Ill sentences are wrong sentences. Any sentence that violates the rules of grammatical structure or objective facts is a sick sentence. The former is called grammatical error and the latter is called logical error. Grammatical mistakes often occur.
There are six kinds of common sick sentences:
(1) Incorrect word order
Example: It is impossible for China to be self-sufficient in cotton production for a long time. Cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time. )
(2) Improper collocation
Exodus: The flood of feelings is rolling in, and blood is roaring all over the body. ("Hot blood" can only "boil", not "roar")
(3) Incomplete ingredients
For example, in the past two years, they promoted the scientific farming that Ma and the brigade insisted on throughout the county. ("promote" what? Lost object "? "The experience. )
(4) the structure is chaotic
Example: This method is sanitary and convenient, and is deeply loved by the masses. (or "deeply loved by the masses" or "deeply loved by the masses")
(5) The ideographic meaning is unknown
Example: the county informed Zhao Xiangchang to report before September 15. (it can be understood as "before 15") or "before 15")
(6) illogical
Exodus: He is the only survivor of all the victims. (The contradiction between "victim" and "survivor". )
Extended data:
Modification method of sick sentences
1, complement method
Complement grammar: it is often used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components.
For example, "I won the first prize in this competition" (missing section)
Change: "I won the first place in this competition." (Supplementary subjects)
After listening to the teacher, I got a great education. (Supplementary subjects)
Everyone should set up lofty ideals. (complement predicate)
We should educate teenagers in patriotism. (Complement object)
2. Delete method
Deletion is generally used to modify redundant sentences, redundant components, improper collocation and improper classification.
For example, "I conclude that it may rain tomorrow."
I'm sure it will rain tomorrow.
Step 3 change the law
Variations are often used to modify ill sentences such as improper collocation, improper words and unclear reference.
For example, "his grades have improved significantly."
Change: "His grades have improved obviously."
Whoever breaks the discipline will be criticized.
His writing level has improved significantly.
He seems to have infinite power.