Dear sir
Thank you for sending us the credit information we requested in time. We are pleased to report that all your credit references have given you a favorable opinion as a businessman.
Thank you for providing your credit information in time. We are pleased to inform you that all references consider you a trustworthy businessman.
Your new store on Broadway will eventually succeed, because your store is a prosperous community. However, its location is less than 20 miles from new york, which forces you to compete with the metropolitan department store for larger inventory and lower price, so that you can go back and forth easily, so that you can start with a large amount of debt to meet such competition. We must reject your credit application.
The new store you are about to open on Broadway should eventually succeed, because it is a prosperous community. However, it is only 20 miles from new york, so you have to compete with the metropolitan department store with more inventory and lower prices. If you borrow a lot from the beginning, you will feel the competitive pressure not far away, so we can't approve your loan application.
Therefore, we suggest that you halve the order quantity and pay cash. This will entitle you to our 2% cash discount, and you can transfer the money saved to your customers. By ordering regularly and in small quantities, you can keep the latest products on the shelves, so as to best cope with the competition from new york stores. Therefore, through cash purchase, you will build your business on a good foundation, which will make you enjoy a good reputation.
Therefore, we suggest that you halve your order and pay in cash. This will give you a 2% cash discount, or you can pass this discount on to your customers. By ordering in small quantities, you can compete with the stores in new york by putting the latest products on the shelves. Therefore, buying in cash will put your business on a good foundation and give you the best reputation.
The enclosed copy of the order will help you make a choice. Just check the items you want and sign the order. After we receive the order, your goods will be delivered by cash on delivery within two days, which leaves enough time for your first sale.
Attached is the spare parts in your order for you to choose. Just select the goods you want to order and sign the order. After we receive the order of cash on delivery, your goods will arrive within two days, so that you have enough time to start selling.
You are sincere,
Hereby,