1. write a coherent action
describing a person's actions needs to be decomposed, that is to say, a person's actions are composed of a series of actions. Break a big action into several small moves, grasp the most characteristic movements of the characters and describe them one by one, then the whole article can write the actions of the characters concretely.
Please read the following composition fragment:
Stir-fry
Mom washed the cabbage piece by piece, piled it up piece by piece, held the dish with her left hand, picked up a knife in her right hand, cut it one by one, cut the cabbage into small squares, and put the remaining leaves aside.
Start cooking. Mother sat the pot on the fire first, and then poured the oil into the pot when it was hot. After a while, lampblack rose from the pot and made a "Zi Zi" sound. Mother first threw the chopped green onion into the pot, and when the chopped green onion turned yellow, it made a fragrance, then poured the vegetables into the pot, grabbed the spatula and kept turning it. When the dish slowly turns from white to yellow, mother pours in soy sauce and vinegar, sprinkles salt, then turns it with a shovel for a few times, sprinkles sugar and monosodium glutamate, quickly takes the pot down, stirs it for a few times, and then goes out.
sweet and sour cabbage and My Sweetie fried by my mother are sour and delicious, and they taste unique. This is mom's specialty!
how did mom fire sweet and sour cabbage? The author decomposes mother's cooking movements, uses words to express coherent movements, and then grasps the most representative movements of mother's cooking and describes them in detail. For example, first, wash and cut vegetables, start cooking in a pan, then put the vegetables in the pan, then pour in the seasoning, and then turn them with a shovel. In this fragment composition, because of the use of words indicating the sequence and coherence of actions, the whole process of mom's cooking is clearly written, and the skillful appearance of mom's cooking is clearly displayed to the readers, which left a deep impression on us.
Second, use words accurately
The language of our motherland is very rich, for example, the words expressing actions are: take, lift, carry, push, etc. What words are used? It depends on the specific environment of the article. Therefore, when describing characters' actions, we should use words accurately, select verbs carefully, and strive to write the characters' actions accurately, concretely and vividly, so as to write the characters' actions and images realistically. 2. How to describe the movements in writing skills
● The combination of static and dynamic methods is to combine the appearance characteristics of the characters when they are static with the action characteristics when they are acting, so as to reflect the personality characteristics of the characters.
● The characteristics of the dynamic and static combination method When describing a portrait of a character, it is necessary to write out the figure, clothes and appearance of the character when it is static, as well as the expression, posture and temperament of the character when it is dynamic. When using the method of combining static and dynamic to describe characters, we should pay attention to describing the movements and dynamics of characters' personality characteristics around their characteristics, so as to achieve the unity of static characteristics and dynamic characteristics.
When describing the character's dynamics, we should find out the action that best reflects the character's personality characteristics on the basis of usual observation. To describe the character's static state, we can choose the place that best reflects the character's personality characteristics from the aspects of the figure, body shape, clothing and appearance. 3. composition of action description of primary school students
during the holiday, I played in an open space of my grandmother's house.
suddenly, a girl barged in. I looked at her carefully: her skin was dark, and I knew at a glance that she often worked in the fields; Eyes are quite big but narrowed; Hair is messy, as if it had not been tidied for a long time; Wearing a red flower dress, the clothes are dirty; There are also several holes in the shoes on my feet.
I thought to myself: This man is so rustic. When he was still wearing flowery clothes, he must have never seen any big scenes. He is a real countryman. He came over and stared at me, saying, "Hello, my name is Xiaohua, and I want to be your friend, ok?" After listening to her name, I think she is more rustic.
but I don't know why, but I still want to make friends with her. He nodded and agreed.
She became my holiday friend. Xiaohua is a lively and naive girl. There are always many new things in his mind that I don't know.
She told me that I was her first friend, because other children thought she was poor and ignored her. Perhaps because of this incident, I deepened my friendship with Xiaohua, and we became inseparable friends.
one day, I went out to play with Xiaohua, and when I was ready to go home, I felt very thirsty. Xiaohua pointed to a fruit tree three or four meters high and said, "Let's pick the fruit and eat it."
I listened and found a bamboo pole, ready to knock the fruit down. Xiaohua stopped me: "This will break the fruit if it falls."
I put down the bamboo pole, simply put my hands around the tree, put my feet on it, and climbed with my hands and feet, but I couldn't climb any higher than a foot, and I was so anxious that I was sweating. Accidentally, I didn't hold my hands tightly, so I fell to the ground heavily, which made me cry.
Xiaohua looked at my mess and smiled. I saw Xiaohua grasping the tree stem, stepping on the stump, leaning forward and kicking hard, and repeating these actions all the time.
all of a sudden, she climbed the tree with ease. Looking at her lithe movements, I blushed.
She sat on the tree stem and picked many fruits for me to eat. We ate and went home.
The holiday is over. I should go back. I should say goodbye to Xiaohua. When I left, Xiao Hua Xi 'ou made me sad about a leaf.
We never met again, but I still remember her innocence and liveliness. 4. writing essentials of action description
It is called action description to describe a character's characteristic actions to show his character, quality, identity, status, situation and state. Action description is one of the important methods to depict characters. Every action of a character is restricted by his thought and personality. Therefore, it is called action description to describe in detail the reaction of a character in a certain situation, mainly action
action description, writing, and essentials
describing the characteristic actions of the character to show the character, quality, identity, status, situation and state. Action description is one of the important methods to depict characters. Every action of a character is restricted by his thought and personality. Therefore, describe in detail the reaction of a character in a certain situation, mainly the action. 5. Description method of writing
Action description is also called action description, that is, the description of the character's actions, behaviors and activities. This method plays a very important role in depicting characters, and it is the main means to express characters and shape characters. Hegel emphasized in Aesthetics: "It is action that can clearly show an individual's personality, thoughts and goals, and only through action can the deepest aspects of human beings be seen in reality."
There are many ways to describe characters, among which the preference for action description can be said to be no exception for any writer. Gorky believes that writing characters should do more and talk less. Lao She once said that only by describing actions can characters stand up. Contemporary psychologists believe that people's hearts are invisible and intangible, and only actions are true and reliable. Action is indeed a prism to see through the character's psychology.
First, the method of action description
(1) Principle:
We should grasp the characteristic action description. In a specific environment, the actions of characters have corresponding characteristics. We should observe carefully and grasp these characteristics. We often say: "Action comes from thoughts", that is to say, the actions of characters should conform to the ideological quality of characters. Everyone has different personalities, different feelings and different inner worlds. The description of characters' movements with typical significance can make the characters more vivid and vivid. When describing a character's actions, we should not only write out what he is doing, but more importantly, describe how he did it, and show the character's personality characteristics and mental outlook through the description of the character's actions.
(2) Methods
1. Recall in your mind what actions this matter consists of, what body parts are needed for each action, what are the positions, shapes, colors, movements and changes of these body parts, and what verbs can be used to construct them, and then write down the situation of these body parts one by one.
For example, in Fang Zhimin's The Poor, there is such a section: "When two Chinese soldiers found me in the Woods and guessed who I was, they were eager to find 1, or 8 dollars on me, or something like gold bracelets and rings, and made a windfall. I didn't know that from my upper body to my lower body, from the collar of my coat to the bottom of my socks, I didn't find any copper coins. They became angry and suspected that I had hidden the money there and refused to take it out. One of them, with a forest handle in his left hand, pulled out the fuse in the Grenade with his right hand, pulled his feet apart, made a gesture of throwing, and stared at me with fierce eyes ... "In this passage, the author reviewed the key movements of the" soldier "and wrote his greedy and fierce nature. When we write about people, we usually think, review, think carefully, deeply and live in our minds first, and the characters described in our works will be real and realistic. Action description must conceive several key processes, and be good at grasping the specific and characteristic actions of characters. If you scribble, you will not be able to write real and touching people.
2. The description of a person's actions should be decomposed, that is to say, a person's actions are composed of a series of actions. Decompose a big action into several small moves, grasp the most characteristic action of the character and describe it in "slow motion", then the whole article can write the action of the character concretely.
the chairman also raised his hand and raised his dark gray helmet. Lift it very slowly, like a very heavy thing, bit by bit, bit by bit, until it is lifted over the head, and suddenly it stops in the air with a wave of its hand. Fang Ji's Between the Waves
3. You can grasp the most touching movements and body parts for close-ups, write them from all angles, and they can appear many times.
4. Appropriate modifiers can be added in front of the verb to express the amplitude, speed and strength of the action in detail. For example, the action expressed by a word "jump" has different images because of the different modifiers added before and after. "He gritted his teeth and jumped down." It is the same as "He shook his hands like a gust of wind to jump before …", but they are obviously different. This shows that adding necessary restrictive words before and after verbs cannot be ignored.
5. Rhetoric can be used to express actions.
6. Try to choose the most appropriate verb.
For example, when the executioner handed the human blood steamed bread to Lao Shuan in Medicine, a series of actions were described as follows: "When Lao Shuan hesitated, the black man grabbed the lantern, tore off the paper cover, wrapped the steamed bread, stuffed it with Lao Shuan, grabbed the foreign money in one hand, pinched it and turned away. Humming in his mouth, he said,' This old thing …' "Through the ingenious and natural connection of the nine verbs about the continuity of this" black man ",the evil image of an executioner who is used to doing this kind of transaction is vividly on the paper.
7. Pay attention to the verb "thousand", such as "look". In different situations, different words can be used, such as "overlooking, looking down, looking back, spying, studying, admiring, visiting, catching a glimpse, browsing, observing, staring, staring, aiming and favoring" ... < p
what is the "characteristics" of a character? It means that this person is particularly prominent, that is, this person is different from others. The characteristics of people we often talk about generally refer to three aspects: first, the appearance characteristics, including looks, clothes, height and thinness; Second, personality characteristics, including personality, hobbies, habits, etc. The third is the characteristics of ideological quality.
In our life, although everyone is positive, completing the same learning tasks and participating in the same activities, they are not exactly the same, and always show differences in many aspects. For example, some people are particularly enthusiastic; Some people are very trustworthy; Some people have a head start and a tail end, and they are very responsible; Some people especially cherish things; Some people always can't hold back their words, but they can't tell what they have to say ... However, because we meet and get along with each other every day, we have seen many things and become accustomed to them, but we can't perceive them. This requires us to settle down, ponder and savor carefully, and capture the characteristics of the characters from it.
to describe the characteristics of characters, we must know how to describe them. There are many methods: first, choose typical cases to express the characteristics of characters, which is the most important method. What characteristics a person has can't be described by empty words. There is a saying that "facts speak louder than words". You say so-and-so is capable, please come up with facts to convince others. The general facts are not enough, and the more typical examples are, the more convincing they are; The second is to express the characteristics of the characters through the description of their appearance. The appearance of a character is always closely related to his living environment and personality hobbies, which can reflect the inner world and personality characteristics of the character; There are also descriptions of language movements and psychological activities to show the characteristics of characters. As the saying goes, "observe words, look at colors and look at actions", and the characters' language actions and psychological activities can better express their characteristics and qualities.
In short, a person will have what kind of demeanor, what kind of language actions, what kind of inner activities and what kind of things he will do. Therefore, choosing typical examples to describe the appearance, language movements and inner activities of the characters is the most basic way to write the characteristics of the characters. 7. What are the methods of writing in primary schools? < P > Guidance on writing methods in primary schools 1. How to write people is one of the basic skills of writing training in primary schools.
In narrative, people and things are inseparable, and the key is to see how the topic is required. Ask to write about the topic, and the people in the text should serve the matter; It is required to write people's topics, and the things in the text must serve people.
A narrative that focuses on people is to express one or more qualities of the characters through one or several things. To write a continuation, the narrative is not required to be complete; The narrative of the chronicle should be complete, and it should run through the article from beginning to end.
(1) Writing about people through one thing; writing about people through one thing is usually an aspect of a character's quality or personality. In order to describe the characters, it is necessary to describe the characters in appearance, language, action and psychology.
However, from the perspective of writing people by events, it is best to choose a thing that best reflects a certain characteristic of this person and write it well. When writing something, you should choose typical examples.
the so-called typicality is something that can reflect the central idea and show the good thoughts, good qualities and good feelings of the characters. For primary school students, choosing typical cases should focus on trivial matters and choose those that best reflect profound significance.