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No gorgeous colors, no fighting charm, peanut blossoms alone in a corner of the field. Tian Tian is weak, quietly fulfilling the promise of life. Early in the morning, bathed in morning dew, absorbing the purest air; In the evening, reflecting the sunset, I don't give up and absorb the sunshine. Her flowers are not just for display, a flower is a kind of life. She has never broken her contract, and there will be as many peanuts as there are flowers.
Loyalty to life is vividly displayed here. She always tries to absorb nutrients and preserve nutrients for her fruits, which is awe and respect for life. Only by respecting life can we cherish life more and cherish life.
I hope I am a peanut flower, and I will spare no effort to fulfill my promise to life. We don't need to lie about life, otherwise, it will only be you who will get hurt in the end. Life is serious, peanuts always remind me of it. Don't joke about your life. I still remember "Vanilla" written by Qu Yuan, which still exudes a strong fragrance. "Although I died nine times, I still have no regrets." I still remember the chrysanthemums in Tao Qian, blooming at the foot of Nanshan and beside the bamboo fence, free and easy. But who forgot Yu Qian's "The Story of the Stone"? Steel bars are made of iron and bones. What about you? I don't want to live in brilliant nothingness, I just want to be an ordinary peanut flower in the wilderness. Even if there is no fragrance, I should be worthy of life-I can't idle away my time, I want to develop hard, I don't want brilliant achievements, I want my flowers to bear full fruits. If so, my life is enough.
When I first read Cauliflower, it was Jia Pingwa who told stories and I enlightened me. But now that I think about it, cauliflower and peanut flower are not much different. Although ordinary, they all have tenacious vitality and are amazing. Perhaps a flower is a life, and it is inevitable to appear, but the page of life must be filled in by ourselves. Some people want to write life as a vast work, but others want to write life as a beautiful essay. Be careful whether it is vast or not. Otherwise everything is empty.
I only hope that my life is like a peanut flower, ordinary but persistent, and I will not waste my time.
I hope I am a peanut flower, linking my lifelong loyalty with my own dribs and drabs.
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At the beginning of the article, the author praised the peanut flower for its "no bright colors, no fighting charm" and its "quiet and light, silently fulfilling its commitment to life", highlighting its "ordinary" spirit. Then, under the "spiritual sustenance" of Qu Yuan, Tao Qian and Yu Qian, he highlighted his desire to be an ordinary peanut flower. Then he further expressed his thoughts on "peanut flower" and "ordinary but persistent" with the * * between Jia Pingwa's "Cauliflower and Peanut Flower". The last paragraph of the article echoes the inscription from a distance, which once again strengthens his thoughts and feelings of hoping for peanuts, with rigorous structure and strong feelings.
Near the autumn leaves)
I walked away gently, leaving a real back.
Walking alone in the cold wind, I approached the autumn leaves, quietly and slowly, for fear of interrupting the last effort of this lovely life. Fortunately, it still rustles. Finally, it found me, and its voice gradually quieted down. I raised my head gently, and in this silent moment, we met. However, the lovely and agile autumn leaves don't rest in the cold wind? I raised my questioning eyes. Autumn leaves say nothing, but they still rustle, which seems stronger than before.
Autumn leaves keep dancing, as if to start a new spring of life. Yes, just for the truth of that life. Walking, I seem to appreciate the charm of autumn leaves. I stay in the autumn leaves, and I like its dancing charm; I stayed in the autumn leaves and was moved by its dedication; I cherish the autumn leaves and appreciate their still calm pulse at the moment of death. At a loss, there are too many similarities in history: the great poet Qu Yuan entrusted his patriotism to "vanilla"; Tao Qian put his aloof personality in Chrysanthemum; Yu Qian entrusted the pursuit of honesty to Lime-there is always an unyielding backbone behind them. Yes, a person with active pursuit often has images containing his thoughts and feelings. I chose autumn leaves in the vicissitudes of life.
I love autumn leaves, after all, there is an eternal dedication monument in its beautiful falling; I love autumn leaves and am surprised by their perseverance. I love autumn leaves and praise their vision for the future and elegance today. Autumn leaves are also suitable for human beings. Nowadays, fierce competition makes some people depressed, numb and even degenerate. Faced with the cruel world, some people have lost the direction of life and fallen into the abyss of no return. The same environment, different realms. Isn't the spirit displayed by autumn leaves exactly what you and I need? I hope everyone can really live a life of autumn leaves.
Autumn leaves are always silent, but always strong; Autumn leaves still fall, but they are always beautiful; Autumn leaves are always lonely, but they live out their true selves.
Facing the autumn leaves, I get it. Don't dwell on the past, hold your head high and describe your future path incisively and vividly, no matter ordinary or brilliant, just want to win the praise of life.
Gently, I left, destined to have a new year's life.
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In poetic language, this paper expresses the reason for choosing autumn leaves as the object of pinning one's thoughts and feelings through "approaching autumn leaves" and "communicating with autumn leaves", and perfectly integrates one's life pursuit with autumn leaves, which is very suitable for the topic.
Wild chrysanthemum love
When autumn comes, wild chrysanthemums grow wildly.
This is a crazy progress. Yesterday it was three or two branches, but today it has become a cluster; Yesterday was just a light green, but today it has given off a dazzling yellow light.
Growing there casually, even if it is only a small gap in the field, will make its copper yellow flowers shoot golden light and spray their own flowers without reservation, creating a terrible miracle.
The creator is always so unfair, but always so fair. He throws you to a corner of the world at will, but he gives you an extraordinary temperament-to move forward like this.
The arrival of cold did not conquer the beauty of wild chrysanthemum, but made her bloom more colorful and beautiful. In the field, on the levee, the patches of gold are the alloy of the sun and the moon, which is dazzling and makes people tremble.
Everyone will applaud this golden color, and at the same time, they can't help but sigh: Why are such beautiful flowers just blooming in the wilderness? Perhaps this is the charm of wild chrysanthemum. Just as her name-wild chrysanthemum, a large wilderness, can show her spirit, that kind of wild spirit, let her have the whole wilderness, she can show her color and fragrance.
I thought about life.
No matter where the creator wants you to live, you should have the spirit of wild chrysanthemum. Don't feel sorry for yourself in adversity, dare to make progress, dare to advance-to struggle, to strive for, to fully display yourself like a wild chrysanthemum, so that you can have the whole of Yuan Ye and play your own life March. Because winners only belong to those who dare to say "no" to adversity like wild chrysanthemums.
Vanilla is Qu Yuan's patriotic and sincere lodging;
Chrysanthemum is the lodging of Tao Yuanming's aloof quality;
Lotus is the lodging of Zhou Dunyi's noble character of not admiring wealth;
Why don't you push the wildness of life into the wild chrysanthemum and let it compose the music of life for you?
Put your life in the wild chrysanthemum, don't forget to move forward in the predicament, conquer the whole wilderness, and then move towards success.
Only you, wild chrysanthemum, can advance into the wild!
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The first half of the article focuses on the noble quality of wild chrysanthemum, while the second half is about life, calling on us to have the spirit of wild chrysanthemum, "dare to forge ahead" in adversity, dare to fully show ourselves, and then naturally come to the conclusion: "Put your life in wild chrysanthemum, never forget to advance in difficulties, conquer the whole wilderness, and then succeed." The article is lyrical, sincere and touching.
Love mountain forest
The cicada is restless, the forest is quiet, but Tonamiyama is more secluded. Have you ever been to the mountains? Have you ever breathed the air mixed with flowers in the forest? Have you ever seen the beauty of butterflies and birds flying?
The world of flowers and flowers is full of material desires. In the shopping mall, intrigue; In official career, intrigue; In love, I linger. Everyone is enthusiastic. At this time, what you need most is not money, power and beauty, but peace! However, not every place can get peace. The best place to go is the mountains, where you will get the feeling of returning to nature.
The sky in the forest is blue, light blue, pure blue, so blue that you can't feel any impurities. Only when birds fly by will you suddenly realize that it is a blue sky. Oh! The sky can also have such a wide screen, can people's hearts be so broad? So, I know tolerance, because I want to measure that canopy with my heart.
The grassland in the mountain forest is green, thick green and incredible green, just like a child who just learned to paint accidentally knocked over a green paint bottle. Nothing is more pleasant than lying on the lawn. At this time, I feel very reliable and dependent. Then I understand that everyone is lonely, but also happy. When you are trapped in the secular world, you can still come to the mountains and seek a support to heal your lonely wounds as long as you like.
Animals in the mountains are happy, too. Otherwise, how can butterflies keep playing? How can cicadas and frogs compete all night? How can rabbits go to the river to dress up every day? Oh! Here, I heard the sounds of nature and harmonious music, and my soul left my body and merged into flowers, birds, fish and insects.
Ah, mountains, mountains! Can you hear my affectionate cry? Are you willing to accept me as a nobody who escaped from filth? Would you like me, a secular person, to join your heaven? Although I am not qualified, I have been pursuing it! You see, there are my crooked footprints on the dangerous beach leading to the forest waterfall, my hymn echoes on the mountain path, and fresh patterns decorated by me on the green blanket-if this can't touch your heart, please allow me to leave my soul here and give my true feelings to my friends in the forest.
Love is a mountain forest, what more can a husband ask for!
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In this paper, my thoughts and feelings are pinned on the mountains of the moon to meet the requirements of the subject. Of course, the greatest feature of this article is the wonderful language: especially the 3-5 paragraphs of the article, in the form of paragraph parallelism, strengthen the momentum of the article, strengthen one's feelings, and add rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification and vivid description to make the article particularly vivid and affectionate.
That poplar tree
It is the beginning of another year, and spring has come. Walking on campus, the wind gently blows my long hair, which is very refreshing. Looking up and seeing rows of neat poplars, I suddenly remembered-the poplar that I had said goodbye to for a long time.
Poplar brings me many memories, because I almost spent my childhood and adolescence with it. He is my best partner, and we have a silent tacit understanding.
In spring, flowers and trees begin to sprout, and poplar is no exception. It stands in front of my house like a great man. I know its growing process very well. It is the messenger of spring. After a cold winter, there is only one branch, long and thin, which seems to be lifeless. But look, what is that prominent little bone flower? This is a bud, a bud of life! It grew up day by day and finally blossomed. It is so tender and tender that it really makes people feel the power of spring and the loveliness of life. -I'd like to be the spring impulse like poplar.
In summer, poplars are covered with leaves like a giant umbrella, which provides shade for those who are sweating because of the ravages of the sun, regardless of the anxious direct sunlight on themselves, silently bear it and have no regrets. -I admire Poplar's dedication.
In autumn, the frost hits poplars and the green leaves turn yellow. When the wind blows, "leaves fall like the spray of a waterfall" and happily accept the arrangement of nature, singing and throwing themselves into the arms of Mother Earth, turning them into nourishing and moistening new life. -I like the optimism of poplar.
In winter, the cold wind blows on the poplar without leaf protection, as if to destroy it. Poplar straightened his back again and again and stood firm, not giving in to the cold wind. Because it knows how to see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain! -I praise the tenacity and tenacity of poplars.
I love poplars. I may have been influenced by them since I was a child, and I have also developed a similar personality with them.
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This paper adopts the structure of "total score plus total score". First, it always writes about its love for poplars. Then in chronological order, praise the character of poplar from spring, summer, autumn and winter. At the end of each paragraph, the feelings for poplars are clearly indicated. Finally, it is emphasized that his love for poplar is "influenced by it since childhood" and "formed a similar personality". The deficiency of the article lies in its thin content and far-reaching artistic conception.
Me and bamboo
If someone asks me, "What do you like best?" I will answer without hesitation: "I like bamboo best."
One of the biggest characteristics of bamboo is that its stomach is empty. Cut the bamboo lengthwise, and there are only horizontal bamboo joints inside, and there is nothing else. There is an idiom in our country called "emptiness is like a valley", and emptiness is modesty; Huai refers to the mind; A valley is a valley. The whole idiom is linked together to show modesty. Modesty is the greatest spirit of bamboo!
Bamboo doesn't bloom. It is not as noble as peony, nor as gorgeous as Clivia; It has neither the butterfly fragrance of Chinese rose nor the attractive fragrance of jasmine. Bamboo is simple, does not show off, does not show off, so it is not noticed and will not attract people's favor in colorful spring. But its unique beauty has attracted many scholars and become their favorite things. Zheng Banqiao, one of the famous "Eight Eccentrics of Yangzhou", is good at painting bamboo and likes to use bamboo as a metaphor in his life. He once wrote in the poem "Bamboo": "Section after section, thousands of branches are kept in Chiba; I don't blossom, so I don't want to tease bees and butterflies. "
In spring, bamboo is not conspicuous, but in winter when the earth is frozen, only pine and plum are accompanied, so people affectionately call pine, bamboo and plum "three old and cold friends". Bamboo can resist cold and snow and has strong vitality. A poem entitled "Painting Bamboo" wrote: "Hsinchu is higher than the old bamboo branches, and it is entirely supported by old cadres. There will be many new students next year, and ten dragons and grandchildren will go around the wind pool. " Vividly wrote the vigorous vitality of bamboo.
Bamboo is deeply rooted. Zheng Banqiao wrote in the poem "Bamboo Stone": "I insist that the green hills are not relaxed, and the roots are broken. I am still strong and willing to face the wind in the east, west, north and south. " As the saying goes, "Only deep roots can flourish", so officers must lay a solid foundation and carry forward the indomitable spirit of bamboo in order to succeed.
Not only that, every step of bamboo growth will leave traces. In the journey of life, one step at a time. Difficulties can't make it afraid; Setbacks can't make it cringe. The bamboo knot is enough to testify. It records the development process of bamboo vividly and in detail. Can't this give people some inspiration? In real life and study, people who do one thing, learn a skill and work step by step will succeed in their careers, while those who are eager for success will get twice the result with half the effort, or even give up all their previous efforts. Isn't that a typical example of "encouraging young people to encourage others" in the Spring and Autumn Period in China?
Bamboo, I would like to follow your example. I am inspired by your in my life, and I believe I will do better!
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Starting with the natural characteristics of bamboo, this paper spreads the wings of association and extends the meaning to the truth of being a man. Praise the virtue of modesty, solidity and simplicity and vigorous vitality, and express the author's praise and love for bamboo. However, the article does not show what kind of "spiritual quality" I have placed on "bamboo", that is to say, the article does not grasp the combination of "I" and "bamboo", so although the article is good in mining and language, it is suspected of "deviating from the theme".
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Report | 2010-10-2411:13 Aituo Tianqi | Level II
Cheer for yourself.
I am a happy boy. When people ask me the secret of happiness, I always smile and answer "cheer for myself". For me, it is mainly "Song".
My songs always ripple on the road, at school and at home, which can make me face life happily every day.
I still remember that time, I participated in a competition organized by my school. Everyone thinks I will win the championship. But when things changed, I failed. At that time, I was like a deflated ball, shutting myself in my room, and tears burst through the gate and poured down. At this time, it was this song that made me regain my confidence. I picked up the pen container and stood on the balcony, facing all the people downstairs. After a prologue, I began to indulge in it and sing to my heart's content. My dream, smile and be strong, sing loudly, cross the vast ocean, my dream! Smile and be strong. The world is full of imagination and flies with music. After all the happiness and sadness, thank you for being with me. Happiness is my energy, lighting my own light, singing whenever I want, singing loudly, not afraid of wind and rain. Happiness is my energy, lighting my own light, and every expectation is witnessing my growth ... I can't help crying when I sing here, but this is not for disappointment, but for my own strength. I taste salty tears, but they are my sweet life experiences. Let me be more and more brave in my later life, so I keep encouraging myself to get out of a small puddle of life and find happiness and confidence again.
Friends! Come on! Let's cheer ourselves up in our own way. It is like a navigation mark in the sea to stop you from wandering; It is like a beautiful melody that makes you forget the sorrow; It is like a gurgling spring, which makes you strong again.
Come on! Let's hold high the banner of encouraging ourselves, cross many difficulties and sail to the other side of success.
(ask questions at the beginning, lead to the following, and cut into nature, just right. Reflecting my optimistic outlook on life always attracts people's attention. With my own personal experience, I explained the important role of encouraging myself and deepened the theme, which was convincing. Beautiful language, once again sublimated the theme of the article, concise and full of passion, consistent with the author's happy lifestyle. )