Shandong 20 12 college entrance examination zero composition: why is "greatness in the ordinary" zero?

First, this composition advocates the capitalist society during Sun Yat-sen's period in political inclination and is biased against the socialist society.

Second, this article does not meet the requirements of writing ancient Chinese at all, and does not belong to modern Chinese. Semi-ancient and semi-modern, the middle English word is simply misused, even if it is not zero, it is about five.