I suggest you start to explain your ideas in the form of prose. I have some experience in prose and learn from other people's clever tricks.
1. The idea of paper writing
A, feel life, feel happiness
-Prose writing should have rich feelings.
This is a true story. A chubby ten-year-old man suddenly shouted at a table full of delicious food, "I want to die." I ate all the dishes. What's the point of living? " My mother was shocked and went to consult a psychologist. The doctor prescribed a patch of medicine "simple tea and light rice" and said, "This is a psychological obstacle-I can't feel happiness. There are still many people suffering from this disease. " After reading this story, we can't help feeling that my mother's heart is great, but her greatness has been lost by some excessive care and love. Sons and women are used to this kind of care and love, which is a terrible numbness. Xiaopang is born without knowing happiness, and doesn't understand maternal love at all, let alone happiness. Are there chubby students? To write a good composition, you must first have a sensitive heart. Now, the life of middle school students seems very boring. 3: 0 1, family (dormitory)-teacher-canteen. Coupled with the heavy pressure of exam-oriented education, it is easy to fall into a state of mechanical numbness. Students may say, what's the good feeling? However, if you can observe and feel carefully, there are many beautiful feeling waves in the sea of Wang Yang where you study and live. What matters is how to capture it sensitively. "Between teachers and students" is an eternal topic in school life. There are so many things between teachers and students in and out of class, and the friendship between teachers and students is so deep over time, but why not "take it lightly and teach by example"? Because I have become accustomed to it and turned a blind eye, I have never tasted it carefully. Students must remember several details in My Teacher written by Wei Wei, and how delicate the author's feelings are. He really wrote about the children's psychology and felt that Teacher Cai loved them, so Teacher Cai held the whip high and landed it gently on the slate. In fact, a teacher's gesture and devotion to a specific scene will give students a unique feeling, but you usually don't notice it.
"Parents' love" is also an enduring writing motif. The reason why Zhu Ziqing's "The Back" became a classic about family affection is that the author expressed his long-standing feelings for his father's love through ordinary communication between father and son, which was touching. Lev tolstoy said, "The feelings experienced by the author have infected the audience and listeners, which is art." Students, when you go out to travel and study and leave home, your parents, who don't want to say goodbye, are busy with this and that, lest you be thoughtless, maybe you will feel impatient or redundant. We must not be as numb as Xiao Pang. Everything our parents do is because they love you deeply. Maybe you have to wait until it's inconvenient to live outside before you can appreciate your parents' good intentions. Think about how happy you are for those children who have no parents. A look, a greeting, a gift and an ornament in life all contain their own unique meanings. If you feel it with your heart, your heart will guide your actions.
How can I enrich my feelings?
(1) Stimulate interest in things around you, pay attention to observation and feel with your heart. Observation can enrich your feelings. Life is dull, even boring, but if you can observe and feel it carefully, you will find that the colorful world was born in this dullness. Keeping a diary can capture the waves in daily life, make the mind sensitive and the emotions delicate.
(2) Awaken compassion. Because sympathy is the heavy hammer of heart tremor, sympathy is a kind of nature and the starting point of all people's feelings. It is not only aimed at the weak, but also the concern and pity for good things in essence. Shelley once helped a blind man. When a blind man begged, he said, "I have been blind since I was a child, and my life is very hard." As a result, I got very little. Shelley changed it for him. "Spring has come, but I can't see it." The giver is like a cloud. Because Shelley put himself in the other's shoes and imagined how painful it would be if he couldn't see with his eyes, it was a feeling, and Shelley inspired people's sympathy with his own feelings. Students, when you donate money for Project Hope, do you feel that helping others is a kind of happiness? Savor life carefully, and the ripples in your heart will ripple. The long river of life can be without wind, waves and roar, but it can't be without tiny ripples. Let them jump in the river of your life forever, feel life and feel happiness, which is the premise of conceiving prose.
B, who is dancing with color training?
-the internal clues of prose writing
After the summer rain, dark clouds fly away, the sun reappears, and beautiful rainbows often appear in the sky. Rainbow is formed by the reflection and refraction of sunlight in the air into water droplets. When it rains or after rain, the air is full of countless small water droplets that can refract sunlight. When sunlight passes through water droplets, it not only changes the direction of progress, but also decomposes into red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue and purple light. If the angle is right, it will become a rainbow of "long bridge lying waves" The size of water droplets in the air determines the bright colors of rainbows. The bigger the water drops in the air, the brighter the rainbow; The smaller the water drop, if it is as big as a fog drop and the lighter the red color, it will form white red.
How similar prose writing is to the formation of rainbow. When the emotional sunshine is high and strong, or sincere words are lingering, or warm and bright, or gloomy and tactful, they will be reflected and refracted in the water drops of life. If you cut in at the right angle, you will be able to write a composition as beautiful as a rainbow. Of course, the water drops in life refer to people, things, things and scenery that can reflect thoughts and feelings, otherwise it can only be a pale and powerless article like Bai Hong. An excellent prose is emotional, and this emotional sunshine-lyricism can be said to be the internal clue of prose. Without this feeling of sunshine, no matter how many and big the water droplets in life are, they can only be water droplets.
Emotional sunshine refers to sincere, natural and rich feelings. Prose writer Lin Fei said: "Prose creation is a literary style that pays attention to expressing inner experience and expressing emotions …" True feelings are the soul of prose. Zhao said: "Everyone has an emotional string in his heart, which will be touched by moving scenes in life from time to time. You can truly and vividly record the vibration of your inner strings in your own language, which will be a successful essay. Ba Jin's Random Thoughts is an excellent essay full of infinite vitality, which is reflected by the author's true feelings flowing from his heart. Look at the excellent works in the students' selections, whether it's Golden Prairie, Blessing, A Photo of Zhang Zhengui, not to mention Red Maple and Past Flowers, all of them are saturated with deep emotions. It is enough to show that any essay must have an internal emotional clue. Of course, we must achieve the unity of internal clues and external clues. External clues are writing clues (passage of time or space, plot development, etc. ), restricted by internal clues, always tightly buckle internal clues. For example, in the exercise "Mom and Dad", the young author conceived the article with his own growth experience as the external clue and his admiration and love for his parents as the internal clue, which is a narrative prose with sincere feelings.
Students, use your true feelings to penetrate flowers and trees, insects, fish, birds and animals, people and things, choose the right angle and express your true feelings in the right language, then you can "dance in the air with colorful exercises in your hands."
All roads lead to Rome.
-Writing papers should be flexible in form.
Students will never forget those football players who are flying on the court. They are all stunted and extraordinary, and their goal is to kick small football into the net. Among them,1.90m Argentine team batistuta jumped high and headed the ball into the net; Vieira of Italy, he shot long and kicked the ball into the net; Carlos, Brazil's gold left foot, lightning shot at close range; A Romanian team Haji volleyed the ball into the net four meters away; And Owen of England, gently pushed the ball to the bottom of the net. Stars can play with their heads up, their feet kicked, their long shots, their close attacks, their strength and their ingenuity. All roads lead to Rome.
Prose creation is also like playing football, and its form is free and flexible. As the famous writer Ling Ke said, "Prose is the freest, liveliest and most unconstrained of all literary styles. It can be a dagger and javelin, an exquisite world genre painting, or a serenade that gives people pleasure and rest. It can cheer, sing praises, shout, attack, ramble, pour out, sing softly, laugh and curse, and explain with witty remarks. It can be an exciting scenery, or it can flow quietly like a river in the moonlight. In the garden of prose, it is most suitable for the phenomenon of letting a hundred flowers blossom. "
But no matter what kind of structure or expression is adopted, its purpose is clear, that is, the article should be "clear-cut" and "more emotional" and like a window. "Through it, people can see farther and higher, see more things, and trigger deeper thinking and reverie." Prose can be expressed in narrative, descriptive, lyrical, argumentative and explanatory texts, and an article can focus on any one or two of them. For example, the Wisteria Waterfall in Zong Pu is a model of comprehensive utilization.
The structure, genre and theme of prose are also flexible and diverse. For example, Lu Xun's Mr. Fujino, Ba Jin's We Meet Commander Peng and Bing Xin's Little Orange Lantern all adopt a coherent narrative structure that changes with time and place; For example, Wei Wei's Who's the Loveliest Man, Qin Mu's Lyric on the Country Altar and Liu's Lamp are all combined structures with a red line strung by pearls of life, but they all express the main idea well. In the new period, people call it "the spring of prose art", and prose breaks through the creative mode of "matter-emotion-reason". In recent years, prose is a stream-of-consciousness structure influenced by "stream-of-consciousness" novels. That is, "free association" and "lyric monologue" caused by objective things or situations. For example, in the rain, I saw dandelions, Tokyo Nighttalk, Zhao's Soul of Poetry and so on. The "Youth Monologue" initiated by Cao Minghua is especially popular with young students. As far as the subject matter is concerned, it is the true revelation of one's own life experience, such as the selection of songs "The Beauty of Red Brown" and "The Coming of Youth". The author explores the multipolarization of self, including the joy of life, the expression of temperament, the epiphany of life and the deduction of philosophy. This essay style, as Huang Yufeng, a special-grade teacher, said: "The characteristics and writing of essays lie in the word" Sui ". Put a pen on a whim and stop there. Whether there is a theme or not, whether the structure is complete or not, whether the language is accurate or not, let your inner feelings flow freely ... ",can you say" There are laws to make, but not to write? " Friends, gather full of passion in the details of life and describe the sadness and suffering of life in a sincere tone. Absorb the essence of predecessors' creation, create your own unique writing ideas, and show your talents and spirit like a star, then you will be able to write articles that touch yourself and readers, and firmly believe that all roads lead to Rome.