China is a country of poetry. Poetry has a long history, famous artists come forth in large numbers, and numerous works by famous artists are spectacular in Chinese civilization.
I have learned many ancient poems since primary school. I am amazed at the artistic conception of parting in ancient poetry, the spring, summer, autumn and winter in ancient poetry, and the places of interest in ancient poetry. Just a few dozen words, but expressed the poet's thoughts and feelings, landscape. There is a saying in Li Bai's "It's Hard to Go to the Sky": "One day, I will sail straight to the sky and cross the deep sea." Just a dozen words express the author's firm ideal for the future even if his career is blocked. Wang Anshi's "Reaching the Peak" said: "You are not afraid of clouds covering your eyes, you are at the highest level." He wrote that he climbed the tower of this mountain with great pride.
Some people commented that Wang Wei's poems and paintings in the Tang Dynasty were "paintings in poems and poems in paintings." Just like his bamboo house, "I leaned alone in the dense bamboo, playing the pipa and humming a song." The voice is so low that no one can hear it except my partner Mingyue. " Sitting alone, playing the piano, whistling and the bright moon remind me of such a picture. "A poet plays the piano alone in the bamboo forest, whistling. The night is quiet, a picture accompanied by the bright moon. So elegant and quiet.
I like ancient poems and appreciate their parting feelings and scenery. Because it seems that I have experienced a trip, I am addicted to it, and even I can't extricate myself and can't wake up.
Grade 8 Chinese Composition Subject 2: Composition Chapter: Title: Yellow River Travels Total Class Number: Organizer: Wu Ruiping Recording Time: Implementer: Implementation Time: Class: Name: Subordinate Group:
Writing goal
1. Master several writing methods such as "fixed-point observation", "scene change" and "classified imitation" to write scenes.
2. Grasp the characteristics of the scenery to describe and express the true feelings.
3. Cultivate students' feelings of loving the motherland and nature.
Reflection and evaluation
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The life of three people is a continuous process. Walking is not only walking on two legs, but also an attitude towards life and a spiritual journey. In our youth, we often walk in natural scenery, in streets and lanes, in art galleries, in the vast sea of books, in kindness and warmth ... We are either happy, or moved, or hesitant ... These colorful walking experiences make us feel, urge us to forge ahead and promote our growth.
Please write an article on "Walking in _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _". Write your own walking experience, unique experience and sentiment. Style is not limited, 600 words.
The fourth teaching goal of eighth grade Chinese composition
1. Overall grasp of content and style.
2. Analyze and evaluate, learn from and absorb.
3. Cultivate students' ability to express their opinions independently.
4. Cultivate students' habit of assiduously scrutinizing language and writing, and cultivate the spirit of "refusing to relax a word".
Teaching focus
1. Understand and learn from the content.
2. Experience the author's natural and plain writing.
Teaching difficulties
In-depth understanding and evaluation of the author's ideas on how to write.
Class arrangement
1 class hour.
teaching process
First, introduce new courses (direct introduction method).
Students, today we are going to learn an article on composition. Please guess what this article should write according to the topic before you touch it. (Stimulate students' interest in reading the text carefully)
Second, the author introduces.
Zhu Guangqian (1897— 1986), a modern aesthetician and literary theorist, was born in Tongcheng, Anhui Province under his pen names Meng Shi and Meng Shi. In his early years, he studied in Wuchang Normal School, Hong Kong University, Edinburgh University, London University and Strasbourg University, France, and received his doctorate. After returning to China, he successively served as Professor Peking University, President of China Aesthetics Society, Executive Director of China Foreign Literature Society, Member of Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, and Honorary Professor of Hong Kong University. Representative works include Psychology of Literature and Art, On Poetry, Literature, Beauty and History of Western Aesthetics.
After the founding of the People's Republic of China, Zhu Guangqian mainly engaged in aesthetic research, trying to guide his academic research with Marxism and becoming a representative of an important school in aesthetics. In addition, he devoted himself to the translation of western aesthetic masterpieces and made fruitful efforts in criticizing and inheriting aesthetic heritage. His History of Western Aesthetics is the first book that systematically discusses the history of western aesthetics.
Third, read the text aloud.
Please read through the text aloud, get a preliminary feeling of the content of the text, and understand the following keywords with the help of reference books.
Dissatisfied and ashamed, I laughed at the post.
There is only one person who makes it clear by a thousand words from a horse.
Fourth, explore the text.
Teachers and students discuss and exchange the following questions.
1. What opinions and opinions does the author put forward on how to write?
Topic: Train students to perceive the content of the text as a whole and clarify the author's overall thinking. )
The author believes that "in all arts, talent and manpower cannot be ignored". And mainly in manpower. Writing must go through hard training, and beginners can learn composition by pasting and sketching, both of which are indispensable. In addition, sketch should be practiced from description and narration.
2. Students learn the fourth paragraph of the text, make clear the specific situation of Tolstoy's revision, repeat it in concise language as far as possible, and give a brief evaluation.
(Topic: Train students' ability to extract and filter information from texts, as well as their oral expression ability. )
From the revised manuscript, it is not difficult to see Tolstoy's meticulous attitude towards words, and the clauses read to the center are all within the scope of his revision. The complexity, duration and intention of the revision are admirable.
3. What is the difference between Tolstoy and Koizumi Yakumo's revision of manuscripts?
(Topic: Let students develop the habit of thinking based on the text and deepen their understanding through comparison. )
The former is the modification after writing, and the latter is the modification in writing.
4. They all wrote that they were censored by first-class writers. Why do they cite five examples to prove it? Is this the same? What is the author's opinion on the revision of the composition?
(Topic: Train students to deeply understand the author's writing intention and comprehensive generalization ability through words. )
Because these five people have different emphases. Flaubert and Mo Bosang are written to let people appreciate their meticulous efforts from the results; The other three showed their efforts by recreating their process. There is a difference between these three people. Gandhi's meditation belongs to the revision before writing, Koizumi Yakumo's revision belongs to the revision during writing, and Tolstoy's revision belongs to the revision after writing, from which we can see that the author thinks that the revision of composition should run through the whole process of composition, that is, the revision before writing-the revision during writing-the revision after writing.
5. The author points out that the composition methods of beginners are pasting and sketching, and both are indispensable. Unfortunately, at present, both of them are ignored, especially temporary posts. Students may wish to discuss: Is the author pointing out the right way? If so, how should it be implemented?
Topic setting: cultivate students' learning quality of bold questioning and good habits of applying what they have learned. )
The way pointed out by the author tells the true meaning of the composition. When we are learning to write a composition, we should read more and practice more, which is what the author calls temporary sketch.
6. Let the students read the whole article and discuss its characteristics.
Topic-oriented: This topic aims to guide students from the text to the people and understand the author's natural and plain writing style. )
The style of the letter, the appropriate detail structure, the attitude of the author to the reader, the natural transition, accurate wording, sincere attitude and pertinent persuasion. The author's natural and simple style is naturally revealed.
Fifth, combine practice and apply what you have learned.
Student discussion: What inspiration did you get from studying this article? How should a middle school student learn to write a composition?
(Topic: Discuss the ideas that can be absorbed in this article in connection with students' writing practice. Cultivate students' habit of expressing their opinions independently. )
Teacher's summary:
1. Through the study of this article, I will develop a cautious attitude of speaking like a book in future writing. In his article, Mr. Zhu Guangqian used a lot of facts to prove that the use of literary language can not be separated from this one: hard pursuit and strict choice. Its purpose is to make people pay enough attention to "refined words" that can express their thoughts more accurately.
Flaubert said to his student Mo Bosang, "No matter what you want to say, only one sentence can be truly expressed, and only one verb and adjective can be truly applied, and that is the most accurate sentence and the most accurate verb and adjective. There are many others like this. You must find this unique sentence, unique verb and unique adjective. " This is totally the same thing.
2. The revision of composition should run through the whole process of composition, and learning to write should start with narrative and descriptive writing.
3. Learn the methods proposed by the author to absorb beginners' compositions: pasting and sketching. Develop a good habit of reading widely, accumulating diligently and practicing writing constantly.
4. We can not only learn some knowledge from famous books, but also get a lot of inspiration from our own writing, such as the author's equal posture, the natural style of conversation, the author's clear structural layout, the expression of ignorance and vulgarity, and profound knowledge, which have benefited us a lot.
Sixth, learn and accumulate.
1. Review and memorize the words in this article skillfully.
2. Use the method learned in this article to revise your written composition and talk about your experience in the next composition class.
Seven, reading recommendation.
Zhu Guangqian is a veritable aesthetic veteran and authority. His works have the same status and numerous translations. As Mr. Zhu Ziqing praised, his works are "free flowing". His literature and aesthetics lead you to profundity and complexity layer by layer like a dialogue. After class, please look up and read the author's books on aesthetic popularization, such as Talking about Beauty, Talking about Literature, Twelve Letters to Youth, Talking about Self-cultivation, History of Western Aesthetics, etc., so as to draw nutrition and wisdom from them.
Exploration is the foundation of everything and the essence of life. We should be good at exploring the science around us. Science is like a magical magician, unpredictable: science is like a kaleidoscope of colors, and it is strange: science is a versatile performer, showing the spark of science. ...
When I was a child, I saw a bird flying freely in the sky. I wanted to fly like a bird, but I couldn't fly. My aunt has a pair of wings. I think birds can only fly with wings, so I can fly with wings. However, this is impossible. So, I want to know why birds fly.
Asking, observing, surfing the Internet … I know birds can fly.
The bird's body is covered with thin and warm feathers, which has the function of heat preservation, and makes the bird's shape streamlined. When in air movement, the resistance is the least, which is beneficial to flying. When flying, the wings flap up and down to encourage airflow, which will have great downward pressure resistance and make the bird fly forward.
Birds' bones are thin, light and hollow, and they are filled with air. It can also be seen from the anatomy of the bird's body bones that the bird's skull is a complete bone fragment, and the bones and vertebrae of all parts of the body are also healed together. There are hooked protrusions on the ribs, which are hooked with each other and the chest is strong. The unique structure of bird bones reduces the weight and improves the ability to support flight.
In the bird's body, the structure of organs such as bones, digestion, excretion and reproduction tends to lose weight and fly, so that the bird can overcome the gravity of the earth and fly high.
Exploring the science around us will benefit mankind and future generations. It's everywhere.
In life, rice, oil and salt are essential, and of course people also have joys and sorrows.
I live in a quiet little village. Although there are no tall buildings in the city, I have tasted the happiness brought by nature here. Grandma and I live in a house with a yard, but that little fence yard is my world. Whenever I plant seeds in spring, I ask my neighbors for some flowers. They grow all kinds of flowers. I like flowers and their fragrance. When I chose Wall's home, grandma had already planted vegetables. As for me, when she is not looking, I will pull out the vegetables and throw them into the corner to plant my flowers. However, my grandmother always found out and asked me, "Who pulled the vegetables my grandmother planted for Niu Niu?" I knew that my grandmother found out and admitted my mistake to her, but she didn't blame me, patted me on the head and left with a smile.
Cherry trees, sunflowers, persimmon trees and pear trees are planted in my yard, which are the sources of my snacks. Sometimes the cherry blossoms are really beautiful, but they also attract many fans-bees. I often climb to the top of the tree to catch bees, but they always bite me. At this time, I will cry for grandma's sympathy, but she thinks I deserve it, but she will still help me wipe the wound. With the heart of killing bees, I told my grandmother about the evil deeds of bees, and my grandmother would echo me with a smile.
Sometimes, I also help my grandmother pick vegetables, which are all grown by myself and are very nutritious. I picked two cucumbers, washed them with water, handed them to grandma, and ate cucumbers under the cherry tree with her, talking and laughing. ...
My happiness comes from the dedication of nature. In this humble village, my grandmother and I savored the happiness of nature together.
Who makes the buds of the branches quite fat?
Who let the willow spread its green branches?
Who let the frozen stream melt slowly and sing sweet songs?
In the morning, warm sunshine covers the earth, and golden sunshine fills every space. I walked on the faint path, observing the grass and trees around me. I don't know when the green buds on the branches are screaming, many and dense, and a big tree is decorated with light green. A breeze blew, and the green buds on the branches fell off in disorder one by one. Standing under the tree, I held my breath. This is green rain. They dance and spin in the air. After a while, the ground was covered with green buds, and the English that fell was like a big green carpet.
The trees have turned green. What about the sky? I walked in the street and looked up. It was a sunny day, and only a small white shell-like swimming cloud was floating gracefully in the Wan Li. In this boundless blue, there is no cloudy sky, and the days are short and the nights are long. It's it. It's coming.
I stepped on the lawn, and there were some flowers on it. They smiled at the sun and drank enthusiastically. Sunshine and fertile soil gave them life. Tough grass broke through the ground, as if giving someone a promise, eager to come out and visit the world.
Yes, it's coming, and spring has come quietly!
It is spring, which makes the tooth clusters of branches quite large;
Spring has arrived, and the willows stretch their green branches;
It's spring strips, which make the frozen stream melt slowly and sing sweet songs.
If you carefully observe the changes of plants around you, you can easily find that spring is very close to us; No, it's spring!
Eighth grade Chinese composition 8 Endless maternal love
Before Mother's Day, I received a short message from a classmate: Wind is the call of love, rain is the blending of feelings, and the person who loves you the most and cares about you the most will always be your mother. Prove that you love your mother with your actions! In an instant, my thoughts flew to my mother ... the thin figure, the loud voice, the weather-beaten hands, the sad face of the years and the muddy feet. ...
Mom gives people the impression that she is always in a hurry, and there will always be endless work.
She has been shouldering the burden of her family all her life, and devoted her life's love to our brothers and sisters, especially me. Busy makes her rush to eat, so that her figure is getting thinner and thinner. Whenever there is anything delicious, she leaves it to us and always says that she likes something light.
Mother's love is always poured silently. She never said that I love you children, but she gave meticulous care in her life. When I was in middle school, I stayed at school. Going home every weekend, I always add some dishes I like to eat every time I eat. When I am not at home, the food at home is very light. According to my mother, she only studied for a year, but she hoped that I would study hard and be a promising person in the future, instead of working in the fields all my life like her. I remember one day when I was in senior three, I helped her cook in the kitchen. We talked for a while, and then I went out to wash vegetables. My mother may not have noticed, but she is talking alone. Later, my elder sister said to me, "Wen, mom didn't realize you were out of the kitchen, but she was still saying that there was another saying,' Son, you should study hard and get into a good university'". Hearing this, I was so moved that I couldn't speak. When I went back to school this year, my mother insisted on helping me travel until she watched me get on the bus. When the car started, I looked back at her. She was still standing in the same position, staring at me.
My mother's every move affects me. Her diligence inspired me to study hard; She asked me to send delicious food to grandma, and at the same time taught me how to respect the elderly. In order to reduce my mother's worries, I learned to restrain myself and understand my mother, although I occasionally lose my temper with her. Sometimes when I see dirty clothes in the bucket, I take them to wash. When my mother is not at home, I will cook so that she can have a short rest when she comes home after a busy day. I know that everything I have done is insignificant, and I should be filial as a human being, but I can't find a more suitable way to express my love for my mother in return for her nurturing kindness.
When I cut her nails, I saw mud under them, layers of calluses, and criss-crossing cracks (cracks can make her feel unbearable pain in winter). My heart is sour and my eyes are red. My mother asked me what was wrong, and I said the sand was in my eyes. I often scratch her temples when I wash her hair, and the silver silk is particularly dazzling. I know that years have taken away her youth, and wrinkles have already gone hand in hand with her; Seeing her struggling with a blunt kitchen knife at home, I decided to scrimp and buy a Yangjiang "eighteen sons" from my classmates. This semester, I won the second prize in the chalk group and the third prize in the pen group in the "Third Comprehensive Skills Competition for Normal Students" of our department. Before receiving the prize, I dialed my home phone and told my mother the good news at the first time. ...
On Mother's Day, I listened to Zhanjiang People's Broadcasting Station. When the host asked the audience how much maternal love is, many people replied, "It's not heavy, it's heavier than Mount Tai, and there are endless ways." In my mind, there is only the message from my classmates: the person who loves you the most and cares about you the most will always be your mother.
The eighth grade Chinese composition 9 Sunset, the twisted twilight in Huang Yun.
Gradually stopped the lonely footsteps, I stopped at the edge of Gu Xiang, winding and deep. The heart has never stopped, but it is still cutting the anxiety and sadness that are constantly confused. The mid-term exam is coming, but as time goes by, I am at a loss. Is this my youth? I gave a wry smile.
The setting sun shed the last ray of afterglow, with a faint light. At a loss, I caught a glimpse of a wall of green vines.
It may be that I haven't seen a touch of fresh green in autumn for a long time, so I can't help walking towards the green vine. The cold wind is still blowing mercilessly, but this green vine is trying to climb the ancient wall, which is really a unique scenery. Although its leaves are uneven, they are all pointed upward, as if protesting against the boundless world and the cold wind of hunting. They are like drummers on the battlefield, facing the cold autumn with the most high-spirited attitude, playing brilliant life movements, transmitting upward strength to me and rejuvenating youthful vitality.
My heart is also moved by this vibrant green, and I can't help reaching out and touching this unyielding life. The beautiful stems and leaves lean outward, but they are just right. Even in autumn, they seem to be holding an upward posture and feeling the beauty of the ancient wall. Deep and shallow green, like the blood of a stem, is flowing. From the light green at the top to the dark green in the middle and then to the dark green at the bottom, it is like a gradual ink painting, full of natural vitality. Yes! Upward, is their strength, but also the belief of youth.
At that moment, I was a little surprised. Thin ivy, unexpectedly broke out such power. So, under the call of green, I looked at the roots. Its old roots are intertwined, grasping the soil at the root of the wall like a dragon, vigorous and powerful. Because it knows that it will carry a wall full of life, even if there are endless hardships behind it.
I am deeply shocked. I remember Zong Pu said, "What happens to flowers and people is unfortunate, but the long river of life is endless. Yes, who said that after being confused, it is not a new starting point for youth. "
Perhaps, like ivy, this is youth.
Eighth grade Chinese composition 10 former princess
I accidentally fell yesterday and thought it was nothing. But it still hurts today, so I went to grandma to get the medicated wine and asked her to wipe it for me.
Grandma wiped it, and her mouth was not forgiving. Look at you, you are so old and so careless. . "
I'm a little impatient, but my voice is still weak. "A little injury, what's the matter?"
Hearing this, my grandmother stopped to help me wipe the medicinal liquor and sighed gently. I can hardly hear its deep voice. "It's a pity that your grandfather is gone. Otherwise, let him treat you."
Grandpa! My nose suddenly turned sour.
Grandpa, the old man who has been making trouble for almost a month because I was born a girl, turns out to be the one who loves me the most and dotes on me the most.
Others say that grandpa is fierce and has a bad temper. In fact, I also know, because he often quarrels with his grandmother because of some trivial matters, and I grew up in this environment. But grandpa really loves me. As long as I can remember, he hasn't hit me, scolded me or spoiled me.
Grandpa was also very promising when he was young, and his family was fairly rich. Because my parents are away all the year round, I am the only child in my family, so almost all the food and play at home are mine.
At that time, I was a little princess.
At school, there is always a fat man bullying me. I remember he was a relative of my family.
Once, I don't know why I called him fat, so he pinched my face. When I got home, I cried and complained to my grandfather, saying why that fat man was.
Grandpa was very angry after hearing this. He is going to my school to find the teacher and the fat man's parents. After hearing the noise, grandma understood what happened and advised grandpa not to go. Grandpa snorted and refused.
He said, "My granddaughter, how can you let others bully you!"
Grandma sighed, shook her head and said, "I'll go." She knew that with her grandfather's character, she would definitely do it, and the teacher was afraid.
When I saw something bad, I stood on grandma's side. After a long struggle, grandpa finally compromised.
Grandpa loves drinking and smoking, but grandma always refuses to drink, saying it's bad for her health. So at that time, grandpa always gave me money to buy him wine while grandma was away. The rest of the money is mine.
When I was a child, I skinned myself and often fell down. Grandpa treats me.
At that time, I didn't know how happy I was, but I didn't know how to cherish it I just want to play with my eyes. Until I lost.
Grandpa is young and promising. He knows a lot and has a lot of knowledge, but it is his profound knowledge that ultimately hurts him. .
That day, the sky was as blue as ever. I was in that familiar home, but I couldn't find that familiar figure.