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Nine Hot Topics in Senior High School Entrance Examination Writing

The ninth hot topic in senior high school entrance examination writing

[Author: repost | repost from: China Teaching Resources Network | Click: 6 16 | Update: 2006-4- 19 | Entry: Li Wensheng]

The ninth hot topic in senior high school entrance examination writing

-Exploring philosophy from the perspective of "problems"

First, answer the question of life.

Hot spot test site docking

The new curriculum standard emphasizes: "Writing should be sincere, and strive to express one's unique feelings and real experiences about nature, society and life.

There are various forms of composition propositions about life, focusing on topics. Candidates can generally write their true feelings and experiences in this respect, and reflect life problems from a certain aspect, especially those candidates who are good at observation, active in thinking and full of innovative spirit, and often can write amazing works. Of course, the common mistake in this respect is that it is difficult for candidates to choose a suitable starting point, and they often talk big and empty words. Argumentative essays, in particular, are full of great principles and few specific contents, and will not ignore small things, let alone small things. Of course, such an article is unconvincing and credible.

Full score composition presentation

? ? Tea fragrance? life

A candidate in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province

You look at the clouds for a while/at me for a while/at you from a distance/at me/at the clouds very closely.

-"Far and Near" from Gu Cheng

I don't know when, my grandfather and I formed this kind of four-eyed, but silent diaphragm.

Grandpa loves tea very much, and his love is deeply rooted.

In the yard in the afternoon, the sun is always so bright and the sky is always so blue. Grandpa always likes to lie on that old cane chair with his eyes closed in ignorance, and the old cat under his knee occasionally stretches. Such a picture is always so beautiful and warm.

I step into the yard with tears in my eyes, which is the only thing I can do after being bullied by children every time. I asked my grandfather for help, but I never dared to say anything. How I wish to get grandpa's concern, even if it's just comfort and a smile, but in fact he would never do so. He was still lying with his eyes closed, and finally my tears could not help but flow down and "click" fell on my skirt. He just let the cane chair make a faint sound of "squeaking". I looked at him stupefied, but he got up slowly, took a sip of tea, and then entered the room, leaving the cup of tea still fragrant, and I was crying. ...

Is tea really that supreme? Is tea more important than any relative? Don't drink tea ...

So when I was a child, I alienated my grandfather with that big question mark, and I wouldn't ask him for help even if I encountered difficulties.

Finally one day, I couldn't hold back my doubts. When grandpa is not at home, I hold his sacred teapot. The soft rim of the cup touched my lips. Without hesitation, I closed my eyes and poured the sticky liquid. It is a kind of retro tea, warm and impacting every taste bud of mine. I threw up. What is that? It's bitter, really bitter. Grandpa loves so firmly that he can even ignore his relatives. Is this the case?

So in the question mark of childhood, I am deeply puzzled and deeply sorry.

The afternoon after grandpa died, it was still beautiful in spring. He left quietly, leaving nothing but half a steaming cup of tea. I picked up the cup of tea, and the moment I touched my lips, tears fell unconsciously. I don't know whether the smell of tea makes people cry or grandpa's smiling face.

Tea is really bitter, and it has been bitter to the heart, but the fragrance floating is even more nostalgic. I didn't cry that afternoon. Grandpa's tea taught me a lot in silence, including learning, including being strong, and savoring life!

It turns out that the unlocking of the question mark in my childhood is the beginning of my silent progress in life, and it will also be a beacon for my future pursuit of success. I like the smell of tea. I like "?" In my life. .

Highlight series

◆ The old man thought and thought. Can children understand this profound explanation? No, absolutely not. But soon he thought of this sentence again, and he finally spoke: "For a doctor, a moment is an opportunity to save a patient's life; For frontline soldiers, that moment is the choice of life and motherland; For mediocre people, moment is synonymous with another kind of time, which is synonymous with week, day and month. ...

Listen, listen, the child nodded puzzled. He suddenly ran to the old man again and asked excitedly, "What about you? What time is it? " The old man is busy thinking and staring at the ground. Suddenly, he looked up and saw a child walking in front of him playfully, and a big truck was speeding by. at that moment ...

(A candidate from Foshan, Guangdong Province, "The Significance of Examples")

◆ Deng Xiaoping thinks about the road direction of China under the torture of bullpen and inhumanity, Helen? Keller wrote "If you give me three days of light" in the darkness that was almost abandoned by others. Their lives are like pearls. Although there are cracks, they can't hide their brilliance. My short life of 16 years has also gained a lot of enlightenment from setbacks. Every time I can't extricate myself from setbacks, I will lower my head and reflect on my own shortcomings. Why do I always struggle with setbacks? Why can't you cheer up? I also often pick my roses.

Life is like climbing a mountain, and everyone wants to "climb to the top to have a look". Whether you tremble at the foot of the mountain, sigh halfway up the mountain or enjoy the magnificent scenery of life at the peak depends on how you face setbacks. In the face of setbacks, we must learn from experience, face up to setbacks and overcome setbacks in order to win the brilliant spring of life.

(A candidate from Taizhou, Zhejiang Province, "Frustration is not a problem")

Writing reference and innovation

The problem of life has always been the focus of attention. No matter who is where and when, it is inseparable from his life orientation, but sometimes it is diluted, sometimes it is dense, sometimes it is conscious, and sometimes it is not concerned. When you arrive at the examination room, you only need to write an article about life, and it will be clear. The manifestations of life problems vary not only from person to person, but also from text to text. As long as it is appropriate and reasonable, as long as it is unconventional and creative, it will be praised by the marking teacher and given high marks. A perfect composition and two wonderful clips selected above are rare masterpieces. You see, the similarity between the two is that they both contain profound questions, both rhetorical and self-questioning, which are thought-provoking, in line with the characteristics of the topic of "problem" and people's concern about "life problems", which is the main embodiment of keeping close to the topic and the basic premise of getting high marks.

Interpretation of articles on life issues pays great attention to the typicality of material selection, the exquisiteness and innovation of techniques, which enables us to get a breakthrough and innovative development rating on the basis of basic scores. Look, "? Tea fragrance? Life ",through the drink of" tea ",shows the characteristics of grandpa and shows my understanding and thinking about life problems. This kind of understanding and thinking is from shallow to deep, and it is progressive step by step with the growth of age. I grew up in this kind of thinking, which shows that I have a clever idea and a fine selection of materials. "The Meaning of Moment" explains the meaning of "moment" through the dialogue between the old man and the child and through concrete examples, which is the inevitable result of life accident and full of life significance. "Frustration is not a problem" vividly and profoundly reveals the unique experience and thinking of candidates on life by comparing "I" with great men and using metaphors, which is very convincing.

Outward bound training design

1. Title: Have a good trip.

Tip: After graduating from junior high school, we should have a self-review and evaluation of the road we have traveled in life. How to go in the future depends on your own efforts. We should combine reality with imagination, and express our desire to take the road of life through concrete examples, which are sensible and narrative.

2. Title: Life is like this.

Tip: first fill in an appropriate metaphor on the horizontal line, such as tea, song, water, road, etc. And reveal the true meaning of life with specific reasons. On the basis of narrative description, discuss and express your feelings. It can also be written as lyric prose or philosophical sketches. Always pay attention to and convey the figurative meaning of the title.

3. The goal is the direction of life. Do you have a direction in life? What's your goal? With the old life goal, knowing what he is doing, why he is doing it, and to what extent, his life will be busy and full, and his life will be full and colorful without any regrets and problems.

Please write an article of not less than 600 words on the topic of "Life and Goals" in combination with your own experiences, experiences and feelings. The topic is self-made and the style is not limited. Tip: We should pay attention to the significance of goals to life, set up lofty ideals and strive to realize life ideals.

Second, explore the philosophy of life

Hot spot test site docking

The new curriculum standard emphasizes "gradually forming a positive attitude towards life and correct values", which requires us to constantly explore and think about the serious philosophical topic of "life". Under the guidance of the new curriculum standards, the latest textbooks published by People's Education Edition and Jiangsu Education Edition all pay attention to the compilation of "philosophy of life", and the contents related to outlook on life, world outlook and values have increased significantly. The determination and change of new curriculum standards and new textbooks are also clearly reflected in middle school examination papers, which gives us candidates a clear writing orientation, that is, we should pay attention to thinking about the topic of life, try our best to explore the philosophy, and then get inspiration and encouragement.

The composition topic of philosophy of life is mainly topic, and at the same time, it provides appropriate situation or guidance language, which is intended to attract our attention and thinking; Some propositional and semi-propositional compositions also directly or indirectly convey the connotation of life philosophy, such as "facing setbacks". Philosophy of life is a very broad concept. As a junior high school student, you don't need to think deeply and extensively, just talk about it with your own life and study experience and the people and things you have heard and seen. When writing, we should start from a small place and see the big picture from a small place, so as to produce the effect that a drop of water can reflect the sun.

Full score composition presentation

The brevity and eternity of life

A candidate in Chongqing

Life is short, for tangible life, whether it is a great man with a long history or a traitor with a thousand years' notoriety. But life is eternal, which is based on intangible life, regardless of whether he built Epang Palace 1000 years ago.

A craftsman, or an ordinary person among all living beings.

What disappears is tangible life, and what never disappears is the spiritual power left over from historical civilization, which often shows the strength of history and the value of life.

-inscription

Magnificent, brilliant and solemn ...

This is the strong feeling brought by the Terracotta Warriors.

Strolling by the Terracotta Warriors and Horses Tunnel, I saw that the Terracotta Warriors and Horses intuitively reproduced the grand occasion of Qin Jun array with their lifelike bodies on nearly 10,000 square meters of land. Countless warriors, thousands of Ma Benteng, thousands of people, each different, different emotions. This is indeed a miracle of the world.

Looking at those vivid faces, history and reality keep alternating in my mind, and my thoughts go back to thousands of years ago.

At the end of the Warring States period, there were frequent wars, and there were many fires, causing untold suffering. In this troubled times, a unique emperor was born. He is the commander-in-chief of these warriors-Qin Shihuang. Ten years' war, China's reunification and the creation of the world. After a great success, Qin Shihuang, who was afraid of death by nature, led hundreds of officials and ministers to climb Mount Tai to worship Zen, and personally went to the East China Sea to hunt whales and seek medicine in the ocean. Five cruises, crowding round, mighty, he wasted people and money just to find an immortal elixir. Unfortunately, the most ironic thing is that Qin Shihuang, who was in his prime, died on the fifth cruise, and such a great emperor could not escape this fate. History seems to be joking with Qin Shihuang. More than ten years after his death, the Qin empire he built was also wiped out in a fire in Xiang Yu. Looking back at the long river of history, Qin Shihuang is like a meteor across the sky, leaving only a few fleeting light marks in his memory.

The sun shone on the pit of Terracotta Warriors through the glass of the museum, and my thoughts came to an abrupt end. Looking around, the warriors are still mighty and stand upright, which was a gesture thousands of years ago. They look dignified, as if telling people a dusty history. Although after the baptism of wind and fire, the weapons in their hands have long since disappeared, and their colors have long since faded, how can they not cover up the rich historical deposits in them, and how can they deny their brilliance? Ah, the Terracotta Warriors! For many years, you have endured the weight of the soil, the erosion of water for thousands of years, and the tempering of fire, but you just straightened up and spread a piece of mud on your head and reappeared in front of the world. You shocked us with your clay body, and you shocked the world with your eternal spirit. And Qin Shihuang? After all, he didn't live long, but he turned into a pile of dust. As soon as the wind blows, it disappears. All he can leave is a vague picture and a short glorious history in historical records. But you let life last forever, because when you were molded into clay, you already melted into the blood of Qin people. You are the embodiment of the spirit of Qin people and the continuation of their lives.

When the sun sets, I suddenly look back, and the afterglow of the setting sun is sprinkled on the soldiers and figures. It seems that there is an ancient story behind every silent warrior and figure, and it seems that there is an immortal soul under every golden armor. Then, the soldiers woke up and explained to people the definition of short and eternal life. ...

Highlight series

The body dies, but the spirit lives on. Don't stop in the garden, because there are no unbeaten flowers; Don't indulge in real happiness, because there is no inexhaustible wealth; Don't dream of immortality, because there is no spiritual support, just a walking corpse. It is better to be an epiphyllum and float away at the most beautiful time, leaving only a wisp of fragrant soul.

(Chongqing examinee "be a epiphyllum, but the fragrance remains unchanged")

My heart almost stopped beating when I heard the news. If I were more careful in the exam; If the teacher's hands are loose when marking papers; If ... suppose thousands, but it doesn't change the result-I failed, and I missed the trip to the ideal high school. Little mistake! A small mistake ...

(A candidate in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, "Thank you, Little Mistake")

I lay quietly on the bamboo chair, thinking about the lost history. How many people bent down further? Some people say how long is a step? An inch? A foot? A foot? When I learned about the rise and fall of history, I didn't know how many people wanted to make history further: to make Sun Yat-sen a "prophet" for the sake of the world, and to make Fan Zhongyan "worry about the world first" for the sake of the people. In fact, "Ying Ying Kung Fu" will never cross the natural barrier of life, only dare to think and act, mostly for creatures, for the nation and for the world, so that ever-changing changes can go on forever. ...

(Changzhou, Jiangsu, candidate "Think One Step More for the World")

Writing reference and innovation

How to write articles on philosophy of life, how to write thoroughly, how to write brilliantly, how to be novel and unique. The perfect composition and three wonderful clips selected above have given us clear enlightenment and successful demonstration. Structurally, A Short and Eternal Life begins with an "inscription", explaining the main idea and pointing out the title. The text takes the thinking and feeling of "I" as the red line, makes a very unique evaluation of Qin Shihuang and "Qin people", and integrates its own thinking and understanding of "life" into it. This kind of structure, clear content and tight series connection is one of the secrets of winning the composition in the senior high school entrance examination.

The thinking and expression of our examinee's philosophy of life can not be separated from dialectical view, dichotomy and development view. However, it is often difficult to choose the entry point and explore from a small angle, and some even rack their brains to find a good prescription. After reading the perfect composition and the above three wonderful fragments, you will wake up like a dream. "Life is Short and Eternal" starts from the perspective of historical relics, that is, "Terracotta Warriors", which is dignified and impressive. The fragment of "think more for the world" also starts from historical facts and rises to a rational height, highlighting the significance of "for the world". "Thank you, little mistake" starts with the tiny number of 0.27, "To be an epiphyllum, only the fragrance remains unchanged" starts with the short fragrance of the epiphyllum. It can be seen that their starting point can't be smaller, and the problems they can touch are very big, deep and far away, and their philosophy is full of charm. No wonder the marking teacher praised it.

Outward bound training design

1. Title: My Life Motto

Tip: first of all, you should explain what "my life motto" is, or you can always get this motto at the end and ask questions; The main part in the middle can be lyrical discussion of the motto, dialectical thinking of argumentation, and narrative of efforts and costs to realize the motto.

2. Topic: In front of you

Tip: Finish the topic first. You can fill in the words "honor", "achievement", "difficulty" and "danger" in the horizontal line. The focus should be on the attitude, thinking and performance of "I" in this situation, that is, the content of "how to do it". You can have a philosophical discussion, you can express your feelings, you can describe my words and deeds, but you should embody the philosophy of life.

3. A perfect life is just a goal to pursue, and this perfection is always relative, unattainable but forever.

In sight, attract people to follow. A rich life lies in elutriation, tempering, accumulation and discovery.

Requirements: Please write an article of no less than 600 words on the topic of "Life is", with self-defined content and unlimited genre.

Tip: Words such as "elutriation, tempering, accumulation and discovery" can be filled in the horizontal line of the topic, or other people can be selected to show the relationship between students and the selected words and reveal some philosophy and value of life.

Third, enter the scientific community.

Hot spot test site docking

In the fourth article of the "general goal", the new curriculum standard requires the majority of junior high school students to "gradually develop a scientific attitude of seeking truth from facts and advocating true knowledge, and initially master scientific thinking methods". It can be seen that "science" mentioned here is no longer limited to scientific knowledge in a narrow sense, but refers to all scientific ideas, scientific attitudes and scientific methods. From this broad point of view, many essay questions of senior high school entrance examination in recent years have embodied this spirit, for example, The Distance from the Soul in Hangzhou in 2004 and Faith and Success in Henan Province are all permeated with strong scientific ideas. Moreover, the trend of this composition proposition will continue to strengthen, because everything in the scientific world is full of eternal philosophy, and once people's interest enters this world, it will produce infinite wisdom and strength. It is precisely because of this that "rejuvenating the country through science and education" and "saving the country through science" have risen to a kind of consciousness and a strong voice. Candidates' writing practice in this field is generally successful, and they can express their scientific attitude, but their mistakes are also obvious. They often talk about science on the basis of science, and in a narrow sense, the articles are difficult to extend and expand, and the width is not enough and the depth is limited, which affects the strength and credibility of the theme. Therefore, in the process of preparing for the exam, we should be good at cultivating our scientific attitude and spirit, use scientific thinking methods as much as possible, strengthen training in this area, pay attention to this information, and strive to fight a well-prepared battle.

Full score composition presentation

2 1 century scientific and technological inventions

An examinee in Yulin, Guangxi

I have purchased all the materials since the holiday, and worked hard for more than 20 days and nights according to the design drawings in 2 1 century scientific and technological inventions. Today, I finally finished the task-JBJ space-time production is completed and the preliminary test is successful.

Everyone knows that fluids such as air and water will move from places with high pressure to places with low pressure. The principle of space-time transmission of objects is the same-the specific energy of human body is high or low. Under special circumstances, as long as the specific energy difference between two spacetime reaches me within one ten thousandth of a second, spacetime transmission will occur.

The heart of this space-time machine is an elliptical sP laser accelerator. The nuclear battery provides energy for its 7Mw laser gun, and the ultra-high energy laser beam generated can accelerate elementary particles to the speed of light in an instant. After a series of bombardment, collision and fission, an anti-electron (that is, a positively charged electron, the volume of which is only one tenth of that of an electron) is produced, which is a particle that can locally increase the specific energy of the human body.

I was concentrating on my work when it suddenly got dark. "My goodness!" A big living dinosaur is coming towards me step by step ... I desperately want to film it, but that guy is really ungrateful. He just stepped on my body. If he hadn't worn a special spacesuit, he would have turned into a meat pie-I was buried underground and my camera was crushed.

"This is a very good mode of transportation." I had a brainwave, started the adsorption function of the spacesuit and rode on the big dinosaur. It still hasn't found me. Keep going. The big dinosaur came to the lake to drink water. There are many dinosaurs here. Can be named: Liang Long, Lei Long, Stegosaurus, plesiosaur, pterosaur ... and smaller ostrich dinosaurs.

I didn't miss this good opportunity, and soon got the DNA of more than 30 kinds of dinosaurs.

After leaving dinosaurs, I saw some early mammals, but I couldn't name them.

When I saw Tyrannosaurus rex biting dinosaur meat, I felt hungry-I sat in a time machine and vomited my breakfast, so I grabbed a piece of food from Tyrannosaurus rex's mouth with a laser gun, picked some dry wood and lit a fire ... This lunch was both interesting and delicious.

During the 83 minutes of this trip, I brought back many specimens of great scientific value, but I just couldn't take out the laboratory-they would automatically return to the original time and space, otherwise I would definitely dedicate them to the Institute of Paleontology.

I must keep this DNA for my own use. Maybe I'll clone a little dinosaur.

Highlight series

"Knock, knock ..." Someone knocked at the door. I ran to open the door and saw an uncle standing outside with a mask and disinfectant in his hand. "You are ..." "I'm a hygienist sent by the neighborhood committee to disinfect the house." As soon as I heard this, I quickly let him in. While spraying my house with disinfectant, he said to me, "Pay attention to hygiene, often open the window for ventilation, wash your hands more, and don't forget to wear a mask when you go out." SARS is making such a big noise, don't be careless. "I replied, watching him eliminate toxins, and asked with a little concern," Uncle, you said that only by doing this can SARS not bother us? " "That depends on our prevention and control well. There is nothing to worry about. Now that technology is so developed, we should believe in science, shouldn't we? " I nodded heavily.

Yes, you have to believe in science, nothing can't be overcome by technology! I applaud the human attitude of believing in science!

(A candidate from Chifeng, Inner Mongolia, "Scientific Prevention of SARS")

The following spring, I came to the orchard again. I found that almost all fruit trees have sprouted new buds like fluff, just like an appointment. Those furry green plants just broke free from their mother's branches last night, and they saw the world for the first time. Each piece is as green as a transparent green crystal. They open their eyes with trembling, which makes people deeply feel the breath of spring. There are two dead trees in the corner, and the brown trunk is dying.

Looking at the vibrant orchard and these two dead trees, I suddenly understood the meaning of "survival of the fittest". Only those trees that can stand the test of winter can laugh at the long river of life. In fact, people are not like this. Everyone will suffer different setbacks and hardships. This is the law of nature and society. And we should believe in "survival of the fittest" and change ourselves!

(Yichang, Hubei, a candidate "survival of the fittest")

Wei Zhou asked in surprise, "Where is your home?" The white weirdo said, "We are people living in the KM galaxy. My name is Kobe. The KM galaxy is 3 billion light years away from the earth. " Zhou Wei couldn't help crying: "3 billion light years? When I get to your galaxy, I will be old! " The alien Kabi grinned: "Don't worry, the speed of our spaceship far exceeds the speed of light. For it, 3 billion light years is just a short trip. "

Wei Zhou gradually dispelled his fear and began to talk to people from other planets. Before he realized it, the spaceship had landed on a beautiful planet. Kabi opened the hatch and said to Wei Zhou, "This is KMl 4, the center of the KM galaxy."

(A candidate from Yulin, Guangxi, "Alien Travel")

Writing reference and innovation

The composition with the theme of "scientific world" is rich in connotation and extensive in extension, covering natural science and social science, tangible and intangible, and so on. For a composition topic, it is often more specific and clear. When writing an article, the materials used, the viewpoints held and the knowledge mentioned should be more specific and realistic. According to the model essays and wonderful clips selected above, we must first choose a good starting point. This point should be small, new, clever and easy to use. For example, the scientific and technological inventions in the 20th century (2 1) started from the sci-fi perspective of "time travel", involving both theory and practice. There are both objective facts and subjective thinking. Traveling to the ancient magical world of Jurassic with brand-new theories and equipment has a novel and ingenious starting point and conveys a certain degree.