Students taking the exam
If I choose wealth, I will never be greedy, not only abandon the secular concept, but also will not go with the flow.
( 1)
If I had to choose wealth, I would give up wealth and choose poverty.
Choosing wealth can save a lot of time and pain, but it also loses the impulse to fight, rich experience and pride in victory. "There have been few beautiful men since ancient times", and I may still be poor in my efforts, but I don't want to be comfortable and handsome.
(2)
If I had to choose wealth, I would give up my beautiful appearance and choose an ordinary appearance.
Beautiful appearance can certainly bring me opportunities, but it will also bring me troubles. Ordinary looks always promote people's struggle, reserve knowledge, increase talents, and win the recognition and respect of others through struggle.
(3)
If I had to choose wealth, I would give up a smooth victory and choose setbacks and failures.
Frustration can sharpen people's will, and failure can make people fully understand. Everyone wants smooth sailing, everyone wants to be "Dong Fangbubai", but that's just a good wish. In reality, everyone has to go through ups and downs, and failure is just a small symbol of rest in a long life. As long as we face failure with our heads held high and sum up our experience, victory will not be just a wish. Let failures and setbacks enrich our lives, let pains and tribulations sharpen our lives, let experiences and lessons arm our minds, leave failures to yesterday and lessons to forever. You will find that tomorrow's life is as beautiful as poetry, and tomorrow's sunshine is particularly bright!
If I choose wealth, I will never be greedy. ...
[Comment] This article is worth learning: 1, make good use of parallelism. The full text adopts the parallel paragraph structure, and the third paragraph is almost entirely compound sentence, which makes the article neat and magnificent. 2. The point of view is very clear and direct. The full text is not a bit sloppy. The hypothetical sentences of "if" and "I will" at the beginning of each paragraph tell the whole story neatly and powerfully.
This article can be applied to propositions or topic compositions such as "What if", "Wealth and Me", "Choice", "16 Declaration" and "Ideal".
Full score composition 36- 15b: Self-improvement-my wealth
Students taking the exam
When I was a child, I often heard adults say, "Boys are the sun and girls are the moon." I asked why, and adults always said, "You will know later." Later, when I grew up, I realized that the moon itself can't shine, but it can only reflect sunlight.
I was very angry when I learned about it. Why is a boy the sun and our girl the moon? Girls also want to be the sun! So whenever I hear boys sing "Men should strive for self-improvement", I always help them change the lyrics: "Girls should strive for self-improvement."
So I did a lot of things that boys dare not do.
Far away, let's just say something a few months ago. At that time, the whole school held an English contest. As the entrance examination approaches, the top boys in the class are afraid to ask about it. At that time, they also laughed at me: "Hey, didn't that half-year-old girl always say that you were better than us?" You can go this time if you have the ability. " If you can't do it, stay at home and be a girl. "Hearing this, I was so angry that I immediately got angry:" Let's see if you smelly boys are better or we girls are better. "After that, I signed up with my English teacher.
In the later days, I realized that it was unpleasant to be busy with homework and English at the same time. I've been busy all day, dizzy, bored in class and always can't get up. I really wanted to back down at that time. But the thought of "being a girl at home" makes me gnash my teeth. I told myself in despair: I want to be self-reliant and win for those smelly boys. So, in the last month, I gritted my teeth, burned the midnight oil every night, and went straight to the teacher's office to strengthen training whenever there was a problem ... So, on the day of the exam, I handed in my answer sheet with confidence.
A month later, the winners were announced. On the red paper, I saw my name. When I heard an aunt next to me say, "Why do girls come first?" I smiled happily, because I proved to the world that girls are also the sun!
Today, in the examination room, I wrote down a sum that decided my fate. No matter what the result is, I will tell myself: "Girls should be self-reliant!" This is my important wealth!
[opinion] this article is worth learning: 1. The individualization of language is very obvious, which makes the characters vivid. We have talked about the role of language personalization in I am a girl, and this article is another good example. This is an important reason why this article got high marks. 2. Be good at describing the psychological activities of characters. Writing a person's article, if the psychology of the characters is well written, is already half the battle. People who have no psychological activities often feel dull and lack flesh and blood, although they write their appearance and behavior well. On the contrary, if you don't write the appearance and behavior of the characters well, the characters can come alive. Just like this article, you can't see the appearance of "I". The behavior of "I" lacks specific details, but it is also full of blood and admirable.
This article can be applied to the composition of propositions or topics such as "face the challenge", "never give up", "choice", 16 declaration, "I" and "a girl".
Composition title 16
Read the following passage and write according to your feelings.
One day, my father and I went to the park together. He pointed to two rows of trees in the park and asked me, "Do you know what those trees are?" When I saw it, the tall one was poplar, and the short one was ginkgo. Father said, "These two rows of trees were planted at the same time. They are all the same height when planted. They enjoy the same sunshine, the same soil and water. Later, why did the poplar grow taller and the ginkgo was short? " When my father saw that I couldn't answer, he said, "You know, son, precious things always grow up slowly."
This poetic language, like a ray of sunshine, suddenly lit up my heart.
In the future, I will work hard, work hard and never give up. ...
Precious things always grow slowly. Those children who think they are stupid, please remember this sentence, it will definitely light up the direction of your life.
Requirements: self-made topics, unlimited style. No less than 600 words.
Full score composition 37- 16: sangkou-wound
Students taking the exam
There is a row of mulberry trees in front of the door, which are dense and slender.
I often sit in front of the door and stare at the row of mulberry trees not far away. They share a ray of sunshine with me. The only difference is that I am sad and they are happy-you can see it from the shining green leaves.
My mother suddenly called me, "can you accompany me to cut mulberry?" Of course, I'm happy to do such a thing.
Scissors were cut off one by one, and mulberry branches fell in bundles. The sun shone through the crystal sweat, and I saw a drop of white juice dripping from the cut mulberry branches like sweat. Wipe your face and find that there is no sweat on your face. Is it tears or mulberries? Is it mine?
At that moment, I stopped cutting mulberry. I think a lot. Suffering again and again, I told myself to be strong; Frustrated again, I told myself not to be sad. Who made a vow to fly with blood and tears after cutting off his wings? Failure now is not an eternal failure, the road is still far, and precious things always grow slowly.
I woke up suddenly and asked my mother, "why do you want to cut mulberry?" Why not let them grow up happily? "
Her answer is surprising.
I deeply feel that I am always anxious and too manic. Youth is only once, and I want to savor it slowly. I shouldn't talk big just to pursue a temporary victory, and I shouldn't just regret a temporary failure. On the contrary, I will endure happiness and pain, and endure the pain at the moment when my heart collides with my body: I will grow up slowly, become strong and become strong.
I picked up the scissors and cut them without any heartache. I cut off the heaviness of my heart with a knife, cut off the joys and sorrows once and for all, let the deposition in my heart erupt like a fire, let the world shake with my heart, and let the traces of the wound disappear from now on!
What did mom say? I remember her words clearly.
She said: "Mulberry cutting is to prevent Janssen from growing too fast, thus ignoring its strength and toughness. Let it have a mulberry mouth and it will be stronger. If the realistic environment is too smooth, the mulberry will be too high to stand the wind and rain. On the contrary, if mulberry is cut every year, then the mouth of' mulberry' will grow more slowly in Janssen. After it slowly tastes the hardships and difficulties of growth, it will be more tenacious, the wind will not shake and the rain will not fall. "
[Comment] What this article is worth learning: 1, with ingenious conception. "I" and Sang are integrated in the text. I'm Sang, and Sang is me. My wound and Mulberry's "Mulberry Mouth" are inseparable. Therefore, the article has a unique style and profound meaning. 2. Carefully plan the layout. According to the conventional writing, "I" asked my mother why she cut mulberry, and then she should write her answer. But the author's mind is unique, and he didn't write his mother's words in order. Instead, she first wrote out my psychological activities and actions after listening to her mother's words, and then "confided" her mother's words at the end of the article, and the full text came to an abrupt end. This kind of treatment is actually to reveal the central idea of the full text through my mother's words, which makes people have to hide their thoughts. Very subtle. 3. Be good at describing psychological activities. Looking at the structure of the full text, the example written in this article is very simple: my mother asked me to cut mulberry, and I don't understand why I want to cut mulberry. My mother told me the reason for cutting mulberry. There are no specific behavior details in the middle. But why is it so shocking? The key lies in psychological activities. The full text is centered on the psychological activity of "I", which is delicate, vivid and profound. This is the biggest highlight of this paper, especially worth learning.
This article can be applied to propositions or topic compositions such as "growth", "growing pains and happiness", "sentiment", "XX enlightens me", "worry", "learned from XX" and "unforgettable XX".