Instructor: Fan Yi (Xi 'an Tieyi Middle School)
Organizer: Yu Hongmei, a famous teacher in Shaanxi Province, and Liu Hong, an academic leader in Shaanxi Province? Zhao ping
First, import
As a monument in the history of China literature, Mr. Lu Xun's thoughts and works had a far-reaching impact on later generations. How much do you know about Lu Xun? What is Mr. Lu Xun in your eyes?
As we all know, Mr. Lu Xun is a great writer, thinker and revolutionary in our country, known as "soul of china" and a heroic national warrior. We will soon think of his dedication to the people and his patriotic feelings of "sending a message to the cold star, I recommend Xuanyuan with blood". Mr. Lu Xun usually leaves us with a thick black beard, upward hair and a serious and cold face, smoking a pipe. But is that all he has? Of course not.
Second, close to the author.
When Mr. Lu Xun was alive, there were many young artists around him who were willing to get close to him, and Xiao Hong was one of them.
Xiao Hong (191-1942), formerly known as Zhang Naiying, is one of the "four talented women of the Republic of China" and is known as the "literary goddess of the 1930s". 19 1 1 was born in a landlord family in Hulan county, Heilongjiang province, 1930 ran away from home because of resisting the marriage arranged by his parents. 1932 met Jun Xiao and became like-minded partners. 1934 came to Shanghai with Xiao Jun. 1935, with the help of Lu Xun, he published his famous book "The Field of Life and Death", which became famous in the literary world. After the outbreak of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, Xiao Hong came to Hong Kong. 1942 died in Kowloon, Hong Kong. Masterpieces: Field of Life and Death, Ma Bole and Biography of Hulan River.
2 Xiao Hong and Lu Xun
Mr. Lu Xun once said: "If you want to see flowers, you must have good soil." He once said: "As long as a flower can be cultivated, it is better to be rotten grass." In order to cultivate Xiao Hong, Lu Xun did not hesitate to make spring mud and ladders, and devoted a lot of efforts to her works. Xiao Hong's "Field of Life and Death" was published in his self-funded slave series, and he personally prefaced it. In her letter to Xiao Jun, Xiao Hong said, "When we first arrived in Shanghai, we read his letter in a deserted pavilion. Only he comforted two wandering souls. "
Third, content combing
This text is taken from an article written by Xiao Hong to recall Mr. Lu Xun three years after his death, which mainly describes his daily life. This text is a self-reading text, with more than 4,000 words and 14 segments. With (1) clear laughter, (2) light steps, the author wrote about (3) visiting Mr. Wang's house, (4) joking with Mr. Wang, (5) "sunny weather", (6) reading letters, (7) wiping hands and proofing sheets, (8) busy Mr. Xu, (9) watching movies. There is no strict logical connection between these clips, which are actually documentaries of Mr. Lu Xun's daily life. The author is handy, real and touching. In Xiao Hong's works, which identities will Mr. Lu Xun appear in front of us?
Fourth, analyze the image
We read the text carefully in the form of annotations, approached Mr. Lu Xun through details, and grasped the characters.
Look at the first paragraph first: Mr. Lu Xun laughs so hard that he can't even hold a cigarette. He often coughs with laughter.
Note: this sentence reveals the author's careful observation and permeates the author's delicate feelings in the description of details such as manner and action. "Laughing too hard to hold a cigarette", a few words, an optimistic, cheerful, free and unrestrained, approachable image of Lu Xun will emerge from the paper, in stark contrast to the harsh image of Lu Xun in some people's minds.
The eleventh paragraph of the article also describes Mr. Lu Xun's laughter: As soon as I went up the stairs, I heard Mr. Lu Xun's crisp laughter upstairs and hurried downstairs.
Note: the verb "chong" in this sentence is well used, which not only writes the loud and hearty laughter, but also writes the true nature of Mr. Lu Xun, making no secret of his inner happiness and highlighting Mr. Lu Xun's hearty and humorous character.
These two details let us see the hearty and humorous predecessors of Lu Xun.
There is a detail in the sixth paragraph: Mr. Lu Xun told Mr. Xu to pay for going back by car.
Remarks: When I bid farewell to "I", I used "persuasion" twice and "affirmation" twice. These details can make us feel the warmth and consideration of Mr. Lu Xun.
In paragraph 43, Mr. Lu Xun began to accompany the guests at two or three o'clock in the afternoon, "so he stayed at eight o'clock, ten o'clock, and often stayed at twelve o'clock."
Remarks: several words "accompany" strengthen the emotional color and show Mr. Lu Xun's patience, painstaking efforts and hospitality to accompany the guests. Here, we see a hospitable host, Lu Xun.
Paragraph 26: Young people write too hastily, and Mr. Lu Xun hates it ... but he still reads every letter from young people from different corners. Wear glasses when your eyes are bad, and often see deep hours at night.
Remarks: Mr. Lu Xun is strict with people and tolerant. Even if he sees eye pain and stays up late, he should watch it carefully, which shows that he is concerned and responsible, serious and sincere for young people. This detail shows us the seriousness and sincerity of Lu Xun.
Let's look at paragraphs 46 and 48 together: when Mr. Xu said the cock crowed, Mr. Lu Xun was still sitting, the cars in the street were beeping, and Mr. Lu Xun was still sitting.
Mr. Lu Xun's back is gray and black, and he is still sitting there.
Remarks: Some words "sit", like close-ups, depict Mr. Lu Xun's lonely and tenacious fighting figure in the dark. He works from night to dawn, working long hours and hard work, which shows that he forgets to eat and sleep and is meticulous in his work. This detail lets us see Lu Xun, a forgetful scholar.
In the twelfth paragraph, Xiao Hong went to Mr. Lu Xun's house to help cook. She made leek boxes, lotus leaf cakes and even wrapped jiaozi. She felt that she was not doing well, but Mr. Lu Xun still asked Mr. Xu with chopsticks at the dinner table, "Can I have some more?" Why do you ask? Because Mr. Lu Xun has a bad stomach, he should take one or two stomach medicines after every meal. Mr. Lu Xun knew that his wife would be worried about her stomach if she ate too much, so he specifically asked if she could eat any more. His words naturally show respect and dependence for his wife and sympathy for the younger generation. Here we see Lu Xun, a husband who respects his wife.
In paragraph 58, Yinghai ate meatballs and found that they were not fresh. No one cared, but Mr. Lu Xun tasted them and they really went bad. Mr. Lu Xun said: "What he said is not new. There must be a reason. It is wrong to erase it without checking it. "
Remarks: From this detail, Mr. Lu Xun knows how to care for his son. As a father, he can respect his children's judgment and experience at that time, which is especially rare, and he can also see his seriousness. Here, we see a loving father.
2 Summarize the image of Lu Xun.
Through the details, we approached Mr. Lu Xun and learned about the true, lovely and human side of his life. In Xiao Hong's works, Lu Xun is not only a great writer, but also a good father who loves and understands children, and a good husband who respects and considerate his wife. He is not only an ideological leader in China's literary world, but also a gentle, generous and humorous elder and a hospitable host with many friends. He is not only a revolutionary, but also a strict, serious and sincere teacher, a scholar who devoted himself to his work and devoted himself to his study.
Fifth, summarize the writing characteristics.
It is said that a friend read this article by Xiao Hong and commented disdainfully: "Is it worth writing? What is there to write about? " But it is such a text with no strong logical relationship between fragments that has become a classic article describing Mr. Lu Xun. Let's take a look at the writing characteristics of this article.
Catch trifles
Capture details
Simple language
Qing Ming Xin Li
Xiao Hong selected the trivia of Mr. Lu Xun's daily life, captured the details of his life, and expressed his grief, memory, reverence and love for Mr. Lu Xun in plain, simple, fresh and meaningful language. As the author explained, a serious and lively Mr. Lu Xun seemed to stand in front of us. He is so amiable and respectable, great and ordinary.
Sixth, homework after class
1 write an article of not less than 600 words with the topic of "Lu Xun in my eyes" in combination with this article and extracurricular reading materials.
Extracurricular reading: Death of Lu Xun, Memories of Lu Xun by Yu Dafu, Memories of Tang Tao.
2 Watch the documentary "A Centennial Master-Lu Xun".