Couplets … It's a foggy night and it's raining. Where are you going on foot? Looking forward to the stars, looking forward to the light, taking you to see the sunset, what is horizontal approval?

Rain at night is a noun.

Hope is a verb.

Misty, intermittent (Xixi is a typo, Xixi is not used to describe rain) is an adjective indicating state.

Star is obviously a noun.

Part of speech mismatch.

"Where to walk?" "Take you to see the sunset" is even more wrong! ! !

These are not couplets. After a few words, what are you criticizing? ! ! !