Every pupil should have a good habit of listening carefully in class.
(2) At the "June 1st" party, our class performed entertainment programs and chorus.
(3) We should constantly improve our learning methods and improve our learning efficiency.
(4) Grandpa Zhou loves our children and we love Grandpa Zhou.
This book is very interesting to me.
(6) Huang Jiguang not only died heroically, but he will live in our hearts forever.
If everyone pays attention to hygiene, our health and diseases will be guaranteed.
The author of Stars is Ba Jin.
(9) We should actively respond to "everyone hands-on, greening the motherland".
(10) The beautiful prairie stretches for thousands of miles and is green everywhere.
We adopted and discussed his suggestion at a meeting.
(12) I like reading Chinese newspapers for primary school students as well as teenagers' literature and art.
(13) The get-together began, and the whole venue was full of lively atmosphere.
The soldiers braved the heavy rain and muddy roads to make rapid progress.
In the afternoon (15), all the teachers, students and young pioneers visited the exhibition.
(16) I like both science pictorial and youth literature and art.
I reckon he won't attend the meeting today.
(18) Under the careful guidance of the art teacher, my sketch has made rapid progress.
(19) We must seriously overcome and be good at finding learning problems.
In class, I always pay attention to the lectures, so I got good grades.
(2 1) There are tomatoes, watermelons, cucumbers, edamames, red beans, lentils and other vegetables in the garden.
(22) After education, I have made clear my learning purpose and attitude.
The wall clock on the wall walked a circle, and an hour passed.
We should cherish public property.
(25) Grassland makes the sunset colorful.
I like reading primary school students' math newspaper and teenagers' newspaper.
(27) Miss Wang was awarded the honorary title of "Model Head Teacher".
We swaggered along the mountain road.
(29) We should constantly improve our shortcomings, give full play to our advantages and achieve greater results.
Through hard work, Wang Xiaoming's typo has been greatly improved.
(3 1) The Yellow River, the Yangtze River, the Great Wall of Wan Li and the ancient canal are all great projects in ancient China.
(32) This composition has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
Practice of changing sick sentences
1. Papermaking is one of the four great inventions in ancient China.
The author of the text Lin Hai is Mr. Lao She.
He was wearing a gray coat and a police mobile unit.
As soon as I entered the kindergarten, I saw lovely faces and beautiful songs.
The cleaning began, and men, women and children came to participate. Men do heavy work, and young and old do light work.
6. The content of this article is beautiful.
7. Lushan Mountain is a beautiful scenery in summer.
8. Xiao Wang writes well with a brush.
9. She waited anxiously for instructions from the bus.
10. The train runs along the railway on the Gobi Desert.
1 1. At the party, the students sang many beautiful songs and dances.
12. The labor started and both men and women took part. Men and young people do heavy work, while women and old people do light work.
13. The autumn fields are charming, with golden rice, snow-white cotton and green wheat seedlings, which makes people fondle it!
14. Our class and Li Gang's kindness in helping others was praised by the school.
15. The sunset glow dyed the mountains, fields, villages and the earth red.
16. All the teachers and students took part in the tree planting activities.
Reading more good books can enrich and improve our knowledge.
18. My mother has developed a good habit of working hard.
19. I don't think he can do this problem.
20. Xiaoxing 'anling in summer is the best season of the year.
2 1. This semester, our school set off an upsurge of "hand in hand".
22. Our school held a basketball match and an intelligence contest in the classroom and the stadium respectively.
At the "Celebrating New Year's Day" party, our class performed entertainment programs and dances.
The neighbor's little brother is not only young, but also very sensible.
25. On the night of National Day, the streets and alleys are decorated with colorful lights, which is very warm.
26. After listening to the report, I got an education.
27. The early rice is ripe, and the field looks like a green carpet.
28. I can't help laughing.
29. I often see Xiaoming sometimes exercise in the morning.
30. Summer in Xiaoxing 'anling is naive and beautiful. 3 1. Young pioneers play the revolutionary tradition.
32. Because Lao She loves to grow flowers, and she has many flowers.
Mother bought fruits, peaches, apples and chocolates.
34. He called him out to play.
Every student should have a good habit of listening carefully in class.
36. People who don't do what they say is a very bad style.
37. Dark clouds fell from the sky with heavy rain.
38. Dark green wheat seedlings are spreading their young leaves.
In recent years, the living standards of our people have improved again.
40. Through legal education, the general awareness of the masses has been improved.
4 1. His hands are almost frozen.
42. Huang Jiguang not only died heroically, but he will live in our hearts forever.
We should have the spirit of not being afraid of difficulties in our study.
44. The author of Stars is Ba Jin.
45. The two new societies are in sharp contrast!
46. The range of these composition topics is difficult.
47. Ming Jiang studied hard this semester and finally got good grades.
48. The old monitor brought a bowl of steaming fish soup.
49. I smell intoxicating flowers and beautiful butterflies by the flower bed.
50. Mount Tai is the five famous mountains in China.
We adopted and discussed his suggestion at the meeting.
52. This book is colorful.
My mother bought me three books.
54. The beautiful prairie stretches for 1000 miles and is green everywhere.
After the teacher's patient education, I realized my mistake.
56. Ding Xiaolan studies very hard and the teacher often praises her.
57. Li Xiaoming was honorably awarded the title of Excellent Young Pioneers.
58. I must be a popular counselor for children.
59. At the group meeting, everyone criticized each other.
Yvonne Wang corrected his learning attitude and purpose.
6 1. Through hard work, my learning attitude has improved.
62. Through hard work, my study purpose has been improved.
63. I conclude that he may be Zheng Ping's brother.
64. Bright red flags were everywhere at the meeting place.
65. Xiaohua walked to school with a happy mood and relaxed steps.
66. After learning, everyone's general awareness has improved.
67. The scenery here is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
68. In the past two years, the quality of TV sets has improved and the price has decreased.
69. Xiaogang especially likes playing football and volleyball.
70. It rained all day last night.
7 1. With reverence, I visited the grave.
72. We should seriously correct and find out the mistakes in our homework.
73. The contents and illustrations of this book are very beautiful.
74. The Great Wall in Wan Li, the Zhao Zhouqiao and the Yellow River are great projects in ancient China.
We should inherit and carry forward the revolutionary cause of the older generation.
76. The teacher praised the good people in the class and Li's good behavior of finding money.
77. Dalin always does good for the class.
As soon as I entered the park, I saw beautiful flowers and attractive fragrance.
79. Tall buildings have mushroomed in the motherland.
80. I love reading childhood, and I choose children's stories and extracurricular books.
8 1. Lin Ping has been studying hard and achieved good results in this exam.
82. Many pear, apple and fruit trees are planted on the hillside.
83. Who put a gun there and scared away almost all the birds.
84. "Six? The weather at the party is very warm.
85. At this time, everyone's eyes were focused on the blackboard and looked at the teacher's calculus.
My sister told me all her thoughts without reservation.
87. When spring comes, seeds grow leaves and take root.
As long as the rain stops, we will go to the park.
89. The long-awaited story book is finally coming, and the students are extremely happy.
90. The climbers strutted along the steep and winding mountain road.
9 1. Xiaoming studied hard and achieved remarkable results.
Teachers love each and every one of our students.
93. What a sharp contrast the old and new societies have formed!
94. Excellent achievements have been made in this district primary school sports meeting.
95. Teachers are very patient with students.
After class, the campus suddenly boiled.
He trudged through the cold snow.
98 fiery red maple leaves are shaking in the spring breeze.
He wrote a very detailed report.
100 grandma keeps a lot of poultry: chickens, ducks, cows, etc.
We should cultivate our interest and level in writing.
102 teacher Chen was awarded the title of "model class teacher".
Although the problem of 103 is not difficult, he did it quickly.
104 He was wearing a police tactical unit and blue pants.
At the 105 party, the students sang many beautiful songs and dances.
106 I learned a lot of new ideas.
107 Hero Lai Ning cherishes state property.
108 leaders are too decisive and often lose the trust of the masses.
109 I don't think he can do this problem.
Lei Feng's spirit of helping others is an example worth learning.
The Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are all places of interest in China.
We should constantly correct our learning methods and improve our learning efficiency.
He loves studying, but he loves working.
I watch radio and TV every night.
China is the most populous country in the world.
1 16 He brought pens, rulers, erasers, reference books and other stationery.
1 17 The bright moonlight filled the earth, and the stars in the sky blinked naughtily.
(1) We should implement the call to promote Putonghua with practical actions.
A wonderful program was performed at the entertainment party.
The problem is finally solved.
He has finished all his math homework, but he hasn't worked out the last problem yet.
On Sunday, I put on clean clothes and take off dirty clothes.
Since you have great skills, you can't be proud.
Once all eyes were focused on the rostrum.
Classification review exercises for the sixth grade of primary school
First, rewrite the sentence as required.
(1) Change this sentence into a rhetorical question.
1, we will not forget the kindness of the party.
2. Human beings need people who are brave in practice.
This story moved me to tears
This lovely little girl is my good friend.
This friendship is higher than the mountain and deeper than the sea, and we will never forget it.
The slope is too steep for the train to climb.
(2) Change the sentence into a declarative sentence.
1. Comrade Li Dazhao is full of confidence in the revolutionary cause. How can he be afraid of reactionary warlords?
2. him! Why does an old man order these things?
3. How to make 100,000 arrows in three days?
4. You found it yourself. How can I help you?
Isn't that a happy song played by the waves?
6. How can I forget the teacher's inculcation?
7. Madame Curie only needs to sign the patent book, and all the difficulties will be solved.
(3) expand the sentence.
: Exodus Brand-new machines make parts day and night.
1, the good news reached the school.
The train passes through the valley.
Spring breeze swept the whole earth.
People are waving flowers.
5. Dad is a worker.
6. I make a study plan.
7. Wicker blows water.
(4) Abbreviated sentences.
1, Zhan Tianyou is an outstanding patriotic engineer in China.
The loud bell echoed in the air for a long time.
Dear Premier Zhou showed great concern for the young soldiers.
Zhou Yu, the governor of Wu, was very jealous of Zhuge Liang because he was very talented.
Silver snow shines on the endless grassland.
6. In summer, old people like to fish in the shade of the river.
7. The gift given to us by the old man Time is precious.
(5) Change direct speech into indirect speech.
1, said to Lin Xiangru, "You should take Baoyu to see Qin."
2. Liu Ping told the teacher: "This squadron will be presided over by me."
3. Song Wu said, "This is very strange! Why don't you sell me wine? "
4. Lin Xiangru said, "I am not afraid of the king of Qin. Will I be afraid of even the general? "
She said deeply, "I was always shy when I was a child."
(6) Change this sentence to "Ba".
1, the sentry was quickly thrown aside by Song Wu.
Every day, the students clean the classroom.
Xiaohua is holding a math textbook.
Lin Xiangru defeated the king of Qin.
5. Lin Xiangru's words and deeds focusing on national interests moved Lian Po.
(7) The sentence should be "Bei".
1, Lin Xiangru trounced the king of Qin.
2. Lin Xiangru's words and deeds focusing on national interests moved Lian Po.
Zhuge Liang borrowed 100,000 arrows.
Song Wu finally killed the fierce blade.
He soon ate up all the food removed from the wrecked ship.
5. The touching story of Liu Hulan deeply touched us.
(8) Comprehensive exercises.
1, thick turpentine glows golden in the sun. (abbreviation)
2. Students answer questions. (Extended sentence)
Lin Xiangru said to Wang Zhao, "I am willing to take He Shibi to Qin." (indirect speech)
The horse's hind hoof is stepping on a flying swallow. (Replace with "Bei" sentence)
Grandpa said to Xiaoying, "I tell you, this is the most famous flower in China." (indirect speech)
6. The Qing government at that time was corrupt and incompetent. As soon as the "Beijing-Zhangjiakou" railway construction plan was put forward, imperialism came out to obstruct and threaten it. (Replace with "Causality")
7.the sun rises. (Extended sentence)
I don't think the king of Qin is sincere, so he has to send Cui back to Zhao. (with rhetorical questions)
Isn't that a happy song played by the waves? (with rhetorical questions)
10, these three grams of radium reflect the great personality of a scientist. (changed to exclamatory sentence, rhetorical question, double negative)
Second, the use of dashes.
(1) explanation; (2) indicates the turning point of meaning; ③ indicates the prolongation of sound.
(1) This is the last day of the year-New Year's Eve. ( )
(2) There is a smell of roasted moths in the street, because it is New Year's Eve-she can't forget this. ( )
That's a pair of big slippers-so big that her mother always wears them. ( )
(4) On the eve of the 50th anniversary of the founding of the United Nations, we got a precious birthday present-the giant bronze ware "Century Baoding" presented by the people of China with 654.38+0.2 billion yuan. ( )
(5) Although there are not many children-only two. ( )
Double negation should be an affirmative sentence.
As a young pioneer, you must be civilized.
You know the process of this activity very well.
We should take part in group activities.
This book is very valuable. You must read it.
Replace the following affirmative sentences with double negatives.
On Sunday, we must watch the volleyball match.
Everyone in the school only issues one ticket, which is embarrassing.
The soldiers of the Red Fourth Regiment must reach Luding Bridge before the enemy.
This matter should not be false.
Turn the following sentences into sentences indicated by exclamation marks.
I invited you!
What a nice painting!
That French girl's wish is really beautiful and pure!
Simon died a terrible death!
The power of a seed is so great!
Sick sentence: it's raining, Xiaohua doesn't have an umbrella, but when she goes to school.
Correct: It rained, but Xiaohua didn't bring an umbrella when she went to school.
Miss Chun vividly described the earth.
Teacher Chun vividly described the earth.
Miss Chun vividly described the earth.
Ba sentence: Teacher Chun painted the earth vividly.
Spring is like a newborn baby. Everything is new, it is growing.
It seems that summer is like a naughty child, healthy and growing.
1. () One day, my good friend Xiao Ming came to visit my house.
He observed my doll carefully.
How well he paints. He paints birds, peacocks and swans.
() I picked up a pen and drew one by one.
Answer 1243
There are no answers to the following questions, but you can definitely hand them in!
(3)
The wolf said, "OK, I'll let you go. But you have to tell me, why are you squirrels so happy and always jumping on trees, and I am always unhappy? "
() A little squirrel jumped up and down on the branch, and his heart beat to a sleeping wolf. The wolf jumped up and tried to eat the squirrel.
The wolf let him go. The squirrel climbed up the tree and said to the wolf, "You are always unhappy because you are fierce." We are happy because we are kind and do not do bad things. "
The pine tree begged, "Let me go!"
The squirrel said, "I won't tell you unless you let me go back to the tree, or I'm really afraid of you and dare not tell you."
(4)
() Mom quickly took Xiaojun's hand and said, "Wash your hands first, then eat."
He put down his schoolbag and went to take his job.
() Xiaojun listened to his mother, washed his hands first, and then ate.
() Mom said happily, "Yes, this is a good boy who talks about hygiene."
() In the afternoon, Xiaojun came home and saw the food on the table.
(5)
It flew to the river and saw a lamb eating grass.
When the lamb saw the eagle flying down, it was not good, so it turned around and ran.
An eagle is hungry and comes out looking for food.
() It flies down and wants to eat lamb.
() The lamb shouted for help.
When Mother Sheep heard this, she ran to drive the eagle away.
The eagle tried to catch the lamb.
( 1)
In the middle of the lake, the water is as calm as a mirror and as green as jasper.
On the shore of the lake, weeping willows are in rows, cicadas are constantly chirping, and a breeze is blowing from the lake. It's so cool!
() The scenery of Qinglong Lake is really beautiful!
On Sunday, my father took me to play in Qinglong Lake.
() In the swimming area by the lake, a dozen children are swimming and having a good time.
Looking up, I vaguely saw a green hill with a big tower at the foot. (2)
One day, Lu Ban saw some children playing with lotus leaves in the scorching sun and was inspired.
() Luban is bent on making something for people to shelter from rain and sun.
A long time ago, there were no umbrellas in the world.
() So, according to the appearance of lotus leaves, he tied bamboo strips into a shelf and covered them with sheepskin.
() Later, Lu Ban finally figured out a good way to make the umbrella like this.
Luban's wife looked at the umbrella and said happily, "If only I could put it away."
By the way, I'll give you one more thing:
The word order of 1 is incorrect
(1) noun modifier
The correct order of multiple attributes and headwords is generally as follows: ① Attribute or time and place; (2) reference or quantitative phrases; ③ Verbs or verb phrases; 4 adjectives or adjective phrases 5 nouns or noun phrases.
In addition, the attribute with "de" is placed before the attribute without "de".
For example, an excellent female basketball coach of a national team has more than 20 years of teaching experience.
Correct order: excellent (noun) female basketball coaches with more than 20 years' teaching experience in the national team 1 name (number).
The following are several examples of incorrect word order of attributes:
Many nearby women, old people and children came to see them. (The number of "many" should be close to the central phrase)
(2) In the construction of new China, give play to their infinite hidden power. (The extended "infinity" should be close to the prefix)
All kinds of things used in the past are displayed. (The descriptive word "various" should be close to the center word. )
The following is an example of an attributive misplaced adverbial:
In the dead of night, I can't sleep when I think about a series of things that happened today. ("a series" should be modified with "things")
(2) Whether this kind of pipe should be replaced has aroused extensive discussion among leaders and the masses. ("wide? Quot The word "Yi" should be revised, and the word "Di" should be changed to "De").
The following is an example of the inversion of the position of the attribute and the header:
China's oil production is basically supplied to China. ("produced oil" should be "produced oil")
(2) Verb modifiers
The order of adverbials is very complicated. It should be noted that:
(1) the time before the location; ② Preposition structure first, then modal verbs and adjectives; (3) Preposition structure of the object 1
Close to the central language; (4) Don't make a mistake about the decoration object.
Please look at the following example:
A bloody battle took place in this magical land in the last century. ("last century" should be put in "this"
In a magical land (before)
We are no longer a country that is arbitrarily bullied by foreign powers. ("Conquered power" should be put before "arbitrary power")
Scientists are eager to study orchids before the specimens of the strangest tropical species disappear completely. ? Quot before "placing" orchids)
④ There are 15 states that prohibit blacks from enjoying equal status with whites in entertainment places. ("with white people" should be changed to "equality")
Everyone had an extensive exchange of views on the issue of wages. ("extensive" should be modified by "exchange")
Half an hour after the exam, someone handed in the papers one after another. ("One by one" should be decorated with "you")
(3) the position of related words
Generally speaking, when the subjects of two clauses are the same, the related words are behind the subjects; When the subject is different, the related word comes before the subject.
The following sentences are examples of inappropriate positions:
If he can't be realistic, his career will be damaged. ("He" should be moved after "If")
(2) If there is something wrong with the conception of a work, even if the writing is good, it is unacceptable. ("Even if" should be moved before "Text". According to the original sentence, it becomes just words, not works. )
2 Improper collocation
Improper collocation is a common language disease, which is the focus of college entrance examination. Almost every year, there are such wrong Chinese questions in the college entrance examination.
(1) Improper collocation of subject and predicate
For example: ① In the past, cotton production in China was not self-sufficient. It is "cotton" rather than "production" that cannot be self-sufficient. (2) The liberation of China people has brought about fundamental changes in ethnic relations. ("China People's Liberation" did not "change", but "ethnic relations". The correct expression should be a concurrent sentence, and the word "in" should be changed to "make".
I think this reply and the investigation and handling of these problems are irresponsible. You should change "yes" to "display". )
(2) Improper collocation of verbs and objects
For example: ① Commemorate the arrival of March 8th. (Only "March 8th" can be commemorated, not "arrival". )
Before liberation, my father and brother didn't earn enough money to support their families. Only people can "feed" but not "live". )
However, there are still several shortcomings that need our efforts. What we can "work hard" is not "shortcomings", but "correction". )
(3) Improper collocation of modifiers and headwords
At this meeting, there was an extensive exchange of views on the issue of wages. (not a wide range of opinions, but a wide range of exchanges. )
* This collocation often overlaps with improper word order.
(4) One side and two sides are not properly matched.
For example: ① Doing a good job in production and disaster relief depends on whether the style of cadres is in-depth. ("well done" is one-sided, "well done" is two-sided. In addition, whether the style of work is in-depth is meaningless. What matters is whether the cadres are in-depth with the masses. There are two ways to modify this sentence: change the first sentence to double-sided: "Whether the disaster relief work is done well depends on whether the cadres go deep into the masses." Or change the second sentence to one-sided, but the sentence structure should be adjusted to "cadres' going deep into the masses is the decisive condition for disaster relief work." " )
Artists used to be looked down upon by people, but now they are eagerly favored by people. Between this supercilious look and love, they appreciate the warmth of the world. "White eyes" and "doting" refer to two opposite sides, while the following "tenderness" only applies to one side. )
(5) Improper collocation of negation and affirmation.
I don't think it's necessary to describe it, and no one can help but imagine it.
"No one can't imagine" means "no one can imagine", which means "anyone can imagine".
We don't completely deny that this poem doesn't reveal hope, but hope is very slim.
"Incomplete denial" equals "partial recognition", which is basically recognition. So this sentence "We admit that this poem does not reveal hope" is exactly the opposite of the author's original intention. There are two ways to reform: "We also admit that this poem also reveals some hopes …" or "We don't deny that this poem also reveals some hopes …"
(3) in addition to the tickets issued by members' families, they must also have family badges, and neither of them can enter.
"You can't enter without any of them" literally means "You can enter with any of them". Inconsistent with the original intention, it should be said that "you can't get in without both?"
3. Incomplete or redundant components
Incomplete synthesis
(1) Missing theme
He was praised by his teachers and classmates for his good grades. What is the subject of "get"? Because of such good grades, he got ...)
10 14, with the idea of learning from the aviation department, our blackboard newspaper was also founded. The subject of "hug" is obviously "we", but the subject of the last sentence is "blackboard newspaper", not "we", so the last sentence should be changed to "we also run blackboard newspaper". )
(2) lack of predicates
For example, we can see how weak the attitude of being responsible for the concern of the working class is. ("Tao" can't be the main component of the predicate here, only "weak" can be mentioned, but "attitude" can't be weak. How weak is the care and responsibility of "? ")
(2) Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign was launched, and a technical management system was established and strengthened, as well as a series of work in this campaign. What verb is the object of "a series of jobs"? Maybe it is "construction strengthening"? It is meaningless to "establish and strengthen the work", and there is a predicate "complete" before "establish". )
(4) Lack of objects
Although I am very busy at work every day, I still pay great attention to studying with my classmates or reading books by myself. ("insist" on what? The word "time" cannot be saved. )
We should try our best to mechanize and collectivize our agriculture. ("Go" needs a noun as the object, "mechanization" and "collectivization" are verbs, and the sentence should be "Go on the road of ...")
unnecessary
(1) stack
For example: ① We should consider the needs of our political and cultural environment and develop our publishing industry. ? Quot The word "environment" should be deleted. )
(2) Now the fishermen have elected their own administrative team leader, who is responsible for mastering the management of fishermen's life and production. ("proficient" should be deleted. )
(2) Repetition
For example, this year, women's work has laid a considerable foundation and gained some work experience. (The second and third "work" should be deleted. )
In fact, this is a worrying idea. ("worry" means thinking, and "thinking" should be deleted. )
(3) dispensable
For example, I walked about ten miles unconsciously. )
It has been nine years since my father died. (The word "from now on" should be deleted. )
(5) The word "de" should be deleted.
Unexpectedly, in March this year, the price fell, and then gradually stabilized. With the addition of "de", the sentence becomes a phrase and its meaning changes. Not price stability, but "falling" stability. )
(2) Due to the turmoil of the past dynasties and the humid climate, almost all the paintings at that time were destroyed. (You can also add ""between "past dynasties" and "turmoil" without adding it, because the sentence is neat and there is no need to add ""between "climate" and "humidity". )