musical talent. Her performance of playing the guzheng, a traditional stringed instrument in China, was touching. She learned Latin dance in her sophomore year, and she plans to learn to play the piano in the next few months of this year. Generally speaking, Miss xxxx is highly expected. I think she can make greater progress after studying in the UK and will definitely become an excellent lady. I sincerely hope that you will consider her application. If I have any further help, please feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Vice President and Associate Professor of XXXX Institute of Linguistics, China Shanghai 200 135 Tel:+86-XX-XXXXXXXXX E-mail: xxxx@
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Wang is an impressive student because he had to overcome the great challenge of serious illness in his freshman year. When I first met Wang in discrete mathematics class, he was nothing special to me. Although he did well in the exam, he was not as high as I expected of him now. What I didn't know at that time was because of his illness. Wang tried to learn all the early difficult mathematics courses at once, including discrete mathematics, advanced mathematics, linear algebra and possibility. Although most students find it difficult to prepare only one set of exams, Wang is at a loss by four of them. But in the end, he got an impressive score in the final exam, which made me realize his unusual determination in the face of difficult challenges. Mr WangI often talks about all kinds of math and computer science problems. In these discussions, I always find him very clever. Not only can he quickly understand the concepts and problems presented to him, but he can also analyze these problems and propose solutions. But perhaps most importantly, Wang's thinking is very rigorous. When looking at any problem, he will check it carefully. If he finds any uncertain problems, he will clarify them immediately. I believe this idea is essential for becoming an excellent computer programmer.
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Dear sir or madam,
Vice President of International Business School, Tianjin Foreign Studies University
University (TFSU), I am pleased to write to recommend Wang Ye to your university.
I have known her since 2007 because I am her head teacher. I teach her international economics. In my course, she showed a thirst for knowledge. She often reads relevant economic books to enrich herself. And she also asked me to recommend some teaching materials and materials to study. When she is confused, she always tries her best to solve the problem.
Teacher Wang is a self-motivated student. As far as I know, her average score is over 85, and she has won scholarships every year for the past three years. Therefore, she was selected into the experimental class in the third school year. This class consists of the best students from the departments of international economics and trade, economics and finance. What's more, she used the winter and summer vacations to practice in a small company and accumulate experience.
I believe she is competent and performs as well as she did at TFSU. Therefore, I warmly recommend her. I hope you will consider her application positively. Please don't hesitate to contact me if you need more information.
yours respectfully/sincerely
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