I have moved, and I would appreciate it if I could update my personal information.
I'm an English major, and I've studied foreign trade correspondence and telecommunications, all of which are relatively formal.
Especially the expression of thanks in the second sentence is very polite. Moving is more authentic, not to mention the house.
The recommendation of the first sentence is in the form of nouns, but English will be more formal if Chinese verbs are converted into names. It is also a translation skill that translation learners must master. I hope what I said can help you.