Create background
At present, education consumption has become the most important part of family expenditure. As an important part of Chinese subject, the present situation of composition teaching is as follows: on the one hand, composition scores account for an increasing proportion in the college entrance examination, and some experts predict that the future Chinese examination will only test reading and writing; On the other hand, the school is obviously lagging behind in composition teaching, which can no longer meet the needs of composition examination. 80% of the students' writing level is low, and they are afraid of writing and are not interested. Composition learning has become a common problem for students and parents, and the demand for composition training has risen sharply.
However, the depth and breadth of the popularization of composition training are far from meeting the market demand. Basically, it operates on a small scale and with low technology. On-the-job or retired teachers' composition training is divorced from writing, and editors' training is divorced from teaching practice. At present, most of the so-called brand compositions being promoted are in the state of separation of writing and teaching.
Faced with this situation, Ms. Yang Jingfeng founded the miracle of off-campus composition training in China by virtue of her first-line practical experience in composition teaching, rich teaching theory and rich literary skills.
Golden Pen composition takes writing as the starting point, and all its teaching materials and teaching methods come from the first-line classroom, which successfully realizes the perfect combination of writing and teaching.
Training purpose
(1) Improve students' grades.
Writing ability is the concentrated expression of students' comprehensive thinking ability; Through training, the improvement of students' writing ability means the improvement of students' comprehensive thinking ability, which can not only improve their composition scores and Chinese scores, but also improve their scores in other subjects. Moreover, in the process of learning composition, parents and students are most concerned about composition scores. Therefore, in order to meet the basic needs of parents and students, in the process of designing teaching methods, tutorials and classroom links, the improvement of grades is put forward as an important and prominent goal. If every teacher can't improve students' grades in teaching, then he doesn't understand and master the golden pen composition teaching method.
(B) to cultivate students' perfect personality
At present, the contents of public education and private education are basically to cultivate students' knowledge and skills, but there is no education about students' personality development. Whether you have a perfect personality directly affects a person's development and achievements in society. As an important product of intellectual characteristic education, golden pen composition pays attention to cultivating students' perfect personality in the teaching process in accordance with the research and development principles of intellectual characteristic education products and the requirements of intellectual characteristic education purposes. Let our students get better first, and then become capable and comprehensive personalities necessary for development.
(3) Cultivate the thinking and consciousness of learning success.
Successful education has a history of several decades abroad, but its history in China is still very short. And more confined to the adult stage. Successful education is very important for a person's life growth, success and success. But after adulthood, all kinds of thinking, habits and consciousness are basically stereotyped, and it is difficult to try to change them. Therefore, successful education should start with students, so that students have a sense of success and a desire to pursue success from an early age, and cultivate their specific basic thinking and habits of success. In the content design and classroom control, the Golden Pen composition uses a lot of successful education ideas, so that students can consciously or unconsciously form a sense of success and have successful thinking and habits in the process of learning composition.
Golden pen composition training is not a simple composition training, only limited to the surface of improving students' composition performance, but takes composition as the carrier, which not only improves students' performance, but also cultivates students' perfect personality and successful thinking.
Development situation
Since the development and promotion of the Golden Pen Composition Project in 2004, the core teaching method has been rapidly improved and improved in just three years. According to the market demand and curriculum design, the teaching materials and teaching plans have been revised many times.
In order to further meet the needs of market development, the Golden Pen Composition R&D Center has developed a new curriculum system at different levels on the basis of the original comprehensive teaching materials since 2007. After a large number of first-line teaching verification in schools directly under Qingdao, it is now mature. The new curriculum system will be put into the market soon. The sprint series of senior high school entrance examination (Volume I and II) has three levels of gold pens, four levels of gold pens, five levels of gold pens, six levels of gold pens and nine levels of gold pens.
The golden pen composition follows the perfect teaching concept, has a solid theoretical foundation, and is committed to the in-depth study of composition teaching methods, which will surely create greater glories.
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The 600-word small product recommendation composition is for the landlord to read in the third class next Thursday morning. We held a wonderful and creative oral communication with the content of "small products, big recommendations".
-Inscription "Today's oral communication is presided over by us, first of all ..." Only Yao and Liu made opening speeches on the rostrum respectively.
The first contestant is Ren Rui, who brought us a cactus.
"This cactus is cultivated by myself, and it can be eaten, and there are many vitamins in it ..." As soon as the voice fell, the students began to twitter, but a moment later, there was a burst of thunderous applause, which may be the reason for the good start! Subsequently, Jiang Ruoyu and Song Heren introduced their small products in detail.
"Ren's electric fan is practical and complete. You can also introduce your small products!" I saw that I strode to the podium, as if full of confidence.
His small product is made by himself. It's just a pair of small glasses, which can be used to read at night. He modified them himself.
Finally, he didn't forget to turn on the light to show off to his classmates.
"All the luminous glasses are really good, but be careful not to read in bed! It's bad for your eyes.
Let's invite Ma Shuai's new classmates to show his small products! "As soon as he came up, he told us that he would introduce Shao to everyone in the form of a sketch, so he pulled Liang Enhui up.
"Hey, boss, how much did this pot cost you?" "Oh, two and a half dollars!" "So expensive?" As soon as the voice fell, we all burst out laughing, because in our life, two pots of May Day flowers are not expensive.
Haha, sketch sketch, it really lives up to its reputation! It suddenly occurred to me.
Later, after several pauses, we suddenly burst into laughter from the initial silence, completely uncontrollable ... "Ma Shuai's new classmate's sketch is wonderful. Let's ask Han Yi to come up and introduce the small products she brought! " "Oh, call me!" I was surprised, but I walked to the podium politely.
What I want to talk about today is "Taowa".
It was bought by my parents in Shangheyuan, Tomb-Sweeping Day a few years ago.
Although it is a toy, it is also very useful.
For example, we can play it when we are tired of work or study. It will help us change our minds.
Also, it can be placed on our desk, and seeing it every day will make us feel particularly comfortable.
Thank you "I just finished, the audience was thunderous applause, so I generously walked off the platform.
Later, many people showed their small products, such as Guo Yuyan's own penholder, the "Twin Towers" model of the world's tallest building, and Huang Hefei's own practical small badminton ... Finally, the two hosts ended their wonderful oral communication with rhetoric.
Through this oral communication, I have learned a lot of new things and broadened my horizons.
I also understand that science is also needed in life, and there may be many things that our generation has to accomplish.
Today, I want to sell you a product: a desk lamp. This desk lamp is very novel. It looks very beautiful from the outside. This is a tray with a lamp on it. In this way, I put on a thick cotton-padded jacket. There is also a small light under it, called "night light". It is beautiful when it is opened at night. It's blue with a little pet painted on it. In front of it, there are two buttons: a headlight and a small light. When you turn on the headlights, you can't help shouting, "Wow! How bright it is! And it doesn't sting your eyes! To tell the truth, this is an eye protection lamp, which will never bring you myopia. Turn on the small light, and you will still shout, "Wow! So beautiful, so cute! "Let me tell you, this is the light on at night, very bright! Do you know the benefits of this desk lamp this time? After introducing this lamp, do you know anything about its appearance and benefits? what do you think? If anyone wants to buy it, hurry up and snap it up. The quantity is limited! Goodbye.
Today, the weather is sunny.
I thought it was time, so I came out to bask in the sun.
After a while in the sun, I felt bored, so I was ready to go home and do my homework.
Just halfway through, I heard the sound of beating gongs and drums.
Curious people hurried out to have a look, but I had no choice but to have a look.
I saw a large group of people standing in front of the line, wearing something on their chests and holding a lot of paper in their hands.
There are people beating gongs and drums in the back.
Suddenly I saw "Jigong" in the back. He was jumping wildly with a broken fan and advertising paper. People laugh at it from time to time and find it interesting.
Behind Jigong is a group of dragon dancers.
They danced the dragon hard and shouted hard.
Followed by a car, there is an advertising paper in the carriage. I suspect that this may have been advertising from the beginning.
Hey hey.
! It's really that electric car companies buy products to promote their new products and attract people's attention.
Followed by a large group of young people, while sending out advertising papers, while walking.
Today, ten people are curious to promote a product, which is both dragon dancing and beating gongs and drums.
Here we go again ... I was just about to leave when I suddenly saw the "Jigong" in the crowd start talking into the microphone. He said, "Hi! Hello, everyone, I'm crazy monk Jigong. You must know me! I am crazy, but I am ready to help others.
Today, let me give you a hand. It is inconvenient for some people to go to work. I will recommend it to him. It is convenient and cheap to use the electric car of the gazelle.
"While speaking, he jumped up crazily again.
I smiled and thought, hey! Who thought of this method! What I saw today was really interesting.
Speaking of which, I can't help laughing again.
I think: when Jigong died, electric cars were not invented yet! hahahaha ...
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Introduce a product in 600 words. I will introduce several new types of glass, each of which has its own function.
First of all, I want to introduce a kind of glass called "ocean exploration glass".
This kind of glass allows you to see the scenery in the ocean at home.
There is a receiving device and a screen in the glass. You can receive the scene in the ocean through the receiving device and then play it on the screen.
This kind of glass can be used by people at home because it can let you see more kinds of fish than the aquarium.
There is also a kind of glass, which is not used for seeing things, but also for listening to music.
This kind of glass is called "music glass".
There is a miniature "player" in it, as well as all kinds of songs, and there is a very special device that can detect what kind of songs you like to listen to and then release music from the player.
When you can't sleep, it will play a relaxing lullaby to make you fall asleep quickly. When you are angry, it will play very lyrical music to calm people down and let your anger slowly disappear.
"Contact glass" is also good. It can be invisible and used for theft prevention.
This kind of glass can be used to make doors. It's hard, and ordinary attacks have no effect. Besides, glass is invisible. When the thief saw it, he thought there was no door, so he ran over and was hit. This glass has the function of shooting, and the thief's appearance is clearly photographed. When the owner comes home, he can contact the police, so that the thief is caught.
In modern cities, people can't breathe fresh air, but "air evolution glass" can help you breathe fresh air.
There is an air evolution device in the glass, which sucks in air, filters out all the dust inside and then releases it, so that you can breathe fresh air.
Nowadays, glass has more and more functions, and more magical glasses will go to the world in the future.
One afternoon, as soon as I got home from school, I shouted, "Help! Somebody please. Yes, yes, there are ghosts! " At that time, the home was very deserted, and my crying broke the lonely mirror. My feet trembled with fear.
Do you know why? Because there is a hat on the ground, and this hat can actually move! I picked up the stick I found in front of my house and touched the hat on the ground. Unexpectedly, it hid as soon as I touched it.
Boy! I plucked up my courage and provoked the hat on the ground: "Gee, white startled me, it turned out to be a turtle!" " "This guy is cute, with a green and heavy house on his back, two thin red patterns on his face, and small eyes staring at me as if to say," Hey, you monster, let me go! " "This little turtle is so cute, but no matter how cute you are, you piss me off. See how I torture you.
Do it. I mixed detergent with water, blew out many small bubbles with a thin straw and put them on his back. Very interesting.
I saw this guy struggling desperately in the "swimming pool", his limbs kept waving and there were some small bubbles in his mouth. He looked at me imploringly with innocent eyes, as if begging for mercy there, which made me very uncomfortable.
Forget it. I'm a gentleman. If I don't tell you the truth, I'll let you go.
See if you have courage in the future! In the future, this guy will live and work in my home. I have to wait on him every day. He is very picky about food. He likes eating meat, and he must clean his room regularly. Otherwise, he will protest to me and hide in the shell and not play with me! Sometimes I put it in my hat to scare my brothers and sisters! This "moving hat", I really became your servant.
Hey, but who made me like you? An article introduces a 600-word composition (3) The wonderful axle secret Everything in the world is wonderful, and it must be pondered repeatedly to understand it.
Science is like this, as long as you think hard, experiment and explore, you will understand.
The other day in science class, the science teacher talked about the fourth lesson "The Secret of Axle".
I read a science book. There is a faucet in the book. The book says, "Like a faucet, a machine with wheels and shafts fixed together is called a shaft.
"Yes, just turn on the tap switch.
It looks like a small wheel.
Look at the small iron bars below. Put them together and they will come out as soon as you twist the water.
Very convenient.
If the wheel is removed, I imagine it is very laborious to smooth the iron bar, then the wheel and shaft will be really labor-saving. If it is laborious, why should people invent it? Everything is to save labor and facilitate people's lives.
There is also a screwdriver in the book. It asks, "Is there anything in common between the screwdriver and the axle?" Honestly, I don't know.
After returning home, I found a screwdriver, studied it carefully and finally found it.
The shaft and the runner can rotate together with the shaft, thus opening the faucet and discharging water.
Screwdriver also works by rotating.
A screw is firmly embedded in the board. It is impossible to pull it out by human strength, make it rotate and take it out by hand.
With a screwdriver, put it on the dent of the screw and turn it in one direction all the time. After a while, the screws will come out slowly.
Therefore, the screwdriver and the wheel shaft have one thing in common, that is, they all rely on constant rotation to complete the task.
In fact, the axle brings other conveniences to our life.
Such as wheels and door handles.
People used to use fans, but now with electric fans, the blades start to turn and drive the shaft, thus generating wind and people will be cool.
I finally figured it out, so excited and happy.
I hope to explore and study more things that are beneficial to mankind in the future.
Today, the weather is sunny.
I thought it was time, so I came out to bask in the sun.
After a while in the sun, I felt bored, so I was ready to go home and do my homework.
Just halfway through, I heard the sound of beating gongs and drums.
Curious people hurried out to have a look, but I had no choice but to have a look.
I saw a large group of people standing in front of the line, wearing something on their chests and holding a lot of paper in their hands.
There are people beating gongs and drums in the back.
Suddenly I saw "Jigong" in the back. He was jumping wildly with a broken fan and advertising paper. People laugh at it from time to time and find it interesting.
Behind Jigong is a group of dragon dancers.
They danced the dragon hard and shouted hard.
Followed by a car, there is an advertising paper in the carriage. I suspect that this may have been advertising from the beginning.
Hey hey.
! It's really that electric car companies buy products to promote their new products and attract people's attention.
Followed by a large group of young people, while sending out advertising papers, while walking.
Today, ten people are curious to promote a product, which is both dragon dancing and beating gongs and drums.
Here we go again ... I was just about to leave when I suddenly saw the "Jigong" in the crowd start talking into the microphone. He said, "Hi! Hello, everyone, I'm crazy monk Jigong. You must know me! I am crazy, but I am ready to help others.
Today, let me give you a hand. It is inconvenient for some people to go to work. I will recommend it to him. It is convenient and cheap to use the electric car of the gazelle.
"While speaking, he jumped up crazily again.
I smiled and thought, hey! Who thought of this method! What I saw today was really interesting.
Speaking of which, I can't help laughing again.
I think: when Jigong died, electric cars were not invented yet! hahahaha ......
Today, my mother took me shopping in Yiwu Commodity City.
When I arrived in Yiwu Commodity City, my mother took me to purchase goods first.
She opened a new cosmetics store, and the goods were not enough, so she came to buy some goods and bought me a dress by the way.
Mom finally finished shopping and began to buy clothes for me.
We went to the place where we bought shoes first. With the coming of China New Year, many kinds of shoes are out of stock. I tried many pairs, all small, but do you have a big one? My mother said, "alas! These shoes are too small now. Let me take you to the place where adult shoes are sold. There may not be any shoes you can wear here.
"I said," all right.
"We continue to visit Yiwu Commodity City, and there is a place where goods are relatively complete. I tried on a pair, which fit me well, so my mother bought me that pair.
But the pants were too thick to wear, so my boss recommended a pair of pants to my mother. They were tight and could be worn next to me without being too cold. Hearing this, my mother continued to take me to choose clothes.
It took less time to buy pants, because there were fewer shops to buy these pants, and finally I found one. My mother asked me to try it on. It happened that I bought two pairs, one for each person.
I didn't like the trouble, so I left in my new clothes, or I had to change them again, so we put the original clothes in the bag.
Finally, my mother said, "I should buy you a pair of shorts to wear outside." It doesn't look good without it. "
"I said," You can wear this outside. Don't buy it. It's too much trouble.
"Mom said," well, stop that now. Let's go and have a look.
"I said," all right.
"Mom took me to see the pants.
Buying pants is the most troublesome thing. Because many of them are too small to lift, I tried many times and finally chose. As a result, my pockets are rotten, and the boss there has a particularly bad attitude. I also said that you should get it yourself. We don't have time here, so I'll give you a dollar off. My mother listened and said to me, "I don't want his." I won't sew if it's rotten, and my attitude is still so bad. "
"I said," all right.
"We went to another house, and we should pay for it. As a result, the wound could not be buckled. Although the size is just right, there is something wrong with the button, and even the people who buy clothes can't button it. No way, we have to go and see it again.
Finally found the right one. Just then, my mother received a phone call and my aunt came to our house. After we settled the bill, we hurried home. ...
Hello everyone! I am a small salesman.
Today, I'd like to introduce "Miffy" ballpoint pen to you.
Mifei brand ballpoint pen, novel in appearance, with peach blossoms that girls like; The cyan that boys like; There is also elegant purple, the refill is dark blue, the English word "Miffy" written on the pen is also painted with cute little snowflakes, and there is a rubber head of Miffy at the top. Mifei brand ballpoint pen is about 18 cm long, cylindrical, light to pick up, fast and beautiful to write, and very convenient to use. Just press Miffy's rubber head and the refill will be fine.
Miffy ballpoint pen is not only convenient, light and easy to write, but also durable.
I use this pen for two months every day, and it is still very clear. I can see how much blue ink is still in it.
Think about it, even if Miffy ballpoint pen has so many advantages, you must be moved, but your heart is not as good as your action. Let's buy some and try them! !
My family has a Swiss army knife with exquisite workmanship.
Let me introduce you.
Speaking of Switzerland, I think you must be very familiar with the watch industry and beautiful natural scenery.
The Swiss army knife, with a history of 100 years, is as famous as the Swiss watch in the world.
Saber Factory 1884 was built in the foothills of the Swiss Alps with magnificent scenery.
Swiss craftsmen created ordinary knives.
All sabers are made of top-grade special stainless steel.
From the appearance, it looks like a fruit knife.
But it hides ingenuity and combines some common tools.
This multifunctional knife was quickly loved by the world as soon as it came out, and it was purchased by the Swiss army as one of the necessary tools for soldiers and officers.
My saber is divided into four parts: front, back, left and right.
There is a key ring in front.
Behind it are toothpicks and tweezers.
There are bottle openers, nail file and scissors on the left.
There are three layers of knives with different thicknesses on the right.
At present, a knife has at most 52 uses.
I'll tell two more short stories about Swiss army knives.
1976, an Indian doctor cut a child's throat with a knife on the plane and took out the candy stuck in the trachea, which made the child out of danger.
He used a Swiss army knife instead of a scalpel.
1982, a small German plane crashed in France, and the only survivor broke open the hatch with a Swiss army knife he carried with him and escaped from the burning plane.
Afterwards, he specially wrote to Ruitu Saber Factory to thank him for saving his life ... The Swiss Saber is still a good gift, and * * * allows it to use the Swiss flag as a symbol in appearance.
It was chosen as a White House gift by many American presidents, and the handle was engraved with the president's signature for the guests.
Security personnel at Zurich airport in Switzerland found that almost one in every two foreigners who left Switzerland carried a different number of Swiss army knives.
Swiss army knife is widely used and easy to carry.
If you want to take everything with you, it will take up a large area and be inconvenient.
Swiss army knife seems to be a universal weapon.
So every time I go out to play, it is one of the necessary items I have to bring.
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