The diary of nature observation is an important teaching content stipulated in the newly compiled Nature Teaching Outline. Guiding students to observe records for a long time and acquire knowledge in all aspects of nature not only stimulates students' interest and thirst for knowledge, but also cultivates students' excellent qualities of seeking truth from facts, being earnest and meticulous, pursuing new knowledge, being brave in creating and overcoming difficulties. At the same time, it also solves the problem of "cooking without rice" in composition.
Learn to write a natural observation diary should master the following points:
First, determine the content and pay attention to observation. The nature observation diary has a wide range of contents, including animals and plants, environmental meteorology, astronomy and geography and all phenomena existing in nature. When observing, we must pay attention to the change of seasons, the passage of time and the habit of growth. Hands-on experiments find out the phenomenon and essence of things from the front, side, comparison and repeated observation. Finally, determine what you are familiar with and understand to write.
Second, master the format and be true and specific. 1 topic. Write it on the first line. I used to keep a diary without writing a topic, which was not conducive to grasping the center of the article. The topic is the eyes of the article. The proposed topic should be novel and the viewpoint should be clear. For continuous observation, you can add a subtitle before each date. (2) Write clearly the school and grade of the province, city and county (district) under the title, and leave the writer's name blank. If you write it in your diary, you can delete it. It is very important if you sort out your diary and send it to the newspaper editor. (3) The third line indicates the time of the diary: that is, the day of * * *, the week of * *, and it is better to explain the weather a little for future reference. 4 text. If you need to write more when searching for text, you can write it in several small paragraphs like writing other articles. The length of the space depends on what you remember. Words are long, but words are short. The writing of the text is flexible and diverse, and there are two kinds. One is tables and coordinate records, such as astronomical meteorology, growth and change, classification and comparison, statistical data, etc. These are all intuitive; The second is in the form of narration, description, discussion, explanation and lyricism, such as new phenomena and discoveries of animals and plants. Observing nature itself is to carry out scientific inquiry and practical activities. The recorded contents should not be fictitious, but should be recorded truthfully according to the observed phenomena. The conclusion is scientific and useful for future reference. ⑤ If there is a tutor, the name of the tutor should be indicated in brackets at the end of the article.
Third, form a habit and persevere. Never stop fishing for three days and drying the net for two days. Only by keeping it in mind can we achieve amazing results. Because keeping a diary itself is a process of learning and improving, and it is also a kind of self-persistence cultivation.
2. How to write an observation diary?
1. What is an observation diary?
The so-called observation diary is to use your eyes.
Carefully observe various sensory organs such as ears, nose and tongue, experience various phenomena in nature and society, and record the observation results. The contents of the observation diary are varied, which can write about the beauty of the four seasons and the characteristics of climate change; Can write wind, rain, thunder, electricity and other natural phenomena; You can write about the growth process of plants and the living habits of animals; You can also write touching stories around you and so on
Second, what are the benefits of writing an observation diary?
Writing an observation diary has many advantages, which can exercise your observation ability and accumulate writing materials for future compositions.
3. What are the requirements for writing an observation diary?
Writing an observation diary should be done: first of all, the content should be true. Be sure to write what you have seen and heard, and you can't imagine it out of thin air, let alone copy others'. Secondly, the narrative should be specific. Try to write down all kinds of subtle scenes observed, such as the sound, color and shape of objects; A character's movements, language, manners, etc. Third, the center should be prominent. Write around a center, not everything, just like keeping a running account, regardless of primary and secondary, regardless of details. Fourth, imagination should be reasonable. Imagination should be based on careful observation and combined with your own feelings, so as to write freshness. Fifth, be timely. I usually keep a diary before going to bed at night. Before you start writing, think about the most meaningful things in your day, which bring you the deepest feelings, and then write them down. If you don't remember what you saw, heard and felt in time, it will be easy to forget after a long time. Diary Diary is to keep a diary every day, if you can develop a good habit of keeping a diary from an early age. You will benefit for life.
It is no stranger for students to observe how to keep a diary. They know that they should remember what happened that day, and they can neither remember nor make it up. They must reflect the authenticity of the diary. But the diaries we usually write are random, generally writing what we see and want, lacking purpose. Taking this opportunity, let's talk about how to write a good observation diary. Write down time write down time write down time write down time write down time write down time, place, place, place. . . . Observing a diary is different from taking notes, so we should put an end to randomness. It is necessary to explain the time and place of observation clearly. If people have the opportunity to visit, they really have people, things and things, avoid making them up out of thin air, and create situations to make up observation diaries. 2222,,, clear observation object clear observation object clear observation object. . . . In order to make the observation diary as wonderful as every composition we write, we should also use our brains when determining what to write. It is not advisable to think that all objects and materials can be written into the observation diary without comparison, just like garbage collectors. We must choose something with certain personality characteristics as the observation object. For example, a short "little adult" sells newspapers in the street. He is not as tall as a newsstand, but his business is thriving. Why? I took this question and observed it purposefully. We should not only observe his daily newspaper sales, but also pay special attention to his bumpy experience. Take the newspaper back from the newspaper office and sell it in the street under the scorching sun and wind and rain. Every link should be carefully observed in order to write a good observation diary. Observe orderly, observe orderly, observe orderly, observe orderly, observe orderly. . . . Although the selected objects are representative, if you don't pay attention to the observation order, you will put the cart before the horse and the observation diary will be changed. Because the observation objects are different, the observation order is also different. For example, to observe the growth process of a flower, we should observe it in stages according to the time sequence, and record the observation results in different stages in detail. In addition, in order to make the content of observation clear and specific, it is necessary to grasp the key content and write the details in detail, and write a little or brush away the rest. Keeping an observation diary is a chore. Always persist and persevere, and you will get better results. After a period of time, your observation ability will be enhanced and your insight will be more acute. Writing an observation diary not only satisfies the eyes, but also improves the comprehensive ability of writing. Isn't that killing two birds with one stone? From now on, try the fun of writing an observation diary!
1。 Determine the observation object. Is it a thing, a scene or a process?
2。 Determine the observation order. Spatial order can be used to observe a thing or a scene from top to bottom, from front to back, and from outside to inside. A process can be observed in chronological (chronological) and logical order.
3。 Write down the characteristics of things or processes.
4。 Generally speaking, in plain language, in order to facilitate expression, rhetorical devices such as comparison and metaphor can be used.
More general. Find an example:
Example 1 "Observation Diary"
Night falls on the earth. I stood in front of the wooden fence and looked up at the sky. I saw the semicircle of the moon, one bright and one dark. There is a blue halo around the moon. Looking away from the bright moon, I found countless stars in the sky far away from the bright moon. They are like sparkling diamonds, some emit dazzling Hui Jin, and some emit slight white light. Some of them are scattered in all directions, and some are densely gathered together. How beautiful and spectacular the sky is decorated by them! Moonlight covered the earth with a layer of silver armor, and my figure standing silently looked tall. Behind me, a long green vine coiled around the fence, pulling many morning glory. Under the wooden fence, an unknown flower opens freely, red, yellow, pink and white, reflecting the moonlight, which is more delicate and lovely. The autumn wind is blowing, and the flowers are overflowing and bursting into the nose. Everything is in the silent night. However, I seem to hear an elegant music ... is it the morning glory on the green vine praising this charming moonlit night?
This is a diary written by a junior one student to observe the scenery. Let's express our views and put forward our own views. Let's see from what angles this classmate observed the scenery of the moonlit night, what scenery he saw, what feelings he wrote, which words he used accurately and which sentences he wrote vividly. Besides pointing out the advantages, we can also talk about the disadvantages.
Reference answer:
Question 1.
Observation angle: look up, look around and look down.
Question 2.
Look up: I see the moonlight.
Look around: I see green vines, fences and morning glory.
Look down: I see many unknown small flowers of various colors.
Question 3.
Visually, the scenery is beautiful ("beautiful", "spectacular" and "exquisite and lovely")
From the perspective of smell, the fragrance of flowers ("flowers overflowing" and "bursts of fragrance") is written.
I wrote down my imagination from the perspective of hearing ("I seem to hear an elegant playing music")
Question 4.
The following words are used accurately
Decoration, paving, tray, traction, exquisite and lovely, full of flowers and fragrance.
Question 5.
The following sentences are very vivid.
(1) they are like sparkling diamonds, some with dazzling Hui Jin, some with white light.
(figurative sentence, vivid image)
(2) Is the morning glory on the green vine praising this charming moonlit night?
4. Write an observation diary of not less than five lines. How to write is to write down a certain aspect of daily life through purposeful and meticulous observation. You can write fragmentary fragments without paying attention to the structure of the article; It can also be written more completely, similar to a narrative.
Keeping an observation diary often can improve observation ability, form observation habits, accumulate writing materials and improve language expression ability. This kind of diary is most suitable for us primary school students to keep.
To write a good observation diary, we must pay attention to the following points:
(1) Observe clearly.
Have various purposes, or accumulate writing materials; Or used in scientific experiments; Or to find out some kind of "mystery" ... Only when the purpose is clear, can observation have direction and focus. Is to observe the same object, because the purpose is different, the method and angle are different, and the result is different.
(2) Observation should be comprehensive, meticulous and comprehensive.
It is to understand the whole process of development, the components of things and the relationship between things. To observe clearly and carefully means to observe thoroughly and grasp the characteristics, laws and essence of proverbs.
(3) Keep observing.
It is difficult to observe things at once, and it needs to be observed repeatedly. This requires students to have perseverance.
(4) Observe the language of the diary accurately.
Observing diaries is highly scientific. Therefore, accurate language is required, and specious words such as "probably, almost" cannot be used.
5. How to write an observation diary 1? Write the time and place clearly. Observing a diary is different from taking notes, so we should put an end to randomness. It is necessary to explain the time and place of observation clearly. If people have the opportunity to visit, they really have people, things and things, avoid making them up out of thin air, and create situations to make up observation diaries.
Second, clear the object of observation. In order to make the observation diary as wonderful as every composition we write, we should also use our brains when determining what to write. It is not advisable to think that all objects and materials can be written into the observation diary without comparison, just like garbage collectors. We must choose something with certain personality characteristics as the observation object. For example, a short "little adult" sells newspapers in the street. He is not as tall as a newsstand, but his business is thriving. Why? I took this question and observed it purposefully. We should not only observe his daily newspaper sales, but also pay special attention to his bumpy experience. Take the newspaper back from the newspaper office and sell it in the street under the scorching sun and wind and rain. Every link should be carefully observed in order to write a good observation diary.
Third, observation is meticulous and orderly. Although the selected objects are representative, if you don't pay attention to the observation order, you will put the cart before the horse and the observation diary will be changed. Because the observation objects are different, the observation order is also different. For example, to observe the growth process of a flower, we should observe it in stages according to the time sequence, and record the observation results in different stages in detail. In addition, in order to make the content of observation clear and specific, it is necessary to grasp the key content and write the details in detail, and write a little or brush away the rest.
Keeping an observation diary is a chore. Tell children to persevere and persevere to get better results. After a period of time, your observation ability will be enhanced and your insight will be more acute. Writing an observation diary not only satisfies the eyes, but also improves the comprehensive ability of writing. Isn't that killing two birds with one stone? As long as we observe carefully, we will find that many things around us have interesting phenomena. For example, fish sleep with their eyes open; As soon as we touched the mimosa, it closed its leaves and seemed very shy. In this exercise, let's write down our observations in the form of a diary. Diary belongs to a kind of practical writing and has a certain format: from now on, try to write an observation diary quickly!
On the first line, write down the year, month, day and week *
Weather conditions. Usually written in the middle of the first line.
The second line, start writing the text.
Diary generally does not write a title, but the first time you write a diary, you can add a title, so you can write around a center.
When writing an observation diary, we should not only pay attention to the format of the diary, but also pay attention to the following points: 1. Choose what interests you most and observe it in a certain order. For example, when observing the appearance of a thing, you can observe the whole first and then the part; You can observe the development of a thing in chronological order. Observe carefully and accurately. 2. Complete the observation process according to the observation order. I want to write what I am most interested in, and I want to write specifically. 3. When writing, you should highlight the discovery in observation and write clearly what inspiration or feeling it brings to you. 4. After writing, read the exercises to your classmates and see who has made new discoveries through observation.
6. Pupils write a composition, write an observation diary, and how to write it. First, pay attention to the format of this composition. This composition requires keeping a diary. In addition to the title, you should also write "year, month, day, week, weather" in the middle of the first line of the text. Sometimes "year" can be ignored.
Second, what you want to describe must be something you are interested in and familiar with. When you are genuinely interested in something, you will have a comprehensive understanding and in-depth observation, so that the articles written will be vivid and true.
Third, according to the different situations of things, adopt reasonable observation methods. If you observe a still life, or other objects with no obvious changes, you can observe and describe it in the order from the whole to the part. If the observed things change obviously, you can observe the description in chronological order.
Fourth, we should mobilize all kinds of senses, observe things from the aspects of shape, color and taste, choose the aspects we are interested in to describe them in detail and highlight the key points.
Fifth, what did you feel or gain from the observation? You can share it with everyone at the end of the article.
Thank you! !
7. How to write an observation diary of about 200 words?
First, write down the time and place. Observing a diary is different from taking notes, so we should put an end to randomness. It is necessary to explain the time and place of observation clearly. If people have the opportunity to visit, they really have people, things and things, avoid making them up out of thin air, and create situations to make up observation diaries.
Second, clear the object of observation. In order to make the observation diary as wonderful as every composition we write, we should also use our brains when determining what to write. It is not advisable to think that all objects and materials can be written into the observation diary without comparison, just like garbage collectors. We must choose something with certain personality characteristics as the observation object. For example, a short "little adult" sells newspapers in the street. He is not as tall as a newsstand, but his business is thriving. Why? I took this question and observed it purposefully. We should not only observe his daily newspaper sales, but also pay special attention to his bumpy experience. Take the newspaper back from the newspaper office and sell it in the street under the scorching sun and wind and rain. Every link should be carefully observed in order to write a good observation diary.
Third, observation is meticulous and orderly. Although the selected objects are representative, if you don't pay attention to the observation order, you will put the cart before the horse and the observation diary will be changed. Because the observation objects are different, the observation order is also different. For example, to observe the growth process of a flower, we should observe it in stages according to the time sequence, and record the observation results in different stages in detail. In addition, in order to make the content of observation clear and specific, it is necessary to grasp the key content and write the details in detail, and write a little or brush away the rest.
Keeping an observation diary is a chore. Always persist and persevere, and you will get better results. After a period of time, your observation ability will be enhanced and your insight will be more acute. Writing an observation diary not only satisfies the eyes, but also improves the comprehensive ability of writing. Isn't that killing two birds with one stone? From now on, try the fun of writing an observation diary!
Fish also eat grains.
(150024) Writing Research Center of Harbin No.3 Power Generation Primary School: Pei Shaogan Instructor: Fan Yi.
Tuesday, June 5, 2004, weather: sunny.
It's the fifth day of the National Day holiday. It's really boring to stay at home all the time. Dad went to other places to do business, and mom went to grandma's house again. Before I left, she told me not to go out to play alone. I have no choice but to hide at home and watch the fish play by myself. ①
Fish has no food, and dad didn't buy it. I thought to myself, it's strange that this fish will not die in a few days! So, I searched everywhere, but I still couldn't find anything that fish could satisfy their hunger. "Alas, the poor fish can only wait for death." I said to myself. It suddenly occurred to me that eating rice can solve the hunger problem. Can fish eat rice grains to solve hunger? ②
I pinched some rice grains from the rice cooker in the kitchen and put them in the fish tank, just waiting for a miracle. At this time, my mother came back and said sharply, "You want to kill the fish!" "I didn't look at my mother, just staring at the fish. Thought: Fish, you'd better come and eat quickly, or you'll die. Not only will I be sad, but even my father will not leave me alone. I waited for a while, only to see the fish swimming around with its big mouth open, and suddenly a grain of rice was swallowed in its mouth, which was quite delicious! In a short time, the rice I put in the fish tank has been eaten up. ③
I jumped up happily and shouted, "Fish eat whole grains, and fish eat whole grains." My mother said, "Fish.
Eating a good invention can be your patent, so apply for a patent right quickly! "After listening to my mother's words, whether it is irony or praise, my heart has always been flattered. I also say to you: "Fish eat grains, fish eat grains" (4)
I will feed the fish with rice grains from time to time. Fish grows fast, and fish food is economical! Isn't this killing two birds with one stone? ⑤
① It laid the foundation for writing this observation diary. Zero distance contact, you can see clearly, and the observation effect is obvious.
I'm afraid the fish are short of food. Suddenly, starting from the fact that eating by yourself can alleviate hunger, I came up with the idea of replacing fish food with rice grains.
Despite her mother's condemnation, I was fascinated by watching fish eat, expecting a miracle, and the result satisfied the little author.
My mother was also proud of the success of my bold attempt and jokingly said, "Apply for a patent quickly." At the same time, it reproduces my excitement and excitement.
⑤ Discovering truth from observation and solving practical problems are the results of young authors' willingness to use their brains and bold attempts. It's really something.
[Comment] Writing your own findings is really a pleasure, but there are too many discoveries! However, the little author of this article can find new discoveries from the reality of life, which is very smooth. The reason is that he can dig "discovery" on the basis of real life and write vividly and interestingly, without any feeling of "hanging". Therefore, we should cultivate the good habit of diligent observation and explore more new discoveries through practice. (Comment: Fan Yi)
8. The third-grade composition explains how to write an observation diary 1 The third-grade composition how to write an observation diary (elite edition) 2011kloc-0/October 26th. An observation diary is to observe people, animals, plants, scenery and activities around you and record them in the form of a diary.
If you can persist, you can not only accumulate life materials, but also improve your writing ability. How to write an observation diary? This may be the most concerned issue for students.
Today, in these two classes, we will focus on learning how to keep an observation diary: Students: Do you know any way to record time? Yes, taking pictures. In fact, besides taking photos, there is a better, more convenient and more vivid way for us to keep an observation diary. There are always classmates who say, teacher, our daily lives are similar, not that we don't want to write, but that we have nothing to write.
In fact, students can write a lot, but pay little attention to observation. What can I write? For example, if you learn a skill, watch a kitten catch a mouse.
Watch the growth of small bean sprouts. On the way to school, observe whether there are any new changes in the aunt who set up the fruit stand. The teacher had an interesting lesson. What tricks did the naughty eggs in the class play today? On my way to school, I saw that all the old uncles who worked outside went to the construction site. In order to make a living, they were bent under the weight. Compared with the old people who are dancing swords and punching in the park, they feel different fate. In fact, the fruits of our life can be written into our composition. Ask a classmate to read Banana aloud. This article: "Banana" is a bunch of bananas, thick and full, each of which is five inches long, bent like a crescent moon and like a boat.
Hold it in your hand, it's heavy, with three or two weights. What a big banana! There is a little blue skin in yellow, which is very smooth. Peel off the yellow banana skin and the milky yellow pulp is exposed. A soft bite of My Sweetie's, sweet and rich, really makes people want to eat more and more. I have heard many students say that he is most afraid of writing articles, and every time he writes a composition, he feels bad. Students, don't worry in such a situation. We should be observant hosts. You will form a good habit of writing, you will fall in love with him, and your composition level will advance by leaps and bounds.
So, students, let's learn the method of observation. First, from different angles, from near to far, from far to near. When describing the lake, a classmate observed it at close range for the first time: "On the surface of the microwave, there are green leaves floating in a jasper dish.
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Then climb to the top of the mountain and look down. "The lake is like a beautiful girl's face, with a pair of bright eyes embedded among the green mountains and trees." Only by observing the same thing from different angles can we highlight the characteristics of things, so that the scenery written is not only comprehensive, but also three-dimensional In addition, the description angle can also be from inside to outside, or from outside to inside, or you can describe the general appearance first. In the description of individual parts, please ask a classmate to read our example, pigeons in the square. In what order do you think this excellent observation diary is written? Pigeons in the square on September 20th, sunny, Sunday.
Today is Sunday, I got up early in the morning, because today I'm going to see pigeons in the contemporary mall square with my classmates. When I came to the contemporary shopping mall square, I saw beautiful pigeons at a glance, white, flowered and gray, so cute.
As soon as they saw us, these pigeons were like good friends and were not afraid at all. They fly to people's shoulders for a while, and then fall on people's arms. How fun it is! Look! A little white dove cooed up to me, as if to show me friendliness. Its eyes are red and black, like two black gems, and its white and flawless feathers shine in the sun. I quickly scattered the corn kernels I brought from home on the ground to feed it. A large group of pigeons saw it and all scrambled to eat, and no one would let anyone.
In a short time, all the corn kernels were eaten. Suddenly, I don't know who it is. I slapped my palm hard and all the pigeons flew into the sky. What a spectacular scene! How time flies! It was noon in a blink of an eye, and my classmates and I reluctantly left the square.
This is a very good exercise. The first sentence of the article explains the time, place and things, and then describes a group of lovely and colorful pigeons, describing the colorful and dynamic beauty of pigeons. Then he showed us a lovely little white dove, and finally wrote the spectacular scene of the pigeon taking off. So, class, can you sum up the narrative order of this article? Second, feel things with multiple senses. Students, do you know what senses our human body has? See with your eyes, smell with your nose, hear with your ears, touch with your hands, and eat with your mouth, so you should feel with your senses when observing. Of course, the most used senses are eyes and ears. Let one student read our second example, a busy vegetable market, and let other students watch, listen and think. What is this observation diary used to observe? Not far from my home, there is
Every morning, just before dawn, I saw carts and bearers gathered here from all directions, spreading food stalls and shouting. Suddenly, the silent morning was awakened and boiled.
Although it is a cold winter, there is a scene of spring, summer prosperity and autumn harvest here. Green celery, green spinach, cucumber blooming at the top, and green garlic seedlings are really cute.
The people who buy food are surrounded by three floors outside. The vegetable seller is so busy that he never forgets to shout from time to time to attract customers. It's really lively! The little author is good at observing, especially making full use of the senses of the eyes, and seeing accurately and carefully. What does celery look like when it is introduced into the eyes? What about spinach? What about cucumbers? What color are the garlic sprouts? It is really cute. Here, the little author's eyes are like cameras.