How do you say to send an email to the teacher?

The statement of sending an email to the teacher is as follows:

Fan Wenyi:

Dear Teacher xx:

Hello! Thank you for checking this email in your busy schedule. My name is xx, and I am a senior majoring in xx in xx Department of xx University. I applied for xx major in xx University, and want to transfer to your university for postgraduate study. My initial test scores are xx, English xx, politics xx, specialized course XX, specialized course XX. Let me introduce you to my basic situation.

During my undergraduate course, I passed CET-4 and CET-6 at one time, with the scores of XX and XX, respectively. I passed Computer Level II C Language Examination, and won scholarships and "XXXX" titles/awards for three consecutive years. During my undergraduate study, I gradually became interested in XX (teacher major), and the wonderful XX fascinated me and made me very eager for further study.

The research on XX (my tutor's research field) has always been a hot topic in science, and your research direction is even more unique. XX (professional field) is respected because it benefits mankind. And your research direction reflects this. This makes me hope to be one of your students and realize my media dream.

I know I still have many shortcomings to become your graduate student. But I believe that diligence can make up for it. If I am lucky enough to be your graduate student, I will study harder with full enthusiasm and serious attitude. Thank you again for checking this email in your busy schedule and look forward to your reply.

Hereby, pay tribute!

Student: XXX.

X month, x day, 2023.

Fan Wener:

Dear Teacher XX:

Hello!

I'm sorry to bother you. Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to read this letter of mine.

I am XX, majoring in XX from XX University. I took the national postgraduate examination in 2020 and applied for XX University. My initial test score is XX, and my total score is XX.

Through the understanding from the network and the seniors, I am very interested in your XX major, especially your research field is XX, which is also a field I am very yearning for and interested in.

Moreover, you are quite accomplished in this field. You have published many representative papers in domestic and foreign journals, won many patents and awards, and made outstanding contributions to the industry, so students very much hope to follow you. If I am lucky enough to be transferred to your school for further study, I will definitely redouble my efforts and never live up to your expectations.

During my undergraduate study, I have been working hard and have always been enthusiastic about the new communication major. He won the first-class scholarship with excellent academic performance in our college every year, and also won the national inspirational scholarship and the national scholarship. And actively participated in the internship activities of XXX TV station and XXXX newspaper, and published more than XXX manuscripts.

Outside the major, I have a wide range of hobbies, such as XXXXX. The major is XXXXX. Also actively participate in various social practice activities, once joined the volunteer association and helped XXXXX.

Students sincerely ask the teacher to let me follow you for further study and grow into a perfect person with both ability and political integrity under your guidance. Thank you again for taking the time to read my recommendation letter. I look forward to your reply. Enclosed is your resume.

Finally, I wish the teacher good health and all the best.

Hereby, pay tribute!

Student: XXX.

X month, x day, 2023.