1. Write a composition imitating Zweig’s writing style of Leo Tolstoy
My teacher
He has a pair of black grapes on his face His eyes, nose bridge is high, mouth is big, chin is round, and his hair is combed very long. This is the teacher of our class - Teacher Yu. She is cheerful and lively, caring and strict with us. The classmates in our class like her very much. If you don’t believe it, I will tell you.
Teacher Yu cares about us very much. Last semester, I was running for class cadre and was not selected. I was very sad. Teacher Yu comforted me and said, "Don't be sad. It doesn't matter. I didn't get selected this time. Just try harder next time and try to get selected, right?" I heard. After listening to Teacher Yu's words, I immediately felt less uncomfortable and secretly vowed in my heart: I will definitely run for office next time. Unexpectedly, I really got what I wanted this time, I'm so happy! Another time, I accidentally fell down the stairs and injured my hands and legs. Teacher Yu knew about it and rushed over immediately, helped me and sent me to the infirmary. I should really thank Teacher Yu!
Teacher Yu is very strict with us. Especially when it comes to sketching new characters, Teacher Yu corrects them very seriously and carefully. If you make mistakes, you must show them to Teacher Yu before you can write new characters. If you make mistakes, you have to copy them again! I often write the word "su" wrongly. Thanks to Teacher Yu who pointed it out to me and asked me to rewrite it. When I dictate "su" in the future, I will never write it wrong again! Under Teacher Yu's strict requirements, I slowly got rid of my carelessness. I really want to thank Teacher Yu!
This is the head teacher of our class - Teacher Yu. She cares and nurtures us like a mother.
2. Imitate the first and second paragraphs of "Leo Tolstoy" written by Zweig and write a story about yourself
1. Use the first of "Yu Yang" Depressedly described, the mediocre and ugly appearance contrasts with Tolstoy's sharp and profound soul.
2. A large number of metaphors and exaggerations are used to describe Tolstoy’s ordinary and vulgar appearance and extraordinary gaze.
For example: write about the characteristics of Tolstoy's beard and hair: his hairy face is described as "more vegetation than open space"; his dark face is "wrinkled like bark"; his eyebrows are about a finger wide, "like tangles" "Unclear tree roots"; the gray curly hair is like foam piled on the forehead; the beard is covered with hair, as dense as a tropical forest; the beard is like rolling white waves. There are not only metaphors in these sentences, but also exaggerations in the metaphors. Metaphors and exaggerations are used hand in hand and generously arranged, which not only makes the charm vivid, but also creates beautiful reverie in people.
So this is a very interesting description~! Tucao
For example, what is wrong with sparse teeth: Teeth are like stars in the sky, brightly colored and far apart.
For example, skin with enlarged pores that is no longer young: like a picture with a low resolution.
Another example for acne-prone faces: the surface of the moon.
Recommended adjectives: Sandpaper-like cheeks (meaning rough and vicissitudes), rock-like eyes (firm and perseverant), a razor-sharp mouth (a forbearing expression or meanness) or the profundity of a Roman statue (three-dimensional) )
I am not joking, really, can you read what I said and get inspired? 3. Imitate the way of writing about people in the first paragraph of "Leo Tolstoy" written by Zweig and write about someone around you
Example 1: Example 2: ○The hairline is quite high, it looks like He is quite smart, with a pair of glasses on his nose, and seems to have a lot of knowledge.
The mouth looks nothing special, but in fact it can be described as "sharp" when speaking, and it looks even more silly when smiling. You guessed it, this is my Chinese teacher, known as "Old O".
○From a distance, I saw a big man training a small man. The big man had a muscular back and a bulging belly, like a big watermelon stuffed inside him. He was wearing mid-length trousers, revealing his black legs covered with fine hair, and his whole body was as dark as if he had been coated with a layer of black paint.
He was glaring angrily, his nose was bent with anger, and his mouth was filled with angry spittle.
Needless to say, he is our teacher C.
○Look, our teacher Y is walking towards us with brisk steps. He had a smile on his face, his long, shiny black hair fluttered in the wind, and his round eyes glowed with a strange light.
She was meditating while walking. When she came to her senses, she had missed the classroom by 5 or 6 meters, so she hurriedly turned around and came back. 4. Read the following text and write an article of no less than 800 words according to the requirements
1. It is not easy to relax your mind in life. The seemingly smooth journey is full of thorns. It often makes people miserable.
The pain in life is like salt. It is neither too much nor too little. There is always a certain amount. The size of the volume we bear determines the degree of pain. So when you feel pain, relax your mind and enlarge it. It is not a glass of water but a lake. On the contrary, imprisoning your mind will only make it more painful.
Throughout the vicissitudes of life, I don’t know how many narrow-minded people have been unable to recover because of the difficulties they are in; in the thousands of years of human life, I don’t know how many people with weak will have lost their ambition due to setbacks. During the Three Kingdoms period, Liu Bei faced the pain of losing his second brother. He could not let go of his brotherly love, and was imprisoned by pain because of his narrow mind. He made the wrong decision and rashly sent troops to conquer Wu, ending up with the eternal fate of "The White Emperor Tuogu". Tragedy, sad and sad! It can be seen that the imprisonment of the soul makes the soul extremely fragile and narrow. Instead of being knocked down by others, it is a prison created by oneself. Living in a prison created by one's own heart, not only cannot one forgive oneself, but one's own future is ruined.
If you are able to face the reality when you are in a difficult situation, even if you look at the world with a cold eye, your mind becomes broader and your mind is more open-minded, then your life will be like a village with dark flowers and bright flowers. "When you are old and strong, you would rather move your heart with a white head; when you are poor and strong, you will not fall into the clouds of ambition." Wang Bo can be said to be "unlucky and lucky". However, in the face of adversity, he knows his destiny and looks at life with a smile.
Just imagine, without his open-minded mind, how could we have sung the historical song of "We know ourselves at home, and we are neighbors across the world"? Li Bai, the poet who said, "I can't be happy because I can bow my eyebrows and serve the powerful." When he encountered difficulties in his official career, did he become silent? He resolutely stayed away from his official career and devoted his soul to admiring the mountains and rivers. He drank wine, wrote poems, and visited famous mountains. Famous water finally succeeded in his eternal and elegant romantic feelings. Never forget the past and be the teacher of the future. The ancients have set too many examples for us and left too many regrets. Then it will be up to us to complete the rest.
Always take control of your mind, don’t let it stick to a small space, otherwise you will have too little room; don’t let your mind be in a helpless and empty state, but look for spiritual sustenance. Only in this way can you be relaxed and happy and forgive the suffering. Just like Zweig wrote in "The Story of Chess" about a prisoner who had nothing to do and lived like a year. Later, he got a chess book and played with it in his mind. The days passed quickly, and he was relieved of the pain of prison with ease and joy.
Although he is in prison, his heart is free. Only when the prison does not imprison his heart can he be happy. What about you, can you also set your mind free in a superior and free environment? Yes, people will inevitably encounter setbacks in life, so relax your mind and treat the setbacks as a breeze blowing gently from your ears; treat the pain as a grain of dust in your eyes, blink, A drop of tear is enough to drown it. Relax your heart, wipe the sweat on your forehead, wipe the tears in your eyes, and move on! One day, you will see the blue sky, white clouds, green grass, and a sweet smile on the corner of your mouth.
2. Release the prison of the soul. Spring water has the courage to remove the obstacles of mountain streams, and eventually all rivers flow into the sea; seeds have the courage to remove the stones above their heads, and finally see the blue sky; butterflies have the courage to remove the constraints of cocoons, and finally flutter their wings. As the primates of all things, human beings can only remove the obstacles on the road to success and lift the shackles of the soul only by learning to remove the stones from the soul.
(The beginning of the comparison, with literary talent, the first time to ask the question) The protagonist in "The Story of Chess" freed himself from the shackles of the soul, allowing his thoughts to soar; but in real life, many people are inferior to themselves. , narrow-mindedness and other troubles, let them block the channel of the soul.
Only by learning to get rid of mental troubles can you fly over the rainbow freely! (Quote the material and keep it close to the title) Removing the stones from the soul is to overcome inferiority and cultivate courage.
(The first sentence of the paragraph leads and produces a good visual effect) Serena Williams had an average appearance and low talent when she was young. She could not extricate herself from the haze of low self-esteem all day long. It was her mother who allowed her to see her tennis talent. , thus giving her courage, and finally, she became a legend in today's women's tennis. How could she fly high if she hadn't thrown away the stone of inferiority? Looking back at Lin Daiyu, if she could abandon her inferiority complex about her family background and pursue happiness, then in the end there might not be the tragedy of "the flower falls and the person dies without knowing it".
Inferiority is a weed in the soul. It must be pulled out in time so that it will not affect the path of life. (Positive and negative contrastive arguments, persuasive) To remove the stones from the soul is to overcome narrowness and have an open mind.
(The first sentence of the paragraph leads with clear structure) Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty overcame his hatred and reused Wei Zheng, creating a legend about the emperor and his ministers, and Zhenguan prospered the Tang Dynasty; Yi Zhongtian's teacher overcame his selfishness and selflessly imparted his personal experience to Yi Zhongtian. It was only then that Yi Zhongtian's glory was created; BYD overcame its narrow-mindedness and selflessly shared its patents with its partners, so that it could learn from each other's strengths and create today's leader in electric vehicles. (Clustered arguments, rich content) Only by learning to overcome the narrow-mindedness of your heart can you achieve the heroic grandeur of going eastwards.
To remove the stone from the soul is to overcome arrogance and learn humility. There is too much glitz and self-righteousness in life to blind one's eyes and block the road.
In the past, Xiang Yu had no one in his sights, and he was arrogant and advanced, which eventually led to his death. However, Liu Bang was humble and courteous, followed other people's suggestions, and finally achieved hegemony. In the ongoing World Cup in South Africa, Portugal and Brazil are favored because they have many superstars, but it is the arrogance of these superstars that ruins the overall tactical layout and throws their teams into the abyss of failure.
(How closely connected to reality, the World Cup has just ended) Only by learning to remove the stones of arrogance can we move forward on the road to success. (Don’t forget to ask the question again at the end of the paragraph) In real life, many people are burdened with too much spiritual burden. They are on pins and needles all day long, walking on thin ice. What they see is a city surrounded on all sides, with no open road.
In fact, if you let go of the burden on your mind and open up a road to the light in your heart, the siege will not be broken, and the sky and water will be the same color with gulls flying and fish swimming in front of you. The reason why angels can fly is because they removed the stones in their hearts and made themselves light.
In fact, everyone has a pair of wings. When can you remove the stones from your heart, become an angel, and fly freely? (The ending is cordial, and the second person brings the distance closer to the reader) Analysis: Based on the materials, it should contain at least the following aspects of information: First, there is "prison" in the heart.
5. Imitate (Zweig) the first and second natural paragraphs in Leo Tolstoy
(1) This gaze is like a bright steel knife thrust over, and steady It is accurate and hits the vital point. It makes you unable to move or escape. It uses metaphors to compare the "sharp gaze" to the "bright steel knife", implying that Tolstoy has a very profound observation and understanding of the times. (2) There are a hundred eyes in Tolstoy’s eyes. It uses exaggeration to describe the deep emotions contained in Tolstoy’s eyes, and praises Tolstoy’s ability to absorb everything in the world. The all-round observation ability of his eyes, and shows all aspects of society in his works. (3) This pair of jewelry has magic and magnetism, which can suck in the substances in the world, and then radiate precise and unmistakable frequencies to our era. Bo Tolstoy's literary creation not only came from the observation and research of society and life, but also was processed by his own thoughts and expressed with his pen, showing the true meaning of society and life. (4) When this The daggers that shone with cold light were very terrifying when they were turned towards their master, because the blade was ruthless and went straight to the vital point, hitting him right in the heart. The dagger pointed at Tolstoy's eyes. The master pointed at the people in society. The sentence "living people" (the objects reflected in the works) shows that Tolstoy has a keen and sharp vision, and his criticism of reality is extremely profound and accurate, even causing panic among the ruling authorities. (5) Having such a sharp vision , People who can see the truth clearly can control the entire world and its wealth of knowledge at will. As a person who is always good at observation and can see through the essence of things, he must be missing one thing, and that is his own happiness. This sentence fully expresses the pain of a wise man. Tolstoy saw through tyranny, ugliness, hypocrisy, suffering and its causes, and devoted his life to changing it, but everything always went against his wishes. This was his greatest pain. 6. A 600-word essay to Mr. Zweig
One night, I just finished dinner and went to bed. In my dream, I saw Leo Tolstoy telling me a composition in a very broken Chinese. "Ding dong - ding ding dong -" the alarm on the phone rang. My mother said at the breakfast table: "A special 'big man' is coming today. You two, please behave." I thought: Who will come today?
In the evening, as soon as I entered the house, I found a man with good features. When I walked in, I saw that he was a foreigner! "Did I go to the wrong door?" I thought, and walked out of the house. When I saw it, "Yes, it's on the seventh floor!" Suddenly, the man said in fluent Chinese: "Are you little Liu Peixin?" "Xinxin, you're back!" Mom yelled and ran out. "Let me introduce myself. My name is Lev Nikolayevich Tolstoy. I am forty-three years old." "Tolstoy? How..." I muttered. "He is the composition tutor I hired for you!" Mom said. I finally calmed down and said, "Mr. Tolstoy, it's a great honor to meet you." So I invited him to have dinner with me.
After dinner, I led him into my cabin, "Teacher, can you tell me the secret of your writing?" "The secret of my writing is to write seriously, revise repeatedly, and write carefully. "Copy it." I said obediently, "You must have finished writing the composition without changing it at all, right? Also, some of the sentences are pieced together here and there, and some of them shouldn't be used." All the words and idioms are used. Now you write an article about small animals. Tolstoy said, "Look, the composition you write now is very different! Remember the three key points of writing, and you must use real people and write down your true feelings, so that the composition can be written Well done." Tolstoy left.
In the future, my composition has made great progress, and I really want to thank Tolstoy.