Appreciation: This poem expresses the author's yearning for his secluded friend in autumn night. The author of the first half is himself, that is, a pregnant person; The second half is about Qiu Dan who studied Taoism in Linping Mountain, that is, the person I was pregnant with. The whole poem does not attract readers with rich and colorful words, but calmly puts pen to paper, lightly touches pen and ink, is light and affectionate, short and profound, and its style is simple and elegant, leisurely and quiet, giving people endless artistic experience.
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Send twenty-two members to Qiu on autumn night.
When I walk on a cool autumn night, I think of you and sing my poems.
I heard the pine cone fall on the mountain, and you seemed to wake up.
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Wei's five-character quatrains have always been highly praised by poetic theorists. Hu Yinglin said in "Poetry": "Suzhou is the oldest of the five words in the Middle Tang Dynasty, and can follow Wang and Meng." Shen Deqian said in "Shi Shuo _ Jade": "The five-character quatrains, the nature of the secluded city, the sublimity of Taibai, and the ancient style of Suzhou are all in one place." The poem above is one of his masterpieces.
The artistic enjoyment it gives readers is, first of all, the beauty of this simple and carefree style. Shi Buhua once praised this poem in "Poems on Servants", saying that it is "quiet without reducing friction, but also hidden in the beauty of the five wonders". It does not impress readers with strong language, but writes calmly and lightly, while the language is shallow and affectionate, concise and long, which makes people feel lasting and endless.
As far as conception and writing are concerned, this poem still has something to learn. It's a pity poem. In the first half, the poet himself, that is, people who miss their friends; The second half is about Qiu Dan, who was missed by the poet and studied Taoism in Linping Mountain.
The first sentence "When I walk in the coolness of autumn night" points out that the season is autumn and the time is night, and the scenery of "autumn night" is only a contrast with the feeling of "cherishing the king".
The second sentence, "Think of you and sing my poem", inherits nature, ignores it and follows the previous sentence closely. "Travel" and "Huai Army" are in harmony: "cool weather" and "autumn night" are in harmony. These two sentences are both realistic, and they describe the scene that the author lingers and meditates on a cool autumn night because he is pregnant with someone. Next, the author is not lyrical, describes the scene and flies his poems into the distance.
In three or four sentences, imagine the situation of the person you miss here and now. And these three or four sentences are closely related to one or two sentences. The third sentence "pine nuts falling into the sky" refers to "autumn night" and "cool day", which infer the autumn color of Linping Mountain tonight from the cool autumn night in front of us.
The fourth sentence, "You seem to be awake", refers to "Huai Army" and "Traveling", because I am thinking about people in the distance, wandering, and I assume that the other party should be awake. Out of imagination, these two sentences not only come from the first two sentences, but also deepen the poetry of the first two sentences. From the perspective of the whole poem, the author uses the combination of realism and fiction to juxtapose the foreground of the eyes and the middle scene of the soul at the same time, to connect the person who is pregnant with him with the person who is pregnant with him, and then to express the deep affection of lovesickness in different places.
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