I wrote a couplet, but there is something wrong. I hope netizens can help me correct it: Qinshan holds Hua Ting to echo the sound of the earthquake, and Hanshui flows around the corner to welcome the

I wrote a couplet, but there is something wrong. I hope netizens can help me correct it: Qinshan holds Hua Ting to echo the sound of the earthquake, and Hanshui flows around the corner to welcome the spring (Qinshan Qinshan embraced Hua Ting, echoing the sound of many treasures, flat and flat, flat and flat, flat and flat.

Hanshui river flows around the corner, which means welcoming the spring. Very flat, very flat.

I'm glad to discuss this problem with you.

First of all, it is certain that the words are very good and the parts of speech are basically relative. I'm also more particular about words. But you may not fully understand couplets,

The last word ratio of couplets is even, and the last word ratio of couplets is even, which is what couplets say.

In addition, leveling is almost the opposite.

Furthermore, the final "zhi" and "zhi" cannot be relative.