Is this right in the company's articles of association? What's wrong?

There are mistakes (poor labor service) and improper (the expression of patents, trademarks and land parts needs to be improved). The reason for this is the following:

1. Shareholders or promoters can make capital contributions in cash, or they can make capital contributions in kind, intellectual property rights, land use rights and other non-monetary properties that can be valued in money and transferred according to law.

2. According to the law, shareholders or promoters are not allowed to make fixed-price capital contributions with labor services or property (such as land use rights) as security.

3. Non-monetary property as capital contribution shall be assessed and valued. The monetary contribution of all shareholders shall not be less than 30% of the registered capital of a limited liability company.

4. Where an application for establishing an enterprise or increasing the registered capital of an enterprise is made with patented technology or non-patented technology (hereinafter referred to as "technological achievements"), and the evaluation value of technological achievements is more than 6,543,800 yuan (inclusive), the evaluation institution is required to attach the reference opinions signed by experts in the field or industry to which the evaluation object (i.e. the entrusted technological achievements) belongs in the evaluation report, or the appraisal opinions issued by the government department in charge of science and technology or relevant scientific research institutions, and attach a list of experts.