My sister washes her face every day, even if she is late. My sister has one advantage: she likes singing. She likes listening to many songs and imitating them. My sister is also a mobile phone fan, playing mobile phones every day. My sister's biggest hobby is dressing up, getting up every day and combing her hair for a long time.
This is my sister, I love my sister!
The person I am most familiar with in writing a composition is my sister. My sister is very beautiful and cares about me. Her name is Peng Jie.
Once, my sister and I went shopping in Beiyan Shopping Mall. When I arrived at Beiyan, my sister knew that there were many people, so she held my hand tightly for fear of losing her. Walking, she found that I was gone, especially anxious. She looked for me everywhere. Later, when she saw me following a stranger, she ran up and asked, "Little Sister, why are you following this stranger?" I said, "Huh? Sister, who is this person? " "How did you follow her?" "oh! Followed by it. " "Let's go home." I could see that my sister was in a hurry when she spoke.
One day in September, my sister is going to Wuhan to go to college, and my parents are going to see her off. The bus was about to leave, and I looked at my sister reluctantly, and my sister looked at me reluctantly. Her eyes were red, and mine fell off the Jin Doudou. I couldn't help crying when the bus left.
My sister well, I love my sister!
I know a geography teacher who teaches me English through writing.
In the long years of life, there are always some people and things that will not drift with the tide and will not be buried by dust. No matter where we are in the future, their images will always be so clear and unforgettable in our hearts ...-Inscription: May 2009 12. I remember this day, not only because it coincides with the first anniversary of the Wenchuan earthquake, but also because from that day on, I made an agreement with my geography teacher.
A few days after the mid-term exam, Mr. Huang, the class teacher and geography teacher, talked with the students one after another to analyze the gains and losses of our study in Grade Two. I remember that when it was my turn to speak that day, Miss Huang pointed to my poor English and asked me, "What are your plans in the future?" English has always been a cliche to me. From the first time I came into contact with English, I hated the changeable words formed by the arrangement and combination of 26 letters What are we doing? I'm trying to figure out how to fool around. Teacher Huang's inducement, like seeing through my mind, finally made me take the initiative to jump into the "trap" already prepared for me. The one-month English learning agreement was thus decided. I go to the office to find Mr. Huang to learn English-or read books or recite words after school every day.
The geography teacher helps me with my English. I thought it was just a temporary measure taken by the teacher to help me with my English. I never believed it would last a month. Unexpectedly, this agreement was "renewed" one month later. I was moved not only by Mr. Huang's serious attitude, but also by his selfless love and dedication, and offered to renew my contract.
The month when I was just tutoring English, a teacher saw Mr. Huang tutoring me and said, "Now this student is unconscious and doesn't recite at home. He has to be accompanied by a teacher after school. " This sentence may be unintentional, but it makes me have mixed feelings. I feel guilty that I didn't study English seriously before. Now I want my teacher to study with me during my break, and I am even more grateful to Mr. Huang. Whenever I say "thank you" to my teacher, Miss Huang always says, "Thank you, even if you give it to me!" Just company? If it's just a companion, I'm a rather incompetent companion. I can't call it companionship, it should be classified as a profession. I take up too much precious time after work. Teachers often accompany me for an hour and a half, which should be the time for teachers to prepare lessons. But I have never seen the teacher's dissatisfaction, only the teacher's selfless dedication.
Mr. Huang, who teaches geography in different classes, is no longer the head teacher of my science students. But in the days when Mr. Huang was my head teacher, I left many unforgettable memories: Mr. Huang taught me to read words bit by bit according to phonetic symbols; Mr. Huang listened attentively to dictate the words for me one by one; Teacher Huang told me the seriousness of what I was going to learn the next day; More importantly, when I finished my task, Mr. Huang smiled beautifully ... There were too many such memories in my mind, and all the scenes were showing the most selfless dedication and love of the teacher to the students. Miss Huang, as the name suggests, you are a rose, a rose-give someone a rose and leave a fragrance. You have chosen the noblest and most dedicated profession-teachers. You wrote a chapter of love with actions, and explained the selflessness and greatness of teachers with actions.
Today, I am still a minor student, but I believe that I am just accumulating, and one day I will achieve qualitative change, and one day my English score will catch up with other subjects. Because Miss Huang's selfless dedication and love to me are constantly transforming into my motivation to learn English, I will always remember Miss Huang's selfless dedication and love.
In a few months, I will graduate, but Mr. Huang's voice will always echo in my ears for a long time to come; Teacher Huang's teaching in my heart forever ... "Those who drink its stream will cherish its source, and those who learn its stream will miss my teacher." No matter where I am, I will always be your student. There are all over the world, only the teacher's kindness is endless.
Miss Huang, the head teacher I will never forget-the geography teacher who taught me English!
Successful portrait description is a key to understand the characters and a window to see through their inner world. There are many successful examples in middle school Chinese textbooks: A Q's old felt hat, Kong Yiji's tattered gown, Zhao's smooth and shiny big braid, and Xianglinsao's occasional eyes, all of which show their identity, personality and life experience. However, it is difficult for middle school students to learn the essence from it in their writing, and often they can neither "draw its shape" nor "vividly".
Then, how to make a brief outline to make the characters vividly presented to the readers; Meticulous description can show the spirit of the characters incisively and vividly, and achieve both form and spirit. This paper intends to make a superficial attempt from four aspects.
First of all, carefully observe and grasp its "shape"
"There are no two identical leaves in the world." Portrait description of people can't be based on subjective imagination, so that thousands of people have one side and lack individuality. We should carefully observe the appearance of the characters and grasp the characteristics.
Objective things are inherently different and never the same. However, many students often do not observe carefully when describing portraits, but pick up the wisdom of others and paraphrase what others say at will. Children are sweet dimples, young men are handsome, young women are slim, and old people with white hair are aging. Is this good? There is no denying that a certain kind of characters have their own innate characteristics: from the age point of view, babies, children, teenagers, young people, middle-aged people and the elderly have their own characteristics; Physiologically, men, women and other age-related physiological characteristics also have their own characteristics; Judging from the identity, occupation, status, situation and race of the characters, they will also show some similar or even identical external characteristics. However, even in the same occupation, gender and age, they will never be exactly the same, and there will always be different external characteristics from others, even between twin brothers.
Therefore, when describing portraits, we must grasp the external characteristics of the characters in order to highlight the personality in * * *. For example, "... the biology teacher came into our classroom. He is about thirty-four or five years old, chubby, with dark red skin, a Chinese face and a pair of gold-rimmed glasses on his high nose. Eyes through round lenses looked at us kindly. Hong Zhong lost his voice and said,' I'll teach you biology in senior three ... I hope we can cooperate happily. ..... "This passage closely describes the portrait of the biology teacher's figure, skin color, face shape, nose bridge, glasses and other characteristics, so that the characters are clearly presented to the readers.
Second, feel it with your heart and perceive its "god"
It is difficult to draw a dragon but a tiger and a bone. The "bone" of dragon and tiger is really difficult to draw. The description of the biology teacher above captures the external characteristics of the characters. Seriously, this is the minimum requirement for portrait description. Some people call it "authentic". In fact, just doing this is not enough. If we make a thorough analysis of this description, we will find that practitioners are basically a kind of "camera" static description, and it is difficult to see their inner character, quality, experience and rich inner world through the external forms of characters.
Painting should draw the "bones" of dragons and tigers. In the third episode of A Dream of Red Mansions, Lin Daiyu enters Jia Fu, the author's description of Wang Xifeng not only depicts the appearance characteristics of the characters, but also reveals their personality characteristics and spiritual world. The portrait description of Wang Xifeng includes two aspects: clothing and appearance. In terms of clothing, the author tries to explain Wang Xifeng's clothing with pearls and jewels, implying her greed and vulgarity, and reflecting the emptiness of her inner world from the side. In the aspect of appearance, we focus on her "triangle eyes", "hanging eyebrow", "pink face" and "red lips", which fully shows her subtlety, cunning, good at changing machines and duplicity hidden under her beautiful appearance.
Of course, if you want to improve this ability, it is not a matter of time. Usually, we should carefully observe and analyze the characters from the outside to the inside, grasp their personality characteristics and spiritual world, and "externalize" their costumes and expressions.
Third, use "rhetoric" to vividly reproduce.
In order to vividly reproduce the appearance of characters, rhetoric, especially figurative rhetoric, must be properly used. The above description of Wang Xifeng's portrait is a successful example of rhetorical application. On the basis of carefully observing and grasping the external characteristics of characters, the application of figurative rhetoric must reasonably imagine and choose appropriate vehicles; Otherwise, the characters will be distorted or even deformed.
For example, "... he has a pair of eagle eyes, can see through everything, look for prey, and make his classmates afraid." He has wolf ears and knows all the gossip in the Jianghu like the back of his hand. Then it will be processed and tempered, which will become the capital for him to brag in class. In addition, he has a strong trunk like a bear, walks majestically and swaggering, and always finds people "one-on-one". Go out to practice singing before going to bed, and sometimes you can hear his thunderous voice in the middle of the night. Really can load him into the diary of a madman ... "
The imagination of this passage is strange, but the use of metaphor and rhetoric is not appropriate, describing the teacher as a hooligan, and even a little insane. If you add a hat, fancy clothes and a short dagger, won't it become a typical local ruffian? In fact, this teacher is very strong, sharp-eyed, with wide interests, rich knowledge and lively enthusiasm. Trainers seem to be able to capture some features, but the portraits written are seriously inaccurate, losing the foundation of life and characters, and there is also a serious deviation in color sense.
To overcome this situation, we must carefully observe, grasp the internal and external characteristics, reasonably imagine, carefully choose vehicles, and pay attention to the sense of color. If you are sympathetic and praising people, you will often choose something beautiful, precious and colorful as a metaphor; Derogatory, disgusting, often exaggerated, ugly, deformed, derogatory things as a metaphor. Proper use of figurative rhetoric is an extremely effective way to "draw its shape" and "convey its spirit".
Fourth, avoid boring "dynamic" characterization.
Portrait description, whether to achieve both form and spirit. You can't speak a few words, and you can't cover everything. The key is whether it meets the needs of the theme expression of the article and whether it complements other contents of the article. It must be as "complicated" as the portraits of Wang Xifeng and Jia Baoyu when Lin Daiyu entered Jia's house, but it is not "complicated" enough to achieve that kind of beauty.
However, when middle school students describe portraits, they often have a lot of water and pursue everything, and there is a phenomenon of too much space. In fact, "there are not many touching spring scenery." As long as we grasp the main characteristics of the characters' exterior, describe the characters with portraits and lines, especially the dynamic characteristics of the characters' exterior revealed with the development of the plot, the change of the environment and the change of the characters' interior, we can well show the inner world and mental outlook of the characters, thus increasing the thickness of the article and enhancing the artistic charm of the characters.
In Blessing, Lu Xun followed Xianglinsao's eyes closely and made three portraits according to the development of the plot and the change of her situation. When she first came to work in Luzhen, her eyes were persuasive, which showed her quiet personality. Going to Luzhen after losing her husband and children is still "following the eyes", but "there are some tears in my eyes, but my eyes are not as energetic as before". The change of her eyes "window" reflects the deterioration of Xianglinsao's fate. At the last time, it was "his face was thin, yellow and black, and the previous sad face disappeared, as if it were woodcut;" Only one round of eyes can show that she is a living thing ... "This shows that Sister Xianglin has reached the brink of collapse and her spirit is completely numb. Only when asking about the existence of the soul, the phrase "no bright eyes suddenly shine" profoundly shows that Sister Xianglin is still clinging to an idea when she is heading for the end of the road. The author gives a dynamic description of Xianglinsao's portrait. With the development of the plot and the change of the environment, it clearly shows the great changes in Xianglinsao's heart, profoundly reflects the tragic fate of working women destroyed by feudal ethics, and exposes the cannibalistic nature of feudal ethics and feudal thoughts. Sister Xianglin is also included in the galleries of China and even the world literature with her unique and distinctive characters.
Of course, for middle school students, it is indeed difficult and demanding to describe portraits and dynamically describe the appearance characteristics of characters in a simple and appropriate way. But it is not "difficult to go to the sky." To do this, we must grasp the subtle change process of the characters' hearts and consider and arrange the portrait description in the macro background of the whole article. Such portrait description can not only draw its shape, but also show the rich inner world of the characters in dynamic description.
Portrait description is one of the important methods to depict characters. As long as we can have a correct attitude, take it seriously, observe it carefully, analyze it deeply, carve it carefully and persevere.
Composition (a person I know) A person I know.
The person I know best is, of course, my little brother! If you don't believe me, I will tell you his story!
My brother is 7 years old this year! Usually I like wearing a white coat and blue pants very much. He has a high nose and big eyes, which is very sacred. There are a few sparse hairs on the big round head, just like an anime man-Donald Duck.
He also likes watching TV. I heard him say that sometimes I watch TV and see 10. He is a hothead. Once, he wanted to watch TV, and the TV just broke down. As a result, he upset our whole family.
He is lively and naughty. He also has a bigger feature: gluttony. Once, my grandmother bought a lot of ice cream, which was a golden opportunity for my brother. I saw him eating with his right hand and holding it with his left. In a short time, he ate six ice creams in his stomach. As a result, he ran to the toilet three times that night. This is not enough, the fun is yet to come! Another time, I wanted to play a trick on him, so I found an empty cake box and put it on the table. There is a note in the cake box: "Haha! Be fooled! Kitten! " I think my brother will be fooled. After a while, as expected, my brother appeared mysteriously. He crept to the table and couldn't wait to open the box, only to find himself cheated. As a result, he flew into a rage, threw the note on the ground, stepped on a few feet and left angrily.
You see, this is my brother, a naughty and lovely little boy. I think you will like it when you see it!