Dear Chris:
I finally decided to go to the United States for further study after graduating from high school.
I have been longing to go to America for two main reasons. One is to experience American culture, and the other is to broaden your horizons in this country. But I'm a little worried. My English is a little poor, especially my spoken English. I'm afraid I will have difficulty in communication. Besides, I may be under heavy pressure from college courses.
I hope you can give me some practical advice.
Looking forward to your reply.
your
Joe (name)
Test analysis: This is a letter composition, asking to write a letter to your American friend Chris about studying in the United States. The main points of the article are basically given, but they are not very specific. Candidates should explain the main points clearly and expand and enrich the content. In the process of writing, they should pay attention to the use of advanced vocabulary and advanced sentence patterns, such as stressed sentences and inverted sentences, to make the article more advanced. At the same time, when enumerating measures, we should use appropriate conjunctions such as: first, second, idea, what else, etc. In this way, the article looks very organized and smooth. Don't be wordy in writing this article, try to be concise.
Highlights show that the language of the model essay is concise, and some good phrases and sentences are applied: make up your mind to do …, be eager, have difficulties to do …, have difficulties and sufferings, and look forward to hope. On the one hand, you can experience American culture, and on the other hand, you can broaden your horizons in this country. This sentence uses predicative clauses, and the model essay uses words like ideal to make the article more coherent.