Waiting (20 10 Nanchong, Sichuan); I read (20 10 Jiangxi province); Reading, let me (20 10 Xiangfan No.1 Middle School in Hubei); Title "State of Mind" (20 10 Zigong No.2 Middle School in Sichuan Province); Love in my heart (20 10 Bijie, Guizhou); Aftertaste (20 10 Yunnan Red River); Enjoy the process (20 10 Hangzhou, Zhejiang); Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow (20 10 Zhoushan, Zhejiang); Love makes life better (20 10 Hengyang, Hunan); Thank you (20 10 Zibo); Better life (20 10 Chongqing Qijiang II); Let me never forget (20 10 Qingdao, Shandong); That time, I was really good (20 10 Binzhou, Shandong); Shuxiang Company (20 10 Yancheng, Jiangsu); I always want to sing a song for you (20 10 Yantai, Shandong).
★ Writing preparation strategy ★
Emotion is a part of life, affection is the preface, friendship is the catalogue, love and hate and thinking are the themes of emotional stories. This kind of "emotional experience" composition has always been the focus of examination in various places, because it meets the reading requirements of "appreciating literary works, having one's own emotional experience, initially understanding the connotation of works, and gaining beneficial enlightenment to nature, society and life" in the Chinese curriculum standards.
Throughout the composition of the 20 10 senior high school entrance examination, the expression of emotions is worrying, hypocritical, pale and shouting, and so on. In fact, to express "sincere" feelings, we should do the following:
First, sincerity. The expression of feelings should be profound and sincere, not superficial and exaggerated; The expression of feelings should pay attention to the scale and form, which should not only conform to the truth of life, but also conform to the goodness of human nature, thus showing the beauty of feelings.
Second, it's true. The expression of feelings should be concrete, profound and natural. Real feelings come from the interaction between man and nature, society and life. Only when we have a clear understanding of the feelings of life can we send the touching true feelings to the pen.
Third, touching. The expression of feelings should be infectious. You can use indirect lyric methods in the article, such as directly expressing your feelings and giving them to others, attaching feelings to things and melting them into the scenery.
★ Real topic prediction simulation ★
First, read the following text and write as required.
Gratitude is a kind of beauty, a simple beauty of yet I feel the harmonious heart-beat of the Sacred Unicorn; Gratitude is a virtue, a virtue of learning to be a man, a virtue of learning to do things, and a treasure and sublimation of friendship.
Let's be grateful and silently remember everyone in life, every love and feeling in life. In this way, we will find that the sky is blue, the mountains are green, the water is clear and the world in front of us is colorful. If we try our best to understand what others have done for us, the world will become a better place.
Please write an article on the topic of "Gratitude".
Tips and requirements:
(1) In order to highlight your personality, I hope to choose the style that you can control best (except poetry), write what you are most familiar with and try to express your true feelings. Never copy or apply!
(2) In order to better express your meaning and enrich the content of your article, the article should not be less than 600 words.
(3) In order to facilitate the teacher to review your article, please pay attention to: the format is correct, the handwriting is neat, the punctuation is appropriate, and the volume is neat. Try to write fewer typos and fewer sick sentences.
(4) Don't use real names of people, places and schools in articles.
Writing instruction
1. "Set course". The definition of "gratitude" in Modern Chinese Dictionary is "having a good impression on others because of their kindness or help". Before you start writing, you should clearly distinguish the meanings of "gratitude" from "gratitude" and "moving". In contrast, Gratitude has a lighter emotional color and a wider theme. When writing, you can't just write about people or things you are grateful for. You must explain the reasons for gratitude.
2. "Happiness Line". Writing clearly the beauty and significance of gratitude is the focus of the article. Only by grasping the typical cases that have touched you in life will the water of the soul continue. In order to achieve the purpose of "writing true feelings", we must use some description methods reasonably, and strive to comprehensively use portrait, psychology, action and other description methods to write the plot carefully and vividly.
Second, the following is the lyrics "Know You". Please write an article from any angle according to your understanding of the lyrics.
How I want to be close to you/snuggle in your warm and lonely arms/tell you that I always understand you. ...
Writing instruction
The word "you" that "knows you" refers to the mother in the lyrics, so we can write the understanding of family ties. "You" is the second person, so the most reasonable way to write it is to talk to the object directly and talk to it. How to let the family overflow?
1. Think from different angles and come up with some clever ideas. Using suspense, twists and turns, conflicts and other means, the ending of the story goes to the other end of the original plot, which embodies the form of "A-B", which will increase readers' interest in reading and make the family theme more prominent.
2. Open the emotional network and tell some details of life. Details can play a role in the article, which can make the text more expressive and impactful, and better express the theme, characters and life situations. Writing about family, with vivid details, may become a masterpiece.
3. wave the brush in your hand and edit the picture. Descriptive language is often rigid and dull, but if candidates can skillfully learn from MTV's creative skills and descriptive language, flexibly combine and publicize the shots, they can break the rigid and dull, and make the image description elegant and poetic.
4. Open the door of feeling and think about life. At present, the narrative writing of junior middle school students has the disadvantages of being "immature" and "naive", and the article lacks taste, interest and speculation about life. Therefore, it is necessary for us to sublimate the spark of thoughts and feelings, the flash of life philosophy and the understanding of the meaning of life on the basis of objective and calm narration.
Third, look at the following materials and write as required.
Material 1: Huang Hong, a sketch actor, said such a thing: When a China person applied for a job in a foreign company, the foreigner asked him a very simple question: Did you wash your mother's feet? The answer from China is: No, and then the foreigner tells him: Go back to wash your mother's feet tonight and talk about your feelings tomorrow. When the Chinese left and walked out of the door of foreign companies, he was also awakening himself. My mother has suffered for decades, and she has never even done such a simple thing as washing her feet. This is really a disgrace to her mother's upbringing. In fact, I should wash my mother's feet, which is not only related to recruitment.
Material 2: A public service advertisement of CCTV: After the mother washes the baby's feet, she also washes the grandmother's feet in a wheelchair, saying that "ironing your feet with hot water is good for your legs". This was heard by the baby. After a while, the baby stumbled to a basin of water and said, "Mom, wash your feet." The young mother stroked her hair at her temples and smiled with relief ... Although the advertisement lasted only 50 seconds, it left a deep impression on hundreds of millions of people.
Material 3: Washing feet is good for health. Although the foot has terminal branches at the bottom, its acupoints correspond to many parts of the body and are considered as the "second heart" of people. Traditional Chinese medicine often massages the feet in some way, or it can play a preventive or auxiliary role in some diseases.
Please write a composition on the topic of "washing feet". Note: ① Please choose the appropriate style and write your true feelings; ② There should be no real place names, school names and names in the text; 3 plagiarism is a bad behavior, I believe you will not copy other people's articles; Considering the rich content, the article is not less than 500 words.
Writing instruction
1. Start with the details and choose the real material. Washing feet means washing feet with water, which is a common action. Who is washing feet? Who should I wash my feet? Why wash your feet? How to wash feet? Pay great attention to choosing what you have experienced personally. You can write about your life experience of washing feet with your parents, brothers and sisters, grandparents and grandparents. When writing, you should fully mobilize your life accumulation and emotional savings, and you should not blindly tell or fabricate other people's stories. If the narrative lacks touching details and scene descriptions, it will be difficult to impress readers.
2. Start from a different path and update your ideas. Most people praise, yearn for, call for and face up to their affection by writing stories about "washing feet". Actually, washing feet is also a kind of culture. With the change of people's concept, foot bath has become popular in recent years; Washing feet is also a technical job. Rubbing, pressing, pinching, pinching, trimming, cutting, scraping and pulling are all hard. From here, we will find another way to write the story of the love between brothers and sisters who make a living by washing their feet in the city of washing feet, and praise the true feelings of the world that are not family ties but better than family ties.
3. Free choice and standard style. You can try to choose narrative, prose, essays and other styles to write. You can describe a story or several fragments, and the language should be vivid, avoiding the flat and monotonous narrative language throughout. In order to make the language vivid, it is very important to learn to use descriptive expressions in articles, and learn to use language description, action description, portrait description, psychological description, environmental description and detail description to write notes and convey feelings. At the same time, we can also use some commonly used rhetoric such as metaphor, parallelism, personification and quotation to enhance the appeal of the article.
4. Be unconventional and innovative. It usually takes 50 minutes to write a composition in the examination room. To write a high-quality composition in a limited time, we must rely on the form of articles! If the content of the article is beauty, then the form is equivalent to the beautiful coat of beauty. The stylistic color of the title of this article is not very clear, and each candidate should choose his own style to write. Diary and letter, these two forms give people the feeling that they are relatively private and can arouse the interest of marking teachers. Let's try them.