Scene description, so what is a scene? Scenes generally refer to scenes presented to people in group activities within a certain period of time. Just like a scene or scene we saw in a play.
What scenes have we participated in or seen in our life? Here are some examples for your reference.
The labor site. We often participate in school-run factories, farms or service labor at school. There are many people's enthusiasm and enthusiasm in labor, and there are good people and good deeds in labor. We also often visit factories, villages and shops and ask questions to see how uncles and aunts work. These are the scenes of childbirth.
Game scene. Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very lively and interesting, and students are familiar with them.
Entertainment circle In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. There are many vivid scenes in literary performances, party activities, watching movies and TV plays that are worth remembering.
Ceremony site. At the beginning of each semester, we will hold the opening ceremony. Ceremonies are usually held in your city, village or town, and also when new buildings are completed. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and instructive, and we should carefully observe and record this memorable moment.
Sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase after each other, struggle hard and strive to create excellent results; The audience applauded and cheered for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.
Life scenes. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive. For example, buying goods, family reunion, traveling by car and boat, seeking medical treatment, building houses and repairing walls; , decorate the bedroom, etc. , have a strong flavor of life.
Meeting site. Class meeting, team meeting, school meeting; Meeting heroes and model figures and attending various celebrations and commemorative meetings often leave a deep impression on us.
In a word, practicing scene description can improve our observation cognitive ability and narrative description ability.
2. The original publisher of the composition wrote around the central meaning: Long Yuan Journal Network.
In ancient times, there was a scholar who never got to the point when writing articles. Once, he went to ask the teacher for advice. The teacher took him to a small forest, pointed to a spider web and said, "Please worship it as a teacher!" " "The reader looked at it for a long time and suddenly understood the mystery. Since then, his article has made rapid progress. Someone asked him why, and he said, "There is no spider web without a center in the world. Spider webs are made of a center and then a circle. The same is true of writing articles! "
So how to write around the central meaning?
Write a paragraph around the central sentence.
The composition of the middle grade requires writing one thing around the central meaning. Students in this section can usually practice with fragments-write specific sentences around the central sentence.
What is the central sentence?
The central sentence is generally the first sentence of a paragraph, which summarizes the main content of this paragraph.
Exodus: The fog this morning is really heavy and beautiful! There was a vast expanse of whiteness between heaven and earth, as if there was an incomparably wide tulle garment floating. Mountains, houses, fields and trees in the distance are shrouded in milky fog, looming and beautiful. I walked on the way to school, as if I were in a misty fairyland, which was very interesting.
The first sentence in the example is the central sentence, and the last three sentences are all around "The fog this morning is really heavy and beautiful!" This sentence is described in detail: "white, milky white" first writes the color of fog, and "incomparably wide gauze clothing" is a metaphor for writing the beauty of fog and fog. Through my feelings and conversations with characters, the fog is very thick and heavy.
There are three people in my family-father, mother and me. My family is called fans. My father is a TV fan, my mother is a mahjong fan and I am a book fan. Now I will tell you about these three mysteries of my family.
Let me start with my father. One day, I was doing my homework. Father watched a martial arts drama and said, look, son! Dragon eight branches again. ""Look, look, Qiao Feng beat the bad guys with 18 hands, "Dad added." Qiao Feng is really great. I admire Qiao Feng. I wish I were Qiao Feng-when the bad guys come, one will beat the bad guys with 18 hand. "
Speaking of my mother, she is a real mahjong fan. One day, three friends of my mother came to my house, and my mother suggested, "Let's play mahjong for a while! Just four people. " They said, "Okay." Mom, the first hand is a good one. My mother called me happily: "son, son!" " Come and see, this is Gone with the Wind, which will definitely match. He has a triumphant expression on his face.
It's my turn I am a little book fan. One day, I saw a good story called Wolf and Sheep. I said, "Dad, come and see. The wolf wants to eat the lamb. How terrible! " Dad saw what wolves and lambs lied to you. This story amuses you, just like Zhang Fei eating bean sprouts-a piece of cake.
These three fans in my family have their own advantages and disadvantages. We are a very happy family.
Write a composition around the central sentence, but the heat left by the sun makes people complain a little and start to pay attention to people's lives. Damn sun, don't get off work yet.
Good afternoon. It's half past seven. Taking a nap is the most difficult thing, whoops, only dew will reflect the hot light of the sun playfully, which brings us a bright day, you know, night dancing in summer, cheep.
Noon. At this time, the sun may accidentally burn Xia Hong's sister's skirt, which really makes people hate the boss of this bright company.
At night, the heat in summer is so helpless.
In the morning, diving into the soil in summer is a hot and thirsty season; Sasha vujacic's "Cicada Singing" also started a lively music evening, jumping out of the vegetation, ooh.
Good evening. "Oh, it's always monotonous, the green symbol of watermelon this summer." .
Summer is indispensable to quench your thirst. In hot summer, nothing is comfortable. People come home from work and endure the scorching sun. People can't help but feel glad for the departure of the sun. The air conditioner is on at home, and the heat of bamboo mats is unbearable. Of course, the hot air makes people sweat and creak, but unfortunately there are no branches. The sound of the air conditioner is a wonderful note in summer, which makes people feel that the speed of the time carriage is too fast, and they are embarrassed to go down the mountain slowly. I believe that the power consumption must be not small, and it is so simple and special. Don't forget, people fall asleep when the sun rises early.
I don't know when I started writing essays around fans. I am fascinated by music, from the girl who knows nothing about music to the girl who is obsessed with music now.
Perhaps it was the "infection" I received in primary school that made me unconsciously fall into this "whirlpool". At that time, my good friends became fans one by one, but I was not interested in them, and naturally they became "despised" products, but to my relief, they lent me VCD. Gradually, I think music is so wonderful. I can't help but walk into the art palace of music, throw myself into the arms of music and enjoy the beauty of music. ...
Whenever I come home from school, I will turn on the computer at will, play my favorite songs, sit down, listen to music, relax myself and tidy my brain. At this time, I will be intoxicated with the beautiful melody. When you are completely relaxed and feel tired, turn off the computer and finish your homework for the day. Because you are relaxed, your brain is in order and your body is not tired, you can do your homework easily.
Music is my best companion when I am in a bad mood or in conflict with others. Melodious melody brought me into another wonderful world ... The troubles in my heart drifted away with the notes. ...
When I have nothing to do, I will also turn on music and open a book, reading it with relish. In this way, you can listen to wonderful music and receive more knowledge at the same time, isn't it? I like to find knowledge in fun.
Music is a doctor, helping me to mediate my mood and make me happy forever;
Music is a good medicine that helps me solve my troubles and always makes me relaxed and happy;
6. Write a 500-word composition around the central meaning to help find it.
The night light is like water, and the bright moonlight shines on the sofa. I stood on the balance car and shuttled through the living room. Alas! The sky is gray and wild. Where can I find my English book?
English book, where are you? Without you, my mother would skin me! I fly in every corner of my home. I'm not in my schoolbag again, am I? I ran to my room, opened my schoolbag and rummaged through it one by one. I still can't find my English textbook. It's not in the closet. I opened the cupboard door and rummaged through my clothes, alas! How I wish I could read English books!
I jumped on the balance car and flew to the kitchen, opened the refrigerator, opened the cupboard and lifted the lid, huh? Where did the English book go? I sat on the sofa and thought it over. When I asked the teacher to dictate the words in the makeup class, the teacher put the book on another table. Then I finished my composition and left ... Well, so my English book is making up lessons! God, it's really dumb to eat coptis. I can't tell you how bitter it is!
At this time, the "Queen Mother" mother came. "Read English quickly, what are you doing here!" I don't move, "what's the matter? What can I do for you? " "I forgot my English book." "Where did you forget it?" "Makeup class." "Oh, then go and read, and look for it tomorrow!" I took a deep breath and "hoo-"finally escaped from the underworld. I went back to my room in frustration and read it with the biography of Hulan River.
The challenge of death is really terrible. Next time, I'd better check my schoolbag and stop being so careless.
7. Syaraku wrote 500 words about trees around this central idea, and he liked it very much. A seed is buried in the ground and then takes root. It takes a long time to grow into a leafy tree, and finally it will blossom and bear fruit. In autumn, the trees are full of fruits. People picked the fruit and had a good meal. The next year, it still blooms and bears fruit, and people pick the fruit to eat. I asked my uncle, "Uncle, aren't you wronged?" Uncle's answer came from the wind: "No, I'm happy to see you eating happily!" " "
Bees make honey and enjoy it. Bees have to fly a long way to collect a lot of pollen to make a little honey. Those who enjoy honey are not hardworking bees, but others. Bees are still picking flowers to make honey. I asked Brother Bee: "Brother Bee, your work has been dedicated to others. Aren't you distressed?" Brother bee replied with a buzz, "I'm happy to offer sweetness to everyone!" " "
Grandma cooks and enjoys it. Grandma's daily homework is: buying vegetables, washing vegetables and cooking. Running out and running in, I worked so hard that my back ached, I was sweaty and greasy. And all the delicious food is poured into our stomachs. When grandma sees us eating her cooking with relish, her tired face will be filled with a satisfied smile.
Teachers like teaching. Teachers have to prepare lessons and correct homework every night, and give us lessons and help us the next day until we fully understand, and we are the beneficiaries of knowledge. When the teacher sees our progress, she will nod her head and praise us repeatedly, as if we had given her happiness.
Dedication is happiness. Trees, bees, grandmothers and teachers all gave the fruits of their labor, and they all enjoyed it.
8. Write a tearful composition around the central idea. tears
I was good at crying when I was a child, and now I love crying when I grow up. In fact, tears are not only the expression of excitement or extreme sadness, but also a release, a relief and an expression of love.
Life needs tears, and the thought of that makes my heart sour.
Ding zero zero. . At 6: 30 in the morning, I lazily picked up the alarm clock and turned off the bell. Hey, I seem to remember something. Yes! Today is my birthday! Mom said that I could invite my good friends to dinner at home this birthday. You know, this is the first time for my mother who never allows me to bring my friends home. I am extremely happy, but I feel a little uneasy vaguely, as if something is going to happen.
I finally got to school and invited many friends home in the evening. My mother has prepared a sumptuous meal and bought many delicious drinks. Mother called me into the house. I think she must have told us not to play too crazy. Who knows, it's not like this at all.
"Do you know why mom asked you to invite your classmates home?" Mother touched my head and whispered. I don't know. I replied inexplicably, "Maybe today is my birthday?"
"No, it's because-you're leaving these good friends, and we're moving."
My heart suddenly became very painful. Listening to the laughter of friends outside the house, my eyes filled with tears. "We can't let our friends know," I thought to myself. "Let's have fun!" But I can't be happy.
When I first started eating, my friends seemed to see something, but no one asked, just trying to make me happy. When they gave me presents one by one, I couldn't help crying any longer. I suddenly feel that I have a thousand words to say to them, but I don't know what to say.
The students left one by one, and my mother and I sent them downstairs. Looking at their distant backs, tears once again moistened my eyes.
The next day, I never saw my friends again, because I had moved to a new home and transferred to a new school.
As we all know, tears represent unforgettable experiences and will leave a deep impression in the depths of emotions; Tears represent the record of growth and reflect the course you have gone through.
9. Write a composition around the central idea. Sweet words are 400 words. When I was a child, I liked candy best. Whenever I keep crying, my mother always gives me candy to eat. The sweetness soon calmed me down.
As I grew older, I began to go to school with my schoolbag on my back. I gradually found that "sweetness" is not only the taste of candy, but also the joy of being praised by the teacher, the satisfaction of 100 on the test paper, and the happiness after helping others ... the sweetness is varied.
I still remember that time, the teacher asked us to go home and let parents pay attention to the QR code she sent in class. When I got home, I told my mother about it at once. My mother looked worried and said, "Oh, this won't work! Why don't you do it yourself? " So I picked up my mobile phone and followed the screenshot sent by the teacher step by step. Soon I successfully logged in. Mom came to have a look and couldn't help boasting, "Wow, that's great!" "My heart is full of sweetness.
When I was about to report my login to the teacher in the class, I saw a parent in the group send a screenshot, saying that I tried many times and couldn't log in. Open the picture, it turns out that her user name is the child's name, not the ID card, and it is wrong. So I called her and told her in words: "User name should be filled with ID card, not name." Aunt quickly called me and said, "Thank you, I'll try again." I was so happy that I immediately replied, "You're welcome."
After a while, I went to the group to see the situation, and my aunt had successfully logged in. To my surprise, the head teacher gave me a thumbs-up expression. I am so happy that my heart is full of sweet taste.
It turns out that as long as you put your heart into it, "sweetness" can always haunt you.
10. Write 500 questions and answers around the central meaning. Writing articles around noisy words can be lively, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Lantern Festival on the fifteenth day of the first month, or noisy, such as the noise in the vegetable market, the noise in the street, the students playing on the playground after class and so on.
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In the morning, a symphony composed of gongs, drums, suona and trumpet was introduced to my ears. Try it today. What day? It turns out that today is the Lantern Festival that I have been looking forward to for a long time.
I got up, dressed like lightning, grabbed a few mouthfuls of breakfast in a hurry, and then ran into the street.
Busy today! People rushing to catch fire flooded into the street. I saw the adults in front blocking the line of sight, so I bent down from the adults' elbows and armpits and squeezed into the front.
The first thing that caught my eye was the flying umbrella and the fluttering silk fan. I can't help being dazzled, as if I were in a colorful dream. I just paid attention to the handsome and elegant aunt in the Yangko team and praised the handsome and free-spirited young people in the waist drum team.
At this time, a burst of familiar music flowed into my ears, which turned out to be the theme song of Journey to the West! With a swish, my head made a 180 degree turn and I saw four disciples coming with measured steps. I saw Monkey Sun fiddling with the golden hoop, looking around with a toothpick in his mouth and making faces, not to mention how amazing it was.
Pig Bajie flapped his big ears, shook his pig's head and carried a nine-toothed rake on his shoulder. Don't treat tofu as improper food. If "monkey's second child" is not here, he really thinks of himself as "pig's second child". Where is the sand monk? ...
Later, Ansai's waist drum team came over, and Ansai's waist drum still did not lose the inheritance of Hengshan's old waist drum, with the fragrance of the earth, twisting vigorously. What a wonderful Ansai waist drum, if a volcano erupts, if a landslide breaks, if a boulder is shattered, even in winter, it will make people feel a little warm. ...
How time flies! In a blink of an eye, the afternoon came with the afterglow of the sunset. Our family ate dinner and came to the center of Hengshan-* * * Square.
The whole square was dazzled by colorful lights, and the temptation of that gift was really great! The word "bottomless pit" is an idiom. At this time, the information came and went in my mind, and the idiom "bottomless pit" suddenly popped up in my mind. I told my father what I thought. My father used his quick wits to solve the mystery. I can't wait to go to the exchange office. The staff handed me two packs of jiaozi, not to mention how happy I was. My father has been praising me.
It's almost midnight, and our family is reluctant to go home. What a happy Lantern Festival!