1. Thank you: First of all, thank you for your help. This will show that you value their help and make them more willing to help you.
2. Explain the reason: Explain the reason for your transfer. This may include your current school study problems, environmental problems or other reasons. Let the other person know about your situation, so that they can help you better.
3. Show sincerity: Show your sincerity and determination to transfer. It can be said that you have studied the target school and found it suitable for you.
4. Ask for help: explicitly ask the other party to transfer money for you. You can tell your needs directly, such as asking them to fill out an application form, provide a letter of recommendation or provide other help.
5. Keep communication: keep communication with each other and provide the information they need in time. This will enable them to better understand your situation and provide more effective help.
Here is an example:
Dear [name of the other party]:
I am writing to ask you to help me complete the transfer procedure from [current school] to [target school]. I am very grateful to you for helping me.
The reason why I want to transfer is because there are some learning problems in my current school, and I think [target school] is more suitable for my learning needs. I have studied [Target School] and am very interested in it.
I really hope you can help me complete this transfer procedure. I would appreciate it if you could help me fill out the application form, provide a letter of recommendation or provide other help.
Thanks again for helping me. Please feel free to let me know if you need any information.
thank you
[Your name]