As a novel, The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West is not outstanding, but as far as martial arts novels are concerned, The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West is a groundbreaking article. Not only is the article exquisite, beautiful and vivid, but the chivalrous perspective shifts to Jerusalem and Constantinople. East and west are intertwined in time and space, giving people a feeling of isolation.
Jiang Kuaixue, who is sickly, has been loved by Shaoxia Zhao Fufeng. In order to save his lover, Zhao Fufeng went to Ye Jia, where the holy medicine was taken from the west. Jiang Kuaixue was imprisoned and tortured by Zhao's rival Xu. The result is that everything will be fine, and it's gratifying that all shall be well. The story is simple, but the skills of drawing characters and lyrical scenery are impressive. The ancient meaning of autumn scenery in the spring scenery of Lin 'an is like the chanting of famous artists in Tang and Song Dynasties, while the grandeur of St. Sofia's church is like the handwriting of western masters. Yan Sheng explained a truth. In the era of globalization, a martial arts writer must have the ability to integrate eastern and western cultures in order to achieve the greatest success. Limited by the length of the article and the author's experience, the robbery of Western jackdaw in the West is just a crack in the door between China and the West, but it will take time to really break in. While crying, I read The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West (~ * Apple Flowers Fly * ~).
First, he couldn't help holding her in his arms and didn't dare to use force, but her incredibly soft body merged with him, filling the lonely soul of the teenager and bringing him a sense of satisfaction. He gently held her lips, just holding them, but they were so soft and sweet that he was about to melt. In this way, he kept the insurmountable boundary and willingly endured her cruelty.
He wandered in the forest of steles, and suddenly the words "Jiang Kuaixue" jumped into his eyes. He knelt down and hugged her tombstone until the temperature ironed the cold stone, and Leng Yue's brilliance fell all over the floor.
Second, Jiang Kuaixue stood up, looked at the night view of Xu Hui sitting by the window and walked straight towards him. She pinched his bare shoulders, her lips trembled and she could not speak. Sharp nails pierced his skin, oozing blood. He put his hand around her and said softly, "Quick Snow, I like you from now on."
Xu Hui night's body is cold, white and slightly green, which is the symbol of western Western jackdaw. Jiang Kuaixue trembled, even his teeth were fighting, but he couldn't push him away. At this moment, this man who has imprisoned her for twenty years and accompanied her for twenty years, she doesn't know whether to hate him or love him. ...
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"Snow fast, I want to be like you from now on"-I almost cried. Zhao Fufeng went abroad for 20 years and brought back the antidote to western Western jackdaw; Xuhui has imprisoned Kuaixue for 20 years at night. Even if she is infected with western Western jackdaw poison, she should be connected with her ... Whose disaster was the robbery in western Western jackdaw? Fast snow, strong wind, tomorrow night or show people? The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West, every word, sad and stubborn, fragrant and painful! Like cold smoke in my heart, I refuse to disperse it! Love, really so cruel, can it touch people's hearts?
Being able to write your feelings into this realm can make the lines reveal such cold sadness and sadness. Is that woman named Feast a human being or a demon? The men in her works are amazing in appearance, unparalleled in the world, broad-minded and superb in skills, and they are above everything else. Holding the idea of love, even if it is not accepted by the world, will die unrepentant, humble and stupid. In addition to laughing at his stupidity, he could only shed tears of sympathy. I don't like the name Jiashu very much, because The Three Classics Illustrated Book is immersed in the intoxicating blue like a whirlpool. Alas, feast, feast, please be merciful and don't write it too badly!
Comment on the feast "The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West"-I love this! (The author can't be tested)
In this Jianghu, there is no sword, no joy, no enmity, only lingering and shocking love.
A Zhao Fufeng
He, just a person, lived for himself, at least before he met Jiang Kuaixue, I think. However, that day, the woman in red warmed his whole chest like a burning fire. He only knows how bright this woman's smile is, like the warm sunshine in winter, which makes people feel very comfortable. But what he doesn't know is that this woman's smile carries great pain.
The assassination that night, this woman shocked him. That bloody night, you still have leisure to enjoy flowers, don't you? So there is such a promise: Jiang Kuaixue, I would like to use my knife to protect you from watching this lively flower every year. What kind of lofty sentiments is this? It's not as bad as the seas run dry and the rocks crumble, but it's easier to go deep into each of us.
He knows that she lives in the pain of poison in western Western jackdaw. She can't be as happy as ordinary people, can't travel far, can't practice martial arts, and it will be a bleak and boring life. However, he doesn't want her to be like this. He just wants her to laugh and cry without restraint. So, he embarked on a hard journey to find an antidote to the poison in western Western jackdaw. "You must wait for me to come back." He will certainly fulfill his promise, but he doesn't know if that woman has a life waiting for him to return. Can she survive this long lovesickness?
After all kinds of hardships, how many times he lingered on the brink of death, it was her beautiful face when she died and her promise to her, which gave him the belief of never dying and the courage to continue living. He knows that he doesn't live for himself, but for her, so he can't even die. But when he came back, he found that she had already disappeared. What kind of loss and pain this is, even we outsiders can feel it. He couldn't help looking up at the sky: Why? Why are you doing this to me, thief? I don't want it!
"I promised to take fast snow to the South China Sea, and I will do it. Whether she is alive or dead, I don't care what others think. " When he persisted in this way, it brought him neither pain nor sadness, but a glimmer of hope: maybe the woman who was haunting him was not dead? I think: Maybe the thief god doesn't want to break up such infatuated men and women. He finally found the woman, but what he found was another unknown anomaly hidden behind all this. What can God do when love becomes like this?
Write a poem here:
The encounter between you and me
God's jealousy
The poison of western Western jackdaw
The imprisonment of love
My promise
Want to make you happy
A way to find an antidote
have gone through all kinds of hardships and difficulties
In exchange for pain.
However, fate will not make you helpless.
Your hope has a pillar.
The poison of western Western jackdaw is no longer imprisonment.
Focus on love
It's mutual happiness.
Erjiang express Xue
She, seemingly weak, is shockingly strong.
It is destined that in this life, she can't have such strong feelings as ordinary people, but the arrival of Zhao Fufeng changed all this. Grandpa's death, the demise of the family, never let this woman's strength have any retreat, all because of him.
Living under the poison of western Western jackdaw, I want to find a relief and a support. He took the trouble to find medicine. Day after day, year after year, time passed slowly in my mind, and she once wondered: Was it right to let him go at the beginning? If I had let him accompany me until now, it might be another kind of happiness. Many years later, when she saw him again, she found that she loved him so much that she knew she could not live without him in the future. I finally got rid of myself and had something to rely on. Life is like this, what regrets are there?
The scene of Zhao Fufeng and Jiang Kuaixue together is not deliberately described in the article, just a few scenes. The smile of love at first sight, the gift of books when saying goodbye, and the reunion in the pear garden are just prelude; The rescue on the night of the assassination, the lingering and love after the assassination, is the climax; However, the climax is doomed to be short-lived, fleeting, followed by painful parting. Perhaps this parting is for the sake of better meeting next time and mutual happiness. The love between Zhao Jiang is not very prominent in the article, but it is dull, but it can also make people witness greatness in this dullness. On the contrary, Xu's love for Jiang Kuaixue is even stronger, which is a bit suffocating. Xu is too scheming and possessive for most people to like. I think, if it weren't for Jiang's quick study, maybe Xu would have made some amazing achievements. Speaking of Xu, I have to say Lian Xiuren. Lian Xiuren is a regrettable woman in the book. "The pure white at the beginning of the branch is scattered into mud in a blink of an eye, and there is still a fragrance, such as her sad and humble love." This sentence is a true portrayal of her love. Her love is too sad, because there is only one Jiang Kuaixue who loves Xu in her heart. Even if she marries Xu, all she can get is the unknown grievances and pains she is willing to bear. Her love is too weak, I think, maybe most ancient women are like this.
"Axiu, I owe you a lot in my life. At this moment, I am very willing to have an afterlife and be a sincere husband and wife with you. Or you don't like it, but I really think so. " Seeing this, my heart is full of pain. It turns out that this Xu Man Ye Hui still has such feelings. Even if he gave Axiu some compensation and comfort before he died, even if he cheated, the image of this annoying man in my heart was no longer so deep, but became a little sad. In the end, Xu Hui's frozen poison needle could not give up, just like the flying fox with the last knife on the snowy mountain held by Pei Hu. No one knows whether it was split or not. In addition, although there is not much description of Zhao Fufeng's journey in different places, it can make people feel the hardships. When the antidote was readily available, he stubbornly gave up. In his mind, "it is shameful to exchange the freedom of the ranger for the wild bottom." Even for love or commitment, he can't betray himself like this. "What is this? Isn't love the first thing in this stubborn man's heart? I can't help but hate him a little, but I think on the other hand, if he sells his faith like that in exchange for an antidote, maybe we will look down on him a little, although we will also think about how great his love is. However, this is not necessarily the result we want.
Looking at the full text, as I said before, what we see in this story is not joy, hatred, swords and swords, but a happy and sad love!
Paradox —— Reading Western jackdaw Robbery in the West (Qing Dynasty scholar)
After reading the whole novel, I generally feel that the author strives for a retro feeling. There are some shadows of Ming and Qing novels in the language, or the author's Dream of Red Mansions is quite familiar. Although it is retro, the wording and sentences still have not got rid of the inherent characteristics of online novels, that is, novelty and novelty. There is no denying that this novel can be called a masterpiece if it is viewed from the text alone, with exquisite words and high level of writing. Sometimes it takes a lot of effort to understand some words, which destroys the coherence of the plot and makes readers feel that this is a story, but it is difficult to get into the story. Reading the whole article seems to be reading narrative prose rather than martial arts.
There is still something unreasonable in the novel.
[Original] The bronze ring held by the gluttonous animal face has been rubbed by tourists. Zhao Fufeng knocked at the door with a ring. The door creaked open and a child in Tsing Yi looked at Zhao Fufeng up and down. "What is it, son?" "Excuse me, is there a girl named Jiang Kuaixue in your family?" The child opened his mouth and got a fright. "Are you looking for our young lady? Miss never sees foreigners. " Zhao Fufeng is too lazy to explain the origin of Lian Jia. He changed his mind with a smile: "I'm here to ask Mr. Lian to comment on martial arts." "Wait, I'll ask Sister Xiuren." The child slammed the door. [End]
Seeing this description, I thought Zhao Fufeng knew Miss Zhao. Why? Imagine that the background described by the author is in the Southern Song Dynasty. Although Jia Lian is a Wulin family, we can know from Jia Lijia described at the beginning of the novel that Jia Lian's master is still a tasteful scholar.
Moreover, Zhao Fufeng himself is not a simple-minded person (Zhao Fufeng looked down at his long gown and those worn boots, grinning and tunnel: "Clothes are like flying quail, horses are like dogs, and Qi Lin's swordsmanship is like copper roaring, which means that I am such a lonely person." Her eyes were wide open and her expression was naive. "Hey, have you read Elegy? There are not many young people reading ancient poems in Wulin. You are very ... interesting. " ), doesn't he know that when you visit a family (or a big family) for the first time, you should at least meet the head of the family or the elders first, and there is no reason to meet the lady at the beginning!
The author also explained that Jiang Kuaixue's father and Zhao Fufeng's teacher are close friends. When Zhao Fufeng traveled, his teacher told him that "if he crosses the south of the Yangtze River, he must come to Jia Lian to see Wangjiang's sister". If his teacher really tells him, his teacher is also a fool. Let his apprentice visit his close friends, then he should visit his elders first. This is the least courtesy. Therefore, such a beginning is really unreasonable.
Besides, when Jiang Kuaixue announced her father's death, no one in the Wulin (except Zhao Xu) came to help. The author also explains it here. [Original] Zhao Fufeng clenched his glass.' The news of Mr. Lian's death has spread throughout the Wulin, and his family's situation can be said to be in jeopardy. I can't figure it out. Jiang Kuaixue doesn't know martial arts, Dont Ask For Help. Is that it? "[End], it turns out that the whole Wulin didn't come because Jiang Kuaixue didn't ask anyone for help. Alas, it seems that the Wulin written by the author is also a Wulin without blood and loyalty. You have to wait for someone to ask before you consider whether to help. Is Jia Lian's popularity in the Jianghu too bad? Wait a minute, there's another sentence behind. [Original] The sky is clear and clear. Even the relatives and friends at home heard about yesterday's West Garden Fair and came to reinforce their condolences, but what they saw was this hellish scene. [End], it's not that I didn't come, but that I came late. This explanation is even more puzzling. Don't all the Wulin chivalrous men in the "West Garden Club" want to help their families (including the Sword Flower Club)? Distant relatives are not as good as close neighbors, even if their families are so unpopular, they won't get mixed up to this point! I don't understand.
At the end of the novel, when Xu Hui tells everything in the evening, another question comes out. He arranged for dragons to kill even the whole family. "In this way, I destroyed my opponent in the dragon killing and cleared the obstacles when I was close to the fast snow." Didn't he think about what to do if Jiang Kuaixue was killed? What if he was killed by a dragon himself? At that time, he didn't know that there would be a Zhao Fufeng ("the only thing I didn't expect was the Zhao Fufeng who put a thick stick in his face"). Watch World War I again (the sound of weapons gradually stops at dusk. Among the corpses, there are still standing people, but Zhao, Xu, Jiang and Xiu. Although it is bleak, it won after all. Fortunately, there is a Zhao Fufeng who doesn't count. Without Zhao Fufeng, they would have been killed by dragons. Xu's arrangement is simply making fun of himself and Jiang Kuaixue's life!
I said that the rivers and lakes described in the novel are rivers and lakes without blood and loyalty, but it is precisely in such rivers and lakes that Zhao Fufeng came into being. Does the author want to highlight this character too much? The author wants to highlight Zhao Fufeng's chivalry and dilute his feelings.
The main line of this novel is the complex love in four corners (not unrequited love), and the focus of description seems to be on one word "love". But in these pure, passionate or abnormal feelings, Zhao Fufeng, one of the protagonists, is a person who always puts the love between men and women in the second place.
I don't know if this is the author's intention. This affectionate character did not give up the commandment of the sword door when he and his relatives were in danger. This commandment is funny to think about, and even the author himself may not be able to convince himself, so he added, [Original] If the commandment of the knife first appeared in the bloody rivers and lakes, everyone should just regard it as a joke. Decades later, it has become a symbol of sacred martial arts. Generosity depends on a kind of martial arts beyond people's imagination. [End] Is it necessary to practice beyond people's imagination to be "generous and kind", or not to practice martial arts at all? If it is the former, everyone (at least young and old) must first practice beyond people's imagination, but this condition is really too difficult. Perhaps only the best people in the world would say such a thing, which is basically nonsense to others. If it is the latter,
And when he finally knew where the medicine was after a lot of hardships, and the bishop suggested that he should be religious before giving it to him, [original] "Believe?" Zhao Fufeng didn't think about it, but when he thought about it carefully, the ranger's temperament was revived in his veins. He clenched the knife that never left his body and answered the bishop, "I am who I am. I never worship or crawl before anyone or God." This black and thin man, for a time, was imposing and made people bow to their knees. [End] It turns out that his affection for Jiang Kuaixue is not as good as the spontaneity of the ranger in his blood after all. As soon as this spontaneity came out, he had to give in to everything. Further, I don't know if it is also the chivalrous spirit of this son who went abroad to seek medicine for Jiang Kuaixue, which made him resolutely leave that Jiang Kuaixue who could die at any time, instead of being as affectionate as he thought!
Looking at the whole story, this love word still makes Xu get his marrow. Love is a selfish thing. In front of her, there is no big reason to talk about. Anyone who can't extricate himself from it is like Xu, and a person like Zhao Fufeng whose personal principles are above everything else will really feel love? The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West —— The first discount is not to teach flowers to be thin.
"The Robbery of West Western jackdaw" —— The Second Discount of Pear in West Garden
Robbery of Western Western jackdaw-The Ring of the Third Excalibur
"The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West"-the fourth fold is like summer flowers.
"The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West" —— The fifth discount is listening to the wind.
Western jackdaw Robbery in the West-The Sixth Fold of Purple Jade into Smoke
The Robbery in Western jackdaw in the West —— The Midway of the Seventh Life
"The Robbery of Western jackdaw in the West"-The eighth discount of Butterfly Dream
The background of the great robbery in Western jackdaw in the west-the great robbery in the ninth century is not empty. Although the story itself has nothing to do with history except "listening to the wind", a simple chronology is made for the convenience of narration.
1 192 (three years of Shao Xi): snowstorm. Zhao Fufeng set out to look for Nagano. Jiang Kuaixue missed her illness and was buried in Lian's cemetery. Zhao Fufeng is nineteen and Jiang Kuaixue is sixteen.
1 195 (the first year of Qingyuan): the scale of Tang Jianhua was initially formed. Xu married Lian Xiuren.
1 196 (the second year of Qingyuan): Lian Xiuren gave birth to a child named Jinzhi.
120 1 year (the first year of Jiatai): Zhao Fufeng went to Jerusalem to meet Leo. The fire in Lin 'an in Song Dynasty destroyed more than 53,000 houses, including the family's old house.
1204 (Jiatai four years): Crusaders attack Constantinople. Zhao Fufeng got the bottom wild Jia.
12 12 (five years in Jiading): Zhao Fufeng returns.
The topic of robbery is the abbreviation of "Kalpa" in Sanskrit, which means "big season" and originated from Brahmanism in ancient India. I occasionally take this meaning, not the usual bad luck, catastrophe or bad luck.
As for the ground beetle, it is described in Foreign Civilization in Tang Dynasty. In 667 (two years of dry sealing), the envoy of Fulinmen presented "ground beetle" to Tang Gaozong, which was a genuine universal antidote. According to Pliny, this pill has as many as 600 different ingredients. According to China's history books, Diajia "went to Xirong, and he made it from pig liver." It looks like a long-acting pill, red and black. Ren Hu will come at this time, so I cherish it. "Su Gong also said that Di Yajia is mainly responsible for" evil in all diseases and evil in the guest ". The accumulation of confidence. As for whether the preparation of this panacea will contain myrrh, opium and marijuana, which are usually found in the antidote of medieval Islam, we still don't know.
The Chinese word "Diaga" is translated from "theriaca". This medicine is clearly recorded in Old Tang Shu, Tang Yaohui and Compendium of Materia Medica. Scholars pointed out that it is a universal antidote, but the specific ingredients and functions are vague, and how amazing it is, naturally I scribbled it, hehe.
Fu Lin-Byzantium
At that time, the contacts between China and Byzantium were not frequent, but there were envoys, doctors, monks and businessmen shuttling between the two countries, which was evidenced by China's official history and notes.
-"Old Tang Book" contains "Biography of Fu Lin", which is about Fu Lin's tribute to Di's family.
-Bhattara, an Indian monk, is said to be the founder of Shaolin Temple. He first went to Fulin, and then arrived in Pingcheng, China via the Silk Road. Emperor Xiaowen of Wei gave him a high degree of courtesy. Byzantine religion was introduced into China by Arjen Robben during the reign of Emperor Taizong, and it was called Nestorianism. Established by Dezong, a famous Nestorianism monument.
-the daffodil mentioned in Duan's "Youyang Miscellanies" is a phoenix, which is produced in the forest. Narcissus is a Mediterranean plant introduced to China in the Middle Ages, and the name Nida should be transferred from the Greek name "narkissos". In the final analysis (that is, fig), it goes without saying that it is also a Mediterranean specialty. I also mentioned that the wild honey produced in Fuling and Bos is jasmine oil, which is very slippery. The Persian name of wild honey is "yasaman", which is translated into Jese. I remember writing a Hu Ji in Chang 'an before, that is, changing her name to Eastman. (See schaffer's Foreign Civilization in the Tang Dynasty, and the literal translation is Samarkand's Golden Peach. )
-The flint dog (a Maltese breed in classical times, with a smooth mouth) is a cherished pet of Greek prostitutes and Roman housewives, and it is also kept by court ladies in the Tang Dynasty, which can be seen in the paintings of ladies in the Tang Dynasty.
-Songzan Gambu, Dr. Galios Flynn, went to Tibet, and served as a doctor or chief physician. Ouyang Xiu's Book of the New Tang Dynasty also pointed out that "a good doctor can open the brain and make the eyes blink". Can open the skull, medicine is quite developed.
In the Song and Ming Dynasties, the envoys of Emperor Shunzhi still arrived in China. Therefore, it is feasible in theory and practice to write about a Song Dynasty poet wandering around Byzantium.
By the way, whether to call the country that blows the forest first and then blows the enamel, or the country that blows the forest first, this question puzzles me as much as the problem of chickens and eggs. For the convenience of writing, I assume that the latter statement holds. Fu Lin (enamel) is a translated name, and its pronunciation should come from Greek, right? If there are experts who know Greek, please ask sincerely.
The author's postscript
La la la, finally a postscript. I took out a small piece of paper and began to write a thank-you note: I want to thank 123, Judy, Xiao Yi and Jiang Shui for their messages, especially 123 and Judy, who always urge a lazy person to make continuous progress with their perseverance, flat feet spirit and gentle and considerate or witty and provocative encouragement ... (but see watermelon peel, tomato, etc. )
There are three stories about Shendaomen, one is Liancheng Crisp in the Northern Song Dynasty, and the other is the robbery of West Western jackdaw in the Southern Song Dynasty. The second is Knife Dance in the transitional period from the demise of the Northern Song Dynasty to the beginning of the Southern Song Dynasty.
The estimated length of dancing on the knife is 10 to 12000 words. I want to put the existing 50 thousand words on hold and write it again. The name of the story should also be changed. Because I haven't had enough sleep recently, I want to rest for half a month before I start (river water, river water, don't hate me with your eyes).
Last July, there was a fellowship between the Sword Flower Club and Feeling Gu Long, and there was a book called Return on a Snowy Night, which I accidentally rushed to write. However, I was born lazy, and when the one-month deadline came, I wrote a third. Of course, I was out because of the violation, and I am even more lazy to continue. At that time, Zhao Fufeng went to Di's home. He joked that it would be fun to write about the Byzantine Empire (the Eastern Roman Empire), the country of Lin and the chivalrous people of China to travel there. Unexpectedly, Xiaofeng shook his head and advised me that if my fingers were really itchy, I might as well write another article in detail, which was quite impressive at that time.
I still wrote Byzantium, but only 10% of the space is not thorough and complete. Writing this can be said to be the result of textual research attack, and I also want to change a new scene. I am not good at creating a torrent of momentum, and arbitrarily inserting this paragraph will make the style more sloppy. Knowing this, I still did it, except sweating.
The language of Western jackdaw robbery in the west still bothers me. I don't remember who said before that the language that can make readers forget the existence of language and then focus on the story itself is the really good language. I tried my best this time, but I made no progress. I scratched my head and lingered.
The Sword Flower Club and the Oriental Jiamu are both real places and real people. Sword flower has always been my favorite place. Wood is the producer and maintainer of the sword flower website, so I can't help but insert it into the story. If you want to write about fan fiction, put all the friends from the Sword Flower Club in. Even if the sea changes, written by Khan and Fu Jie, is too beautiful for the second person to think of.