Inappropriately matched special training
1. When the Olympic torch reaches the summit of Mount Everest, it must overcome unfavorable special climate conditions such as low temperature, low pressure, and strong winds, and give full consideration to the mountaineering team members’ efforts to reach the summit. various difficulties that may be encountered.
1. What “difficulties” should be “overcome” should not be “special climatic conditions”.
2. Jinwu charcoal carving has exquisite craftsmanship and is colored with pure natural pigments. It has elegant, fashionable and individual artistic enjoyment. It can also absorb toxic and harmful gases and is an environmentally friendly art.
2. "Have" and "enjoy" cannot be combined. You can change "enjoy" to "features"
3. Buckwheat can reduce capillary fragility, improve microcirculation, and increase The role of immunity can be used as an auxiliary treatment for diseases such as hypertension, hyperlipidemia, coronary heart disease, and stroke attacks.
3. "Has...the effect" is not properly matched with object and object, and should be changed to "efficacy"
4. In recent years, the number of patent applications in our country has increased year by year. The sustained and rapid growth shows that the level of domestic research and development and the public's patent awareness are constantly improving.
4. “The public’s awareness of patents” cannot be paired with “continuous improvement” and can be changed to “the level of research and development continues to improve, and the public’s awareness of patents continues to increase.”
5. The relevant person in charge of the State Intellectual Property Office believes that the continued rapid growth of domestic patent applications shows that the patent awareness and research and development level of the Chinese public are constantly improving.
5. “The public’s awareness of patents” cannot be paired with “continuous improvement” and can be changed to “the public’s awareness of patents has been significantly enhanced, and the level of research and development has been continuously improved.”
6. When he went out in the morning, he saw excavators, loaders and more than a dozen dump trucks on the construction site digging soil under the command of the staff.
6. "Excavator", "loader" and "dump truck" will not work under human "command". "Command" should be changed to "control".
7. On the basis of inheriting the tradition, Wang Wei worked hard to create a distinctive artistic conception, enriched and improved the expression skills of landscape poetry, and contributed to the development of poetry.
7. You can change "created" to "created" so that the subject is "Wang Wei".
8. At the turn of the century, Chinese historians further improved their analytical abilities and increasingly showed a high level of academic content, moving from a general introduction to foreign historiography to a level of research and judgment. This provides the possibility and premise for a real dialogue between Chinese and foreign historians.
8. The subject of the second clause is omitted. If the subject is added, the clause will be "Chinese historians show academic content", and the subject and predicate are not matched properly.
9. The Beijing Olympic Torch Global Relay, named after the "Journey of Harmony", has inspired the patriotic enthusiasm of people of all ethnic groups in our country and attracted great attention from people all over the world.
9. “Attract” cannot be paired with “attention”.
10. Under the new situation, we should establish a new concept of cultural development, promote and explore cultural system innovation and distinctive cultural connotations, and strive to develop cultural products rich in the spirit of the times and Sichuan characteristics.
10. “Promote and tap into cultural system innovation and distinctive cultural connotations” should be “promote cultural system innovation and tap into distinctive cultural connotations.”
11. Kindness is like a towering tree, which protects you from the heat and cold; kindness is like a mother's embrace, which soothes your emotions and sorrows.
11. "Yanliang" is generally only used in its metaphorical meaning, that is, the warmth and warmth of closeness in human affairs. It is inappropriate to use it here, and it cannot be paired with "shield": "Happiness" and "Le" are not needed "Soothing", so there is also the problem of improper matching.
12. Children’s education is a complex process, and it is far from being effective in just one or two sentences.
12. Delete the “的” after child
13. We firmly believe that one day, China’s industry and agriculture will become a developed country.
13. You can change "country" to "industry", etc.
14. This last day of labor is the most stressful, enjoyable and meaningful day for the students.
14. "Labor" cannot be "a day", delete "labor"
15. Education plays a fundamental role in the formation of comprehensive national strength. The strength of national strength is It depends more and more on the improvement of the quality of workers and the quality and quantity of training of various types of talents.
15. “The strength of a country’s strength” and “it depends on the improvement of the quality of workers” are inconsistent and inappropriately matched
16. The old man’s clear thinking, cheerful personality, and optimistic attitude Emotions and strong confidence deeply infected us.
16. The subject is "clear thinking, cheerful personality, optimistic mood and firm confidence", and the predicate is "infection". "Thinking" is not easy to "infect", and the subject and predicate are not matched properly.
17. He works seriously and treats people sincerely. In life and work, he has indeed used his actions to create a huge personality and moved me. and guide the people around.
17. "Create huge personality power", if the word-object combination is inappropriate, "shape" can be changed to "show"
18. The United States adjusted its visa policy in 2003, stipulating that the application time for a study visa should be 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of the school you are applying for.
18. It cannot be said that "time is in progress". You can delete "application time" or delete "progress"
19. The quality of the investment environment, the quality of service, and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of the regional economy. .
19. One side and two sides do not correspond.
20. The Manchester City football team has the important task of guarding Manchester United's "terrifying left wing". Dunn cannot do it, Belmadi cannot, and Wright cannot. Phillips is even less capable, only Sun Jihai can do it
20. "The important task of guarding..." is inappropriate. It can be changed to "Manchester City football team must defend Manchester United's 'terrible left wing', Dunn can't." ..." or "Manchester City football players have to shoulder the important task of guarding Manchester United's 'terrible left wing', but Dunn can't do it...".
21. Now, I see the folks who have been away for many years again, The huts made of stones and thatch that are unique to the mountainous areas that I have been accustomed to since I was a child, the rugged streets, and the familiar and lovely local accent
21. Incomplete ingredients and inappropriate combinations should be found in " Add the preposition "with" or "with" before "a hut made of stones and thatch". "See" and "local accent" do not match.
22. The quality of language in literary and artistic works does not depend on its use. A lot of fancy words are used, and the terminology of a certain industry is used, but the words are used in the right place.
22. A two-sided mistake, "good or bad" should refer to two aspects. , but there is only a "good" side behind it.
23. Due to the strengthening of ecological environment monitoring during the production process, the base's annual production of pollution-free vegetables is not only supplied to the main markets of the province, but also sold. To Henan, Hebei and other provinces.
23. The subject-verb combination is inappropriate and should be changed to "the pollution-free vegetables produced at the base every year..."
24. Paleoanthropologist. Two major archaeological discoveries led by Jia Lanpo in the early days and recently by the State Administration of Cultural Heritage showed that the natural corridor of the Yongding River was "the movement route of ancient humans"
24. "...two major archaeological discoveries led by... "Discover", "Hosting" and "Discover" are not properly matched.
25. With the increasing development of communications, mobile phones have almost become an indispensable necessity for everyone. However, as the usage increases, complaints about the quality of mobile phones have also become more and more frequent. More and more.
25. "About" is an inappropriate wording. It can be changed to "complaints about the quality of mobile phones..." or "complaints about the quality of mobile phones...".
26. Her singing voice is clear, sweet, simple, cordial, and filled with the fragrance of earth, bringing people to the beautiful and rich Hexi region.
26. "Glow" and "earthy fragrance" have inappropriate object-object combinations.
It should be said that it is "(as if) exuding the fragrance of earth".
27. Legal experts believe that consumers destroy goods in public just to humiliate or vent their dissatisfaction.
27. "Humiliation" and "own dissatisfaction" cannot go together. It should be changed to "humiliate the manufacturer or vent one's dissatisfaction".
28. The colorful waterfalls are located deep in the mountains in Niru Village, Shangri-La County. A plateau snowmelt river called "Niru River" and steep peaks create this unique spectacle.
28. The verb "create" and the object "wonder" do not match well. "Create" should be changed to "form".
29. If breastfeeding women only rely on the iodine content in supplements, they may be deficient in iodine. If they do not add iodine-containing foods in time, it may cause brain nerve damage or mental retardation in their babies.
29. The verb "take" and the object "iodine content" do not match properly. Change it to "Take supplements containing iodine."
30. Scientists believe that there are not many such unique ecological environments suitable for the natural reproduction of South China tiger populations in China.
30. "Have...ecological environment" is a verb-object structure and cannot serve as the subject of "There is not much left", so "have" can be removed.
31. During his tenure as battalion commander and regimental commander, Comrade Li Mingde was rated as an advanced unit in training and a model unit in logistics support many times.
31. The subject "Li Mingde" and the object "unit" are not matched properly. Change the first "unit" to an individual and remove the second "unit". Or change it to "the troops led by Comrade Li Mingde when he served as battalion commander or regiment commander."
32. Wuyi Road Table Tennis Hall is a group approved by the Sports Bureau and the Civil Affairs Bureau to promote table tennis.
32. The subject "table tennis hall" and the object "group" are not properly matched. Change "group" to "institution" or "unit".
33. Happiness is a person’s various pleasant and gratifying feelings about life in a certain social relationship, as well as his understanding and evaluation of the meaning of life.
33. The subject "happiness" and the object "evaluation" are not matched properly. Delete "and evaluation".
34. Whether or not the Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is undoubtedly of great significance to building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.
34. "Can" and "of great significance" do not correspond to each other, and "can" should be removed.
35. The issue of whether schools provide ideal education for young people is a major issue related to the successors of the cause of motherland construction and must be paid great attention to.
35. "To catch or not to catch" is two sides, and "to have someone to succeed" is one side. "To catch or not to catch" should be removed.
36. In today's world, the proportion of independent intellectual property rights is a symbol of a country's scientific development, and the progress of science and technology is a symbol of a country's prosperity.
36. "Scientific and technological progress or not" are two aspects, and they do not match "national prosperity" on the one hand. Remove the “or not”.
37. The spokesperson of the National Tourism Administration denied the issue of whether tickets are charged for seven red tourist attractions including Tiananmen Square at the press conference.
37. One side faces two sides. Whether or not to charge tickets cannot be "denied".
38. Strolling through the peach orchard, the rows, rows, and trees of the peach grove will make you forget to leave. You can also pick them at your own expense after visiting China, and you will feast on the soft and juicy big peaches.
38. Improper collocation, "rows, rows, rows" modifies "taolin, the word that expresses the concept of collection is inappropriate."
39. Some businesses violate business ethics, Taking advantage of the curiosity of primary and secondary school students and the fact that cheating in exams is not uncommon, they advertised the "invisible pen".
39. “Utilize” cannot go together with “when cheating in exams is not uncommon”.
40. In the past six years, my country's aerospace technology has completed progress from single cabin to three cabins, from unmanned to manned, from "one person and one day" to "two people and five days".
40. "Completion" and "progress" do not match, "completion" should be changed to "realization".
41. After watching that TV series, in addition to the impression left on me by the characters active on the screen, I seemed to also feel that there was a character who did not appear, and that was the author himself.
41. The matching is inappropriate and should be changed to "I seem to feel that there is a character without a scene."
42. After the factory implemented the production responsibility system, its efficiency has been significantly improved. The number of scraps per month has dropped from one thousand to one hundred, and the scrap rate has dropped nine times.
42. “Drop” cannot be followed by “multiple”.
43. Regarding issues such as adjusting wages, issuing bonuses, and improving employee welfare benefits, the article provides detailed provisions and profound explanations in theory and policy, which has strong guiding significance and operability. Law.
43. It is a lack of thorough care and should be changed to “a profound explanation and detailed provisions in theory and policy”.
44. It is believed that the key factor in team effectiveness is not just the simple sum of individual contributions, but the teamwork skills that enable team members to act in unison and cooperate with each other.
44. The related words are not collocated properly. "Not just" cannot be paired with "but". "Not just" should be changed to "not".
45. During the intense construction of the subway, the tunnel suddenly collapsed. Yu Xiuhua, the section chief, risked her own life and used her body to protect the safety of the workers, but she was seriously injured.
45. "Cover" and "security" are not paired properly.
46. Adopting various methods to vigorously improve and cultivate the modern technical level of workers is an urgent matter to speed up the development of manufacturing industry.
46. “Cultivation” and “level” are not properly matched. The complex attributives before "big events" should be arranged in the following customary order: 1. Refers to the possession or time and place. 2. Table of reference or quantity. 3. Verb or verb phrase. 4. Adjective or adjective phrase. 5. Noun or noun phrase.
47. If an angelic smile can relieve a person's years of depression, it should be priceless and should be one of the effective ways to solve the dilemma.
47. "Resolve the dilemma" does not match, it should be "solve the spear" or "get out of the dilemma".
48. It is very important to improve the quality of breakfast. Breakfast nutrition should provide two-thirds of the vitamins and minerals required by the human body every day, so we must not be careless about breakfast.
48. Improper collocation and unclear meaning. The main problem lies in the second clause. First, it is not "the nutrition of breakfast" that "should provide", but "breakfast" that "should provide nutrition"; second, "two-thirds of the total daily requirement of vitamins and minerals" causes ambiguity due to improper word order. It should be "two-thirds of the total daily vitamin and mineral requirements." The full clause should be changed to "Breakfast should provide two-thirds of the total vitamins and minerals required by the human body every day."
49. The key to whether China has hope in the 21st century is to firmly inherit and explore the fine traditions of the Chinese nation, and to extensively learn from advanced foreign science and culture.
49. Improper collocation, "whether" means two sides, while "the key is" means one side. "Whether" should be added after "is".
50. The ability to obtain information has become the premise and basis for students' independent learning, and is also an important symbol for determining and measuring students' learning ability and level.
50. “Measurement” and “sign” are inappropriate combinations.
51. If the 600 years of the founding of Tianjin can be compared to a magnificent epic, then the mouth of the Sancha River is the main theme and the most exciting chapter of this epic.
51. "The main theme of the epic and the most exciting chapter" are not properly matched.
52. The completion of the new archway overpass will greatly alleviate the traffic jam problem during peak traffic hours.
52. “Relief” and “problem” do not match the object and object, so change “problem” to “contradiction”.
53. Financial departments at all levels should improve their scientific management level, especially in the management of rural infrastructure construction funds. They should be well aware of the situation, consider it comprehensively, and make careful arrangements.
53. It should be changed to “especially in the management of rural infrastructure construction funds”