First, direct description?
There are three places in the article that directly describe snow:
(1) When Lin Chongchu first arrived at the forage field, he wrote that it was winter weather at the beginning of the snowstorm, with red clouds gathering and the north wind gradually rising, but it snowed a day earlier. "One by one", writing big snowflakes; "Volume", writing style; "One day" is a wide range of writing.
(2) Lin Chong went to the market to sell wine, writing that the snow is still good, and the snow is broken, and his back is facing the north wind. It snows heavily.
Broken Jade describes the thickness of falling snow and highlights its great potential.
"Tight", the wind is strong, and the snow in the wind is like a tight rope, not fluttering, flying with the wind. Snowflakes are very big and fall on people. They look straight and tight.
Second, set off the snow scene with a brief description?
(1) Set off the snow by describing the environment?
(1) Looking back at the hut, the air collapsed and was shaken by the north wind.
The heavy snow saved Lin Chong's life. Those two thatched cottages have been flooded by snow.
(3) When exploring the bust, the fire in the brazier was extinguished by the snow.
The snow is getting bigger and bigger, passing through the straw house, kindling and stones: shaking the straw house →→→→→→→ overwhelming the straw house →→→ soaking the fire extinguishing species →→→→→ putting a big stone head on the door. The impression of strong wind and heavy snow is obvious.
(2) Set off the snow through the actions and feelings of the characters?
The difference between Lin Chong and the two men on the road is that they didn't buy wine to eat, but went outside for food early.
(2) As soon as I was tempered, I felt cold and thought, "But the old army said there was a market outside Erli Road. Why not sell some wine to eat? "
Besides, Lin Chong stepped on the snow, facing the north wind, and flew as if he were at the gate of the pasture.
The author never forgets the word "snow" when describing the actions and feelings of characters.
First, play up the tragic atmosphere. Lin Chong was finally furious, and the description of the snow before he rose to kill the enemy also played a role in rendering the tragic atmosphere.
Second, it is conducive to shaping the characters. Lin Chong, a middle-class man with a certain social status and a stable life, has a sense of justice and chivalrous spirit to help the weak and the poor. But it also determines that his nature is complacent and cowardly. His response to Gao Qiu's frame-up is "admitting to being a prisoner", which shows his character of compromise and obedience.
The description of "snow" in this paper sets up a human activity environment, which is conducive to showing Lin Chong's character of compromise and resignation, because he still has the fantasy of returning to Tokyo to reunite with his family. At the same time, it also reflects that Lin Chong's resistance was "forced to do it", which forced Lin Chong to the point where there was no way out.
Third, reasonably promote the development of the plot. Plot development and environmental description are often interdependent and mutually restrictive: environmental description should be based on plot, and plot development cannot be separated from environmental description.
These descriptions explain the whole process of heavy snow from brewing to development step by step, promote the development of the plot, gradually lead the story to a climax, and make the writing look natural.
Finally, when I wrote about the snowstorm, the pasture suddenly caught fire. When Lin Chong heard of the deadly trap of Lu Qian and others, the storm suddenly started again and finally killed Lu Qian. The development of the plot is ups and downs and fascinating. It can be seen that the development of the plot should be reasonable and inseparable from the "snow".
Extended data:
Lin's Snow Mountain Temple is ten of Four Great Classical Novels's Water Margin. It's about 800,000 imperial coach Lin Chong who was sent to guard the forage field after many twists and turns. As my residence collapsed due to heavy snow, I had to spend the night in a dilapidated mountain temple.
That's why I happened to hear Lu Qian, Fuan and Chapo talking outside and learned that I was framed and almost killed. Angry Lin Chong finally broke out, stabbing three people with a gun and taking out Lu Qian's heart by caesarean section. It can be said that it was this incident that made Lin Chong's only beautiful vision of officialdom go up in smoke and had to take refuge in Liangshan.
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