● Dynamic and static combination method is to combine the appearance characteristics of the characters when they are static with the action characteristics when they are moving, so as to reflect the personality characteristics of the characters.
● The characteristics of the dynamic and static combination method When describing a portrait of a character, it is necessary to write out the figure, clothes and appearance of the character when it is static, as well as the expression, posture and temperament of the character when it is dynamic. When using the method of combining static and dynamic to describe characters, we should pay attention to describing the movements and dynamics of characters' personality characteristics around their characteristics, so as to achieve the unity of static characteristics and dynamic characteristics.
When describing the character's dynamics, we should find out the action that best reflects the character's personality characteristics on the basis of usual observation. To describe the character's static state, we can choose the place that best reflects the character's personality characteristics from the aspects of the figure, body shape, clothing and appearance. 2. How to describe the movements in writing skills
Describing the characteristic movements of the characters to show their character, quality, identity, status, situation and state is called action description.
Action description is one of the important methods to depict characters. Every action of a character is restricted by his thought and personality. Therefore, a detailed description of a character's reaction in a certain situation, mainly his action reaction, is bound to show his inner activities, attitude towards life and ideological quality.
Successful action description can explain the identity and status of the characters, reflect the process of their psychological activities, show their personality characteristics, and sometimes promote the development of the plot. Lao She said: "The most difficult thing to describe a character is to make it stand up.
We all know how to use the characteristics of occupation, class and nationality to help form a unique personality. But these things do not necessarily make the characters active. On the contrary, sometimes the characters are more rigid because of detailed introduction.
We should remember that to describe a person, we must know everything about him, but don't write them all together in a face-to-face way; We must show him by action at any time. Every movement clearly and powerfully shows him a little, and he must be more and more lively and realistic.
... In this way, the character's appeal can be profound and broad. " That is to say, only by successfully describing the movements of the characters can readers truly feel that the author's works are vivid living people, the spiritual world of the characters can be fully displayed, and the image can really stand up.
Action description also requires vividness, concreteness and detail. It is necessary to completely describe the cause and effect of each action, and show the process of its occurrence, development and even end, so that readers can get the impression that they are as close as they are.
It is necessary to fully show the dynamics of the characters, so that the characters can show their unique personality and inner thoughts in a series of actions, and then the image will be fuller, more complete and more three-dimensional. Action description covers a wide range.
such as actions in daily life, actions in productive labor, actions in recreation and sports, and actions in military activities. However, no matter what kind of action is described, its purpose is to shape the characters and express the theme of the work.
Therefore, action description should not be casual, casual and descriptive for description's sake. We should try our best to avoid the confusion and action outside the character's personality; It is also necessary to prevent similar movements, excessive rhetoric and failure to show the personality characteristics of the characters.
Action descriptions that impress readers are often good at choosing specific scenes of characters' actions, and depicting unique characters' actions on the background with appropriate shades, so as to create typical characters in typical environments. However, it is often better to describe the actions of characters in the whirlpool of sharp conflicts and struggles.
Action description focuses on accurately and vividly expressing the dynamics of the characters, while portraits, expressions and other descriptions mainly depict the static of the characters. If we can use a variety of descriptive techniques flexibly and freely, so as to contrast the static with the dynamic, and show the dynamic with the static, the characters can truly achieve the situation of "more and more lively and more realistic".
Appreciate the wonderful fragments of action description. When Grandet, the nouveau riche bourgeois hoover, was dying, when "the priest put the gilded cross to his lips …", he made a terrible gesture to grasp it in his hand. "This" catch "has sent the nouveau riche to desperation, and also fully reflected the greedy nature of the miser until his death.
Yan Jiansheng's "stretching" before his death in The Scholars finally made him another typical miser in the gallery of world literary masterpieces. As for the poverty-stricken Kong Yiji's pride when he "discharged" nine pence from the nine-foot counter of Xianheng Hotel.
When the aquatic sister-in-law in Lotus Lake learns that Shuishui is going to the army tomorrow, her fingers can't help trembling-Wei Mei cuts her fingers, which is also the trembling of her inner thoughts, which shows the subtle mentality that Shuishui sister-in-law is unprepared and reluctant to leave her husband. The most striking thing about Lu Xun's Ah Q in The True Story of Ah Q is to draw a circle in court. "Ah Q fell down and tried his best to draw a circle all his life.
He is afraid of being laughed at and determined to draw a circle, but this hateful pen is not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but it shrugged outward and painted like a melon seed. " Ah Q ended his life in a muddle in this "painting circle" ... Action description: The description of the character's personality and mental outlook is displayed by expressing the character's own actions in the contradictory struggle through language and words.
why do people describe their actions? This is because what people do is that they want to make trouble with the frame t? In literary works, character action description is the main means to shape characters. In order to mold Wu Song's character, Shi Naian arranged a "Jingyanggang Wusong Beating Tigers", which was all about how Wu Song "beat" and described the true colors of Wu Song's heroes and martial arts skills from the action.
It is written in the book that he adopts the strategy of defending first and then attacking, which also shows his strategy and wit. It is through the vivid and detailed description of the whole process of Wu Song's killing tigers that the author shows his various personality characteristics.
Therefore, Mao Dun said, "The gender of a character must be expressed through actions." He also said: "Since the actions of the characters (the plot of the works) are the main segments to express the character, whether the character is typical or not depends on whether these actions are typical.
when the author orders the characters to act, he should try his best to eliminate the plots that are vivid and interesting, but can't show the typical character? There are two principles in action description: first, the character should be revealed from his own actions; Second, the actions of the characters should be chosen to show the characters' character. Therefore, the purpose of describing characters' actions should be very clear; Third, we should pay attention to the vividness and typicality of characters' actions.
vividness means that the author should write not only what the character is doing, but also how he does it. The so-called typicality means that the author wants to write why the characters do this and not do that.
In writing, the above-mentioned positive description methods are not described by three methods: physical description, psychological description and action description. " Man is the sum total of social relations ".
when describing characters, we should integrate these methods and use them flexibly, so. 3. Writing essentials of action description
It is called action description to describe a character's characteristic actions to show his character, quality, identity, status, situation and state. Action description is one of the important methods to depict characters. Every action of a character is restricted by his thought and personality. Therefore, it is called action description to describe in detail the reaction of a character in a certain situation, mainly action
action description, writing, and essentials
describing the characteristic actions of the character to show the character, quality, identity, status, situation and state. Action description is one of the important methods to depict characters. Every action of a character is restricted by his thought and personality. Therefore, describe the reaction of a character in a certain situation in detail ── mainly the action. 4. Use the action description method
The action of walking. 1. One night at the end of September, 1949, there was a tall China man who quickly set foot on a French-bound ship.
When he walked through the fog of the British Little Gorge and walked onto the deck against the sea breeze, he could see that his steps were steady and vigorous. The span of his every step is always .85 meters-this is the habit he has developed through years of geological work and long-term field visits. Every step he takes at ordinary times has actually become a ruler for measuring the earth and calculating the distance between rocks.
2. At the crossroads, there is an old woman, slightly hunched and chubby, struggling to walk on the open road with an umbrella. The wind came at me with heavy rain, and she bowed forward hard, grasped the umbrella, stepped back half a step, and staggered forward.
3. A group of Dai girls came with little spinning wheels on their shoulders and little lanterns in their hands, and their tight-fitting skirts were swaying in the wind. Their figure is so slim, their steps are so light and their manners are generous, as if a group of beautiful fairies descended from the sky.
4. "Rinrin" is off duty. My brother immediately turned off the machine tool and strode to the water beside his head. In an instant, those "black hands" covered with oil turned white.
He came to the carport in three steps and pushed out the "flying pigeon". As soon as his left foot stepped on the pedal of his bicycle, his right thigh crossed the seat cushion. Before he could sit still, * * * slammed up the car and the "flying pigeon" rushed out of the factory door and roared off. The action of running 1. The young man runs well and has sprinted from the start to the way to run at a constant speed.
He rushes with his head held high like a pony: his stride is symmetrical, his stride frequency is compact, his pedaling is powerful, and his waist is relaxed-the whole movement is graceful and elastic. 2. Shi Xuan's steps are even, his arms swing back and forth, his feet move faster and faster, and his body leans forward as if he were going to fall down, struggling to run forward quickly.
running to the finish line, she lifted her head and straightened her chest, and finally won the first place. 3. In the first winter training of Lang Ping's volleyball career, the coaches began to give Lang Ping a "small stove".
Long-distance running-Lang Ping runs round and round around the 4-meter track ... My head is swollen, my chest hurts, and my legs can't be lifted. Will you stop? No! The brain clearly gives instructions, and the steps continue to move forward ... Sweat has wet the hair into strands, and the sweat flows from the forehead to the mouth, which is bitter and astringent. How I want to lie on the runway at once and spread my limbs to relax! Suddenly, a strange smile climbed up her mouth-she suddenly remembered that when she was a child, she always looked forward to tasting the taste of being unable to jump again, and now she really tasted it, which was bitter and astringent.
4. As soon as the gunfire rang, the two girls rushed forward like arrows. Their movements are coordinated and powerful, and they fly briskly on the ice, just like two swallows flying close to the ground, and you chase after me to outdo each other.
Finally, with the enthusiastic cheers of the coaches and the audience, they almost simultaneously crossed the finish line like a whirlwind. Hand movements 1. I just opened the textbook and suddenly saw a picture under the glass plate.
"Deer, my favorite sika deer, draw it." I thought to myself, open the painting, pick up the brush, divide three times five by two and tick off a deer.
However, because I didn't observe it carefully, I drew the deer's head as a kid's head. How many are not beautiful! Erase the redraw, but it's drawn to the right again.
I had to draw another duck swimming in the river on the left side of the paper, and twist the deer's head to let it look at the duck. I've finished painting, and it's really good.
in grade 2 and grade 5, I joined a calligraphy interest group. Under the guidance of my tutor, I picked up a brush dipped in black juice for the first time. According to the tutor's instructions: stick the index finger and middle finger outside the pen holder, and stick the nameless finger and little finger inside the pen holder.
I wrote carefully one by one. One point, one horizontal, one vertical, one si.
But it's not like calligraphy. It's obviously a three-year-old child's scribbling. A little, it is a thick ink mass; A horizontal, winding like a small snake; A vertical, but as thick as an elephant's legs and feet in art; A slap is even more outrageous, like a bald broom that has long been discarded.
I looked at my "masterpiece" and laughed. These strokes are uneven, and the strokes are not symmetrical, not to mention the shelf structure.
But the tutor said, "It's well written! It seems that you have a promising future. If you practice hard, you will be successful in the future. " 3. I saw a male classmate coming to the stage, quietly spreading out a roll of white paper, lifting a brush full of thick ink, meditating a little, and painting while flying like a phoenix.
With the continuous bleeding of the brush, a lifelike steed appeared on the drawing paper. It holds its head high and courageously, showing an irresistible force.
4. Does the annoying "smelly elder sister" want to ruin my experiment when there is no one around? I gave it a heavy flick with my finger. Who knows that it didn't bounce off, but it angered this "smelly elder sister", and it immediately gave off a bad smell, which made me run back to the house with my nose covered.
5. The room is quiet, only the TV is ringing. Dad suddenly grabbed the corner of the table with a wave of his hand.
with a bang, it hit the table, and bowls, plates and chopsticks all jumped up. The glass on the corner of the table fell to the ground and broke. 6. Hold the small hazelnut in one hand and the heavy pliers in the other, and look straight at the hazelnut.
The pliers fell slowly, but they often hit one side. In a short time, my hand was hit several times. A look of pain appeared on her face.
7. xu teacher teaches us Chinese. She holds the chalk in her dexterous hands every day, and writes it carefully and stroke by stroke on the blackboard. We can't help imitating her handwriting in our notebooks.
8. After Haitao found the sparrow's nest, he put the flashlight in his waist, spat in his hand and climbed up in a pants. Climbing to the front of the sparrow's nest, he lowered his head and said to us, "Hey, watch carefully and get ready to catch the sparrow!" " Say that finish, just stand on another branch and straighten up.
unexpectedly, the sparrow's nest was hit by his head, which frightened the sparrows. There was a squirming sound in the nest, and then several sparrows rushed out desperately. Haitao was in a hurry and reached out and grabbed one.
He shone a flashlight into the nest, and there was only one left, probably because he couldn't squeeze it out, chirping. Haitao reached out and caught another one. He packed it in a plastic bag and threw it down, just in front of Xiao Pang. Xiao Pang happily picked it up and took the sparrow from. 5. several key points and skills of writing
according to the object of description, character description can be divided into appearance description (portrait, clothes, manner), language description, action description, psychological description and detail description. To write people, you can directly write hair and draw eyes to make them look good.