Some show broad-mindedness, some show complacency, and some show leisure. The scenery recorded is different, and the artistic conception written is different, but they are all lyrical masterpieces, expressing feelings through scenery. We can learn some skills of writing landscapes from them. This paper focuses on Man Jing's Travels as an example for analysis.
First, grasp the characteristics of the scenery and write the scenery (seasonal). When writing about scenery, we should grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write. This sentence is usually heard a lot, but its real scope of application refers to the description of natural scenery. How to grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write, mainly to have a positioning before writing, to find out when you want to write about the natural scenery. Where is the scene? What are the characteristics? Then write around this feature, and naturally grasp the characteristics of the scenery. For example, in the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, the scenery of Man Jing in early spring is described in detail, and the seasonal characteristics of early spring can be well grasped when writing, that is, "it's warm at first, but it's cold" and "everything revives". One of them is "the soil paste is slightly moist", which is really wonderful when you think about it, because it is used in early spring. For another example, in the sentence "Ice skin begins to thaw", the word "ice skin" first refers to the frozen surface, but the author uses the word "ice skin" to describe "ice", which also implies that the ice is not thick. In early spring, it is understandable that the temperature is low at night, but the ice must not be thick. Look at the author's sentence about water, "the waves are clear at first glance, and the scales are layered and the bottom is clear." In early spring, the ice surface melted and water waves began to shine, reappearing the recovery of water. In addition, when the water freezes in winter, all kinds of suspended solids in the water begin to precipitate. As the ice melts in early spring, the water naturally becomes "clear". Looking at the sentence about wicker again, the sentence "it will be comfortable but not comfortable" vividly depicts the state of wicker when it just germinates, which is also a unique scene in early spring and also "shallow". The author uses "shallowness" as a metaphor for wheat seedlings and writes their shapes realistically. The word "inch" also reflects "early spring"
It can be seen that when writing natural scenery, we can better grasp the characteristics of natural scenery and then write. When writing natural scenery, on the one hand, we can consider the seasons, on the other hand, we can also write according to the unique climate characteristics, such as the state of various scenery under "rainy day", "sunshine", "snow" and "wind", and on the other hand, we should pay attention to the order of writing scenery. We need to pay attention to a certain order and write scenes. How to determine the order of writing scenes, we can write according to the observer's observation order, which is simple, in line with the thinking of ordinary people and easier to grasp.
For example, in the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, the first thing the author saw after "going to Man Jing" was, of course, the panorama of the well that the author could see. Therefore, when writing, the author first briefly outlines the whole picture with the words "Gao Liu is sandwiched by dikes, the soil is moist and the sky is vast". The following scenery description is a close-up of the local scenery, which is also inherited. Until the distance, the water in the distance is followed by the "mountain". The author wrote "mountain", but this "mountain" is in the distance after all. Therefore, the author can only describe it as a whole. Even though we were traveling with the author at that time, we naturally looked back after seeing the mountain, so the author wrote "wicker" and "wheat field" around us, and we could naturally see it nearby. These are all natural observation processes. When writing, following the observation logic of ordinary people can make readers read clearly without being messy.
When writing about natural scenery, we must pay attention to the order of writing. When writing, we can first present the scenes we want to write in our minds, and then write them in the order of observation. Another thing to note is that when writing, the distant scenery must be described as a whole, and the nearby scenery can be described in detail, so that it is logical. Third, linking natural scenery with human activities, there are almost no articles about natural scenery, that is, writing scenery for the sake of writing scenery, writing scenery or expressing emotions, or contrasting narratives, and so on.
If writing about scenery is to express feelings, it should be related to the activities of the characters. It is inappropriate to express feelings simply by describing natural scenery. Let's look at two examples first: the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, after describing the scenery in early spring in Man Jing in detail, says, "Although tourists are not prosperous, people who are full of spring tea, singers and people in red are always there." Although there are only a few strokes, it depicts a harmonious scene of characters' activities in early spring, which makes people feel the warm and quiet scene of spring.
For example, the description in Zuiweng Pavilion is even more vivid. In the second paragraph, the author gives the sunset in the mountain and the scenery at four o'clock in the mountain, and then describes the scene in the third paragraph. This scene revolves around "Taishou Banquet", depicting four pictures: "Chuhe People Tour", "Taishou Banquet", "All the guests are happy" and "Taishou Drunk", which is conducive to the development of lyricism when describing natural scenery. Of course, sometimes we can see that no one is in the best scenery. For example, Liu Zongyuan's Story of Little Stone Pond has no scenes of people's activities, but it doesn't mean that he didn't mention people when he wrote, such as "Surrounded by bamboo forests, lonely, lonely, cold ...".
2. How does 8th grade write an essay about scenery and travel in Unit 6 of Book 2?
Some show broad-mindedness, some show complacency, and some show leisure. The scenery recorded is different, and the artistic conception written is different, but they are all lyrical masterpieces, expressing feelings through scenery. We can learn some skills of writing landscapes from them. This paper focuses on Man Jing's Travels as an example for analysis.
First, grasp the characteristics of the scenery and write the scenery (seasonal). When writing about scenery, we should grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write. This sentence is usually heard a lot, but its real scope of application refers to the description of natural scenery. How to grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write, mainly to have a positioning before writing, to find out when you want to write about the natural scenery. Where is the scene? What are the characteristics? Then write around this feature, and naturally grasp the characteristics of the scenery. For example, in the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, the scenery of Man Jing in early spring is described in detail, and the seasonal characteristics of early spring can be well grasped when writing, that is, "it's warm at first, but it's cold" and "everything revives". One of them is "the soil paste is slightly moist", which is really wonderful when you think about it, because it is used in early spring. For another example, in the sentence "Ice skin begins to thaw", the word "ice skin" first refers to the frozen surface, but the author uses the word "ice skin" to describe "ice", which also implies that the ice is not thick. In early spring, it is understandable that the temperature is low at night, but the ice must not be thick. Look at the author's sentence about water, "the waves are clear at first glance, and the scales are layered and the bottom is clear." In early spring, the ice surface melted and water waves began to shine, reappearing the recovery of water. In addition, when the water freezes in winter, all kinds of suspended solids in the water begin to precipitate. As the ice melts in early spring, the water naturally becomes "clear". Looking at the sentence about wicker again, the sentence "it will be comfortable but not comfortable" vividly depicts the state of wicker when it just germinates, which is also a unique scene in early spring and also "shallow". The author uses "shallowness" as a metaphor for wheat seedlings and writes their shapes realistically. The word "inch" also reflects "early spring"
It can be seen that when writing natural scenery, we can better grasp the characteristics of natural scenery and then write. When writing natural scenery, on the one hand, we can consider the seasons, on the other hand, we can also write according to the unique climate characteristics, such as the state of various scenery under "rainy day", "sunshine", "snow" and "wind", and on the other hand, we should pay attention to the order of writing scenery. We need to pay attention to a certain order and write scenes. How to determine the order of writing scenes, we can write according to the observer's observation order, which is simple, in line with the thinking of ordinary people and easier to grasp.
For example, in the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, the first thing the author saw after "going to Man Jing" was, of course, the panorama of the well that the author could see. Therefore, when writing, the author first briefly outlines the whole picture with the words "Gao Liu is sandwiched by dikes, the soil is moist and the sky is vast". The following scenery description is a close-up of the local scenery, which is also inherited. Until the distance, the water in the distance is followed by the "mountain". The author wrote "mountain", but this "mountain" is in the distance after all. Therefore, the author can only describe it as a whole. Even though we were traveling with the author at that time, we naturally looked back after seeing the mountain, so the author wrote "wicker" and "wheat field" around us, and we could naturally see it nearby. These are all natural observation processes. When writing, following the observation logic of ordinary people can make readers read clearly without being messy.
When writing about natural scenery, we must pay attention to the order of writing. When writing, we can first present the scenes we want to write in our minds, and then write them in the order of observation. Another thing to note is that when writing, the distant scenery must be described as a whole, and the nearby scenery can be described in detail, so that it is logical. Third, linking natural scenery with human activities, there are almost no articles about natural scenery, that is, writing scenery for the sake of writing scenery, writing scenery or expressing emotions, or contrasting narratives, and so on.
If writing about scenery is to express feelings, it should be related to the activities of the characters. It is inappropriate to express feelings simply by describing natural scenery. Let's look at two examples first: the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, after describing the scenery in early spring in Man Jing in detail, says, "Although tourists are not prosperous, people who are full of spring tea, singers and people in red are always there." Although there are only a few strokes, it depicts a harmonious scene of characters' activities in early spring, which makes people feel the warm and quiet scene of spring.
For example, the description in Zuiweng Pavilion is even more vivid. In the second paragraph, the author gives the sunset in the mountain and the scenery at four o'clock in the mountain, and then describes the scene in the third paragraph. This scene revolves around "Taishou Banquet", depicting four pictures: "Chuhe People Tour", "Taishou Banquet", "All the guests are happy" and "Taishou Drunk", which is conducive to the development of lyricism when describing natural scenery. Of course, sometimes we can see that no one is in the best scenery. For example, Liu Zongyuan's Story of Little Stone Pond has no scenes of people's activities, but it doesn't mean that he didn't mention people when he wrote, such as "Surrounded by bamboo forests, lonely, lonely, cold ...".
Within 3. 100 words. Self-edited classical Chinese with lyrical narrative description.
The stars turn to the stars, and the surrounding areas are sparse, and the Sinian year will go. Looking back, the original luxurious Zhumen has now become wormwood.
In the Spring and Autumn Period, five tyrants made trouble, and world cooperate, the seven chivalrous men. The matter of the emperor will never be reversed. How many people in the Central Plains can return deer? However, the envelope bone cried for three days.
Beauty wears makeup and is poor. Lotus creeps, and gold and jade are in harmony. When the King of Wu visited Taiwan, Emperor Wu hid Gillian in the Golden Hall, swallows danced lightly in the palm of their hands, real people cried, and their daughters were red. Stan's dead! Zhangtailiu has withered, and everyone is dust.
Wei, who lives in Sunhe and Gongque, belongs to the DPRK. Once moved to the east, but the grain is growing. Suzaku Temple has been snowing for thousands of years!
Teenagers are arrogant and proud of the world. What the hell happened to Joan Lin? Martial arts is still full of sky! Alas, what a distinguished guest in the cloud, climbing stairs quickly and taking a bath in Feng Wang. Laugh and ask heaven, who and * * *?
Lonely geese in the sky, frosty Leng Yue. Who can compare with the long pavilion and the short pavilion through the ages? Laughter: After a hundred years, look back!
4. Write a composition in classical Chinese and 500 words in simplified Chinese: in late autumn, everything is bleak and sad. However, the scenery of Bashan in late autumn has a unique charm. Just arrived in Bashan, enter along the ancient road, go up along the road, and you can reach the top of the mountain. The scenery of the mountains and rivers in the middle is intoxicating, especially in the morning and evening. The colorful glow is like a colorful dress around the mountains. When the morning light gradually shone into the clouds, the shapes of steep rocks and steep peaks appeared in the mountains. The sound of birds and beasts can be heard gradually in the mountains, and then Shuaishan wakes up. The autumn wind crosses mountains and mountains, blowing the fog, just like a beautiful jade hand washing clothes in the mountains and taking away the sand and fog in the mountains. After the fog cleared, I saw the bleak leaves in autumn dye the mountains and plains golden yellow. I deeply feel the beautiful scenery of Bashan in autumn, but I can't help but feel sad when I think that although the mountain is so beautiful, it has finally entered the dying season. I saw autumn scenery on the mountain again, only the cold autumn water sensed my sadness and turned it into my heart. The bleak trees got my sadness and were also worried. So this is what people call autumn sadness. Although the mountains are beautiful, people tend to feel sad for those beautiful things that are about to die, so people will feel sad for autumn. This feeling is integrated into the autumn scenery, so it shows the bleak and bitter autumn. I understand now that in this world, it is not other things that are most easily infected, but people's emotions. Whether it is a mountain or a hard stone, feelings can penetrate into it, which is stronger than water.
Classical Chinese: In late autumn, everything is bleak and worrying. But the scenery of Bashan (if you want to write about other mountains, change your name) has a unique charm. When I first arrived in Bashan, I entered along the ancient road and reached the top of the mountain. At the same time, the mountains are intoxicating. At dusk, Cai Xia and Nishang surround the mountains. When the color of the morning light gradually enters the clouds, the shapes of steep rocks and mountains gradually appear. In the mountains, I heard the sound of birds and beasts, and Junshan first woke up. Autumn wind walks in the mountains, blowing fog and clouds, like a beautiful woman's jade hand. The fog dispersed and the clouds disappeared, only to see the beautiful mountains dyed golden by fallen trees in autumn. I feel the autumn scenery in Bashan, but I recall that although it is a dreamy scene, it has also become a withered season, and sadness is born from it. When I visited autumn scenery in the mountains for the second time and saw the cold water, I knew that I was sad and Xiao Shu was going to worry about my eyebrows. If autumn is sad, the mountains are beautiful and handsome, but people are sadder than fleeting beauty, so they feel sad about autumn, and this feeling melts into autumn, so autumn is bleak and bitter. I began to think that the thing that is most easily dyed on other things in the world is called love. Although the mountain is a hard stone, it can penetrate it and is stronger than water.
5. How does The Story of Yueyang Tower skillfully combine narrative, scenery, lyricism and discussion? From the second paragraph, the style of writing is exciting and the words are passionate. First of all, I always say "Baling wins, in Dongting Lake", and set the following range of scenery. Several general words describe the spectacular sight of Dongting Lake. After the change of "the principle of nature", a new artistic conception was introduced, from simply writing scenery to writing "the feeling of seeing things" of "the poet of moving guests" with the brushwork of blending scenes, thus forming the main body of the full text.
The third paragraph and the fourth paragraph are two parallel paragraphs, one sad and one happy, one dark and one bright, like two different emotional streams, which convey two diametrically opposite life situations in which scenery and emotions are mutually induced.
The fifth paragraph is the focus of the whole article, starting with "Jifu", which is both lyrical and argumentative. After listing the two situations of sadness and joy, the author's writing immediately stirred up, revealing a higher ideal beyond the two situations, that is, "don't be happy with things, don't be sad for yourself."
"alas! "Wes, who are we going home with? "Sad and generous, let a person feel sorry. Note the writing time at the end of the article and coordinate with the beginning of the article.
Extended data
Yueyang Tower is famous for its lofty ideological realm. Ouyang Xiu, another contemporary writer, wrote an inscription for him, saying that he was interested in the world since he was a child. He often recited by himself: "A scholar worries about the world first, and then enjoys the world." It can be seen that Fan Zhongyan's life code of conduct is "worrying about the world first, and enjoying the world later" mentioned at the end of Yueyang Tower.